山西省晋中市2016-2017学年高一下学期质量监测优生检测英语试题

山西省晋中市 2016-2017 学年高一放学期质量监测（优生检
测）
英语试题
第一部分阅读理解（共两节，满分60 分）
第一节（共 l5 小题；每题 3 分，满分 45 分）
阅读以下短文，从每题所给的A、 B、 C 和 D四个选项中选出最正确选项。

A
Underwater Ice Hockey（曲棍球）is a new sport that began in Austria and is increasingly popular among free divers.
Not to be confused with underwater hockey,which is played in indoor swimming
pools,underwater ice hockey is practiced in a 6 meters wide by 8 meters long place
under the icy surface of a frozen lake.After cutting a square hole in the thick
ice,players wearing wetsuits,which are worn in cold water,try to move a puck（冰球） into their competitor's goal.Think of it as an upside-down game of hockey.
Underwater ice hockey players need to have excellent breath-holding
abilities,considering they are not allowed to play with any kind of breathing
equipment.Considering matches can get pretty physical,players need to surface about every 30 seconds for a breath of fresh air.Divers can easily get lost during a game.In case one of them is too tired to reach the hole,or can't find it,four divers equipped with oxygen tanks watch every match.Underwater ice hockey periods last 10
minutes,and players are allowed 10-minute breaks to warm up.
The world's first ever Underwater Ice Hokey World Cup was held in
Weissensee,Austria and was won by a team from Finland.Because of the special
conditions it's played in,fans present at the scene have to watch the underwater
action on monitors.
1. Compared with underwater hockey,underwater ice hockey is.
A. more exciting
B. more popular
C. more difficult
D. more interesting
2. Four divers equipped with oxygen tanks are around to.
A. judge the game
B. save the players in trouble
C. search for the puck
D. replace the weak players
3. People who want to watch underwater ice hockey should.
A. sit on the ice
B. dive into the water
C. watch it on screens
D. swim with the players
【答案】 1.C 2.B 3.C
【分析】本文叙述了一种新式的水下曲棍球，并且愈来愈遇到自由潜水者们的欢迎，而后叙述了与传统水下曲棍球的差别，以及这个新式的水下曲棍球的详细操作方式。

1.细节理解题。

从第二段的最后一句 Think of it as an upside-down game of hockey 即以为这是一推翻性的游戏曲棍球可知，与传统的对比，这个更为困难，应选 C。

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3. 细节理解题。

从最后一段的最后一句,fans present at the scene have to watch the underwater action on monitors即现场球迷能够经过显示器看水下竞赛可知，应选C。

B
When people wanted to find their way to a place in the past,they used to have
to buy a map.But they don't have to do that any more.Now they can either buy a GPS,or go online and find maps for just about anywhere.
Is this an improvement?Perhaps,but some people think some of the online
companies are going too far,because they have been sending out cars with photographic equipment on their roofs,to photograph every street and house in the country.
One of these cars arrived on a Wednesday morning in the quiet English village of Broughton.The camera was on a meter-high stick an top of the car and could see
over walls and into people's gardens.Some of the villagers came and stood around
the car,and then asked the driver and photographer to go away.Reporters quickly
arrived on the scene,and soon the event was news all over the country.
Of course,the online company in question says that it is simply collecting
information that people on the Internet want.But the villagers feel differently."We used to have privacy in this country — now companies just come and take photographs of our home without even asking,"said one villager."It' not right.We mustn't let
this happen.We mustn't lose our right to live privately."
There is,of course,no law to prevent people from taking photographs of houses,so the villagers cannot go to court.But many people are asking the question:"OK,it's
legal,lout is rt right?"
4.How is Paragraph 1 developed?
A. By analyzing causes.
B.By describing experiences.
C. By ma king comparisons.
D.By providing explanations.
5.What does the underlined phrase "going too far" in Paragraph 2 mean?
A. Doing a lot of work.
B.Walking a long distance.
C. Taking more pictures than necessary.
D.Behaving in a way that upsets people.
6.How do the locals in Broughton feel about the online company?
A. Uncaring.
B.Angry.
C. Friendly.
D.Thankful.
7.What would be the best title for the text?
A. Why is GPS Important?
B.The Improvement of Maps
C. It's Legal—But is It Right?
D.The Development of the Internet
【答案】 4.C 5.D 6.B7.C
【分析】本文叙述了一些在线企业为了互联网上一些被人们需要的信息不分地址
和场合的采集信息，给当地人们带来了困扰，可是在法律上没有明确的合法判断的故事。

4. 推理判断题。

从第一段的最后一句Now they can either buy a GPS,or go online and find maps for just about anywhere即此刻他们能够买一个 GPS，或许上网找地
图可知与前文形成了对照，应选C。

5.词意猜想题。

从第二段的第一句 Is this an improvement?即这是进步吗，而后后
边的 but 有一个转折，可知这里是一个负面的词，应选 D。

6.细节理解题。

从第四段的村民的话 It' not right.We mustn't let this happen.We
mustn't lose our right to live privately 即这不对。

我们决不要让这类事发生。

我们
不可以失掉我们的生活奥密的权益可知村民们很生气，应选B。

7. 要旨粗心题。

从文章最后一句But many people are asking the question:"OK,it's
legal,lout is rt right?"即但好多人都在问的问题：“好的，这是合法的，或许不是？”可知，应选 C。

C
10-year-old Mikaila Ulmer from Texas is building a lemonade empire,hoping
to save honey bees in the process.
It all started when Mikaila was 4 years old and was stung （刺痛） by a bee twice
in one week.This caused her to become very scared whenever bees were near.
To help her deal with this new fear,Mikaila's parents asked her to do some
research on bees.She learned that bees are incredibly important for flowers,gardens
and trees as pollinators（传粉者）.She also learned that they are dying fast.In the past year,honey bee farmers have reported losing nearly 12% of their colony.Many
believe that this could be due to the overuse of pesticide（杀虫剂）,which many bad effects upon bees.
This is when she decided to create a product to help save bees.She planned to
sell lemonade and started her own company,BeeSweet Lemonade.Her special lemonade recipe came from her great-grandmother's cookbook.She decided to add honey to
it,instead of sugar,to call attention to the problems honey bees face.Mikaila lemonade almost everyday at her lemonade stand.She takes every opportunity her customers about the issues facing honey bees.
What began as a small operation is starting to grow.BeeSweet is projected to
sell almost 140,000 bottles of lemonade this year.BeeSweet lemonade can be found can have
sells to tell
on the shelves at select Whole Foods Markets as well as many restaurants and
Mikaila and her cause have also been featured in many news
reports,magazines,blogs and even on Shark Tank,a TV show featuring hopeful
entrepreneurs.
Does Mikaila have time to just be a kid?Sure!Her parents have said that every
weekend,Mikaila does something fun.She doesn't mind the hard work,though.She says
that she is happy watching people enjoy her lemonade,and that makes her want to grow her company more and more.The more people enjoy,the more they're learning about the bees.
8.What caused Mikaila to save honey bees?
A. Her fear of bees.
B. Her parents' advice.
C. Her research on bees.
D. Her desire to raise them.
9.Why does Mikaila sell lemonade with honey in it?
A.To have it sold at a better price.
B.To make it taste more delicious.
C.To show her special lemonade recipe.
D.To get people to care about bees' problems.
10.How does Mikaila sell her special lemonade?
A.By enlarging its selling scale.
B.By advertising it on the media.
C.By selling it throughout America.
D.By selling it just at her lemonade stand.
11.What can we know about Mikaila from the passage?
A.Mikaila enjoys her career.
B.Mikaila has changed her dream.
C.Nikaila's company has saved bees.
D.Mikaila doesn't sell her lemonade on weekends.
【答案】 8. C9. D10. A11. A
【分析】本文叙述了一个主人公因为被蜜蜂蜇所以惧怕蜜蜂，进而研究认识蜜蜂，认识到蜜蜂的困难生计环境，所以建设一个柠檬水的帝国，希望能在这一过程中
挽救蜜蜂的故事。

8.细节理解题。

从第三段的第一句 To help her deal with this new fear,Mikaila's parents asked her to do some research on bees即为了帮她办理这个新的惧怕，
Mikaila 的父亲母亲要求她做一些研究可知，应选C。

9. 细节理解题。

从第四段的She decided to add honey to it,instead of sugar,to call attention to the problems honey bees face即她决定加入蜂蜜，取代糖，号召关注蜜
蜂面对的问题可知，应选D。

10. 细节理解题。

从第五段的What began as a small operation is starting to grow以
及 BeeSweet lemonade can be found on the shelves at select Whole Foods Markets as well as many restaurants and other locations near her home in Austin,Texas即从最小规模开始，柠檬水能够在整个食品市场以及她在奥斯丁家邻近有好多餐馆和其余
地方的货架上发现可知，应选 A 。

11.推理判断题。

从最后一段的 She says that she is happy watching people enjoy her lemonade,and that makes her want to grow her company more and more即她说她很
快乐，看的人享受她的柠檬水，这让她想让自己的企业愈来愈多可知，应选A 。

D
Ever since I was old enough to dream,I have imagined myself flying with the
eagles.My love of flying has shaped the way I live and the person I have become.Two years ago that passion rocketed to new heights when I visited Embry Riddle
Aeronautical University in Arizona.For a whole week I lived in a college dorm,roomed with a total stranger,and best of all,I flew!
My group took part in activities from learning about the history of aviation
（航空） to flying in pilot training simulators（模拟器） .At least once a day,I was lost in one of the world's best training aircraft,the Cessna 182.I received thorough ground instruction,and also got to fly.In total,I flew five hours toward receiving
my private pilot's license.In that joyous week,my passion for aviation grew even
stronger.Now,whenever I see a plane flying overhead,I feel a sense of pride,thinking
I've done that.
During my time above the Arizona desert,I learned not only about the mechanics
in that seemingly endless sea of air,I became aware of the variety and the complexity
of the humanity below.On the ribbons of roadways,each tiny car carried people with hopes and ambitions.I wondered if any of them had ever wished to fly like an eagle.I realized they must have their own strong desire.That's what makes us unique.We always
try to respond to something special inside us.I also realized that I was especially fortunate to be making my own dream come true.
Everywhere I go,I hear,"Do what makes you happy,and you will be happy."It sounds like standard advice,but I've really thought about it and taken it to heart.I
couldn't care less about what benefits I receive.I know I am already in hot pursuit
of mydreams.Even if they change,and even if they finally don't involve aviation,I'll always aim to fly with the eagles.
12.What made the author successful?
A. His practice.
B. His love for flying.
C. His imagination.
D. His roommate.
13.According to the author,what makes people unique?
A. Flying like an eagle.
B. Trying something special.
C. Having a strong wish.
D. Learning unusual techniques.
14.What can be inferred about the author from the last paragraph?
A.He dislikes changing his dreams.
B.He will do what benefits him most.
C.He always dreams of flying again in the future.
D.He will still run after his dream whatever the situation.
15.Which of the following may be the best title of the text?
A. My Early Dream
B. Flying with Eagles
C. Pleasing Yourself
D. My Stay in ERAU
【答案】 12. B13. C14. D15. B
【分析】本文叙述了一个因为作者喜爱翱翔所以向来从事翱翔有关的研究与工作，
而后作者意识到必定要坚持自己的梦想，那样才会使自己独出心裁的故事。

12.细节理解题。

从文章第一句 Ever since I was old enough to dream,I have imagined
myself flying with the eagles 即自从我开始做梦，我想象自己与鹰一同翱翔可知，
应选 B。

13.细节理解题。

从原文第三段 I realized they must have their own strong desire.That's what makes us unique即我意识到，他们一定有自己的激烈愿望，那使我们独出心裁可知，应选择 C 。

14. 推理判断题。

从文章最后一句I'll always aim to fly with the eagles 即我会向来与鹰一同翱翔可知，不论什么状况，他将向来前行，应选D。

第二节（共 5 小题；每题 3 分，满分 15 分）
依据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最正确选项，选项中有两
项为剩余选项。

Sometimes people come into your life and you know right away that they were meant to be there.___16___They teach you a lesson,or help you figure out who you are
or who you want to become.
___17___They may be a roommate,a neighbor,a professor,a friend,a lover,or even a complete stranger.Sometimes things happen to you that may seem horrible at
first,but later you will find that without those difficulties you would have never
realized your potential.___18___
It would be safe and comfortable,but dull and
completely pointless.
The people you meet and affect your life,help to create who you are and who you become.In fact,they are sometimes the most important ones.
___19___
If someone loves you,give love back to them not only because they love you,but because they are teaching you to love and how to open your heart and eyes to things.
___20___Because they have helped you learn about trust and the importance of
being cautious to whomyou open your heart to.Make every day count.Appreciate every moment.
A.They serve some sort of purpose.
B.You never know who these people may be.
C.Learn a lesson in life each day that you live.
D.Even the bad experiences can be learned from.
E.If someone hurts you,or breaks your heart,forgive them.
F.Without these small tests,life would be like a smooth road to nowhere.
G.If you don't believe in yourself,it will be hard for others to believe in you.
【答案】 16.A17.B
18. F19.D
20. E
【分析】本文叙述了假如有人爱你，把爱还给他们，不单因为他们爱你，还因为
他们教会你去爱，以及怎样翻开你的心和眼睛去看事物的故事。

16.从空格的下一句 They teach you a lesson,or help you figure out who you are or who you want to become即他们教你一个经验，或帮助你弄清你是谁或许你想成为
谁可知，前一句是讲他们有某种用途，应选 A 。

17.从下一句 They may be a roommate,a neighbor,a professor,a friend,a lover,or even
a complete stranger即他们可能是室友，街坊，教授，朋友，爱人，甚至是一个完
全陌生的人，与 B 中的你永久不知道这些人是谁相对应，应选B。

18.空格的下一句 It would be safe and comfortable,but dull and completely pointless 即会安全舒坦，但单一无聊，完好毫无心义的可知，上边是讲没有这些小测试，
生活就像一条通往无路的坦途，应选F。

19.从下一句 In fact,they are sometimes the most important ones即事实上他们有
时是最重要的与 .Even the bad experiences can be learned from即即便是不好的
经历也能够从中学到经验意思连结，应选 D。

20.空格下一句 Because they have helped you learn about trust and the importance of being cautious to whom you open your heart 即to他们帮助你学会了相信和当心你敞高兴扉的人的重要性可知，前方讲的是If someone hurts you,or breaks your heart,forgive them即假如有人损害了你，或许伤了你的心，请谅解他们，应选 E。

【名师点睛】
做本题时需要先认识文章的整体构造， 再综合上下文进行推理判断： 先迅速阅读
一遍七个备选答案，先确立哪个选项合适放在文章的什么地点；迅速阅读文章，
确立文章体裁， 抓住文章构造， 确立文章体裁有益于展望文章各段主要内容和结
构形式，形成重要的选择依照；剖析篇章构造，找出各段的主题句或要旨粗心。

小题１：和第一句句意顺承，且空格前出现了
They teach you a lesson,or help you
figure out who you are or who you want to become 即他们教你一个经验，或帮助你
弄清你是谁或许你想成为谁可知，和
A 项中的 They serve some sort of purpose 即
他们有某种用途是同样意思，并且文章通畅水利。

应选 A 。

第二部分 英语知识运用（共两节，满分
55 分）
第一节 完形填空（共 20 小题；每题 2 分，满分 40 分）
阅读下边短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（
A 、
B 、
C 和
D ）中，选出能够填
入空白处的最正确选项。

Mother's Day Surprise: Baby born in car on way to hospital
A Kentucky womanreceived a Mother's Day surprise on Sunday when she gave birth
to her son while on the way to the hospital.Christy High said her son was ready to
come as she was ___21___in the back seat of the family car.
"I tried
___22___with the baby arid asked for a few more minutes,but he
wasn't ___23___,"High joked."He ___24___when he came out,and that was the first
time my husband knew what was ___25."He said,"What was that?"and I said,"It's our new baby Oliver.It's
___26
."
"I wouldn't have it
any other way than how it went ___27___
,"she added."He will
always be the best Mother's Day ___28 I ever got."High,who is now a mom of
two,told ABC News that she went into
___29___
in the early morning hours of May
14. ___30___her husband,Jon High,was driving her to the
hospital,her ___31___
broke,she said.Oliver Joseph High was born two
___32___
___33___
weeks
at 6:10 a,m, 6 pounds,10 ounces.High,a brave
mother, ___34___her son herself and placed him on her chest ___35___she immediately
began nursing it.
Staff Clark Memorial in Jeffersonville,Indiana,
___36___the family upon their
___37___
was very ___38___being the driver,I'm sure,but he was my rock star,"she added."He
got us here ___39___and he is a(n)___40___father."
Oliver joins big sister Rowan,3,who was horn on St.Patrick's Day in 2014.
21.A. carrying B. riding C. comforting D. attending
22.A. arguing B. debating C. reasoning D. discussing
23.A. acting B. answering C. working D. cooperating
24.A. cried B. yelled C. shouted D. called
25.A. going on B. moving on C. keeping on D. insisting on
26.A. right B. awful C. OK D. thankful
27.A. up B. down C.away D. off
28.A. gift B. greeting C. ceremony D. party
29.A. action B. effect C. business D. labor
30.A. If B. Although C. The moment D. As
31.A. car B. water C. leg D. seat
32.A. early B. late C. sharp D. exactly
33.A. feeling B. tasting C. weighing D. smelling
34.A. patted B. kissed C. observed D. delivered
35.A. which B. where C. what D.that
36.A. questioned B. encouraged C.greeted D. shocked
37.A. happy B. upset C. worried D. mad
38.A. eager B. serious C. patient D. nervous
39.A. hurriedly B. skillfully C. safely D. gently
40.A. amusing B. amazing C. warm-hearted D. strong-willed
【答案】21. B22. C23. D24. A25. A26. C27. B28. A29. D 30. D31. B32. A33. C34. D35. B36. C37. A38. D39. C40. B
【分析】本文讲了一个肯塔基的女子收到母亲节的欣喜，即在礼拜日的时候，她
在车的后座生下了她的儿子，全家都所以感觉喜悦，并且对这个孩子的将来充满了希望的故事。

21.这里的意思是她坐在家里的车后座， carrying 实行，comforting 宽慰 Attending 列席，应选 B。

22.联系上下文可知道这里是我试着和那个婴儿解说的意思，arguing 争辩，debating打赌， discussing议论，应选 C。

23.这里的意思是但他没有配合， acting 动作，answering回答， working 工作，应选 D。

24.这里是他出来的时候哭了的意思，只有 cried 是哭的意思，应选 A 。

25. 这句话是这是我丈夫第一次知道发生了什么事的意思，moving on 挪动，keeping on保持， insisting on 坚持，应选 A 。

26. 这里的意思是这是我们的新宝贝奥利弗，没关系，right 正确， awful 糟糕，thankful 感恩，应选 C。

27. 联合语境这里是我不知道怎样沉静下来的意思，这里go down 是沉静下来的意思，应选 B。

28. 这里的意思是他将永久是我以前获得的最好的母亲节礼品，这里只有gift 表示礼品切合语境，应选 A 。

29.这里的意思是她在 5 月 14 日的清早开始发生， action 动作，effect 影响，business 事业，应选 D。

30.这句话的意思是当她的丈夫 Jon High，开车送她去医院，她的羊水破了，这
里 as是连词表当 ...的意思，应选 D。

31.联系上下文能够知道这里的意思是她的羊水破了， car 车， leg 腿， seat座位，应选 B。

32.这里的意思是这个孩子出生在清晨的 6 点 10 分，只有 early 是表示早的意思，应选 A。

33. 联合语境能够知道这里是说这个孩子重 6 磅 10 盎司， feeling 感觉， tasting品尝， smelling 浅笑，应选 C。

34.这里是固定用法， deliver+sb 有临盆的意思，应选 D。

35.联系上下文能够知道这里是定语从句即她立刻开始护理的意思，因为后边是
一个完好的句子，所以这里用 where，应选 B。

36.这里的意思是迎接家人的到达， questioned问题， encouraged鼓舞， shocked
震撼，应选 C 。

37. 经过语境可知这是她丈夫特别快乐宝宝的到来，
upset 丧气， worried 担忧，
mad 生气，应选 A 。

38. 这里的意思是他特别的紧张， eager 盼望， serious 严肃的， patient 耐心的，
应选 D 。

39. 联系上下文能够知道这是他安全地在这里找到了我们，
hurriedly 仓促地，
skillfully 有技巧地， gently 大概上地，应选 C 。

40. 这里的意思是他是个了不起的父亲， 这里 amazing 表示了不起，惊人的意思，
应选 C 。

【名师点睛】
完形每选一个空，都要考虑到有关的语义搭配、固定句式、词组、时态等各个方面。

假如选项是动词，那么，考察的可能是时态，动词过去式、过去分词的
规则、动词短语，不规则变化。

比方 : 如第七小题： go up 是增添的意思， go down
是沉静下来， go away 是走开， go off 是走开的意思，这里的这句话是说我不知道怎样怎么样，只有 go down 能使这句话通畅，意思即我不知道怎样沉静下来，应选 B 。

第二节（共 10 小题；每题 1.5 分，满分 l5 分）
阅读下边短文，在空白处填入
1 个合适的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

I had an opportunity to help out a young girl,who had been admitted
___41___a
hospital for the ___42___(treat) of cancer disease.She was only a teenager and suffering from cancer in her hip.Her parents were daily wage laborers and lived
in ___43___small village in India.They didn't have
___44___knowledge about this
disease and they felt
___45___
(help).When I heard about this,I visited the
hospital,meeting with them and
___46___(talk) with the doctors for all
the ___47___(possibility) to save the girl.The doctors said that there was a risk
of death but that they
___48___(try) their best to save her life.
I donated some money to her parents and also arranged for
___49___(she) to
receive a unit of blood,
___50___she badly needed.I hope that she will defeat the
cancer and win back her life.
【答案】 41. to42. treatment
43.a44. any/much
45.helpless
46.talking
47.possibilities
48.would try
49. her50. which
【分析】文章叙述了我帮助了一个得了大病的年青女孩，为她捐款捐物，希
望上帝保佑她，祝她长寿，事业兴盛的故事。

41. 这里be admitted to是固定搭配，表达接受的意思，故填to。

42.这里可经过前方的 the 和后边的 of 能够判断这里填名词，故填 treatment。

43.因为后边的 village 是一个可数名词，故填 a。

44. 因为这里是修饰名词，并且是一个否认句，故填any 或 much。

45.因为前方是系动词 feel 所以这里填形容词表达绝望的意思，故填helpless。

46.And 是并列构造，前方的 meet用的是 meeting，所以这里 talk 也要用 ing
形式，故填 talking 。

47. 因为possibility是可数名词，并且这里是all the+名词，所以名词用复数
形式，故填 possibilities。

48. 这里是他们将尽全力去挽救她的性命的意思，所以这里用would 表将的意思，故填 would try 。

49.因为介词加人称代词用的是宾格，所以这里 she的宾格是 her，故填 her。

50.这里是定语从句，指代前方的整句话话，故填 which。

第三部分写作（共两节，满分35 分）
第一节短文改错（共10小题，每题 1 分，满分 10 分）
51.假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间互换改正作文，请你改正你同桌写的以下短文。

短文中
共有 10 处错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误波及一个单词的增添、删除或改正。

增添：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下边写出该加的词。

删
除：把剩余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其改正均仅限一词；
2.只赞同改正 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

Today my daughter and I went to sell eggs at a parking lot.It is a really cold
day.I didn't even want to go outside. As we pulled into parking lot,we saw a man
sat on the side of the road.He was holding a paper plate which said "I need help!".
He was still sitting there as we left for the parking lot,and I asked my daughter "Should they get him some food and some money?"and she said "OK.".So I pulled up
next to him,got out of the car,but gave him all my egg money.I still had another
dozen egg in the car,and asked if he wanted them,but he said no.I felt freezing just standing there talking with him for a minute,and he must have been sitting there
since hours.
I'm glad we stopped,got out of the car and talked with him for a minute.I hope
he will have a warm and comfort place to sleep tonight.
【答案】
【分析】第一处：因为整段用的是过去式，故is 应当改为 was。

第二处：因为此处可经过语境可知这里是特指一个泊车场，故此处应加一个the。

第三处：这里是固定搭配see sb doing sth，故 sat 改为 sitting。

第四周：这里是固定用法走开某地是用leave sp，故这里应去掉 for。

第五处：此处依据语境可知这里是问我们应当给他一些食品吗，故 they 改为 we。

第六处：这里是表达一个并列关系而非转折，故but 改为 and。

第七处：egg 是可数名词，所以目前方没有冠词的时候用复数，故egg改为eggs。

第八处：这里 freezing 是形容事物的而 frozen 是形容人的，故 freezing 改 frozen。

第九处：这里 for+ 时间表示的是一段时间并且前方的时态用的是此刻达成进行
时，故 since 改为 for 。

第十处：这里应当用形容词与前方的warm 相对应，故 comfort 改为 comfortable。

【名师点睛】
如第三处：这里 see有两种用法， see sb do sth是看见某人做某事，没有重申时间，还有一种是 see sb doing sth是看见某人正在做某事，重申一个正在进行时，这里
的意思是我们看见一个男人正坐在路边，有一个正在进行的过程，所以这里用
see sb doing sth，所以这里填 sitting。

第二节书面表达（满分25 分）
52. 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom下个月要来中国观光你所在的城市。

现来信咨询你所
在城市的天气、食品、交通等信息。

请你回信见告状况。

注意：
1.词数 100 左右；
2.能够合适增添细节，以使行文连结。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
_____________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
___________________________________________________________________
【答案】 Dear Tom,
How are you doing? I ’m more than happy to hear that you will come to China next month. Now let me tell you something different you may meet here.
To start with, the weather here is totally different from that in your place.
It hardly rains but whenever it does, it rains heavily. So you’d better bring a raincoat with you. Another big challenge is food. To be honest, the Chinese food
differs from yours, so you have to try to get accustomed to it and learn how to use chopsticks.As for traffic,you can take a bus or subway to nearly anywhere you want to. More importantly, it’s cheap and convenient.
I ’m looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua 【分析】这是一篇纲要类作文，文章重点已经给出，在写这篇文章时要注意以下
几点：
1.整篇文章时态以一般此刻时为主。

2.重点要齐备，可是不要进行简单的排列，能够采纳合适的连结词，或许是表递进关系的副词如To start with、So、More importantly ，使上下文连接自然，行文自然流利。

3.此作文要分三个部分写，最开始点出两地的不一样，中间的这一段最好用简单
句与复合句联合的方法来写详细的不一样点，如天气，食品和交通，最以后做一个总结，表达一下自己的欢迎之情。

4.多采纳一些高级句型，同时使用一些词组如looking forward to ， get accustomed to等。

5.注意文章要以必定的逻辑次序进行表达，必定要把各方看法表达清楚，细节
把控要到位。

不然会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。

【范文亮点】
纲要性文章难点：扩大成句，因为纲要性文章主题内容已经基本列出，在将
短句扩大时，要精华。

此中要注意尽量用高级词汇和复杂句是来表达，如重申句，定语从句等，就如I ’m more than happy to hear that you will come to China next month。

再者就是要多使用一些高级词汇与词组，如文中looking forward to 以及get accustomed to等。

最后就是段落清爽，有条有理。