中考英语书面表达英语作文汇编复习题及答案

中考英语书面表达英语作文汇编复习题及答案
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·北京中考模拟）4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。

假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。

内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。

提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提示问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
So I’m here again to call on all of us to read mor e books and read good books.
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：
短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。

句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

2．（·中央民族大学附属中学昆明五华实验学校中考模拟）A good book is important to me 要求：1. 紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。

2. 不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike, Gina等英文名字; 校名统一使用Guangming Middle School。

3. 词数不少于60。

【答案】A good book is important for me. It can not only help broaden my horizons, but also give me inspiration. From the good book, I can learn what others think, and their views about the world. What’s more, I can even live their lives, whi ch are totally different from mine. For me, a good book is really like a good friend, who can teach me how to solve the problems when I am in trouble. A good book helps me a lot, and it is quite important for me in my life.
【解析】
【分析】
本题是命题作文，根据题目一本好书对我是重要的，自己写相关内容，可以是你读了什么书，该书对你产生了什么影响。

也可以是一本好书为什么对你来说是重要的。

【详解】
本篇文章主要从为什么对我重要这个角度来写。

文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称为第一人称。

题目并没有给过多的提示信息，所以需要学生自己思索行文内容。

在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

3．（·长沙市开福区青竹湖湘一外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达
健康的生活习惯是非常重要的。

你认为健康的生活习惯应该是怎样的呢？请根据以下的信息提示，写一篇短文。

内容：1、健康饮食；
2、早睡早起，不熬夜；
3、参加运动，强身健体。

要求：
1、必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2、80词左右；
3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

_______________________________________________________________________________ __
_______________________________________________________________________________ __
_________________________________________________________________
【答案】Healthy habit
I think healthy habits are important for us. As we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good
health. How can we develop healthy habit?
First of all, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not least, we’d better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.
As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，阐述你认为健康的生活习惯是什么样的。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如as we know, develop healthy habit, keep a balanced diet, instead of, had better do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first of all, moreover以及last but not least。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

4．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是Jack，中学英文报 WARM HEART专栏的编辑，近期你收到一封署名为 Asking的求助信，该同学在信中诉说了自己当前焦虑的情绪，请根据以下信息，给他写一封回信。

写作要点：
1. 表达你对他的理解并给予安慰。

2. 求助人焦虑情绪产生的原因。

（1）下周将要进行期末考试。

（2）尽管准备了很长时间，对成绩仍没有把握。

3. 为他如何消除考前焦虑提出具体建议并说明理由。

写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

Hi, Asking,
I’m the editor of WARM HEART.
____________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
Editor,
Jack
【答案】I’m the edit or of WARM HEART.I hear from you that you are worried about the exam that will be held next week. You said that though you have prepared for a long time, you are still not sure you can get good grades. I can understand your situation. As far as I am concerned, the more you prepared, the better grades you will get. You’ll get rid of worries as long as you do as follows.
First of all, have a good rest. Get enough sleep and don’t stay up late. If you have enough sleep, you’ll be more energetic to prepare for t he test.
What’s more, don’t forget to do exercise. Doing exercise, such as playing basketball and playing soccer, can make you relax.
Only by doing these simple things can you relax yourself.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，针对某位同学考前焦虑进行安慰，分析原因并给出消除焦虑的建议。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如hear from sb, get good grades, as far as I’m concerned, the+比较级，the+比较级，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+状语放句首，用半倒装。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

5．（·湖南省岳阳开发区长岭中学中考模拟）时光荏苒，转眼间你已经成长为一名即将步入高中的青少年。

在你十几年的人生旅途中，一定充满了各种各样的欢乐。

请你以
“_______ makes me happy”为题并根据所给要点提示, 写一篇英语短文给校英语广播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使你快乐的事情及理由。

要点提示:
1. 使你快乐的事情是什么；
2. 它使你快乐的理由。

要求:
1. 请补全标题, 如reading，traveling或helping others等；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80左右，短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。

_______ makes me happy
【答案】One possible version:
Reading makes me happy
During my spare time, I like reading best. It can always make me happy.
Reading can bring many things to me, such as knowledge, ways of doing things, chances to know about different cultures and so on. Reading a good book is like talking with a wise person. When I feel lonely and when I meet troubles, I always find a book to read. When I am lost in the interesting stories, I won’t feel unhappy anymore.
Reading brings me so much happiness that I’ll keep the habit of reading along my life journey.【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇话题作文，以“_______ makes me happy”为题，写一篇英语短文给校英语广播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使我快乐的事情及理由。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I like……，Reading can……，When I feel……，When I am lost in……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了读书让我感到快乐，接下来介绍读书的好处，最后指出我会一生保持读书的习惯。

此处like doing sth, such as, know about, talk with, be lost in, bring sb sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

6．（·湖南中考模拟）情景作文
阅读现在已成为人们生活中最重要的一部分。

请根据提示的内容，以“Reading Is Very
Important”为题，谈谈阅读的好处和你的阅读习惯并号召大家阅读。

要求内容连贯，并进行合理拓展， 80 词左右。

good points ， get lots of knowledge ，so much fun ， keep happy ，a good way to relax， enjoy reading ， after school, write down ，think ， begin now Reading Is Very Important
It’s very important for us students to read books.
【答案】Reading Is Very Important
It’s very important for us students to read books. And there are so many good points when we do that. First of all, we can get lots of knowledge we didn’t know, especially when we are reading some scientific books or historical ones. And reading can bring so much fun to our life. If we read some jokes or interesting stories, it’s easy for us to keep happy all day. Also, it’s a good way to relax. After a long-day work, just take a book to read, imagining what’s happening in the book, so our brains could get enough relax.
Since reading can help us so much, I enjoy reading a lot. I like to read after school, when I finish my homework. And my favorite time is the summer vacation, I can get lots of nice books to read without worrying about time! And I write down what I think after reading each book!
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，谈谈阅读的好处和你的阅读习惯并号召大家阅读。

英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。

英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

7．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文，请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇题为"Thank you，my teacher!"的短文参加此次活动．要点如下：（1）严格要求
（2）耐心指导
（3）热情鼓励；
注意：（1）词数80～100；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称．
（4）…
注意：（1）词数80-100；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称
【答案】Thank you，my teacher!
Leaving you-lovely junior school life，I have som any words from my heart to say．I still
remember that you became our English teacher three years ago．You always work hard and treat us well．You are strict with us in studyand also take care of us kindly．It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．（严格要求）【高分句型一】
During my school life，we can get along well with each other．When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．【高分句型一】When I had trouble in life，you told me to be brave．（耐心指导）
Because of your help and encouragement，many students，including me，are more and more interested in English and make much progress，too．You have given me so much．（热情鼓励）
Thank you again for what you've done for us!All the best to you!（表示感谢）
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇抒情记叙文。

【详解】
英语作文一般分为三个部分
第一部分：开篇点题，交代写作目的——感谢老师为我做的一切。

第二部分：交代感谢英语老师的原因
老师是一个认真工作的人。

老师对我严格要求。

在我考试失利时鼓励我。

第三部分：再次点题，对老师表示由衷的谢意。

高分句型一：
It is easy and interesting for us to learn English well because your class is very interesting and lively．因为你的课非常生动有趣，对我们来说学好英语很简单有趣．
句中"because your class is very interesting and lively"为原因状语从句，主句为"itis+形容词+for sb to do sth对某人来说做某事…"结构．
高分句型二：
When I failed in an exam，you encouraged me to keep trying．当我考试失败的时候，你鼓励我不断努力．
句中"When I failed in an exam"为条件状语从句，主句"you encouraged me to keep trying"中有短语"encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事"、"keep doing sth一直做某事"．
提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．
8．（·广西中考模拟）近几年来，一些学校开设了一些兴趣班（interest classes）或特色课（special classes）, 诸如烹饪课、手工制作课以及传统戏曲课等。

你校校园网就你们学校开设此类课程的必要性广泛征求同学们的意见。

以下是你们班同学的观点和理由。

请就此并结合你自己的想法用英语写一篇短文，发表在校园网的英语论坛上。

提示语：develop one’s interests; get more knowledge; improve one’s life skills; a waste
of time; cause a lot of stress
要求：1. 短文应包括表格中的信息，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数80左右。

开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________
Thank you!【答案】Recently some schools offer their students some interest classes or special classes such as cooking classes, handcraft classes, traditional opera classes and so on.
Is it necessary to offer these classes? We had a discussion in our class. Some students think it’s really necessary to do it. First, it’s good for students to develop their interests. And interests can make them get more knowledge. Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. These skills are useful for young students.
However, others have different opinions. They don’t think it’s so necessary. They think it’s a waste of time and it’s not helpful for their study. And these activities can cause a lot of stress for children.
In my opinion, it’s a good idea to offer t hese classes. They are not only good for our study but also for our growing.
Thank you!【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，并且已给出了内容提示，所以我们在写作时要围绕所给内容提示展开。

根据作文要求，可以确定文章的时态是一般现在时; 在表达观点时通常会用到例如：I think, in one’s opinion 等引出观点的词语。

另外，可以用到first, second, third, finally 等一一列出观点，使文章更有条理，次序。

【点睛】
这是一篇比较优秀的作文。

首先内容完整，第一段摆出事实，第二段说明别人的的观点，
最后说出自己的观点，在表达观点时有条理有次序。

短文中使用了一些很好的词及短语，例如such as，and so on，However等使句子更有连贯性，及好的句型表达，例如：Second, these classes are helpful for them to improve their life skills. They think it’s a waste of time and
i t’s not helpful for their study等。

9．（·山东中考模拟）“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。

你马上就要毕业了，在初中
的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！
要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。

2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。

100
词左右。

【答案】I'm going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.
As old saying goes, "all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.
Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.
Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as well
I hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。

而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

10．（·辽宁初三）生活中总有些不经意的事让你感动，总有些平凡的人让你难以忘记。

白杨是我的同学。

她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。

请根据提示内容介绍白杨，并谈一谈她对你及同学们的影响。

There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you. ________
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【答案】There are always some things in life that move you. There are always some people that touch you.
My classmate Bai Yang comes from a poor family. She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness. But she never gives up her studies. She keeps studying hard and has got good grades. What’s more, she cares for the classmates and is r eady to help others. During her spare time, she often does voluntary work instead of relaxing herself like most of the students.
She sets a good example to us all. Everyone in our class likes her because of her kindness. In our eyes, she faces difficulties bravely. No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇人物介绍。

人物身份为同学白杨，介绍分四个要点：她家境贫寒；她精心照顾患病母亲；她学习刻苦，成绩优异；她关心同学，乐于助人；她经常利用空闲时间做志愿者工作。

人称为第三人称，时态为一般现在时。

注意语法正确，善用连词，使各个要点连贯。

【高分句型一】She takes good care of her mother who has a serious illness.她精心照顾生病的母亲。

who has a serious illness为定语从句。

【高分句型二】No matter how hard the life is, she smiles at life brightly.不管生活多么艰苦，
她仍然笑对生活。

No matter how hard the life is为让步状语从句。

11．（·西安市铁一中学中考模拟）假如你是李华，上周末你和几个同学一起去了青龙寺（Qing Long Temple）游玩，请根据以下提示内容，写一篇游记，介绍一下你愉快的周末。

内容： 1 天气：晴朗；2 交通：公交车； 3时间：早上9点到达，下午4点离开；4，活动：赏花，放风筝，野餐.......5 感想。

要求：1 参考提示内容，可适当发挥2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息4. 字数：不少于70字
【答案】Last weekend I went to Qing Long Temple with some classmates. It was sunny on Sunday. We went there by bus at 7:00 a.m. On the bus we talked and laughed, we were so happy. At 9 a.m. we arrived there. We enjoyed flowers, took many pictures and flew kites in the morning. At noon we had picnic at the foot of the hill. In the afternoon we climbed the mountain. At 4:00 p.m. we left Qing Long Temple and at 6:00 p.m. got home. We were so happy, though we were tired.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，话题是假如你是李华，上周末你和几个同学一起去了青龙寺（Qing Long Temple）游玩，请根据以下提示内容，写一篇游记，介绍一下你愉快的周末。

时态主要是一般过去时，注意表达的顺序。

认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，认真阅读所给提示，所给提示就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。

短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚，注意使用表达顺序词。

要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。

写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。

本文提纲：
上周末我和几个同学去了青龙寺。

星期天天气晴朗。

我们早上7点乘公共汽车去了那里。

在公共汽车上我们谈笑风生，我们很高兴。

上午9点我们到了那里。

上午我们赏花，拍照，放风筝。

中午我们在山脚下野餐。

下午我们去爬山。

下午4点，我们离开青龙寺，下午6点回到家。

虽然我们很累，但我们还是很高兴。

【点睛】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

要学以致用。

像We were so happy, though we were tired.（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。

（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。

注意表达的顺序。

（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。

（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

12．（·扬州市竹西中学中考模拟）写作
“百善孝为先”,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。

某英语报社正在举办以“弘扬中华传统文化”为主题的征文活动,请你以“We should honor our parents”为题,写一篇短文参加征文活动。

内容包括:
What do you often do for your parents?
Why should we honor our parents?
How should we honor our parents?
要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of
China.____________________________
【答案】We should honor our parents
As we know, honoring our parents is an excellent tradition of China.I honor my parents.I often help my parents do housework in my spare time.I think it's our duty to honor our parents.Our parents take much effort to raise us, so it's important for us to honor them.They love us so we should love and respect them.
First of all, we should try our best to study hard to make them proud of us.Then, we can help our parents with some housework because they are tired after working.Next, we should respect them and never talk to them rudely.We'd better communicate with them patiently if we have different opinions.It's also important to tell our parents we love them.
【解析】
【分析】
本题要求考生以“我们应该尊敬我们的父母”为题结合所给的内容要点，写一篇作文
【详解】
这是篇材料作文，主要内容要点已给，所以考生要围绕着要点，进行写作，不要遗漏，当然顺序可以适当调整。

这篇作文又句型亮点，例如：As we know，…众所周知；.I think it's our duty to do sth等等，其次文章结构也比较清晰，例如第二段的衔接词，First of all，Then，Next，使用的简单而恰当。

13．（·江苏中考模拟）假设你是Beth,前段时间曾向英语校刊投送一篇题为My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短诗。

近日，又至毕业季，师生们忙着互致临别赠言。

为此，编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。

短诗如下：
My English Teacher Miss Zhang
There is a teacher, Miss Zhang,
Who is friendly, patient and helpful.
Always encouraging us to try,
She leads us to a world of "why".
We all respect and admire her.
注意事项：
1.稿件内容须根据短诗展开合理想象，不得抄写短诗原文：
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境。

3.词数在70个左右，稿件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数：
4.稿件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

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【答案】Dear Editorial Office,
I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.
She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．
I hope that you agree with me．。