九年级上册英语书面表达模拟试题含解析

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一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1.(·山东中考模拟)书面表达
(湖南衡阳)荣光学校九年级(2)班就“环境问题”召开了一次班会,并且以“Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?”为题进行了一次讨论。

许多同学对未来表示乐观,但也有些同学对未来有些担心。

请根据表格中的内容提示,用英语写一篇短文。

提示:1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。

2.短文中应包含至少4个要点。

3.书写工整、语句通顺、连贯,词数不少于80.
参考词汇:optimistic adj.乐观的 government n.政府take measures to采取措施private adj.私有的
Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?
Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years.
【答案】Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?
Many students are optimistic(乐观的)about tour environment in ten years.In fact,they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment.As a result, our world will be more beautiful and we will have better lives.
However,other students are worried about the future.They say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars..Therefore,we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available.
But in my opinion,I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们就荣光中学九年级2班的同学们对环境问题所召开的一次班会
情况进行介绍。

这个班会的主题是Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?,对于未来的环境,很多同学吃乐观的态度,而其他同学感到很担心。

题目中用表格的形式给我们呈现了这些内容,我们需要用正确的英语将他们表达出来,首先我们应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能逐词翻译,应从句子的整体考虑,使用恰当的句型、词汇和短语,以简单句的结构为主,如主谓宾、主系表等,点缀几个并列句或复合句,提升文章档次。

其次注意使用正确的时态和人称,本文应以一般现在时态和一般将来时为主,注意谓语动词的正确形式。

最后应注意在语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文章的逻辑关系更加合理,文意流畅、连贯。

点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文内容完整,包含了题目中要求的所有信息,并根据表达的需要,进行了合理的想象和补充,使文意更加的充实。

短文共分为三段,前两段各描述了不同的同学们的观点,最后一段用一句话点明了自己的看法,层次清晰,叙述条理、明了。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,符合英语的表达习惯。

短文以一般现在时态和一般将来时态为主,阐明了学生们的不同观点,以简单句为主,也用了一些复合句,长短句结合,使文章富有节奏感,更有表现力。

最后短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语,如In fact, they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment.、As a result、However、hey say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars.、Therefore, we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available.、But in my opinion, I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily等。

2.(·山西中考模拟)书面表达
请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。

一直以来,同学们对作业持有不同的观点。

在你班的主题班会上,同学们进行了“Is daily homework necessary?”的讨论,请你根据提示和要求,并结合自己的实际经验,发表你的观点。

Yes No
Help us understand what we have learned;Practice makes prefect;...Take up too much time;
Make us less interested in studying;...
Your opinion:
要求:
1.80词以上。

2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

【答案】Dear students,
I'm glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it's necessary for us to do daily homework.
Doing daily homework can help us understand what we have learned in class. For me, I always have some difficulties in mastering all of what I have learned in class. Through daily homework, I review the knowledge and think over the difficulties. Little by little, I have a better understanding. So I always believe “Practice makes perfect”.
In my opinion, daily homework is necessary for us students. But it shouldn't be too much. It can improve our skills. Daily homework should be different and colorful. It might be some extensive reading, a paper or even just a game. We should be left enough free time so that we can do things we really like to do.
That's all. Thanks.
【解析】写作分析:审题之后能明白写作任务是要写出一篇小论文,讨论每日的作业到底是不是必要的。

首先需要陈述正反两方面的观点,其次结合自己的实际经验,发表自己的观点。

写作过程中要注意逻辑准确,注意正确使用连词,借助实例、实际经验来佐证自己的观点。

写作亮点:首先用一个自然段来阐明写作的主题,表达出自己的观点(认为作业是很必要的),可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…这样的句型。

其次,开始具体陈述观点,陈述的时候要适当使用实例,相关用到的短语有have some difficulties in doing在做…的时候有困难,review the knowledge复习知识,think over the difficulties来回思考难点,Little by little 一点一点地。

恰当的谚语也为文章增色不少,例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧这个谚语。

最后可以用说理的方式来介绍做作业的必要性,例如用到了improve our skills
提高我们的技能,在这里也有一点亮点,就是说作业也要有变化性,要丰富多彩,体现了作者的深度思考,总体来说出色地完成了既定的写作任务。

3.(·广东中考模拟)书面表达
假设你是刘莉,你的美国笔友Amy来信想了解中国的传统节日端午节。

请你回信给她介绍端午节。

The Dragon Boat 历史:两千多年
参考词汇:农历:Chinese Lunar calendar 糯米:sticky rice
Dear Amy,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
【答案】Dear Amy,
I learn from your letter that you want to know something about the Chinese traditional festival---the Dragon Boat Festival. I ‘m happy to share what I know about it with you.
The festival has a history of more than 2000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragon-boat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat, etc, wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Quyuan, a great poet in history.
In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on
history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文,介绍中国的传统节日端午节。

结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:I learn from your letter that……,I’m happy to……,The festival has a history of……,These two are……,we all love……,I hope that……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

点睛:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。

开头表达了我很高兴向你介绍端午节,接下来介绍端午节的历史,日期,庆祝活动,特色食物和目的,最后表达我的感受。

此处want to do sth, share sth with sb, according to, in a word, look back, get together等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

4.(·广东蛇口育才二中中考模拟)书面表达
初中即将毕业,同学们都感到压力很大。

就此问题,老师要求你在英语课上做一个以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”为题的报告,谈谈你的做法,与同学分享经验。

请根据以下要求写一份发言稿,内容包括:
1. 普遍存在的压力:同学关系;考试
2. 我过去的压力:父母的期望;学习
3. 我成功缓解压力的办法及效果;……
要求:1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
2. 词数80左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Less Pressure Makes Better Life
Hello, everyone!
Pressure is a serious p roblem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _____
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
【答案】Hello, my classmates!
Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.
I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends.
I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.
Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们针对现在同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象,以Less Pressure Makes Life Better为题,谈谈自己的看法,和同学们分享一下自己的经验。

审题可知,文章中应主要包括以下几个内容:首先介绍同学们普遍感到压力这种现象;然后讲述自己过去曾面对的压力;最后介绍自己如何成功缓解压力。

题目中只给出了大概的提纲,其中具体的内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力来补充,并用正确的英语表达出来。

学生们可以从自身的经历和体会出发,选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。

文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时,注意根据表达的需要使用正确的时态,并变化谓语动词的正确形式。

句式结构可以简单句结构为主,这样的句式表达简洁、明了,易于掌握。

但为提升作文档次,应穿插使用并列句和复合句,或使用一些复杂结构,如非谓语动词、被动语态等。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求,谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象的看法,并分享了自己的经历。

短文有如下几个优点:首先短文内容完整,包含了题目中要求的所有信息,且层次清晰,文章分成了四段,每一段的中心话题也很明确。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时,谓语动词形式准确。

句式结构以简单句为主,叙述清晰、简洁。

也使用了并列句和复合句的结构,如宾语从句、状语从句等。

短文中使用了丰富的句式,如Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。

5.(·河南中考模拟)亲爱的同学,三年的初中学习生活马上就要结束了,请你以“My English Study”为题,请你谈一谈,这三年以来,你学习英语的心得体会。

要求:
1.你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟。

2.词数80左右。

3.行文连贯通顺。

条理清晰,表达准确。

4.文中不允许出现真实校名和人名。

否则,试卷按零分处理。

【答案】My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in cl ass, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
【解析】
【详解】
短文第一句Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.开门见山回忆学习英语的
记忆。

接下来叙述自己遇到的各种学习英语的困难:听不懂老师的英语,记忆词汇短语有困难等等。

分别列出,行文流畅。

用短语give up放弃,表示困难太大,难倒了自己。

后来在老师的帮助下,克服了困难。

逐步地Step by step,不断取得进步。

最后一句In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.对
学习英语兴趣的重要进行总结,结束全文。

6.(·辽宁初三)生活中总有些不经意的事让你感动,总有些平凡的人让你难以忘记。

白杨是我的同学。

她家境贫寒;她精心照顾患病母亲;她学习刻苦,成绩优异;她关心同学,乐于助人;她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。

请根据提示内容介绍白杨,并谈一谈她对你及同学们的影响。

There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you. ________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________
【答案】There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you.
My classmate Bai Yang comes from a poor family. She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. But she never gives up her studies. She keeps studying hard and has got good grades. What’s more, she cares for the classmates and is ready to help others. During her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students.
She sets a good example to us all. Everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇人物介绍。

人物身份为同学白杨,介绍分四个要点:她家境贫寒;她精心照顾患病母亲;她学习刻苦,成绩优异;她关心同学,乐于助人;她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。

人称为第三人称,时态为一般现在时。

注意语法正确,善用连词,使各个要点连贯。

【高分句型一】She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness.她精心照顾生病的母亲。

who has a serious illness为定语从句。

【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.不管生活多么艰苦,
她仍然笑对生活。

No matter how hard the life is为让步状语从句。

7.(·北京中考模拟)假如你是李华,你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。

你打算邀请外教 Peter参加。

请用英语写一封电子邮件,告诉他集合的时间和地点,在那
里可以做什么,以及参观时需要准备什么。

提示词语: school gate, nature, culture, food and drink
提示问题:●When and where are you going to meet?
●What are you going to do there?
●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?
Dear Pete,
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in
Yanqing.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读:这是一篇给材料作文,属于应用文写作。

本文已经给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上;提示的问题就是写作的基本方向,然后围绕要点适当发挥即可。

2. 例文点评:文章采取邮件格式,时态以一般将来时态为主。

语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,语言准确,语意连贯,表达清楚,具有逻辑性。

3. 高分亮点:
短语:school gate;invite sb. to do;a lot of;plan to do。

句型:not only…but also;You'd better …;I'm looking forward to…。

8.(·广东中考模拟)马上要初中毕业了,大家都是依依不舍的。

班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School” 主题班会 , 邀请全班同学参加。

请你根据以下提示,写一篇发言稿。

My Life At School
How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.
【答案】My Life At School
How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.
In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.
I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题,写一篇发言稿。

题目中利用表格的形式,展示
了文章的具体内容,学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。

审题可知,这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时,注意根据表达需要使用正确时态,并注意谓语动词的正确形式。

内容应主要包括三部分:首先是初中三年里的美好回忆;然后是不开心的事情;最后展望自己未来的高中生活。

表格中有非常具体的提示,但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语,应把他们变成自己的话,并用英语表达出来。

写作时应注意:文章中应包括表格中的所有信息,不能遗漏要点;第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充,注意应合情合理,与上文很好地衔接。

另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯,用完整的句子表达。

句式结构可以简单句为基础,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用,提升作文档次。

同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分,使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求,回忆了自己的初中生活,并展望了未来。

短文有以下几个特点:首先文章内容完整,结构清晰。

短文分三段,第一段基本是题目中给出的开头,作者使用一句话引出下文;第二段是主体,介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情;最后一段对未来进行了展望。

各部分内容安排合理,有层次、有条理。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,注意了动词正确形式的变化。

句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。

语言准确、得体,表达自然、流畅。

短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语,如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。

9.(·扬州市竹西中学中考模拟)写作
“百善孝为先”,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。

某英语报社正在举办以“弘扬中华传统文化”为主题的征文活动,请你以“We should hon or our parents”为题,写一篇短文参加征文活动。

内容包括:
What do you often do for your parents?
Why should we honor our parents?
How should we honor our parents?
要求: 1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3)词数:100词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of
China.____________________________
【答案】We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.I honor my parents.I often help my parents do housework in my spare time.I think it's our duty to honor our parents.Our parents take much effort to raise us, so it's important for us to honor them.They love us so we
should love and respect them.
First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of us.Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after working.Next, we should respect them and never talk to them rudely.We'd better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions.It's also important to tell our parents we love them.
【解析】
【分析】
本题要求考生以“我们应该尊敬我们的父母”为题结合所给的内容要点,写一篇作文
【详解】
这是篇材料作文,主要内容要点已给,所以考生要围绕着要点,进行写作,不要遗漏,当然顺序可以适当调整。

这篇作文又句型亮点,例如:As we know,…众所周知;.I think it's our duty to do sth等等,其次文章结构也比较清晰,例如第二段的衔接词,First of all,Then,Next,使用的简单而恰当。

10.(·江苏中考模拟)三年的初中生活即将结束,你一定对初中生活留下了很多美好的回忆。

下周五你班要召开毕业班会,请根据下面的英文提示,并适当发挥,以“I remember ”为题,写一篇90词左右的短文,分享你校园生活中的一次活动或经历。

要点如下:1. What’s the event?
2. When and where did it happen?
3. How did you feel at that moment?
4. How has the event changed your life?
注意:1.短文需包含以上要点,并适当发挥。

2.短文中已给出的部分,不计入总词数。

3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。

I remember
How time flies! My junior school life is coming to an end.
【答案】I remember
How time flies, my junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years’ study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale.
When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and even some kites in our spare time.
Finally, the big day came. The charity sale was held on our playground. We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us. They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited. Everything went well. Our class got nearly 800 yuan in the end. Then we sent the money to Project Hope to help those poor children.
It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity. If
everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如come to an end,plan to do,a lot of,hold a charity sale,prepare for,in our spare time,hold on,at first,come to join us,give us some help,in the end,a lot,in need等。

而复杂并列结构It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity./ We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us.和When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas./ They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited./ If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

11.(·海南海口实验中学中考模拟)书面表达
安全对于每个人都很重要。

中学生年龄较小,学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。

请根据以下提示,写一篇关于学生安全的英语作文。

内容提示:
1.交通安全:遵守交通规则,不闯红绿灯等;
2.食品安全:吃健康食物,不吃垃圾食品等;
3.活动安全:进行体育锻炼时,不要弄伤自己,不私自下河游泳等。

提示词语:
study hard, read, healthy food, exercise, help, chores, at home,
Travel Safety is very important to everyone.
_______________________________________________________________
【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers –so their safety is becoming a focus for us all.
First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。

本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表
达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。

根据材料内容可知本文主要使用一般现在时,主语是第一人称。

写作时注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。

同时适当使用连接词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。

在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句,文章脉络清晰,自然流畅。

同时,文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语,如:祈使句的使用、we must、we should、in a word、It’s +形容
词+ to动词不定式结构以及序数词的使用等,这为文章增色不少。

在学习中注意积累,牢记一些常用句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

12.(·贵州遵义十一中中考模拟)亲爱的同学们,初中生活即将结束,你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九(1)班的学生。

请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示:
1.个人基本情况介绍
2.校园(校园干净而美丽,活动非富多彩);老师(传授知识,教会做人,经常鼓励);同学(和睦相处,互相学习,共同进步)。

3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。

要求:
1. 文章包含以上提示内容,适当发挥。

2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。

【答案】My junior high school life
My name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.
Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.
I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我的初中生活。

【详解】
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:My name is……,I’m glad to……,Our campus is……,Our teachers teach us……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑,语言简练。

开头介绍了我的个人情况,接下来介绍我们的校园,老师和同。

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