【原创】2016届九年级上学期英语开学测试题分类之书面表达

（一）
假如你是某中学的学生会主席王东,为了配合环保教育主题活动,请根据下面所给提示,用英语写一封倡议书，内容包括：
1. 环保措施和美化城市的措施（各2条）；
2. 你的希望。

注意：
1. 注意文章的整体连贯；
2. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 80词左右。

Dear friends,
In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should ____________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________
Thank you!
Wang Dong
【答案】
One possible version：
Dear friends,
In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should do what we can to protect it. First, we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful. Also, always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water everywhere. As we all know, water is becoming less and less. So it’s quite necessary to save water. For example, turn the tap off after washing. Last, but not the least, we’d better ride a bike or walk when going out instead of driving a car.
In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner!
Thank you.
Wang Dong
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇环保的倡议书。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：we should ...，So it’s quite necessary to...，we’d better....，if everyone tries his best to...等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用连词使文章前后连贯，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，适当的补充一些保护环境的措施。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了倡议书的目的是保护环境，接下来介绍保护环境的措施：种树、不要乱扔垃圾、节约用水，骑自行车或步行外出，最后阐述自己的观点，要尽力保护环境。

此处remember not to do sth, as we all know, turn off, had better, try one’s best to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

【难度】困难
（二）
Nowadays, after–class Activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools._______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________
【答案】
After-class Activities
Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools. In our school there are many kinds of activities, such as drawing, singing and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading are my favorites. Besides building my body and improving my skills, they also free me from the heavy work of study.
Here I have some suggestions. To students, we’d better choose the activities which interest us and suit us. I think our school should organize more activities for students and leave more time for activities by giving us less home work.
Dear friends, please take the after-class activities actively. It will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve your learning.
【解析】
试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。

注意文章文体、人称和时态。

要求介绍。

同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

温馨
提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

【难度】较难
（三）
《中学生英文报》正在开展以“growing pains(成长的烦恼)”为主题的英语征文活动，请
要求: 1. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中应包含表格中所有的提示要点；
3. 内容充实，条理清晰，语言连贯，适当发挥。

Dear editor,
My biggest problem is that I’m too busy.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Rose Tang
【答案】
Dear editor,
My biggest problem is that I’m too busy. When I was young, I used to have so much free time, but these days I stay in school all day. Before I started high school, I used to spend a lot of time watching my favourite TV programmes, but now I have to study. I love music, and my mother used to take me to concerts. These days, I hardly ever have time for concerts. I have to go to different classes at weekends. I’m very tired. I really miss the old days. I wish I wouldn’t grow up.
Best wishes
Rose Tang
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇表格作文。

要求通过介绍自己过去的生活和现在的生活的变化，描述自己成长的烦恼。

结合表格可知主要用一般现在时描述现在，用过去时态或used to句型描述
过去。

写作亮点：这篇短文就在业余时间，看电视，听音乐会等方面的过去和现在的对比，阐述了自己成长的烦恼。

最后描述了自己的感受和愿望。

虽然语言简单，但是短文思路清晰，逻辑性强，时态运用准确。

【难度】一般
（四）
请根据以下交通事故因素（factors）统计图表，以“Major causes of traffic accidents”为题，用英语写一篇简短的分析报告，向学校英语报投稿。

注意：
1. 报告需逐条陈述下面 pie chart 和 bar chart (柱状图) 中呈现的主要内容。

（至少 5 点）
2. 提出你对交通安全总的看法。

（至少 2 点）
3. 词数：100 词左右，所给标题不计入总词数。

【答案】
One possible version：
Major Causes of Traffic Accidents
Nowadays, there are always kinds of traffic accidents reports from newspaper, TV news and so on. As a result, it’s important for us to analyze the major causes. The following are two reports:
According to the pie chart, there are mainly three factors:85% is about driver factors; 5% is from vehicle fa ctors and 10% is environment factors. Among them, it’s quite clear that the first one is holds 15%, tired driving which is 25% as well as not using seat-belt which is 25%.
In my opinion, everyone should keep in mind that traffic safety is one of the most ways in our life. At the same time, we should try our best to obey the traffic rules. The harder we try, the happier our life will be!
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给图表作文，根据图表显示介绍交通安全事故发生的因素以及自己的观点。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：There ar e……， it is important for sb to do sth, it’s quite clear that……, everyone should……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑
关系，注意要切题，思路清晰。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了交通安全事故频发，接下来介绍两个表格，表格一：驾驶员因素 85%，交通因素 5%，环境因素 10%。

，表格二：超速 50%，酒驾 15%，疲劳驾驶 25%，不系安全带 25%。

最后表达自己的观点：要有交通安全意识，要遵守交通规则。

此处as a result, in my opinion, keep in mind, at the same time, try one’s best to do sth, the+形容词比较级， the +形容词比较级等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

【难度】较难
（五）
你学校最近开展“美好校园”的系列活动，你参加了“美好校园，从我做起”的演讲，请以“Start out small”为题, 写一篇演讲辞，内容必须包括：
1. 描述图中校园内的不良行为；
2. 自由发挥，描述其他一至两点校园内的不良行为;
3. 发表你的校园文明倡议。

注意：1. 词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Start out small
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school…
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Start out small
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school. Firstly, in order to save water, we should never forget to turn off the tap after we wash hands or other things. But some of us often forget it. Secondly, we should protect
the trees and grass which make our school beautiful. For example, we should follow the rules and not play football on the grass. Besides, don’t liter around. It’s a good habit to put the rubbish into the rubbish can and keep our school clean and tidy. Let’s start out small. Only in this way can we make our school beautiful. So we can study in a beautiful and comfortable environment.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇图片作文。

根据图片内容和要求，以“美好校园，从我做起”为主题描述一些校园内不文明现象，图片已经给出我们三点提示，要求我们自己适当发挥，再写出一条。

根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。

如：in order to“为了”；forget to do sth“忘记做某事”；It’s a good habit to do pu t the rubbish into the rubbish .“将垃圾扔进垃圾箱是好习惯。

”以及倒装句的使用。

学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

【难度】较难
（六）
根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件。

所给英文提示词语仅供选用。

请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

2015年4月13日，河南一位名叫顾少强的中学女教师向学校领导递交了一封只有10个字的辞职信：“世界那么大，我想去看看。

” 她的这封信引起广泛关注。

请你就此事给你的英国笔友写一封邮件，向他（她）简单介绍顾少强及她的决定，并谈谈你对此事的看法。

提示词：a letter of resignation, decide, give up, look round, agree,
【答案】
Gu Shaoqiang is a woman teacher in He Nan province. On April 13, 2015, she wrote a letter to her headmaster. She wanted to give up her teaching to look around the outside world.
I think everyone has different ways of life, as an adult, it’s normal for her to choose her own ways of life. The world is very beautiful, it’s well worth appreciating. If I were her, maybe I would also do like that. I agree to her decision.【解析】
试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。

注意文章文体、人称和时态。

要求介绍。

同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清
楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

【难度】较难
（七）
养成良好的生活习惯和学习习惯，对我们每一位学生成长很有帮助。

请根据提示要点用英语写一篇词数90左右的短文，发表在学校网站上。

提示要点：
（一）良好的生活和学习习惯内容包括：
1）在生活方面：①健康饮食，②经常锻炼，③利用好时间。

2）在学习方面：①课前预习，②认真听讲，③独立作业。

（二）良好习惯带来的益处内容包括：
1）帮助我们更好地学习知识。

2）提高技能使我们学会自我控制。

（三）谈谈你的感受（请结合自身认识，给出一至两点）。

作文要求：
1．表达中必须包含所给提示要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2．词数90左右。

开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

3．表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

【答案】
A Good Habit, a Successful School Life
A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without think especially something that is hard to stop doing.
In our daily life, we ought to keep a healthy diet. Also it’s necessary for us to exercise a lot. And we should learn to make good use of our time.
In our school life, we should prepare well for each lesson. In class, we must listen to the teacher carefully. Besides ,it’s important for us to do our homework on our own.
In a word, good habits can help us learn things better and improve our skills. We can learn to control ourselves if we have good habits.
I think good habits are really good for our mind and body. Let's form good habits and have a healthy life.
【解析】
试题分析：本题要求根据所给的提纲材料，谈谈养成良好的习惯对我们成长的帮助。

要求从良好的学习、生活习惯的内容、给我们成长带来的好处以及自己的感受几个方面来表达。

短文主要用一般现在时态，用第一人称进行写作。

写作亮点：短文第1自然段对“习惯”下了一个定义；第2自然段从生活习惯上进行写作；第3自然段写的是学习习惯。

后面谈的是自己的感受。

层次分明，包含了提纲材料的所有要点。

短文中所使用到的keep a healthy diet, make good use of our time, prepare for each lesson等等结构；it’s necessary for us to exercise a lot.it’s important for us to do our homework on our own.等等句型，使短文简洁、生动，也使短文增色不少。

【难度】较难
（八）
雷锋同志说过：“我要把有限的生命，投入到无限的为人民服务之中去。

”请以“Everyone Needs Help”为题，写一篇作文。

要求：◆词数：90个左右。

文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

◆书写工整，拼写、语法正确，内容层次分明。

◆全文中不要提及真实的校名和人名。

Everyone Needs Help
In our daily life,
【答案】
Everyone Needs Help
In our daily life, everyone needs help.
Here let me tell you a story. One day, I saw a little girl was walking across the street. Suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street. The little girl ran towards the old man at once, but she was so short that she couldn’t help him to stand. I helped her and we together brought the old man to safety. The old man thanked us over and over. The little girl and I were very happy because we helped the old man.
In my opinion, helping each other makes everyone happy and gets well with each other. So let’s help those who need help from now on.
【解析】
试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。

句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。

文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。

文中有一些好的表达方式如Suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street. The little girl ran towards the old man at once, but she was so short that she couldn’t help him to Did you get any help from others?
Did you give any help
to people when they
needed? Tell your story or
his(her) story …..
stand. I helped her and we together brought the old man to safety.等等。

【难度】较难
（九）
假设你是第一中学的一名学生，3月21日是学校开放日,邀请家长来校听课参观,你作为志愿者参与了开放日活动。

请你以“The School Open Day”为题，在答题卡指定的位置上写一篇90词左右的英文报道。

内容提示如下：
1. 你带领家长参观美丽的校园，并一同观看了升国旗仪式。

2. 家长们听了很多堂课，高度评价老师精湛的教学技能。

3. 王芳老师的音乐课有趣而活跃，成功地融合了传统和现代音乐。

4. 张阳老师的历史课把抗日战争栩栩如生呈现到课堂上，讲述了七十年前中华儿女如何与日本鬼子勇敢战斗。

5. 家长们都感到……并希望……
( 参考词汇：抗日战争the Anti-Japanese War)
注意：
1．文章必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

2．最后要点的内容须用2到3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥。

3．报道的开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数。

The School Open Day
No. 1 Middle School had a school open day on March 21st. Many parents were invited to our school. I___________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________
【答案】
The School Open Day
No. 1 Middle School had a school open day on March 21st. Many parents were invited to our school. I showed them around our beautiful school and watched the raising of national flag together. Parents listened to many lessons. They thought highly of te achers’ excellent teaching skills. The music lesson given by Wang Fang was lively and interesting. She successfully brought traditional music and modern music together. The history lesson given by Zhang Yang brought the Anti-Japanese War alive in class. He told us how Chinese people fought against Japanese bravely 70 years ago. Parents all felt fantastic and were moved by the teachers’ hard work and
personal charm. They hope that they can have more chances to join in different school activities.
（103words）
【解析】
试题分析：这篇作文以学校开放日为题,邀请家长来校听课参观,你作为志愿者参与了开放日活动写一篇短文。

内容包括：1.你带领家长参观美丽的校园，并一同观看了升国旗仪式。

2.家长们听了很多堂课，高度评价老师精湛的教学技能。

3.王芳老师的音乐课有趣而活跃，成功地融合了传统和现代音乐。

4.张阳老师的历史课把抗日战争栩栩如生呈现到课堂上，讲述了七十年前中华儿女如何与日本鬼子勇敢战斗。

5.家长们都感到……并希望……最后用2到3句话展开合理想象。

写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。

文中所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。

当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。

写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求条理清楚，结构清晰，要点全面。

而且作者在写作时，并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序，逐句翻译的，而是将这些信息进行了整合，让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达。

短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的句式，增强了文章的连贯性。

如动词过去分词作定语，动词被动语态，宾语从句的运用等等，另外还使用了大量好的短语，如show around,
listen to, think highly of, fight against, personal charm, have more chances to do 等等。

【难度】较难
（十）
中美中学生交流项目安排一批美国中学生来华一周体验中国文化，在网上挑选适合住宿的家庭。

假如你是光明中学的学生李华，愿意接受一位美国学生入住你家，请用英语给项目美方负责人写一封邮件，说明你的家庭和住宿条件，你本人的优势以及你帮助美国中学生体验中国文化的打算。

注意：1．可适当增加细节；
2．词数：100左右；开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数；
Dear sir,
I am writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the homestay families for the American students._________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear sir,
I am writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the homestay families for the American students.
My parents are in favor of my idea that I host an American student. We live in a beautiful community. Luckily, we have extra room for guests so that they can have private living space.I am a student of Guangming high school, open-minded and enthusiastic. What’s more, I’m quite good at languages and we can communicate well in English.If an American student stays with us, I’ll be a good guide to some local places of interest, which are famous in our area. Besides, my parents and I will help her to make Chinese meals, such as jiaozi, noodles, and other foods.We have the confidence to make the American student feel at home and have some sweet memories. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：本题是一篇书信类材料作文。

要求写一封电子邮件，开头和结尾部分已经给出。

写作时，要包含题目所给的要点，可适当展开论述。

注意行文的流畅，尽量减少拼写、时态和语法错误。

写作亮点：范文熟练使用了in favor of, such as, feel at home, be good at等短语，使文章显得充实；范文运用了so that句型,和非限制性定语从句which are famous in our area, 显示了较强的语法功底；同时，What’s more, luckily, Besides等连接词的使用，使行文变得连贯、紧凑。

【难度】较难
（十一）
第一节：看图写句。

(5分)
1．be used to，on Sundays
2．speech， yesterday
3．be afraid of
4．tired， because
5．mother， strict
【答案】
1．He is used to boating in the lake on Sundays.
2．Yesterday Tom made a speech in front of the class.
3．The boy is afraid of dogs.
4．She is tired because it is half past eleven in the night.
5．Her mother is very strict with her.
【解析】
试题分析：在做此题前一定要认真观察图画内容，运用所给单词短语写出正确的句子。

1．be used to doing sth习惯于做某事； on Sundays在星期日。

2．make a speech做演讲；in front of 在……前面。

3．be afraid of 害怕。

4．be tired累了，困了； because因为，引导原因状语从句。

5．be strict with 对……要求严格。

【难度】一般
（十二）
第一节：看图写句。

(5分)
1．
Jim, at 8:00 last night
_______________________________________________ 2．
next Sunday
________________________________________________ 3．
be good for
______________________________________________ 4．
had better，take，pills
_____________________________________________ 5．
strong , than
____________________________________________【答案】
1．Jim was reading at 8:00 last night . 2．He will go fishing next Sunday . 3．Running is good for our health . 4．You’d better take some pills. 5．The cow is stronger than the goose.【解析】
1．句意：昨晚8点Jim正在看书。

2．句意：下周日他要去钓鱼。

3．句意：跑步对健康有好处。

4．句意：你最好吃点药。

5．句意：这头牛比这只鹅壮实。

【难度】较易。