雅思写作语料库
(完整word版)雅思写作必背短语以及精彩句型
雅思写作核心语料库Part 11 offer a sense of job satisfaction and security带来工作的满意感和安全感2lay a solid professional working experience 累积扎实的工作经验3 reduce/cut down expenditure 减少支出4increase/generate job opportunities创建就业时机6promote talent introduction and exchange促令人材的引进与沟通7keep skills fresh and up-to-date 保证技术的不落后9lay a solid foundation for 确立坚固的基础10 pave the way for the future/development 为将来摊平了道路11foster a sense of competition and cooperation培育合作感与竞争感 12cultivate the spirit of team working 培育团队合作精神13master interpersonal skills 掌握人及关系技巧 14widen one ’ s knowledge拓宽知识面15enrich one’ s social and life experience丰富社会与人生经历16enlarge one’ s view/broaden one’拓s宽horizon视线17realize the value of life 实现人生价值18surmount /overcome / win over /master difficulties 战胜困难19grasp good communication skills 掌握人际沟通技巧20remove misunderstanding and discrimination 除去误会与鄙视21keep balance between work and family 保持事业与家庭的均衡 22raise the standard of living提升生活水平25enrich people ’ s spiritual丰life富人们的精神生活26promote social skills and competence提升交际技巧与能力 27strengthen the family ties促使家庭团结28cultivate a strong sense of responsibility 培育激烈的责任感29bring joys and comforts to sb带来欢乐与舒坦30usher in a brand-new life-style引入崭新的生活方式31relieve the pressure of 缓解压力32maintain the community stability 保持社会的稳固33improve the utilization rate of energy resources提升能源的利用率34make full use of 充足利用35satisfy people ’ s needs/meet the demands of满people足人们的需求 36promote the development of relative industries促使有关家产的发展 37stimulate domestic needs刺激国内需求38 impel economic development促使经济的发展39generate jobs, income and tax revenues扩大就业时机，提升收入40enhance mutual understanding促使互相的理解41boost local development促使当地的发展42promote cultural exchange and cooperation促使文化的沟通与合作43enrich one’ s experience of丰life富人生经历44strengthen the ties with outside world增强与外面世界的联系 46foster a climate of peace and prosperity创建和平繁华的氛围 47stimulate our feelings of togetherness激发团结48maintain a natural balance 保持自然均衡 49reduce thelabor intensity 降低劳动强度50stimulate one’ s imagination and intereststh刺激人们的想象里与兴趣51accelerate the flow of information 加快信息的流动52prvide more business opportunities 供给商机53increase the productivity 提升生产力54create more opportunities for education创建受教育的时机55improve educational conditions 改良教育条件56release people from hard manual work令人们从沉重的体力劳动中解脱出来57speed up technical innovation 加快技术改革58better the development of human society完好人力资源的发展60bring immeasurable economic benefits 带来巨大的经济效益Part2 缺点1put sb or sth at risk 使---冒风险3be lack of a sense of job security 缺乏工作的安全感 4distract sb from doing sth 是某人从某事中分心5impose a heave strain on 来巨大的力 6beexaggerated and cheating夸张且欺的7be the invasion of privacy 入侵私8violate rights of free speech入侵言自由的利9endanger social stability and safety危害到社会的定与安全10restrain sb from doing 限制某人做某事14go astray 入歧路15undermine local culture 破当地文化16jeopardize the safety and stability of the society损坏社会的安全与定17set a bad example to立坏的榜18lead to the extinction of some species 致一些物种的 19resultin shortage of energy and natural resources致能源的欠缺21 to cause the estrangement/isolation/alienation between A and B 致了 A 与 B 之的疏22bring disgrace on sb ---来羞耻23suffer heavy losses 失沉重24easily cause stress-related illnesses简单致与力有关的疾病25lack basic infrastructures 缺乏基施26break the ecological balance破生均衡27lead to extravagant waste of public funds致公共金的极度浪28make⋯ in disorder 使杂乱30be harmful to our physical and mental and health害身心健康31lead to degradation of social atmosphere世日下32further widen the gaps between the rich and the poor 一步加大富之的差距 33be the drying up of our limited natural resources and the deterioration of the environment 有限的自然源的枯竭和境的化34contaminate environment 染境37 be a root of all evils 万恶之源38be easily taken in by 简单被欺诈39aggravate the traffic jams and worsen the crowdedness使交通拥塞和拥堵更加恶化40will pay a high price for this negative development of 为。
雅思写作(十三)媒体类语料库及范文
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Media
Media mass media 大众传媒 social media 社交媒体
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Media mass media 大众传媒 social media 社交媒体 the print media 印刷媒体 the electronic media 电子媒体
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Media mass media 大众传媒 social media 社交媒体 the print media 印刷媒体 the electronic media 电子媒体 the press 报刊(总称)，新闻界 news outlet(s)/organizations 新闻媒体 coverage n. 报道 (注: 不可数名词) media coverage of... 媒体对......的报道 cover v. 报道 current affairs 时事 journalist n. 记者
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Media mass media 大众传媒 social media 社交媒体 the print media 印刷媒体 the electronic media 电子媒体 the press 报刊(总称)，新闻界 news outlet(s)/organizations 新闻媒体 coverage n. 报道 (注: 不可数名词) media coverage of... 媒体对......的报道 cover v. 报道
strong/impeccable work ethics 较强的/无懈可击的职业道德 prevalent/pervasive adj. 无所不在的，普遍存在的 the prevalence of ……的流行、盛行 a profound effect on 对……有着深远的影响 disclose (or expose/reveal/unveil) social problems 揭露社会问题
雅思写作语料库--企业是否应承担更多的社会责任
Some people think as for companies，in addition to making money，they should also shoulder more social responsibilities，to what extent do you agree or disagree?有人认为，对于企业来说，除了盈利，企业应该承担更多的社会责任，是否同意?是否同意类话题提问标志：Some people think that …… to what extent do you agree or disagree?点评：这是雅思和托福最经典的提问方式【写作思路】百分百支持(一边倒支持)【写作思路】三分让步，七分反驳(让步反驳)【写作步骤】1.词汇替换：替换题目中关键词汇2.主题观点：确立作家立场或者写作目的3.思路拓展：思考支持反驳或者解释解决的理由4.正文写作：个性开篇;套入模板;正文展开5.仔细检查：检查词汇，句法，逻辑【高分策略】(按照评分标准)1.题目为中心：明确回答问题，清晰论证问题2.逻辑为纲要：清晰的谋篇布局3.词汇为亮点：选择个性，多元，精彩的词汇表达4.句型为基础：使用符合学术性论文写作的句型【作家立场】企业确实是要盈利的，但是，同时，企业应该承担更多的社会责任。
员工为何对于企业有忠诚度：钱+ 前途+ 价值感企业为何要实现盈利：1.企业要为员工创造更多的个人财富，保障他们美好的生活，因此，企业只有实现利益最大化，才能稳定员工，同时，帮助企业更好地发展。
2.企业在创立之初，人力培训，购置设备，营销宣传，产品研发，需要大量的资金的注入，企业必须使其产品最大化地占领市场份额，企业才能收回成本，实现可持续性发展。
(企业要盈利的原因)企业如何体现其社会责任：(回报社会)1.社会责任：在下雨或下雪的天气，很多的饭店或者酒店会给环卫工人提供免费的休息场所，热水，饭菜，这就是企业社会责任的体现之一。
雅思写作语料库--寒门出贵子还是将门出虎子
Some people believe that children who are brought up in families which don't have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up in wealthier families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?有人认为，比之出生在富裕家庭的孩子，出生在贫困家庭的孩子更能面对成人生活中遇到的困难，是否认同?【创作感言】教育类为雅思恒热考题，11月7日重复考察间隔年的利弊(A卷);父母和老师谁对于孩子的影响更大(B卷)，其他经典提问涉及到：“是否所有的父母都应该学习育儿培训课程”，“穷爸爸和富爸爸的孩子谁更能面对人生的艰辛”，“是否没有天赋的孩子不应该学习外语”等等，今日分享经典话题之一。
【作家立场】尽管出身寒门的孩子可能会依赖自己的努力出类拔萃，出身富贵家庭的孩子更可能拥抱精彩的人生。
【思路拓展】【为何穷爸爸的孩子能够面对人生的艰辛】1. 俗话说，“穷人的孩子早当家，”贫困家庭的孩子从小就习惯了逆境和挫折，不能更多地依赖父母，他们只能自强不息、披荆斩棘、出人头地，因此，他们更加独立、成熟、坚强，生活的困境可助他们面对成人生活的艰辛。
2. 对于家境贫困的孩子们而言，他们有更加强烈的愿望改变命运，因此，他们有明晰的奋斗目标，从这个意义上讲，他们有可能在奋斗中锻炼各种能力，这些能力可助人成长。
为何富爸爸的孩子更能拥抱辉煌的人生？1. 贫困家庭孩子很多是自卑的、内向的，相反，富裕家庭的孩子通常是积极乐观的，见多识广的。
丰富的阅历和良好的心态有助于一个人面对人生的寒冷，学会坚强。
2. 家境殷实的孩子，通常可以接受精英教育，父母们也会潜移默化地给他们传递奋斗的正能量，这可使他们学业辉煌，为事业打下坚实基础。
雅思写作语料库--网络游戏的利弊
Some people think playing computer games is bad for children on everything.Others think it has some positive on the way children develop. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 有人认为计算机游戏对于孩子是有害的，有人认为计算机游戏对于孩子的发展有积极的影响，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见?名师点评：考察网络游戏对于孩子的利弊影响。
【相关题目】Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effect on society and should be banned. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion? 电影和计算机游戏中含有暴力元素，因此受欢迎，有人认为他们对于社会的影响是消极的，有人认为，他们仅仅是无害的娱乐方式，讨论两种观点?A study shows that a lot of children from the age 7 to 11 spend too much time watching television or playing video games. How do you think this problem influence the children their families and the society? What measures should be taken to solve it? 研究显示：7岁到11岁的年轻人花费太多时间看电视，玩游戏，这对于孩子，家庭和社会的影响何在? 应该如何解决?【两种观点讨论布局图】首段：背景介绍（个性开篇）+争议焦点（句型引导）+作家立场（清晰表达）二段：正方观点的展开（三点理由）三段：反方观点的展开（二点理由）尾段：再次亮明观点+（总结理由）【作家立场】沉迷于网络游戏，对于孩子而言，是弊大于利。
雅思写作语料库--广告的利弊
广告类：If a product is good or it meets people’s needs, people will buy it, so advertising is unnecessary and no more than an entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 人们购买商品是因为需要，广告没有作用，仅仅是娱乐，是否认同?点评：no more than = only adv 仅仅相关提问：1. Nowadays, customers are facing increasing advertisements with the competition of different companies. To what extent do you think customers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect the customers? 现在广告愈来愈多，广告在多大的程度上影响了消费者，如何保护消费者?点评：分析广告的弊端以及提出解决策略。
2. Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 产品销量的提高反映了广告的作用，不是社会需求，是否认同?点评：广告话题最难的提问角度，写作思路为让步反驳：广告为何不是提高产品销量的因素。
3. Some people believe that advertisements should be banned since they serve no useful purpose and can even be damaging. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 广告应不应该被废除?点评：让步反驳写法，谈及广告的利好，不能因噎废食。
雅思写作语料库--是否应该支持传媒审查
犯罪类+ 传媒类Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effect on society and should be banned. Other says they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 电影和游戏中的暴力元素很流行，有人认为暴力元素对于社会有不良影响，有人认为看暴力电影和玩暴力游戏仅仅是无害的娱乐，讨论两种观点再结论? (2011年10月29日)相关题目：Some people suggest that there should be restrictions on a detailed description of crimes in the newspapers and on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人建议对于报纸和电视上犯罪细节(暴力信息，色情)的描述应该加以限制，你在多大程度上同意这个观点?讨论两种观点话题解析：提问标志：Discuss both sides and give your own opinion ? Discuss these views and give your opinion?作家立场：政府应该限制传媒中的暴力信息，我支持传媒审查。
谋篇布局：首段：背景介绍+ 争议焦点+ 写作意图(1. 直接亮明观点; 2. 表示先讨论再结论)二段：正方观点的合理性以及展开(2-3个分论点)三段：反方观点的合理性以及展开(2-3个分论点)尾段：我的观点(1. 再次亮出观点+总结理由;2. 支持理由多的一方)思路拓展之传媒审查：首段：商业化的大众传媒充斥着对于各种犯罪以及暴力的生动描绘。
2020雅思写作语料库教育类：小组学习和自己学习
2020雅思写作语料库教育类：小组学习和自己学习教育类：Some people believe that students should study in groups. Others think that they should study alone. What are the benefits of studying in groups and studying alone? Which wayis more effective? 有人认为学生们应该小组学习，有人认为学生们应该自己学习，小组学习和自己学习利好各在哪里，你认为何种方式有效?思路拓展：小组学习的利好：1. 小组讨论，集思广益，例证展开：小组讨论数学题的解题思路，小组讨论作文的头脑风暴。
2. 有良好的学习氛围，能够协助缺乏自律性的孩子们专注于学习，提升学习效率。
3. 有效的方式结实新朋友，锻炼人的口才，交流水平以及团队精神。
自己学习的利好：1. 培养了自己的独立思考以及解决问题的水平，学习上不会对他人产生过度的依赖。
2. 小组学习更加容易培养人的分析性思维，理性思维和辩证思维的水平。
点评：论据支持能够学习历史和哲学，以及中学生学习国际新闻作家立场：小组学习和自己学习各有优势，选择应该由个人做出，我过去常常一个人学习，虽然能够独立思考，但是未能感知小组讨论和交流的乐趣，所以，有机会，我更加渴望小组学习。
点评：主题观点是模仿雅思考官男女分校的范文薛鹏原创语料库：(很多语料库适合课堂教育)1. group study 小组学习2. to study with a group of fellow classmates 和同龄人一起学习拓展：a group of fellow classmates = peers 同龄人3. focus on self-improvement 专注于自我提升4. zero in on academic study = concentrate on learning专注学习 (写作亮点)5. a great many self-leaner 很多的自学者6. achieve academic success 取得学习的成功7. enhance the efficiency of learning 提升学习效率8. face-to-face commu nication could …… 面对面交流能够……9. positive interaction with …… 和…… 积极的互动10. competitive atmosphere竞争的气氛11. Compared with the independent self-learners， those who are accustomed to group learning， in some cases， might become overly dependent on other assistance. 习惯于自己学习者，可能对于他人的协助过度依赖12. ……could cultivate one’s teamwork spirit and awareness of cooperation 培养团队精神和合作意识点评：体育课的利好13. Competitive atmosphere and pressure from the peers could help those who lack self-discipline to zero in on study 竞争的氛围和来自同龄人的压力能够协助哪些缺乏自律性的人专注于学习点评：课堂教育的利好;寄宿学校的利好14. Studying with a group of peers has an indispensable role play in fostering on e’s cooperation awareness and self-sacrifice spirit. 小组学习培养人的合作意识以及自我牺牲精神。
雅思写作语料库-安全感缺失原因与对策
雅思写作语料库:安全感缺失原因与对策Nowadays,manypeopledonotfeelsafeeitherwhentheyareat homeorgoout.whatarethereasonsandwhatcanbedonetosolv ethisproblem?现在,很多在无论在家里还是出门在外都感到不安全,原因何在,如何解决?Insomecountries,youngpeoplearenotonlyricherbutalsosaf erandhealthierthaneverbefore.however,theyarelesshappy. whatdoyouthinkarethecausesofthis?whatsolutionscanyou suggest?在一些国家,年轻人更加富有,安全,健康,但是,他们还是不快乐,原因何在,如何解决?雅思写作高分密码:1.题目为中心:明确回答问题;清晰论证问题2.逻辑为纲要:清晰的谋篇布局3.词汇为亮点:选择个性,精准,多元的词汇4.句型为基础:选择符合学术性论文写作的句型分析问题解决问题类话题谋篇布局:首段:背景介绍+问题影响(对于个人,家庭,社会)+写作目的(表达分析问题和解决问题)二段:三个原因的展开(社会原因,家庭原因,个人原因) 三段:三个解决方法的展开(政府,企业,家庭,媒体,个人) 尾段:亮明观点+总结理由作家立场:本文的写作目的就是讨论下现代人安全感缺失的根源以及提出相关的解决策略。
思路拓展:1.社会原因:犯罪还没有得到最有效的控制;夜归的女性可能遭遇侵害或者骚扰。
同时,很多人缺乏心理的安全感。
2.社会原因:现在,工作竞争很激烈,人们不时面对失业的风险,很多心理上没有安全感。
3.个人原因:性格差异,有人天性就是杞人忧天,喜欢担忧未来,例如,疾病,失业,破产等。
对于这样的人而言,他们快乐和安全指数相对较低。
解决策略:1.政府如何作为:政府应该加强立法,加大对于惯性犯罪者的处罚力度,同时,个人应该提高自我保护意识。
雅思写作语料库
雅思写作语料库（含母题）EducationIn schools and universities, lectures were used as a way to teach a large number of students. As new technology is now available for education, some people think there is no justification for lectures anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree?立场：主题演讲依然是教授学生的主要方式，经管科技使人们接受教育的选择更加多元化。
思路拓展：让步段：高科技对于教育的辅助作用：(可以选择两点让步)1. 在线教育费用较低。
网络资源丰富，音频视频文件可根据学生需求自由选择，同时，教学资源可反复利用。
2. 在线学习，适应特殊群体，例如残疾学习者，忙碌企业家以及生病的学生，因为远程教育不仅仅克服了地域的障碍，也节省了往返的麻烦。
3. 远程教育提高了学习灵活性，尤其适合喜欢按照自己的节奏安排学习的学生。
反驳段：主题演讲(或者课堂教育的)的不可替代性：1. 主题演讲营造的造良好的学习氛围是自学无法比拟的。
同时，在真实课堂，老师的监督和同龄人的压力可以帮助没有自律性的学生专注于学习。
相反，接受网络教育对人的自律性要求很好，网络的娱乐功能容易使人懈怠，失去学习的兴趣和耐心。
2. 课堂教育中积极的课堂互动，小组讨论，面对面的交流可以激发学习热情，提高学习效率，同时，学生可以学习如何与人交往交流，提高群体性经验。
3. 教授们不仅仅是传授知识，还能关注学生的道德教育和性格培养，启迪学生智慧，树立学生自信，这些是网络教育无法实现的。
语料库：基本语料库：1. teachers = educators n老师2. deliver a lecture = make a speech v演讲;授课3. college professors n大学教授4. professionally well-trained adj专业上训练有素的5. highly qualified adj 合格的6. knowledgeable = learned adj博学的7. traditional classroom teaching = conventional education = conventional teaching 传统课堂教育8. distance learning n远程学习9. distance education = tele-education n远程教育10. on-line education n在线教育11. impart knowledge into one’s mind v教授知识12. disseminate knowledge = pass on knowledge = convey knowledge v 传播知识核心观点句语料库：1. Some top educational institutions have chosen to deliver an internet-based program and thus geographical barriers have been lifted. 一些名校提供网络教育，因此学习不再受地域的限制。
雅思写作(十)性别平等、科技类语料库及范文
Gender Equality 语料库
gender discrimination性别歧视 an enlightened (or a progressive) society 一个开明的社会 parental instinct 父母本能 child bearing 生育孩子 child rearing 抚养孩子 traditional role in… ……上传统的角色 (e.g. traditional role in raising children, taking care of the family and committing to the housework) be tied down by household chores 被家务事拖累 not physically st nature (性格上)较少攻击性的 Certain posts may need to remain predominantly male or female.某些职位可能 需要主要由男性或女性来担当。
Gender Equality 语料库
gender discrimination性别歧视 an enlightened (or a progressive) society 一个开明的社会 parental instinct 父母本能
Gender Equality 语料库
gender discrimination性别歧视 an enlightened (or a progressive) society 一个开明的社会 parental instinct 父母本能 child bearing 生育孩子 child rearing 抚养孩子
Gender Equality 语料库
gender discrimination性别歧视 an enlightened (or a progressive) society 一个开明的社会 parental instinct 父母本能 child bearing 生育孩子 child rearing 抚养孩子 traditional role in… ……上传统的角色 (e.g. traditional role in raising children, taking care of the family and committing to the housework) be tied down by household chores 被家务事拖累
雅思写作语料库--古老建筑是应该保护还是拆除
Many old buildings are protected by the law because they are part of a nation's history. However, some people think they should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. Do you agree or disagree? 有人认为应该拆除古老建筑给新建筑让路，是否认同?相关提问：The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs numerous governments' expenditures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 保护古老建筑耗费很多政策财政，财政预算应该用于新建筑和修路，是否认同?(2013年7月22日)【头脑风暴导言】西藏的布达拉宫为古老建筑，布达拉宫已经成为吸引游客的重要的旅游资源。
西安的钟楼，鼓楼为古老建筑，展示了城市独特的文化底蕴和城市景观，保护古老建筑就是保护文化遗产。
【作家立场】支持保护古老建筑，因为古老建筑体现一个城市的文化底蕴，是历史的见证，是城市景色的一部分，可以被开发成热门的旅游景区。
【思路拓展】支持保护古老建筑的理由：1. 古老建筑历史文化遗产的一部分，保护古建筑就是保护文化遗产，因为古建筑是历史的见证，提供了和过去具体的联系，如果拆除古老建筑，人类的历史就是一团迷雾，城市失去了其特征，在其原址上建设的摩天高楼可以建设在世界上的任何地方。
2. 保护古老建筑产生巨大的经济价值，很多古老建筑已经成为热门的旅游资源，古老建筑是城市风景的一部分，可以繁荣旅游经济，提高城市的美誉度。
雅思写作语料库--天赋与艺术
【考情回顾】2015年10月31日雅思写作Some people think every human being can create art (e.g. painting), others think only the people born with the ability can create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 有些人认为任何人都可以学习艺术创造(例如绘画)，有人认为只有具有天赋的人才能学习艺术创造，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见。
【预测题目】Some people think the main reason for success is hard work and determination.While other people think factors like money and personal appearance are also important. Discuss both views and give your own opinions. 有些人认为成功来自勤奋和坚定，有些人认为成功来自财富和外貌，讨论两种观点。
【相关题目】(剑桥8册)It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 有人认为只有天生具有一定禀赋的人才能学习音乐或者体育，有人认为任何孩子都可以通过学习成为优秀的运动者或者音乐家，讨论两种观点。
基于语料库的雅思写作词汇特点分析
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2020雅思写作语料库教育类：寄宿学校的利弊
2020雅思写作语料库教育类：寄宿学校的利弊教育类：It is better for students to live away from home while studying at university than live at home with parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 孩子们应在大学学习，而不是在家里和父母住，是否认同?= Nowadays, sending children to a boarding school is becoming increasingly popular. Why is this case? Do you think it is a positive development? 寄宿学校的原因以及利弊讨论?寄宿学校的原因：1. 保障学习的学生们应该住在大学连续性，尤其是对于父母工作需要持续迁移的学生来说。
2. 父母有意识地培养孩子们的群体性成长经验。
寄宿学校的利好：1. 孩子们能够通过住校锻炼独立性，比如自己学会了洗衣服，整理房间，处理学习中的问题，这些水平的培养对于人的成长是有利好的。
2. 能够培养同学间的友谊，收获更多的快乐。
并且，使人学习如何与人交往和交流。
3. 能够更好地利用学校的资源，例如图书馆，食堂，健身馆。
有良好学习氛围。
寄宿学校的弊端：1. 寄宿生可能受到周围不良同学的影响，染上吸烟以及打游戏的恶习。
2. 寄宿生和父母的感情可能会疏远。
薛鹏原创语料库：1. boarding school = school with accommodation n 寄宿学校2. save the trouble of commuting between home and school v节省了从学校到家里的往返的麻烦点评：同理写作远程教育，远程办公3. ensure the continuity of academic study v保障了学习的连续性4. are able to improve their independence via living on campus v通过住校提升独立性5. train one’s sense of independence = foster one’s sense of independence v培养独立性6. cultivate many skills such as tidying up room，doing the laundry v培养各种水平，例如整理房间，洗衣服7. have more time to dive into various campus activities v参加校园活动8. It is convenient to draw on various educational resources v利用各种教育资源点评：draw on v 利用……点评：本句同理写作课堂教育的利好9. The choice of hostel accommodation， organized by the university, would enable you to mix with a lot of new people v结实新朋友(注意插入语使用)10. enlarge one’s circle of friends v扩大交友圈11. …… make it easier for you to make new social contacts： v结实好友12. University accommodation often provides some form of catering facilities, students do not have to do their own shopping or cooking 学校提供餐饮，学生不必购物，做饭点评：catering facilities n 餐饮13. …… may be easily swayed by surroundings without sufficient supervision and guidance from their parents 没有父母的监管，也许受到周围不良环境的影响。
雅思写作口语之考官观点语料库整合
雅思写作口语之考官观点语料库整合平常要多积累一些雅思口语素材，考试才能更顺当拿高分哦。
我今日和大家共享simon自己整理的关于各种雅思写作高频话题(其实口语也适用)的观点语料，下面我就和大家共享，来观赏一下吧。
你的雅思写作口语提分最佳伴侣考官观点语料库：广告1.Positives of AdvertisingAdvertising is a key part of modern businessCompanies need to tell customers about their productsAdvertisements inform us about the choices we haveAdvertising is a creative industry that employs many peopleWithout advertising we would have less choiceWithout advertising there would be higher unemploymentAdvertising is a form of modern artPeople enjoy adverts2.Negatives of AdvertisingAdvertising manipulates peopleIt aims to persuade people that buying a product will make them happierAdvertisers focus on selling a brand imageThey use glamorous, successful peopleWe now live in a consumer cultureWe are persuaded to follow the latest trendWe are encouraged to associate certain brands with a higher status Advertisers often aim their marketing at children Children can easily be influenced by advertisements.Children put pressure on parents to buy them things3.Opinions about AdvertisingAdvertising should be regulatedAdvertising aimed at children should be controlled or even bannedUnhealthy foods should not be marketed in a way that attracts childrenProducts that can be risk to healthy should display warningsIn some countries it is illegal to advertise cigarettes on televisionWarnings must be displayed on cigarette packetsHowever, advertising is necessary in free market economiesIt creates demand for productsGovernments should only censor false information or products thatare harmful4.广告相关真题广告的作用If the product is of good quality and meets people’s needs, people will buy it. Therefore, advertising is unnecessary and is no more than a type of entertainment.是否该禁止一切广告Society would benefit from the ban on all forms of adve雅思写作口语提分最佳伴侣考官观点语料库：城市1.Reasons for Urbanization城市化People move to cities in search of job opportunitiesCities offer greater employment possibilities and a higher standard of livingPeople migrate to cities from the countrysideTraditional activities like farming need fewer workers nowadays2.Negatives of City Life都市生活负面Life in cities has its drawbacksThe cost of living is higher than in rural areasSome people d not manage to find workHousing is usually much more expensiveHomelessness and poverty are common on citiesThere is a gap between rich and poorLife in cities can be extremely stressfulThere are problems like traffic congestion and crimeCities lack a sense of communityPeople do not even know their neighborCities are sometimes described as “concrete jungles”.3.Pedestrian Areas 步行区Pedestrian zones in city centre can improve the local environmentBanning cars encourages people to walk or cycleMany European cities have built bicycle lanesDependence on cars is linked to health problems like obesityPeople who walk or cycle regularly are generally healthierPedestrian areas are safer and more attractive for both residents and tourists4.相关雅思真题城市规划City planners locate schools, offices, hospitals and homes in specific areas which are separated from each other. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?城市化带来的问题/大城市的问题The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities has become a major trend in recent years. What are the problems with this trend? Give your suggestions about how to solve it.rtising because it may serve no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. To what extent do you agree or disagree?广告是否让人们变得一样Advertisements discourage us from being different individuals and make us become what they want us to be and look the same. Do you agree?雅思写作口语提分最佳伴侣考官观点语料库:gender性别Gender观点语料Gender and education性别与教育Men and women should have access to the same educational opportunitiesMales and females should be accepted onto courses according to their abilitiesIt is wrong to discriminate against students because of their gender Gender should be irrelevant in educationStudent’s achievements should depend on hard work and individual merit In the UK, there are similar numbers of male and female students in higher educationGender and work性别与工作Men and women should have access to the same professional opportunitiesBoth man and women should be able to pursue a careerThey should earn equal salariesThey should be employed according to their abilities, qualifications and experienceTraditionally women have been restricted to certain rolesThey were often employed as secretaries or receptionistsNowadays, a range of occupations is available to both sexesCareer success depends on individual meritWomen’s and Men’s roles in the Family男女在家庭中的角色Some people argue that a mother should not workShe should stay at home and bring up her childrenThe father should be the breadwinner of the familyOthers believe that both parents should share these responsibilitiesWorking women can take maternity leave during and after pregnancyMany mothers continue to work after this periodMany fathers and mothers share their parenting and domesticresponsibilitiesThey contribute equally to childcare, cooking and cleaningSome women many have better career prospects than their husbands.Paternity leave and “househusbands” are becoming more commonTraditional gender roles and gradually changingFamilies can divide roles and responsibilities in the most convenient way.相关雅思写作真题：女性和男性是否擅长不同的工作Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?女人领导社会Throughout history, male leaders always lead us to violence and conflict. If a society is governed by female leaders it will be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?。
雅思写作语料库(环保类)自然资源减少原因和解决办法
2021 年雅思写作语料库〔环保类〕：自然资源减少的原因和解决方法【能源】World’s natural resources such as oil，forests and fresh water are consumed at an ever-increasing rate, what are thecauses and how to solve it? 世界的自然源例如石油，森林，淡水在日益减少，原因何在，如何解决 ?解析： at an ever-increasing rate v以愈来愈快的速度如何打造高分作文：盖楼房：：篇布局+ 思路拓展原料：精准+ 学句型分析解决布局：首段：背景介 ( 个性开篇 ) + 影响 ( 于国家，企，个人)+ 写作目的 ( 清晰表达 )二段：原因的展开： ( 客上 + 主上 )( 社会原因 + 家庭原因 + 个人原因 )三段：解决策略的展开：( 政府做 ; 媒体做 ; 企做 ; 家庭做 ; 个人做 ) 尾段：再次亮明点+ 理由 ( 努力 )【薛点】：托福写作是常提是否⋯⋯是解决的的途径，就和雅思写作的分析及解决相似了。
例如： The best way to learn about a foreign country is toread newspapers and magazines from that country?Do youagree or disagree?( 托福 )假设我一套模板：首段：背景介+ 写作目的Never has ⋯⋯ in our community been as severe as it now is. ⋯⋯is soaring at an alarming rate, for reasons whichare not easily explained. This essay will attempt to discoversome of the reasons and explore some possible solutions.填空：1. energy crisis n 能源危机2. various depletion of natural resources n 各种各能源的消耗二段：三个原因的展开：One the of most contributing factors of⋯⋯could be attributed to⋯⋯By that I mean,⋯⋯Still,⋯⋯oftenexert great negative influence on⋯⋯, because⋯⋯ Last,⋯⋯is also the root cause of⋯⋯，⋯⋯三段：解决策略的展开：Considering the seriousness of the issue, it isimperative to implement some practical solutions. First，the government should give priority to⋯⋯. More precisely, to enact relevant legislations to⋯⋯. Further, much emphasis should be put on strengthening publicity, for it will aid usin fostering ⋯⋯ . Last, ⋯⋯ must take every step necessary to ⋯⋯尾段：全文：同努力;Only when the government, society and every family joinhands in resolving the issue will we⋯⋯点：政府做 ; 媒体做 ; 企做 ; 个人做⋯⋯出背景：中国在建型社会的背景下。
雅思写作语料库--智能机器人的利弊
Someone think that robots are very important to humans' future development. Others thought that they are dangerous and have negative effects on the society. Discuss the advantages of disadvantages of the robots. 有人认为机器人对于人类的未来很重要，有人认为机器人很危险，对于社会有负面影响，讨论机器人的利弊?(2011年1月8日雅思作文)【名师点评】本题同时适合写作雅思题目：科技对于人类和社会的影响。
利弊讨论类提问标志：…… discuss the advantages of disadvantages. 讨论其利弊利大于弊布局图：首段：背景介绍+ 争议焦点+ 作家立场二段：三个利好展开以及细节和论据的支持三段：二个弊端展开以及细节和论据的支持尾段：再次亮明观点+ 总结理由【作家立场】机器人的使用是利大于弊。
【思路拓展】智能机器人利好的展开：1. 机器人可以代替人做很多危险的或者重复的工作，这就节省了人力，人们可以从事其他方面的工作. 例如，可以利用机器人去深海探险或者太空探索。
2. 企业中应用机器人可以提高工作效率，创造更多的经济价值。
例如，新年期间，很多饭店出现用工荒，一家火锅店就购置了机器人服务生，机器人不仅仅节省了人力成本，缓解了用工的压力，更加成为吸引顾客的一道风景。
可以想象，机器人在未来的企业发展中将会扮演更加重要的角色。
智能机器弊端的展开：1. 如果人们多度地依赖机器人，那么这会导致人的创造力，灵活性以及主动性的下降。
例如，很多传统的手工艺可能会慢慢地消失。
2. 机器人的普及会使某些人失业。
更糟糕的是，对于机器人的纵容有可能使它们成为世界上最先进的战争武器。
【原创语料库】1. robot=mechanical person n机器人2. artificial intelligence n 人工智能3. Many industries are increasingly making use of the robots. 很多工业越来越多地使用机器人。
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雅思写作语料库：谁为医疗买单Some people believe that the health care should be free for everyone，while others say that people should pay for their own health care. Discuss both sides and give your opinion 有人认为健康医疗对于每一个公民应该免费，有人认为个人应该承担医疗费用，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见。
【政府类】Some people say that the government should pay for the health care and education of its citizens, but other people say that it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss the two opinions and give your views. 有人认为政府应该给公民的教育和医疗买单，有人认为这不是政府的责任，讨论两种观点，说明你的立场?【立场】我认为，享受免费的医疗是公民的一项基本权利。
同时，政府应该合理地分配医疗预算。
【思路拓展】〖政府给医疗买单的理由〗①公民是纳税人，有享受免费医疗的权利。
政府是人民利益的代表，普及免费医疗可以还利于民。
②政府的医疗上的援助可以使得很多患病的，同时来自贫困家庭的人得到及时的治疗，这有助于提高政府的威信，以及增强民众的民族自豪感。
③普及免费医疗可以公民的健康指数，因此提高国民的基本素质，增强一个国家在国际舞台的竞争力。
〖反对政府给医疗买单的理由〗①政府的财政有限，但是，要解决的民生问题是无穷的，完全普及免费医疗会无疑增加政府的财政压力。
②对比普及免费的医疗，政府还要解决更重要的民生问题，例如改善环境，加强基础设施建设，普及教育，这些更加需要政府经济援助。
【范文赏析】【首段】背景介绍+ 作者立场The government, as a decision-maker, is the representative of citizen’s basic interests. Hence, every governmental policy will surely exert a profound influence on the further prosperity of the nation. From my perspective，people have a basic right to free heath-care as a necessary condition of a proper human life. However，properly allocate the medical budget should be advocated.【二段】正方观点的展开Virtually，every individual could become beneficiaries of a perfect health-care resources. First, as honorable tax-payer, every citizen has been making his or her unique contribution to the nation. Thereby, to spend money on free health care should be considered as a returned favor. Also, as for those who are living under the poverty line and suffering from the agonies of various diseases, they might even fail to afford a small proportion of their medical care expenses. Therefore, the government should be urged to sponsor those who are in need of medical help. Imaginably, it could stabilize the society and enhance the government’s prestige. Eventually, to provide citizens with free medical care could, to a large extent, promote citizens’health index and thus improve the basic quality of a nation’s population.【三段】反方观点的展开Others, however, might think differently. First, some opponents argue that ever-rising heath costs were matched against static or declining resources. In this sense, excessive investment medical treatment will inevitably impose much pressure upon a government economically. Another argument hold by some people is that the government has more pressing socialproblems that need to render more concerns over. In other words, to popularize free education, perfect the construction of the infrastructure or safeguard the environment still needs governmental support.【尾段】再次亮明观点In closing, my stand is that health-care should be considered as one of the fundamental social welfare. Therefore, it is the unshakable obligation to every government to ensure that adequate health care is provided out of public purse.【经典语料】1. medical treatment = health care = medical care 医疗2. spend money on = make investment in = allocate financial budget to sth 投资于……3. surely exert a profound influence on 对于……产生深远的影响4. From my perspective，people have a basic right to free heath-care as a necessary condition of a proper human life. 我认为，享受免费的医疗是公民的一项基本权利。
5. properly allocate the medical budget should be advocated 合理分配医疗预算应该被提倡6. to spend money on free health care should be considered as a returned favor. 普及免费医疗是还利于民7. Therefore, the government should be urged to do sth. 政府理应做……8. Virtually，every individual could become beneficiaries of a sound health care. 实际上，任何人都可以成为完备医疗的受益者。
9. stabilize the society and enhance the government’s prestige 稳定社会，提高政府的威信力10. promote citizens’health index and thus improve the basic quality of a nation’s population 提高公民健康指数，因此提高一个国家公民的基本素质11. health-care should be considered as one of the fundamental social welfare 医疗应该被当作是一项基本的社会福利12. enable those who suffering from various illnesses to receive fine therapy 使患者接受良好的治疗13. ever-rising heath costs were matched against static or declining resources. 日益增加的健康费用和有限的下降的资源是矛盾14. impose much pressure on the government economically 给政府增加了经济压力15. the government has more pressing social problems that need to render more concerns over 政府有有更紧迫社会问题要优先考虑16. popularize free education and perfect the construction of the infrastructure普及免费的教育和完善基础设施17. Therefore, it is the unshakable obligation to every government to ensure that……因此，政府保障……是其不可推卸的责任18. adequate health care is provided out of public purse 由公共财政预算提供充足的医疗。