江西景德镇市高考英语(二轮)短文改错编练(7)及答案

江西景德镇市高考英语（二轮）短文改错编练（7）及答案
短文改错。

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination. Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.
【参考答案】4.
Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.
students
Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors
or
first so that they can learn what they are interested∧. It will also make it possibly for them to take
in possible
their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the
believe
environment is important to one’s development. They also believe that students graduate from
graduating或加who leading universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to
choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a
cannot或can’t或后加not
good major, because no matter where we study, they can still achieve a lot in the certain field if
we a
短文改错。

During the last summer vacation, I think I should do something meaningful instead touring. So I got a job at a fast food restaurant and worked there for a cleaner. I worked 7 hours a day for three week. The job was bored and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly stopped it half way. After all, I stuck to them with determination. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got to home late in the evening. Finally, I finished a job before the new school term. Now , I understand that labor means. I think it is really a successful experience, which was worth remembering forever.
【参考答案】2.
During the last summer vacation, I think I should do something meaningful instead ∧touring.
thought of
So I got a job at a fast food restaurant and worked there for a cleaner. I worked 7 hours a day
as
for three week. The job was bored and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly weeks boring
stopped it half way. After all, I stuck to them with determination. Every day I started off for work
it
early in the morning and got to home late in the evening. Finally, I finished a job before the new
the
school term. Now, I understand that labor means. I think it is really a successful experience, which
what
was worth remembering forever.
is
短文改错。

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Elli，
I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for
everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she dislikes me. He doesn’t want to my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem
is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?
Please give me some advices.
Yours,
Mary
【参考答案】5.
Dear Elli，
I’m a senior student. I like making friend with people and I do my best to get on well for
friends with everyone. But in last week I found that one of my friends wrote in her English diary that she
dislikes me. He doesn’t want to ∧my friend any longer. Now she has started making fun of me disliked She be
because of I’m fat. I am kind to her but why can’t she be friend towards me? My other problem
friendly
is trying to lose weight. Do I do more exercise? Use pills? And do you know any other way?
Or
Please give me some advices.
advice
Yours,
Mary
短文改错。

文中共有10处语言错误。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forg et all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thu s, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
【参考答案】6.
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after
with
school. She holds∧view that senior three students have to make fully use of
the full
every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am
her
allowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about my
be
study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.
eyes
In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.
watching work
Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at
has 删除at
abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。

注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.
making actors
I didn’t have my camera
With me at that time, but I rushed back home to get ∧. Unfortunately,
So/and it
by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn’t
had
be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when anywhere disappointed
he walked out ∧a building. He was right there in front of me! I
of
couldn’t believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken wuth him, but
have
he signed his name on my shirt!。