广西九年级英语上册Module4Homealone主题写作四练习(新版)外研版

你有过父亲母亲不在家自己独立生活的经历吗？单独在家时，你可以做什么，不可以做什么？
请以“ Home alone”为题，写一篇80 词左右的短文。

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短： 1.on business ____________
2． look after ____________
3． turn on ____________
4． in order to ____________
5． feel proud of oneself ____________
6． grow up ____________
句型： 1.It was the second day of⋯
2． I lived alone but I didn't feel lonely.
3． After getting up, I managed to⋯
4． I am really proud of myself.
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Home alone
My first experience at home alone was ① unforgettable.It was the second day of the summer holiday.My parents were away on business.②So_I_lived_alone_but_I_didn't_feel_lonely. I felt free. I could do many things I
like.
In the morning, I got up very late.③ After_getting_up,_I_managed_to cook by myself. Then I began to do my homework. In the afternoon, I went to play basketball
with myfriends.In the evening, I watched TV until 11 o'clock. I even washed my clothes and tidied the rooms up.
When my parents came back, they were very happy. They praised me.
④I_am_really_proud_of_myself.
名点
① unforgettable用在点句中表达了作者次的忘之情。

② so 和 but的运用表达了作者单独在家的感觉。

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③作者奇妙运用了非谓语动词getting up，简短，正确。

④结尾作者对自己单独在家的经历进行了总结。

若是今日是10 月 11 日，礼拜六，父亲母亲去上海出差，你一个人在家。

请依据下边提示，
以“ Home alone for the first time”为题，写一篇70 词左右的英文日志，记录你今日的
生活，可适合发挥。

1．上午：整理自己的房间，洗了自己的衣服
2．正午：做了一顿简单的午饭
3．下午：造作业，看电视
Saturday, October 11Sunny
Home alone for the first time
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详解详析
【素材累积】
1.出差
2.照料
3.翻开
4.为了
5.为某人自己感觉骄傲
6.长大
【小试身手】
One possible version：
Saturday, October 11Sunny
Home alone for the first time
My parents have gone to Shanghai on business, so I stay at home alone. In
the morning, I tidied up my bedroom and washed my clothes. At noon, I cooked for
the first time. It was a very simple but delicious lunch. In the afternoon, I did my
homework first, and then watched TV.
Although I've never stayed at home alone before, I'm doing very well. I'm really proud of myself!。