山西省大同市高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选编(5)

山西大同市2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】选编（5）
读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）
阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Once upon a time in a land far away, there was a wonderful old man who loved everything：animals, spiders, insects...
One day while walking through the woods the nice old man found a cocoon（茧）of a butterfly. He took it home. A few days later, a small opening appeared; he sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through that little hole. Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and it could go no farther.
Then the man decided to help the butterfly, so he took a pair of scissors and cut off the remaining bit of the cocoon.
The butterfly then came out with ease.
But it had a swollen body and small, shriveled（萎缩的）wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body. Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. It never was able to fly.
What the kind-hearted man did not understand was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the tiny opening were Nature's way of forcing fluid（液体）from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon.
Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our life. If we were allowed to go through our life without any hardships, it would fail us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been. And we could never fly.
【写作内容】
1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2.以约120个词就“个人成长需要艰难生活的磨砺”的主题发表看法，至少包含以下内容要点：（1）你读了这个故事的感受；
（2）叙述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果；
（3）假如你是父母的一方，你会如何磨砺自己的孩子？
【写作要求】
1.你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

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【参考范文】读写任务：One possible version:
A kind man cut a cocoon open in order to lessen/ ease/ relieve the pain of a butterfly when he saw it struggling out of the coccon, only to find that it could never fly because of his help.
The story sets me thinking a lot. Our life is more or less like this. Sometimes, struggles or obstacles in our life are a must for our growth. It is these struggles or hardships that increase our willpower and contribute to our success. Without these
trials, we could never achieve our life goal just as the butterfly did in the story. Nowadays, with only one child in most families, parents do whatever they can to satisfy the child’s needs and even do for him what should be done on his own. Consequently, the child is unable to look after himself without his parents’ presence. Too much care from parents rids children of their chances to grow strong by conquering obstacles. Just as a saying goes, “Flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm”, If I were a parent, I would first keep him well informed that life is never easy and that he should be ready to face any challenges. Besides, I would expose him to the hardships in life instead of protecting him from difficulties, providing them with chances to fight for his own bright future by overcoming difficulties.
【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（1）】
基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇中国载人宇宙飞船“神舟号”的简介。

【写作内容】
请根据以下信息，写一篇关于“中国载人宇宙飞船辉煌10年”的简讯。

【写作要求】
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

【参考范文】基础写作 (One possible version)
The last decade has witnessed the rapid development and splendid achievements in China’s manned spacecrafts to prepare for the exploration of the m oon and Mars in the future. On October 15, 2003, Shenzhou V, China’s first manned spacecraft was launched into space with China’s first astronaut Yang Liwei, which made China the third country to send man to space independently. Since then, another three manned spacecrafts have sent 7 men and 1 woman astronauts into space, accomplishing their own tasks successfully with rapid development in science and technology. Most proudly, Shenzhou X took off carrying a crew of three astronauts: Nie Haisheng, Zhang Xiaoguang and Wang Yaping on 11 June, 2013. During this voyage, Wang Yaping, China’s second female astronaut, successfully conducted some scientific experiments and delivered China’s first space lecture to Chinese students by live television broadcasts.
【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（1）】
读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Benefits of honesty
Sarah Darling met a homeless man called Billy Ray Harris and gave him her purse, with all her change in it. It was not until the next morning she realized that she had left her diamond ring in the purse. To her surprise, when she and her husband Bill Krejci found Billy, Billy immediately returned the ring. The grateful couple paid him back for his honesty by emptying out their pockets.
However, Bill Krejci, a web designer, felt that he needed to do something more for this honest man. He set up a special page for him on money- raising site "Give Forward" with a goal of raising $1,000 in 90 days. In just four days, the donations rose to over $85,000.
That was not all. Because of all the media coverage, Billy reunited with his elder brother, Edwin Harris who he had not met for 27 years. The two talked for 45 minutes on the phone and Edwin was planning to take Billy to his home in Lubbock, Texas. All this good fortune came just because Billy did the right thing - He returned something that did not belong to him. Honesty is surely the best policy!
【写作内容】
1．以约30个词概括短文的内容；
2．以约120个词就“因诚实而得到的收获”发表你的看法。

内容包括：
(1)简述你对Billy Ray Harris事例的理解或看法：
(2)记述一次你（或你的朋友）“诚实待友”的经历：
(3)你对“诚实待友”的建议或方法。

【写作要求】
1．在作文中可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

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【参考范文】读写任务 (One possible version)
The passage is a story about honesty. Billy Ray Harris was given many donations after he honestly returned a diamond ring to Sarah Darling. Moreover, he got the opportunity to reunite with his long-lost brother.
I appreciate Billy Ray Harris very much. His honesty touched Sarah Darling and her
husband as well as the whole society. The donations offered to him have proved that “one good turn deserves another”.
As far as honesty is concerned, I have had an unforgettable story to tell. About ten years ago, my friend Susan brought a beautiful pen, which I loved so much that I stole it. That night, I was filled with regrets. After struggling for the whole night, I decided to tell her the truth. I was much surprised that Susan was not angry at me. So I have understood that honesty can clear misunderstanding and promote friendship.
As a matter of fact, we should be honest with our friends, because only in this way can we win their trust.。