2022年辽宁省沈阳市初中英语中考作文写作部分指导课件

给与别人 帮助时提 供的建议 万能开头
Doing... can not only ... but also...
打篮球不仅能帮我建立团队精神，而且还能帮我释放出繁忙的课业造成的压力。 Playing basketball can not only help me to build up teamwork spirit but also help me release some stress caused by busy school study.
I always believe... will make a big difference,so I make up my mind to do...
我始终相信一个小小的善举将会产生巨大的影响，所以，我决定去做一名志愿者。 I always believe a small act of kindness will make a big difference,so I make up my mind to be a volunteer.
活动计划、 环保类、 周围环境 类话题
First of all,if I were you,I would follow the traffic lights and can’t break the traffic rules.What’s more,we’d better look left and right to make sure we are safe before crossing the st but not least,you can burn to your parents for help,if it is necessary.
构思
第一段 第二段 第三段
问侯+写作目的 垃圾分类的原因+现状+公众态度 个人观点
单词
（1）垃圾 trash/rubbish （2）政策 policy （3）分类 classify （4）家庭垃圾 domestic waste
单词
（5）罚款 fine （6）支持 support （7）节省 save （8）制造 produce
写作
个人看法
在我看来，垃圾分类不仅能帮助人们培养健康的生活习惯，而且也能帮
助中国变成一个更美丽的国家。
In my opinion,trash sorting not only helps people to develop healthy lifestyles bu also helps China to become a more beautiful country.
句型
（4）不仅...而且... not only...but also （5）最近怎么样 How is it going?
写作
问侯+写作目的 最近怎么样？我听说你对中国的垃圾分类政策很感兴趣，现在我来写封 信给做你一个简短的介绍。
How is it going?I have learned that you are interested in the trash sorting policy in China,I am writing to give you a short introduction.
篇章落实
Dear Jim,
How is it going?I have learned that you are interested in the trash sorting policyin China,I am writing to give you a short introduction.
写作
现状
首先，我们必须要把家庭垃圾分成几种不同的类别。而且，乱扔垃圾的 人将会受到惩罚。同样重要的一点是，垃圾分类对环保贡献很大。
First of all,we have to classify our domestic waste into different wastes.What’s more,people who drop litter carelessly will be st but not least,trash sorting make great contributions to the environmental protection
身体健康
There are two main reasons why we need to do exercise,on one
hand,exercise can strengthen our body,on the other hand,it can keep us
away from pressure of school study life.
与人相处 别人提供 帮助时
There is no doubt that it is of great+n. to develop a habit of doing sth.
毫无疑问，培养一个运动/阅读/保护环境的习惯对我们来说至关重要。 There is no doubt that it is of great importance/necessity for us to develop habit of reading.
网络安全、 情感、环 保、健康、 传统节日 类话题
...is a (+adj.) city with...,where you can do ...
杭州是一个历史悠久生机勃勃的城市，在那里你可以感受到古代和现代的文化。 Hangzhou is a lively city with a long history,where you can see ancient and modern cultures.
活动计划、 环保类、 周围环境 类话题
What’s more ,you’d better...
然后，我们最好，在过马路线时侯左右看看确保我们安全。 What’s more , we’d better look left and right to make sure we are safe before crossing the street.
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2022-2023年辽宁沈阳市中考英语写作部分
写作
假定你是红星中学学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim对中国正在推广的垃圾分类政策很感兴趣。来 信询问你相关情况，请你给他写封回信，内容包括： 1.垃圾分类的现状 2.公众对垃圾分类的态度 3.你对垃圾分类的看法。 ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________
志愿活动、 感想体会、 环境保护
When it comes to ... we should always do ... which can do ...
当谈及网络时，我们应该一直对我们的个人信息保持谨慎， 这样做能保证我们的安 全。 When it comes to the Internet,we should always be careful with our personal information,which can keep us safe..
运动、学 习、环境 保护类话 题
First of all,if I were you,I would...
首先，如果我是你，我会遵守交通灯而且不破坏交通规则。 First of all , if I were you, I would follow the traffice lights and can’t break the traffic rules.
旅游、介 绍家乡、 暑假计划 安排
垃圾分类
（1）生活垃圾 domestic garbage （2）可回收垃圾 recyclable waste （3）有害垃圾 harmful waste （4）厨余垃圾 kitchen waste
（5）湿垃圾 household waste （6）干垃圾 residual waste
短语
01/ 首先
to begin with first of all above all
02/ 其次
what’s more in addition furthermore
03/ 最后
at last
last but not least
短语
01/ 对...感兴趣
be interested in
02/垃圾分类
运动、学 习、环境 保护类话 题
I can imagine what great difficulties you have now because I have ever experienced the same problem before.I will give you some suggestions.
写作
公众态度
面对这个新规定，一些人发现这有点困难，另一些人热烈支持这个政策。
Faced with the new rule,some people are finding it a little too difficult.Others are warmly supporting the policy.
写作
分类原因 毫无疑问，人们每天都会制造出大量的垃圾。所以，实施垃圾分类政策 对我们来说是非常重要的。
There is no doubt that people will produce a large amount of rubbish every day.So,it is important for us to carry out the trash sorting policy.
活动计划、 环保类、 周围环境 类话题
Last but not least,you can turn to your...for help ,if it is necessary.
不能不提的是，如果有必要的话，你可以向家人寻求帮助。 Last but not least , you can turn to your parents for help,if it is necessary.
kind-hearted and open-minded,my...is the one who+从句 and who + 从句
我的父亲仁慈又开明，他和我一起打篮球并且教我如何成为一个更好的人。 Kind-hearted and open-minded,my father is the one who plays basketball with me and who teaches me how to be a good person.
给与别人 帮助时提 供的建议 万能开头
There are two main reasons why....On one han ... on the other hand....
有两个我们为什么要锻炼身体的主要的原因，一方面，锻炼身体可以增强我们的体魄； 旅游、传
统节日、
另一方面，锻炼身体可以 garbageclassification
03/ 实施......
carry out
短语
04/ 把...分成...类
classify...into..
05/面对
be faced with
06/ 在我看来
in my opinion
句型
（1）毫无疑问... There is no doubt that （2）...对...贡献很大 ...do/does greatcontribution to... （3）我听说.../得知... I have learned that...
写人叙事 别人提供 帮助时
I could hardly...without my ... ‘s encouragement
没有我老师的鼓励，我几乎不可能进步/克服困难/实现我的目标。 I could hardly make any progress/overcome difficulties/achieve my goals without my teacher ’s encouragement.