2018届高三英语一轮复习写作公开课----Suggestion Letter 建议信教学课件共23张PPT

He finds it difficult to talk to my parents. What should he do? Your suggestions:
A. Open your heart and tell them how you feel. B. Spend more time with parents. C. Try to understand each other.
第二段： Suggestions 过渡语：层次分明 First/ Firstly/ First of all... Second/ Secondly... Besides/ In addition/ What's more... Finally/ lastly ...
it would be a good idea if... 表达建议常用语： why don't you... ?
三段式：
写信的意图
建议信
提出建议，给出理由
表明希望
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Dear Li Hua, You have asked me for my advice on how to learn English well. Here are some suggestions. Firstly, don' t lose your heart. Secondly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Thirdly, you'd better speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. What's more, it's good idea to read English books before the class and after the class. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours, xxx
Sincerely yours, ——————————————————————————————— Li Hua ———————————————————————————————
be more friendly join some activities be more outgoing help people in need ... Dear Li Hua,
B. 建议信正文常用句式（详述建议，合情入理）
1. Have you considered doing.../ So why not do...? 2. Don't you think it more beneficial if you could … 3. I would like to suggest that you (should)… 4. If I were you, I would… 5. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 6. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to make a suggestion that you (should)… 7. You'd better do.../ It is/ seems better for you to do... 8. The best way to do sth is to do …/ There is no better way to do sth than to do sth ... 9. How/ What about doing...? 10. What if...? 11. It would be a good idea if...
建议信常用句式
第一段：
Purpose and Problems
我很高兴收到你的来信询问关于...的意见。 You have asked me for my advice on how to… I’m glad to receive your letter, asking for my advice on how to ... I've received your letter, saying... 我的建议如下： Here are some suggestions for you. My suggestions are as follows.
写作训练
假设你是学生李华，你的朋友Tom在生 活中遇到了一些困难，他觉得很难和父母交流。 因此他在几天前给你发电子邮件求助，询问如 何与父母交流。请你给他回复你的建议。建议 内容： 1. 敞开心扉与父母交流你的感受 2. 多花时间与父母相处 3. 相互理解对方 注意： 1．词数：100左右; 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ____. My suggestions are ______. _______, _____________________________. _______, ______________________________. _______, _______________________________. _______, ________________________________. I hope my suggestions ___________________. Best wishes. Yours, xxx
注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
第一步：审题 （养成审题的习惯）
如何审题：
思考的问题 第几人称？（person）
体裁是什么？ 主题是什么 (topic) 什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
样题分析
第一人称 书信
you should...
you'd better ..., because...
第三段：
Hope
我希望我的建议对你有帮助。 I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. I hope you will find these suggestions useful/ helpful. Yours, ______
4. I am writing to you in reply to ...
5. You have asked me for my advice on how to…and I'll try to make some suggestions. 6. I am writing to express my views on/ concerning… 7. It's my pleasure to offer you some advice on...
Dear Li Hua, You have asked me for my advice on 表明意图 how to learn English well. Here are my some suggestions. Firstly, don' t lose your heart. Secondly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Thirdly, you can speak 提出建议 English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. What's more, it's good idea to read English books before the class and after the class. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for 表明希望 you. Best wishes. Yours, xxx
tell them how you feel spend more time with parents
try to understand each other. Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my _______ ____________. advice on how to talk to parents My suggestions are _________. as _______, __________________, Firstly them how you feel follows It's a good idea to tell ________, _______________________. Secondly you'd better spend more time with parents Thirdly try to understand each other _______, why don't you ______________________. I hope my suggestions will be ________ helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours,
英语书面表达
[建议信]
[ Suggestion Letter ]
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。 信中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这 让他很苦恼。请根据以上提示，写一篇回给李华的建议 信，帮他解决困难，促进学习。建议内容：
1. 不要灰心，保持好的心态；
2. 上课认真听讲； 3. 与同学老师多用．建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料，表明意图)
1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that … 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter.
写作训练
假设你是学生李华，你的朋友Tom 在生活中遇到了一些困难，害羞胆小，在学校没有好朋友， 因此他在几天前给你发电子邮件求助，询问怎样结交好朋 友。请你给他回复你的建议。 注意： 1．词数：100左右; 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
help people in need
be more outgoing
join some activities
How to make friends?
be more friendly
Dear Tom, —————————————————
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对英语学习给出建议
一般现在时
Dear Li Hua, You have asked me for my advice on how to learn English well. Here are my some suggestions. Firstly, don' t lose your heart. Secondly, you should listen to the teachers carefully in the class. Thirdly, you can speak English with your classmates and teachers, which can improve your listening and speaking abilities. What's more, it's good idea to read English books before the class and after the class. I hope my suggestions will be helpful for you. Best wishes. Yours, xxx