中考英语作文分类训练：电子邮件

电子邮件
1．假定你是李华，你的英国网友Mike给你发来电子邮件，询问合肥的最佳旅游季节。

请根据以下内容给Mike回复一封电子邮件。

要点如下：
1.介绍合肥四季气候特点；
2.你的建议：最佳旅游季节及至少两点推荐理由。

注意事项：
1.词数80～100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,
You asked me about the best time to travel in Hefei.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua 2．假如你是张玲，你的英国笔友Betty想了解你的新英语老师Ms. Zhou和你教室的样子。

请根据表格内容提示，写一封电子邮件告诉她。

要求：
1.必须包括所给提示内容，词数80 左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

2.紧扣提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。

Dear Betty,Thank you for your last email. You want to know about my new English teacher and my classroom. Now let me tell you.
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That’s all. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Zhang Ling 3．老照片，记载着一个人，一座城，通过你的观察，你现在生活的二七区和过去有什么不一样呢？那你认为，二七区会是什么样子呢？
请你根据以下要点和要求，写一篇短文。

要点：
1) 从城市环境和交通方式等方面比较一下二七区( Erqi District) 的变化；
2) 你认为30年后，二七区会是什么样的？
3) 为实现二七区的美好未来，我们应该怎么做？
要求：
1) 文中不能出现真实的个人姓名和学校名称。

2) 可结合实际情况进行适当的发挥。

3) 80词左右。

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4．假如你是Mike，请根据以下信息，以邮件的形式，向你的好友Kate介绍你家的日常饮食习惯。

写作要点：
1. 很高兴能够向Kate介绍你们一家的饮食习惯。

2. 饮食习惯：
（1）早餐：鸡蛋、面包和牛奶。

（2）午餐：鱼或鸡肉。

（3）晚餐：我和爸爸喜欢蔬菜和水果，妈妈不吃晚饭，因为她不想变胖。

3. 向Kate提出至少两条健康饮食的建议。

写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实姓名和学校名。

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

（3）字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清楚。

（4）不少于60词。

（已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数）
Dear Kate,
How is everything going?
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How about your eating habits?
Yours,
Mike 5．假如你是李华，打算期末考试结束后在家办个派对。

请根据下面提示，给你的好朋友Jake写封邮件。

提示：
时间：2022年1月16日，星期天。

地点：李华家
人物：李华的同学和好朋友。

活动：李华妈妈将准备一些传统美食：鸡肉，鱼，豆腐等；还会教大家如何做香蕉奶昔。

其他：请Jake在下周四之前回复。

要求：
包含所有提示内容；
可适当增加细节使行文连贯；
不少于80词。

Dear Jake,
The final exam will be over soon.
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Yours,
Li Hua 6．假如你是李平，请阅读下面邮件，接受邀请并回复。

要求：
1. 邮件必须包含所提问题，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数80左右。

7．How time flies! 初中第一个学期已经接近尾声了，假如你是李明，你的英国朋及Mike 给你发来邮件询问你的学校生活、请你给Mike回复一封邮件，从喜爱的学校活动和喜爱的科目及老师两方面介绍你的学校生活，同时请他来参加你家的新年派对，派对时间：1月15日下午3点。

要求：
（1）70词左右；
（2）根据要求分段，可适当增加细节使行文连贯；
（3）信中不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名；
（4）书写工整，不得使用修正带。

Dear Mike,
How are you? Let me tell you something about my school life.
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8．假如你是李华，请阅读以下来自你的好友Scott的邮件，接受邀请并给出具体回复。

词数80词左右。

To：Scott
Dear Scott,
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Li Hua 9．假如你是李平，最近收到朋友Linda的电子邮件。

请你阅读后回复谢绝，并写明具体的原因。

要求：
1. 邮件必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数60左右。

参考词汇：busy, have a…class
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10．假如你是李平，请阅读澳大利亚笔友Alice给你的邮件并回复。

注意：
（1）文中不能出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息；
（2）词数80左右；
（3）短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Alice, Glad to hear from you
again.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________
Yours,
Li Ping
参考答案
1．例文：
Dear Mike,
You asked me about the best time to travel in Hefei.
In my home town, it is warm and windy in spring. It is very hot and sometimes it rains in summer. It’s a bit cold in winter. In autumn, it is cool and comfortable. So the best time to visit my home town is in autumn. The weather gets cool and the leaves in the mountains start to get gold and then red. It’s very beautiful. It’s a good idea to bring your camera so you can take photos of the autumn trees here. In autumn, people often climb moutains. It’s a good way to make you relaxed. At last, you can eat lots of fresh fruit.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
①时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
①提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。

[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍合肥四季气候特点；
第三步，建议旅游的季节以及原因。

[亮点词汇]
①the best time to do sth. 做某事的最佳时间
①make you relaxed 让你放松
①at last 最后
[高分句型]
①So the best time to visit my home town is in autumn.（动词不定式作定语）
①It’s a good idea to bring your camera so you can take photos of the autumn trees here.（含有so 的并列复合句）
2．例文
Dear Betty,
Thank you for your last email. You want to know about my new English teacher and my classroom. Now let me tell you.
Ms. Zhou is my new English teacher. She is 36 years old. Her favourite sport is swimming. She is kind to us and we all love her. My classroom is small but beautiful. There are some flowers in the front of the classroom. There is a map of the world on the wall. You can also see a computer on Ms. Zhou’s desk.
That’s all. I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Zhang Ling 【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
① 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
① 提示：根据表格提示内容，写一封电子邮件告诉你的英国笔友Betty关于你的新英语老师Ms. Zhou和你教室的样子。

[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍英语老师的基本信息；
第二步，介绍教室的样子。

[亮点词汇]
①be kind to友好对待
①in the front of在……前面
①on the wall在墙上
[高分句型]
There are some flowers in the front of the classroom.（there be句型的使用）
3．例文
I think Great changes have taken place in the urban environment and transportation mode of Erqi District. It can be seen from the photos that there were many narrow streets thirty years ago. The environment here was dirty and messy. The river was dirty. The streets, buses and cars can go faster than before. Thirty years ago, you can definitely get anywhere in less than an hour with the
development of science and technology
In 30 years, I think Erqi District will be very different. There will be fewer tall buildings and cars. People will ride bikes or walk to work. So there will be less pollution.
As students, we should study hard. We should protect the environment and travel green. We should do something to make my city cleaner and more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
①时态：本文以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
①提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息以及图片介绍二七区的变化，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。

[写作步骤]
第一步，从城市环境和交通方式等方面比较一下二七区的变化；
第二步，介绍30年后二七区会是什么样的；
第三步，介绍为实现二七区的美好未来，我们应该怎么做。

[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
①less than少于
①with the development of随着……的发展
[高分句型]
①It can be seen from the photos that there were many narrow streets thirty years ago. (含情态动词的被动语态)
①I think Erqi District will be very different. (省略that的宾语从句)
4．例文
Dear Kate,
How is everything going? I’m glad to introduce you to our family’s eating habits.
We have eggs, bread and milk for breakfast because they are healthy. We have fish or chicken for lunch. My father and I like vegetables and fruits for dinner. My father wants me to keep healthy. My mother doesn’t eat dinner because she doesn’t want to get fat. I don’t think you should eat too much for dinner. Besides, you’d better go for a walk after dinner.
How about your eating habits?
Yours,
Mike 【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
① 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
① 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点中的“向Kate提出至少两条健康饮食的建议”，这需要考生进行适当的发挥。

[写作步骤]
第一步，表达自己能够向Kate介绍自家的饮食习惯的喜悦之情；
第二步，具体介绍家人的饮食习惯；
第三步，向Kate提出健康的建议。

[亮点词汇]
① eating habits 饮食习惯
① have sth. for breakfast 早餐吃……
① too much 太多
[高分句型]
① We have eggs, bread and milk for breakfast because they are healthy.（because引导原因状语从句）
① My father wants me to keep healthy.（want sb. to do sth.“想让某人做某事”）
① Besides, you’d better go for a walk after dinner.（had better do sth.“最好做某事”）
5．例文
Dear Jake,
The final exam will be over soon. I’m going to have a party at my home. The time is 7 p.m. on Sunday, January 16, 2022. Can you come to my party?
The party will be a lot of fun. Some of my friends and classmates will come. They’re friendly and funny. My mother will prepare some traditional food: chicken, fish, tofu and so on. She will also teach you how to make banana milkshakes.
Please reply to this invitation by next Thursday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
①时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
①提示；写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容提示中要求描述的几个方面，包括家庭派对的时间、地点、人物、活动等，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。

借用“打算期末考试结束后在家办个派对”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。

从“时间、地点、人物、活动”等几个方面重点介绍这次家庭聚会的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语并表达自己的期待。

[亮点词汇]
①have a party 举办晚会
①a lot of 许多的；诸多
①banana milkshakes 香蕉奶昔
①reply to 回复，回答
[高分句型]
①The party will be a lot of fun. (will be句型表将来)
①I’m going to have a party at my home. (现在进行时表将来)
6．例文：
Dear John,
It’s good to hear from you. Everything is fine with me here. Thanks for the invitation! I’m sure to come! It will be good to meet Mike. I’ll arrive at around 5:30 next Saturday and bring some traditional Chinese foods, like dumplings and zongzi for you. I hope you would like them. Don’t worry. I will stay after the party to help you clean up.
Thanks again for the invitation. I am really looking forward to it!
Yours,
Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
①时态：描写将来的事情，时态以“一般将来时”为主；
①提示：要求回复邮件中的所有问题，可适当发挥，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]
第一步，接受邀请，并说明自己在约翰生日那天的安排和准备；
第二步，书写结语，表达“希望那一天快点到来”的愿望。

[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……的信
①be good to对……好
①looking forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I’ll arrive at around 5:30 next Saturday and bring some traditional Chinese foods, like dumplings and zongzi for you.（like在此处作介词，表示举例）
①Thanks again for the invitation.（该句为祈使句）
7．Dear Mike,
How are you? Let me tell you something about my school life.
I have a pleasant and colorful school life. My favorite parts are the annual school art festival and the weekly English corner. Because at the school art festival, I can show my talent and enjoy my classmates’ talents.
My favorite subjects are Chinese and geography. Because I think language is very important and I can express what I want to express. As for geography, I can learn different cultures and customs of different places. My teacher, Mrs. Smith, is very kind, so I love her classes.
By the way, there will be a New Year party in my house at 3:00 p.m. on January 15th. Would you please come and celebrate the new year with us together? I hope you can come.
Yours,
Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
① 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
① 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。

[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你喜爱的学校活动；
第二步，介绍喜爱的科目及老师；
第三步，最后邀请对方来参加你家的新年派对。

[亮点词汇]
①colorful school life丰富多彩的学校生活
①as for至于
①by the way顺便提一下
[高分句型]
Because I think language is very important and I can express what I want to express.（because引导的原因状语从句；what引导的宾语从句）
8．Dear Scott,
I’m glad to receive your email. I’m free on Saturday. I’ll bring the popcorn machine to your house early. I think we should also prepare dumplings. Because Chinese people like dumplings best. For dumplings, we need to prepare flour, we can also prepare some small games, you can call me. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇电子邮件作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”
提示：写作要点未给出，根据信件内容适当回复，考生应注意语法正确。

[写作步骤]
第一步，表明周六有空，接受邀请，并带上爆米花机器。

第二步，阐述建议做的其他食物——饺子，以及需要准备的材料。

第三步，书写总结，期待回复。

[亮点词汇]
①be glad to… 很开心做……
①bring … to … 把……带给……
[高分句型]
① I think we should also prepare dumplings.（宾语从句）
①If you have any questions, you can call me.（if引导的条件状语从句）
9．例文
Dear Linda,
Thank you for your e-mail. I like basketball very much and I want to go to watch the basketball match at your school next Saturday. But I’m really busy. I have a music class from 1:00 to 3:00 in the afternoon. Then I have an art class. They are both very interesting. I can’t miss them. Can we meet next time?
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
① 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
① 提示：根据Linda的电子邮件内容，结合参考词汇回复谢绝她，并写明具体的原因。

[写作步骤]
第一步，首先感谢对方来的邮件；
第二步，具体介绍自己不能去的理由；
第三步，询问对方下一次是否可以。

[亮点词汇]
①want to do sth想要做某事
①basketball match篮球比赛
[高分句型]
I like basketball very much and I want to go to watch the basketball match at your school next Saturday.（and连接两个并列结构）
10．例文
Dear Alice,
Glad to hear from you again. Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before, but how can we make our weekends more colourful? Firstly, we should spend more time with friends. Because only your friends have a harmonious relationship, you will get more help when you are in trouble. Secondly, we have to go out for a day at the weekend to relax. A good mood is a good beginning. Thirdly, we can also cultivate some of our own hobbies, such as DIY and so on.
Do something you like. Fourthly, we can take part in volunteering activities, like visiting the old people’s home or doing some cleaning in public places. Last but not least, to make ourselves healthier, taking exercise is a good choice. I feel happier now than before.
Yours,
Li Ping 【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为电子邮件；
①时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
①提示：文章开头已给出，根据澳大利亚笔友Alice所给的邮件内容，进行一一回答，注意重点说明业余时间所做的事情。

[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述在业余时间可做的一些事情；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。

[亮点词汇]
①cultivate培养
①take part in参加
①last but not least最后但并非最不重要
[高分句型]
①you will get more help when you are in trouble. (when引导的时间状语从句)
①to make ourselves healthier, taking exercise is a good choice. (动词不定式作目的状语)。