02 祝贺信【课件】-2024年新高考书面表达应用文写作

微技能写作(完成祝贺信中间段写作)
1. 肯定对方获得了学校篮球比赛的冠军的努力 ①花了很多时间训练和提高技能 ②团队合作造就了成功 【基础版】In my view, it’s a reward that you really deserve. In the past few months, you have devoted much time to training and improving your skills. Besides, your teamwork is also the key to success. Now your efforts have paid off and I’m rather delighted for you!
微技能写作(完成祝贺信中间段写作)
3.称赞外教获得“优秀教师称号”的优秀之处。 ①教学上投入了大量精力 ②耐心、幽默，课堂生动有趣
Personally, it‘s a reward that you really deserve. We have seen how much
energy and time that you’ve devoted to teaching. Moreover, kind, patient
中间段要点梳理(肯定对方的努力和优秀 ）
1. 在过去的几个月/几年里，你花了很多时间在…上 In the past few months/years, you have devoted much time to … 【仿1】在过去的几个月里，你花了很多时间在练习书法上。 In the past few months, you have devoted much time to practicing calligraphy. 2. 你做了某事 You have done sth./你总是做某事 You always do sth. 【仿1】你向书法方面的大师请教(consult)。 You have consulted the masters of calligraphy. 【仿2】你总是坚持每天练习写汉字。 You always keep practicing writing Chinese characters everyday.
微技能写作(完成祝贺信中间段写作)
2.肯定对方被北京大学录取所作出的努力。 ①投入了大量努力 ②坚持不懈
In my view, it's a reward that you really deserve. In the past few years,
I've seen how much work and energy that you've devoted to your study.
to +努力1. Besides, 努力2/优点2. Now your efforts have 此外，努力2/优点2. 现在你的
paid off and I’m rather delighted for you!
努力得到了回报，我真为你感
Please accept my sincere congratulations again and 到高兴!
In my view, it’s a reward that you really deserve. In the past few months, I’ve seen how much work and effort that you’ve devoted to reciting and practicing reading Chinese poetry. Moreover, your excellent performance and fluent Chinese left a profound impression on me, so it came as no surprise that you won the contest. As a poetry lover, I sincerely hope we can explore the beauty of poetry together in the future.
wish you further success! Looking forward to hearing 请再次接受我诚挚的祝贺,
from you soon.
希望你取得更大的成功!期待
Yours, 早日收到您的回信。
Li Hua
首段仿写
1.得知 你 在留学 生 书法大 赛 (the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for international students)中获得第一名，我想要向你表示最热烈的祝贺。 Learning that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for international students, I'd like to express my warmest congratulations to you. 2.得知你所在的篮球队获得了学校篮球比赛的冠军，我想要向你表示最热烈的祝贺。 Learning that your team has won the championship in your school basketball match, I'd like to express my warmest congratulations to you. 3.得知你被北京大学录取了，我想要向你表示最热烈的祝贺。 Learning that you have been admitted into Peking University, I can’t wait to express my warmest congratulations to you.
中间段要点梳理(肯定对方的努力和优秀 ）
【仿1】我看到了你在提高书法技能方面投入了多少的努力。 I’ve seen how much work and effort that you’ve devoted to improving your calligraphy skills. 【仿2】正是你的奉献和决心造就了你的成功。 It's your devotion and determination that lead to your success. 【仿3】要是没有你不断的努力，你就不会取得如此大的进步。 You couldn’t have made such great progress without your continuous efforts.
congratulations to you.
在我看来，这是你应得的奖
In my view, it’s a reward that you really deserve. In 励。在过去的几个月/几年里，
the past few months/years, you have devoted much time 你花了很多时间在+努力1上。
and knowledgeable, you always try to make your class lively and interesting.
How lucky I am to be your student! I hope one day I can be a teacher like
you.
全文写作
假如你是李华，获悉来自美国的交换生Lucy在学校举行的中文诗词朗诵
比赛中获得一等奖，请你给她写封邮件表示祝贺，并期待与她探讨诗歌。
祝贺信
Para.1 背景+目的 Para.2 肯定对方的努力和优秀 Para.3 再次祝贺+希望
这是你应得的
投入了大量的努力 表现出色，得奖不
惊讶 期待探索诗歌
中间段要点梳理(肯定对方的努力和优秀 ）
3. 你的…（品质）造就了你的成功。 Your+品质n. lead to your success. 【仿】你的奉献和决心造就了你的成功。
Your devotion and determination lead to your success.
【进阶版】 ➢ 我看到了你在…方面投入了多少的努力。 I have seen how much work and effort that you have devoted to… ➢ 正是…造就了你的成功（强调句） It’s your 品质n. that lead to your success. ➢ 要是没有你的…你就不会… You couldn’t have done sth. without your…
Please accept my congratulations again and wish your further success! Yours, Li Hua
【进阶版】Personally, it is your diligence and devotion that lead to your championship. I have seen how much work and effort that you’ve devoted to training and improving your skills. Furthermore, you couldn’t have made it without your teamwork. Now your efforts have paid off and I’m rather delighted for you!
书面表达复习 祝贺信
01 模板复习
目录
02 首段仿写
CONTENTቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ 03 中间段要点梳理
04 微技能写作
05 全文写作
模板
Dear …,
得知你做了某事，我写信给/
Learning that you have done sth, I’m writing to/I’d 我想要/我迫不及待地向你表
like to/I can’t wait to express my warmest 示最热烈的祝贺。
全文写作—范文
Dear Lucy， Learning that you’ve won the first prize in our school’s Chinese Poetry
Recitation Contest, I can’t wait to express my warmest congratulations to you!
Moreover, you couldn’t have made such remarkable success without your
continuous efforts and perseverance. Now your efforts have paid off and
I'm rather delighted for you.