雅思写作语料库--寒门出贵子还是将门出虎子

Some people believe that children who are brought up in families which don't have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up in wealthier families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?有人认为，比之出生在富裕家庭的孩子，出生在贫困家庭的孩子更能面对成人生活中遇到的困难，是否认同?

【创作感言】教育类为雅思恒热考题，11月7日重复考察间隔年的利弊(A卷);父母和老师谁对于孩子的影响更大(B卷)，其他经典提问涉及到：“是否所有的父母都应该学习育儿培训课程”，“穷爸爸和富爸爸的孩子谁更能面对人生的艰辛”，“是否没有天赋的孩子不应该学习外语”等等，今日分享经典话题之一。

【作家立场】尽管出身寒门的孩子可能会依赖自己的努力出类拔萃，出身富贵家庭的孩子更可能拥抱精彩的人生。

【思路拓展】

【为何穷爸爸的孩子能够面对人生的艰辛】

1. 俗话说，“穷人的孩子早当家，”贫困家庭的孩子从小就习惯了逆境和挫折，不能更多地依赖父母，他们只能自强不息、披荆斩棘、出人头地，因此，他们更加独立、成熟、坚强，生活的困境可助他们面对成人生活的艰辛。

2. 对于家境贫困的孩子们而言，他们有更加强烈的愿望改变命运，因此，他们有明晰的奋斗目标，从这个意义上讲，他们有可能在奋斗中锻炼各种能力，这些能力可助人成长。

为何富爸爸的孩子更能拥抱辉煌的人生？

1. 贫困家庭孩子很多是自卑的、内向的，相反，富裕家庭的孩子通常是积极乐观的，见多识广的。丰富的阅历和良好的心态有助于一个人面对人生的寒冷，学会坚强。

2. 家境殷实的孩子，通常可以接受精英教育，父母们也会潜移默化地给他们传递奋斗的正能量，这可使他们学业辉煌，为事业打下坚实基础。

3. 富爸爸们一般是来自精英阶层，可以给孩子们提供最佳的人生指导、帮助他们建立良好的人脉网络，成就事业的辉煌。

【范文赏析】

【首段】背景介绍+ 争议焦点+ 作家立场

We each have a destiny，some people are born into rich families，while others come from humble background. Perhaps no issue has led to such an endless debate to whether or not those who are raised by impoverished parents are more likely to brave the hardships when reaching adulthood in comparison with those who have financially richer parents. My stand is that although some children coming from

poverty-stricken background might stand out in a crowd，it is better for children to be brought up in well-off families.

【解析】

1. We each have a destiny 命运是有的

2. come from humble background v.出身寒门

3. Perhaps no issue has led to such an endless debate to whether or not …… 也许没有什么像是否……一样引起人们无休止的争议

4. brave the hardships when reaching adulthood v.勇敢面对成人生活的艰辛

5. stand out in a crowd v.出类拔萃

【二段】让步原题观点之合理性

I admit that a humble family background might have some positive roles to play in helping children ready themselves for adult life. For one thing, people of low or middle economic status often grow up to be self-made, mature and tenacious than those who are well-protected by affluent parents because they have to rely on honest hard work at early age. Harsh reality let them know they have no choice but to endeavor if they desire to outshine other peers. Hence, they have a deeper insight

into the agonies of life. For another, poor children usually have burning desires to change their fates and thus they usually have a clear goal to strive for. Meanwhile, they are less likely to be frail or depressed when problems occur because they have been accustomed to the sense of failure and frustration

【解析】

1. ready themselves for adult life v.为成人生活做好准备

2. self-made, mature and tenacious adj.自强的，成熟的，坚韧的

3. have no choice but to endeavor v.别无选择，只能努力

4. outshine other peers v.超越同龄人

5. have a deeper insight into the agonies of life v.对于生活的苦痛有更加深刻的洞察

6. have burning desires to change their fates v.有强烈的改变人生命运的渴望

7. They have been accustomed to the sense of failure and frustration 他们对于失败和挫折已经习以为常

【三段】反驳原题观点之不合理