《英语写作手册》(中文版)课后习题答案
英语写作课后习题答案
P42–45Activity 1 (Outlining), 1. Thesis:My high school had three problem areas. a. Students (1) Involved with drugs (2) Formed cliques b. Teachers (1) Unwilling to help after class (2) Much too strict c. Buildings (1) Leaky ceilings (2) Ill-equipped gym 2. Thesis:Working as a dishwasher in a restaurant was my worst job. a. Working conditions (1) Heat in kitchen (2) Noisy work area b. Hours (1) Ten-hour shifts (2) Hours changed every week c. Pay (1) Minimum wage (2) No bonus for overtime 3. Thesis: Joining an aerobics class has many benefits. a. Social benefits (1) Make new friends (2) Meet interesting instructors b. Mental benefits (1) Reduces mental stress (2) Improves self-image c. Physical benefits (1) Strengthens heart (2) Tones muscles 4. Thesis: My favorite times in school were the days before holiday vacations. a. Lighter workload (1) Less work in class (2) Less homework b. Friendlier atmosphere (1) Teachers more relaxed (2) Students happy about vacation c. Special events (1) Pep rallies (2) Holiday concerts P102 Activity (U se UseParallelism ), Answers may vary slightly. 1. The novelty store sells hand buzzers, plastic fangs, and fake insects. 2. Many Many people people people share share share the the the same same same three three three great great great fears: fears: fears: being being being in in in high high high places, places, places, working working with numbers, and making speeches. 3. To decide on a career, people should think closely about their interests, hobbies, and skills. 4. At At the the the body body body shop, shop, shop, the the the car car car was was was sanded sanded sanded down down down to to to the the the bare bare bare metal, metal, metal, painted painted painted with with primer, and sprayed with red enamel. 5. In order to become a dancer, Lola is taking lessons, working in amateur shows, and auditioning for professional companies. 6. Juan Juan’’s last job offered security; his new job offers a better chance for advancement. 7. People in today’s world often try to avoid silence, whether on the job, in school, or at home. 8. Because the dying w oman was dignified and woman was dignified and courageous, she won e veryone everyone everyone’’s respect. 9. The politician trusted no one, rewarded loyalty, and depended only on his own instincts. 10. If we’re not careful, we ’ll leave the next generation polluted air, contaminated water, and dying forests. P116Activity (R evise Reviseby Adding a Dependent Thought ), Answers may vary. 1. Because I had forgotten to lock the front door, I . . . 2. When the bear turned over the rotten log, fat . . . 3. After Kevin had sent away for a set of tools, he . . . 4. Because some people are allergic to wool, they . . . 5. Even though an older woman in my typing class can type almost one hundred words a minute, she . . . P117 Activity (R evise Reviseby Beginning with a Special Opening Word or Phrase ), 1. Reluctantly, Shirley signed the repair contract. 2. To improve improve their their their chances chances chances of of of promotion, promotion, the the interns interns interns volunteered volunteered to to work work overtime. 3. During the trial, the accused murderer grinned at the witnesses. 4. Crowded with nervous pets, the vet’s office was noisy and confusing. 5. Trying to to find find find something something something worth worth worth watching, watching, watching, Barry Barry Barry flipped flipped flipped from from from channel channel channel to to channel. P119 Activity (R evise Revise by Placing Adjectives or Verbs in a Series), 117–118 Answers may vary. 1. The baby toddled across the rug, picked up a button, and put the button in his mouth. 2. Brown, foul-tasting water dribbled out of the rusty metal tap. 3. By 6 A.M., I had read the textbook chapter, taken notes on it, studied the notes, and drunk eight cups of coffee. 4. The exterminator approached the large, papery wasps’ nests hanging under the old wooden eaves. 5. Slim brown reeds bordered the stagnant green pond. P123 Review Test 1 (Using Parallelism ), 1. filled with suspense suspenseful 6. selling toys toy salesperson 2. furniture for the office 7. food on the table putting food on the table office furniture 8. to cram cramming 3. my kitchen working in my kitchen 9. bags are put on them bagged (or:put into bags) 4. preparing to prepare 10. with friendliness as well and his friendliness 5. being kind kindness P124 Review Test 2 (Using Parallelism ), 1. to buy buying 6. were whispering whispered 2. shows on science science shows 7. to start starting 3. porch furniture that was rotted 8. pay that is good good pay rotting porch furniture 9. was putting put 4. her shirt was torn a torn shirt 10. losing lost 5. takingtake (or:climbing . . . taking) P148–150 Activity (R evisingRevising an Essay for Unity), ―Playing on the Brownsǁ—Irrelevant sentences: 15, 24, 28 ―How to Con an Instructorǁ—Irrelevant sentences: 11, 19, 24, 33 –158 Activity (Evaluating Essays for Support), 156―Formula for Happinessǁ—ǁ—Supporting details needed after sentences 7, 13, 16, 20, 21 ―Problems of a Foreign Studentǁ—Supporting details needed after sentences 12, 17, 24 P152–155 Activity (Revising Essays for Coherence), ―Noise Pollutionǁ1. sentence 6 5. sentence 19 2. canned music 6. rubble 3. sentence 12 7. six times 4. sentence 18 8. 4, 2, 3 ―Weight Lossǁ1. sentence 8 5. sentence 16 2. sentence 9 6. fat 3. sentence 12 7. four times 4. my best friend’s family 8. 3 。
建大-英语写作手册-课后题
Part 11. Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure, he had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure, who had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.2. When I woke up I saw him asleep in bed, I had not heard him when he came back. Because I had been sleeping soundly.When I woke up I saw him asleep in bed, I did not hear him when he came back. Because I had been sleeping soundly.3. Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, that was why he got higher pay than others.Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, which was why he got higher pay than others.4. No student could answer that question, even Xiao Yao, who was usually quick in answering questions, was silent.No student could answer that question, even Xiao Yao who was usually quick in answering questions was silent.5. Lin looks like Li, however, they are not related.Lin looks like Li, but they are not related.6. The old man hunched forward. His head tilted at an angle. His eyes half closed, looking very sleepy.The old man hunched forward. His head tilted at an angle. His eyes half closed, looks very sleepy.7. The work was well planned, everybody worked with great enthusiasm, thus, they over fulfilled their quota.The work was well planned, everybody worked with great enthusiasm, so they over fulfilled their quota.8. Mark Twain, a well-known American writer, whose experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.Mark Twain is a well-known American writer, whose experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.Part21. Xu comes from a working-class family. He enrolled in college last fall.Xu who comes from a working-class family enrolled in college last fall.2. The dean issued a bulletin. It said the library would remain open on weekends.The dean issued a bulletinwhich said the library would remain open on weekends.3. Last night was a windy night. The thunder roared. The wind blew a gale. The rain fell in torrents.Last night was a windy night, the thunder roaring, the wind blowing a gale. the rain falling in torrents.4. There are icicles on the trees. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night for there are icicles on the trees.5. He returned to his hometown. He had been away for twelve years. He looked in vain forthe familiar landmarks.After he had been away for twelve years, he returned to his hometown, looking in vain for the familiar landmarks.6. We have made some progress. We still have a long way to go.Although we have made some progress, we still have a long way to go.7. The sky was cloudless. The sun was shining brightly.The sky was cloudless and the sun was shining brightly.8. There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane. About one third of them were foreigners.There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane, about one third of whom were foreigners.9. The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child. Her mother was a famous pianist.The girl whose mother was a famous pianist began to learn to play the piano when she was a child.10. Napoleon was born in 1769. At that time Corsica had just been acquired by France. Napoleon was born in 1769 when Corsica had just been acquired by France.11. She appeared on the stage. A stormy applause broke forth.When she appeared on the stage, a stormy applause broke forth.12. The gypsies are really a nomadic people from India. They migrated into Europe. Once they were thought to be Egyptians.The gypsies once who were thought to be Egyptians are really a nomadic people from India. They migrated into Europe. .13. The new workers are young and inexperienced. They are eager to learn from the veteran workers.The new workers are young and inexperienced so they are eager to learn from the veteran workers.14. It was a poor quarter. There were a lot of small huts. They had mud walls and straw roofs. They dotted a hillside.It was a poor quarter. There were a lot of small huts which had mud walls and straw roofs, dotting a hillside.15. He heard that his father was ill. He was anxious to go home to see him. He went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.He heard that his father was ill. He was anxious to go home to see him so he went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.Part31. She began to speak very fast at the meeting at ten o’clock.She spoke very fast at the 10 o’clock meeting.2. Bernard Shaw was one of the best-known playwrights.… of Britain in the 19-20th centuries.3. The houses were mere shanties, and rags were stuffed in the cracks and holes.… were mere shanties, with rags stuffed in the cracks and holes.4. I read the novel on the train, which did not interest me at all.On the train I read the novel which did not interest me at all.5. A Well-dressed man admitted us to the house, and we later learned that he was a thief.We were admitted to the house by a well-dressed man, who was a thief as we learned later.6. I lost some important documents and found them three days later. The police had helped me.… and/but found them three days later with the help of the police.7. We entered the shop, and a saleswoman greeted us, and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves, and the prices were quite reasonable, and a lot of customers were buying them.A saleswoman greeted us as we entered the shop. On the shelves were all kinds of shoes at quite reasonable prices, attracting a lot of customers/buyers.8. Tell Helen, if she is at home, I will come to see her.Tell Helen I will come to see her when she is in.9. Listening attentively, a faulty sound was heard.Listening attentively, I heard a faulty sound.10. On entering the room, no one was seen.On entering the room, I saw no one.11. Fred is energetic, capable, and a man you can rely on.Fred is energetic, capable, and reliable.12. The children promised to be careful and that they would return home early.…promised they would be careful and return home early.13. Dickens’s novels offer no solution to the social injustices he ex poses in them.Dickens offers no solution to the social injustices in his novels.14. My watch is either fast or yours is slow.Either my watch is fast or yours is slow.15. Glancing out of the window, a beautiful view attracted my attention.…, I was attr acted by a beautiful view.16. He nearly finished reading ten books during the vacation.He finished reading nearly 10 books in the vacation.17. If interested in painting, a course can be taken at the evening school.…, you can take…18. She said that she would come if she could, but not to wait for her.…, but we need not wait for her.19. To tell my friend the good news the letter was posted at once.… the good news I posted the letter at once.20. I will go to the lecture, for I like his poems.…, for I like the poems by the speaker.Part41. In the year 1840 the Opium War broke out.In 1840 the Opium War broke out.2. There are more books in their library than in our library.Their library has moor books than ours.3. He returned back home after he graduated from college.He returned home after graduation from college.4. We planned to meet just before sunrise very early in the morning.We planned to meet just before sunrise.5. The cause of the flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring.The cause of the flood was the heavy rain in later spring.6. He was asked to repeat the sentence again.He was asked to repeat the sentence.7. I play badminton equally as well as my brother.I play badminton as well as my brother.8. It seemed to his friends that his attitude was of a puzzling nature.… that his attitude was puzzling.9. These watermelons are large in size and sweet in taste.… are large and sweet.10. He did not tell the truth with an honest attitude.He did not tell the truth.11. There are a number of students who want to join the drama club.A number of students want to join the drama club.12. He was kind enough to let me share the same umbrella with him.He was so kind as to let me share his umbrella.13. Zhao was the person who was elected the representative of the class by the whole class. Zhao was elected the representative of the class.14. At the present time I am taking the course of World History and in addition a course in geography too.At present I am taking the course of World History and a course in geography.15. The plane circled around the airport for about ten minutes or so and then disappeared and could no longer be seen.After circling the airport for about 10 minutes, the plane disappeared.16. What I am trying to say is that in my opinion he has not done his work very well and it needs improving.What I am trying to say is that he has not done his work well.17. I would like you to consider the question of whether or not you will let our journal publish your recent article on women scientists in China.I would like you to consider whether our journal could publish you article on women scientists in China.18. Owing to the fact that he had missed many lectures, he was aware that it would be possible for him to fail the exam.Sin ce he had …, he was ware of the possibility of his failing the exam.19. You must first work out an outline for your paper, and then after you have done that, you need to collect all kinds of material to support your point of view.You must work out an outline first, then collect enough materials to support your point.20. In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing, a thing that occurs every day. In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing.21. He is not only a good pianist, but also a good singer as well.He is not only a good pianist, but also a good singer.22. This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials repeatedly.This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials.23. As a rule, students are usually not allowed to take books out of this reading room.Students are usually not allowed to take the books out of this reading room.24. According to the speaker, it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production and he has no doubt about it.According to the speaker, it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production.25. One reason why people are well informed in this country is because of the fact that there are many newspapers which can easily be bought or subscribed to.One of the reasons why people in this county are well informed is that there are many newspapers easily available.26. Statistics show that in the decade from 1980 to 1990 enrollments at this school doubled: in 1990 there were twice as many students as in 1980.Statistics show that from 1980 to 1990 enrollments at this school doubled.27. There are so many inexperienced unskilled workers without training in a particular job that production of the factory has been affected.So many workers are unskilled that the production has been affected.28. There are about 50 patients or so in this ward, among whom many are being given acupuncture treatment.Many of the 50 patients in this ward are treated by acupuncture / are taking acupuncture treatment.29. His name is called James Williams.His name is … / He is … / This is …30. Whatever he does, he works seriously with great care, and does his best so as to do it well. Whatever he does, he does his best.。
大学 英语写作手册 课后题
Part 11. Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure, he had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure, who had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.2. When I woke up I saw him asleep in bed, I had not heard him when he came back. Because I had been sleeping soundly.When I woke up I saw him asleep in bed, I did not hear him when he came back. Because I had been sleeping soundly.3. Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, that was why he got higher pay than others.Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, which was why he got higher pay than others.4. No student could answer that question, even Xiao Yao, who was usually quick in answering questions, was silent.No student could answer that question, even Xiao Yao who was usually quick in answering questions was silent.5. Lin looks like Li, however, they are not related.Lin looks like Li, but they are not related.6. The old man hunched forward. His head tilted at an angle. His eyes half closed, looking very sleepy.The old man hunched forward. His head tilted at an angle. His eyes half closed, looks very sleepy.7. The work was well planned, everybody worked with great enthusiasm, thus, they over fulfilled their quota.The work was well planned, everybody worked with great enthusiasm, so they over fulfilled their quota.8. Mark Twain, a well-known American writer, whose experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.Mark Twain is a well-known American writer, whose experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.Part21. Xu comes from a working-class family. He enrolled in college last fall.Xu who comes from a working-class family enrolled in college last fall.2. The dean issued a bulletin. It said the library would remain open on weekends.The dean issued a bulletinwhich said the library would remain open on weekends.3. Last night was a windy night. The thunder roared. The wind blew a gale. The rain fell in torrents.Last night was a windy night, the thunder roaring, the wind blowing a gale. the rain falling in torrents.4. There are icicles on the trees. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night for there are icicles on the trees.5. He returned to his hometown. He had been away for twelve years. He looked in vain for thefamiliar landmarks.After he had been away for twelve years, he returned to his hometown, looking in vain for the familiar landmarks.6. We have made some progress. We still have a long way to go.Although we have made some progress, we still have a long way to go.7. The sky was cloudless. The sun was shining brightly.The sky was cloudless and the sun was shining brightly.8. There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane. About one third of them were foreigners.There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane, about one third of whom were foreigners.9. The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child. Her mother was a famous pianist.The girl whose mother was a famous pianist began to learn to play the piano when she was a child.10. Napoleon was born in 1769. At that time Corsica had just been acquired by France. Napoleon was born in 1769 when Corsica had just been acquired by France.11. She appeared on the stage. A stormy applause broke forth.When she appeared on the stage, a stormy applause broke forth.12. The gypsies are really a nomadic people from India. They migrated into Europe. Once they were thought to be Egyptians.The gypsies once who were thought to be Egyptians are really a nomadic people from India. They migrated into Europe. .13. The new workers are young and inexperienced. They are eager to learn from the veteran workers.The new workers are young and inexperienced so they are eager to learn from the veteran workers.14. It was a poor quarter. There were a lot of small huts. They had mud walls and straw roofs. They dotted a hillside.It was a poor quarter. There were a lot of small huts which had mud walls and straw roofs, dotting a hillside.15. He heard that his father was ill. He was anxious to go home to see him. He went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.He heard that his father was ill. He was anxious to go home to see him so he went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.Part31. She began to speak very fast at the meeting at ten o’clock.She spoke very fast at the 10 o’clock meeting.2. Bernard Shaw was one of the best-known playwrights.… of Britain in the 19-20th centuries.3. The houses were mere shanties, and rags were stuffed in the cracks and holes.… were mere shanties, with rags stuffed in the cracks and holes.4. I read the novel on the train, which did not interest me at all.On the train I read the novel which did not interest me at all.5. A Well-dressed man admitted us to the house, and we later learned that he was a thief.We were admitted to the house by a well-dressed man, who was a thief as we learned later.6. I lost some important documents and found them three days later. The police had helped me. … and/but found them three days later with the help of the police.7. We entered the shop, and a saleswoman greeted us, and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves, and the prices were quite reasonable, and a lot of customers were buying them.A saleswoman greeted us as we entered the shop. On the shelves were all kinds of shoes at quite reasonable prices, attracting a lot of customers/buyers.8. Tell Helen, if she is at home, I will come to see her.Tell Helen I will come to see her when she is in.9. Listening attentively, a faulty sound was heard.Listening attentively, I heard a faulty sound.10. On entering the room, no one was seen.On entering the room, I saw no one.11. Fred is energetic, capable, and a man you can rely on.Fred is energetic, capable, and reliable.12. The children promised to be careful and that they would return home early.…promised they would be careful and return home early.13. Dickens’s novels offer no solution to the social injustices he ex poses in them.Dickens offers no solution to the social injustices in his novels.14. My watch is either fast or yours is slow.Either my watch is fast or yours is slow.15. Glancing out of the window, a beautiful view attracted my attention.…, I was attr acted by a beautiful view.16. He nearly finished reading ten books during the vacation.He finished reading nearly 10 books in the vacation.17. If interested in painting, a course can be taken at the evening school.…, you can take…18. She said that she would come if she could, but not to wait for her.…, but we need not wait for her.19. To tell my friend the good news the letter was posted at once.… the good news I posted the letter at once.20. I will go to the lecture, for I like his poems.…, for I like the poems by the speaker.Part41. In the year 1840 the Opium War broke out.In 1840 the Opium War broke out.2. There are more books in their library than in our library.Their library has moor books than ours.3. He returned back home after he graduated from college.He returned home after graduation from college.4. We planned to meet just before sunrise very early in the morning.We planned to meet just before sunrise.5. The cause of the flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring.The cause of the flood was the heavy rain in later spring.6. He was asked to repeat the sentence again.He was asked to repeat the sentence.7. I play badminton equally as well as my brother.I play badminton as well as my brother.8. It seemed to his friends that his attitude was of a puzzling nature.… that his attitude was puzzling.9. These watermelons are large in size and sweet in taste.… are large and sweet.10. He did not tell the truth with an honest attitude.He did not tell the truth.11. There are a number of students who want to join the drama club.A number of students want to join the drama club.12. He was kind enough to let me share the same umbrella with him.He was so kind as to let me share his umbrella.13. Zhao was the person who was elected the representative of the class by the whole class.Zhao was elected the representative of the class.14. At the present time I am taking the course of World History and in addition a course in geography too.At present I am taking the course of World History and a course in geography.15. The plane circled around the airport for about ten minutes or so and then disappeared and could no longer be seen.After circling the airport for about 10 minutes, the plane disappeared.16. What I am trying to say is that in my opinion he has not done his work very well and it needs improving.What I am trying to say is that he has not done his work well.17. I would like you to consider the question of whether or not you will let our journal publish your recent article on women scientists in China.I would like you to consider whether our journal could publish you article on women scientists in China.18. Owing to the fact that he had missed many lectures, he was aware that it would be possible for him to fail the exam.Sin ce he had …, he was ware of the possibility of his failing the exam.19. You must first work out an outline for your paper, and then after you have done that, you need to collect all kinds of material to support your point of view.You must work out an outline first, then collect enough materials to support your point.20. In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing, a thing that occurs every day. In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing.21. He is not only a good pianist, but also a good singer as well.He is not only a good pianist, but also a good singer.22. This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials repeatedly.This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials.23. As a rule, students are usually not allowed to take books out of this reading room.Students are usually not allowed to take the books out of this reading room.24. According to the speaker, it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production and he has no doubt about it.According to the speaker, it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production.25. One reason why people are well informed in this country is because of the fact that there are many newspapers which can easily be bought or subscribed to.One of the reasons why people in this county are well informed is that there are many newspapers easily available.26. Statistics show that in the decade from 1980 to 1990 enrollments at this school doubled: in 1990 there were twice as many students as in 1980.Statistics show that from 1980 to 1990 enrollments at this school doubled.27. There are so many inexperienced unskilled workers without training in a particular job that production of the factory has been affected.So many workers are unskilled that the production has been affected.28. There are about 50 patients or so in this ward, among whom many are being given acupuncture treatment.Many of the 50 patients in this ward are treated by acupuncture / are taking acupuncture treatment.29. His name is called James Williams.His name is … / He is … / This is …30. Whatever he does, he works seriously with great care, and does his best so as to do it well. Whatever he does, he does his best.第一题改错五个句子（发给你的文档里的句子挑五个，你到时候用WORD文档查找功能帮我找下，文档里每个题号上下俩句子，上边是错的我的题，下边是改了的答案，你给我念答案就行）第二题同义词选择填空十个词给一个词然后出俩选项看哪个意思和它一样到时候题干里的生词我觉得可能得联系上下文理解，应该不单单只是词义，不过不管了，到时候我把题干和AB俩选项的词告诉你，你查完告诉我A还是B就行第三题第四题第五题我自己搞定但是有可能会有不会的词，发下卷来我先把不会的词都标出来，你帮我查一下，拜托啦魁姐第六题是写作两个段落给俩时事热点围绕热点写一段话，不用写作文，一段话就行。
丁往道《英语写作手册(中文版)》复习笔记(措辞)【圣才出品】
第二章措辞Ⅰ. 词的类型据语体风格，常用的词（规范英语词汇）可分为三类：正式的、一般的、非正式的。
1. 正式词汇（又称作学术性的词、文雅的词或“大”词）（1）适用文体正式文体，如学术性或理论性著作、政治和法律文件，以及正式的演讲或报告。
（2）特点多有三个以上的音节，多数源于希腊或拉丁文。
下面这段文章中包含一些体现正式文体的词汇：There is nothing new in the recognition, within a given language, of a distinction between common usage and uses of the language for more restricted purposes and often enough, perhaps characteristically, more elevated purposes. The monolithic nature of English is not questioned when literary essayists like Emerson contrast poetry and common speech. The latter is recognized in America to be the proper subject for the investigation of linguists who, however, now show some incipient inclination to investigate poetry, too, and other noncasual utterances in a given language.—C. F. Voegelin 正式的或学术性的词汇有：recognition, characteristically, elevated, monolithic,investigation, incipient, inclination, noncasual, utterances等。
英语写作手册 PART THREE 参考答案
《英语写作手册》 PART THREE 参考答案I. Read the following and say what kind of sentence each is (loose, periodic, balanced):1. P2. P3. P4. L5. B6. P7. P8. P9. B 10. BII. Read the following, point out the mistakes and make necessary corrections:1. Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventures, for he had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.2. When I woke up, I saw him asleep in bed. But I had not heard him when he came back because I had been sleeping soundly.3. Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, so he got higher pay than others.4. No student could answer that question, including Yao. Though he was usually quick in answering questions, he was silent.5. Lin looks like Li; however, they are not related.6. The old man hunched forward, with his head tilting at an angle, eyes half closed, looking very sleepy.7. Because their work was well planned, everybody worked with great enthusiasm, and they over fulfilled their quota.8. Mark Twain’s experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.Ш. Rewrite the following by putting the short sentences into complex sentences, or sentences with participial, prepositional, or other phrases:1. Xu comes from a working-class family, and he enrolled in college last fall.Xu who enrolled in college last fall comes from a working-class family.Xu, who enrolled in college last fall, comes from a working-class family.Though Xu comes from a working-class family, he enrolled in college last fall.Xu who comes from a working-class family enrolled in college last fall.Xu, who comes from a working-class family, enrolled in college last fall.2. The dean issued a bulletin that the library would remain open on weekends.3. Last night was a wild night, the thunder roaring, the wind blowing a gale, and the rain falling in torrents.4. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night because there are icicles on the trees.5. He returned to his hometown that he had been away from for twelve years and looked in vain for the familiar landmarks.Because he had been away for twelve years, he returned to his hometown and looked in vain for the familiar landmarks.6. We have made some progress, but we still have a long we to go.Though we have made some progress, we still have a long we to go.7. The sky was cloudless, the sun shining brightly.8. There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane, about one third of whom were foreigners.9. The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child as her mother was a famous pianist.10. Napoleon was born in 1769 when Corsica had just been acquired by France.11. A stormy applause broke forth as soon as / when she appeared on the stage.12. The gypsies, who were once thought to be Egyptians migrating into Europe,are really a nomadic people from India.13. Because the new workers are young and inexperienced, they are eager to learn from the veteran workers.14. It was a poor quarter with a lot of small huts, dotting a hillside with mud walls and straw roofs.15. Hearing that his father was ill, he was anxious to go home to see him, so he went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.2.To omit unnecessary elements3.To connect related words/ parts properly1. She began to speak at the meeting at ten o’clock.2. Bernard Shaw was one of the best-known playwrights in the world.3. The houses were mere shanties with rags stuffed in the cracks and holes.4. The novel I read on the train didn’t interest me at all.5. The well-dressed man who admitted us to the house was later learned to bea thief.6. I lost some important documents. With the help of the police, I found them three days later.7. When we entered the shop, a saleswoman greeted us. We saw all kinds of shores on the shelves. Because the prices were quite reasonable, a lot of customers were buying them.8. Tell Helen I will come to see her if she is at home.9. Listening attentively, I heard a faulty sound.10. On entering the room, I saw no one.11. Fred is so energetic and capable that you can rely on him.12. The children promised to be careful and return home early.13. Dickens’s novels offer no solution to the social injustices that he exposes.Dickens offers no solution to the social injustices that he exposes in novels.14. Either my watch is fast, or yours is slow.15. Glancing out of the window, I was attracted by a beautiful view.16. He finished reading ten books during the vacation.17. If interested in painting, you can take a course at the evening school.18. She said that she would come if she could. She also told us not to wait for her if she didn’t come.19. I told my friend the good news at once after I posted the letter.I told my friend the good news that the letter was posted at once.20. I like his poems, so I will go to his lecture.I will go to the lecture because/if I like his poems.V. Revise the following sentences. Try to make them concise.Ways to achieve conciseness1.Avoiding repetition2.Deleting unrelated / unnecessary words or phrases3.Changing the sentence structure1. In 1840, the Opium War broke out.2. There are more books in their library than in ours.3. He returned home after he graduated from college.4. We planned to meet just before sunrise.5. The flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring.6. He was asked to repeat the sentence.7. I play badminton as well as my brother.8. It seemed to his friends that his attitude was puzzling.9. These watermelons are large and sweet.10. He did not tell the truth.11. A number of students want to join the drama club.12. He was kind enough to let me share the umbrella.13. Zhao was elected the representative of the class by the whole class.14. At present I am taking the course of World History and a course in geography.15. The plane circled the airport for about ten minutes and then disappeared.16. In my opinion, he has not done his work very well.17. I would like you to consider whether or not you will publish your recent article on women scientists in China.18. Because he had missed many lectures, he was aware that he would fail the exam.19. You must first work out an outline for your paper, and then collect all kinds of materials to support your point of view.20. In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing.21. He is not only a good pianist but also a good singer.22. This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials.This pretty actress appears in TV serials repeatedly.23. As a rule, students are not allowed to take books out of this reading-room.24. According to the speaker, it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production.25. One reason why people are well informed in this country is that many newspapers can easily be bought or subscribed to.26. Statistics show that from 1980-1990 enrollments at this school doubled.27. There are so many inexperienced workers that production of the factory has been affected.28. About 50 patients in this ward are being given acupuncture treatment.29. His name is James Williams.30. Whatever he does, he works with great care.VI. Rewrite the following sentences, emphasizing the man idea in each.Ways to achieve emphasis:1.Inversion2.Negative-positive statements3.Placing: beginning/ end4.Repetition5.Subordination6.Emphatic words / phrases / sentences7.Alliteration1. Huang is over two meters tall, and he is the tallest man of the team.2. After he went bankrupt, he lost interest in social position, reputation, life itself, and even friends.3. He decided to take the job, which was something unexpected.4. Under no circumstances will China be the first to use nuclear weapons.5. Yang alone can do the work, though there are twenty students in the class.6. As a result of reform and the open policy, China has changed a great deal during the past 14 years.7. According to newspaper reports, she was the first Chinese woman who had wona gold medal for figure skating in an international contest.8. Robert attempted to do all the things that the sailor member of the crew usually did while serving as a cabin boy on the ship.9. Among his neighbors was Mrs. Jones, the famous writer.10. With the teacher’s patient help, the students mad good progress.11. She often helps her class to improve their pronunciation.12. Though there are few mistakes in the language of the composition, it is not very good because the content is not interesting.VII. Rewrite the following passage, giving the sentences some variety in length and structure.Ways to achieve variety1.To use short sentences between long ones2.To use simple sentences between compound and complex ones3.To use periodic sentences between loose ones4.To use occasional question, command, or exclamation among statements(Omitted.)。
丁往道《英语写作手册(中文版)考研真题详解【圣才出品】
丁往道《英语写作手册（中文版）考研真题详解◆应用文题1[英语一2006研]Directions:You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area.Write a letter to the department concerned,asking them to help find a candidate.You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.Write your letter in no less than100words.Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter;use“Li Ming”instead.Do not write the address.(10points)【审题构思】本题要求写一封书信给希望工程，希望他们为写信人推荐一个孩子接受写信人的资助。
因此在内容上写作应该包含三大部分：一、自我介绍以及表明写信的目的。
二、写信人对资助对象条件的具体说明。
三、结束语。
文章用语应偏正式，行文清晰，简洁，要点突出。
此外，还要注意书信的格式：称呼，正文，和落款。
【参考范文】【行文点评】（1）开篇做出自我介绍，表明写信人的身份，以及家庭背景。
（2）so...that...结构，陈述写信缘由。
（3）用who和whose引导的定语从句说明希望资助的对象。
（4）适用would like to表述写信人的具体捐助方式。
（5）表示感谢及希望收信人尽快回信的愿望。
题2[英语一2007研]Directions:Write a letter to your university library,making suggestions for improving its service.You should write about100words on ANSWER SHEET2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the e“Li Ming”instead.Do not write the address.(10points)【审题构思】本题要求考生写一封建议信给学校图书馆管理员，以帮助他们改善图书馆的服务质量。
英语写作手册 PART THREE 参考答案
《英语写作手册》 PART THREE 参考答案I. Read the following and say what kind of sentence each is (loose, periodic, balanced): p.721. P2. P3. P4. L5. B6. P7. P8. P9. B 10. BII. Read the following, point out the mistakes and make necessary corrections: p.731. Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventures, for he had been a member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.2. When I woke up, I saw him asleep in bed. But I had not heard him when he came back because I had been sleeping soundly.3. Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, so he got higher pay than others.4. No student could answer that question, including Yao. Though he was usually quick in answering questions, he was silent.5. Lin looks like Li; however, they are not related.6. The old man hunched forward, with his head tilting at an angle, eyes half closed, looking very sleepy.7. Because their work was well planned, everybody worked with great enthusiasm, and they over fulfilled their quota.8. Mark Twain’s experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.Ш. Rewrite the following by putting the short sentences into complex sentences, or sentences with participial, prepositional, or other phrases: (p.74-75)1. Xu comes from a working-class family, and he enrolled in college last fall.Xu who enrolled in college last fall comes from a working-class family.Xu, who enrolled in college last fall, comes from a working-class family.Though Xu comes from a working-class family, he enrolled in college last fall.Xu who comes from a working-class family enrolled in college last fall.Xu, who comes from a working-class family, enrolled in college last fall.2. The dean issued a bulletin that the library would remain open on weekends.3. Last night was a wild night, the thunder roaring, the wind blowing a gale, and the rain falling in torrents.4. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night because there are icicles on the trees.5. He returned to his hometown that he had been away from for twelve years and looked in vain for the familiar landmarks.Because he had been away for twelve years, he returned to his hometown and looked in vain for the familiar landmarks.6. We have made some progress, but we still have a long we to go.Though we have made some progress, we still have a long we to go.7. The sky was cloudless, the sun shining brightly.8. There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane, about one third of whom were foreigners.9. The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child as her mother was a famous pianist.10. Napoleon was born in 1769 when Corsica had just been acquired by France.11. A stormy applause broke forth as soon as / when she appeared on the stage.12. The gypsies, who were once thought to be Egyptians migrating into Europe, are really a nomadic people from India.13. Because the new workers are young and inexperienced, they are eager to learn from the veteran workers.14. It was a poor quarter with a lot of small huts, dotting a hillside with mud walls and straw roofs.15. Hearing that his father was ill, he was anxious to go home to see him, so he went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.2.To omit unnecessary elements3.To connect related words/ parts properly1. She began to speak at the meeting at ten o’clock.2. Bernard Shaw was one of the best-known playwrights in the world.3. The houses were mere shanties with rags stuffed in the cracks and holes.4. The novel I read on the train didn’t interest me at all.5. The well-dressed man who admitted us to the house was later learned to be a thief.6. I lost some important documents. With the help of the police, I found them three days later.7. When we entered the shop, a saleswoman greeted us. We saw all kinds of shores on the shelves. Because the prices were quite reasonable, a lot of customers were buying them.8. Tell Helen I will come to see her if she is at home.9. Listening attentively, I heard a faulty sound.10. On entering the room, I saw no one.11. Fred is so energetic and capable that you can rely on him.12. The children promised to be careful and return home early.13. Dickens’s novels offer no solution to the social injustices that he exposes.Dickens offers no solution to the social injustices that he exposes in novels.14. Either my watch is fast, or yours is slow.15. Glancing out of the window, I was attracted by a beautiful view.16. He finished reading ten books during the vacation.17. If interested in painting, you can take a course at the evening school.18. She said that she would come if she could. She also told us not to wait for her if she didn’t come.19. I told my friend the good news at once after I posted the letter.I told my friend the good news that the letter was posted at once.20. I like his poems, so I will go to his lecture.I will go to the lecture because/if I like his poems.V. Revise the following sentences. Try to make them concise. (p.78-77)Ways to achieve conciseness1.Avoiding repetition2.Deleting unrelated / unnecessary words or phrases3.Changing the sentence structure1. In 1840, the Opium War broke out.2. There are more books in their library than in ours.3. He returned home after he graduated from college.4. We planned to meet just before sunrise.5. The flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring.6. He was asked to repeat the sentence.7. I play badminton as well as my brother.8. It seemed to his friends that his attitude was puzzling.9. These watermelons are large and sweet.10. He did not tell the truth.11. A number of students want to join the drama club.12. He was kind enough to let me share the umbrella.13. Zhao was elected the representative of the class by the whole class.14. At present I am taking the course of World History and a course in geography.15. The plane circled the airport for about ten minutes and then disappeared.16. In my opinion, he has not done his work very well.17. I would like you to consider whether or not you will publish your recent article on women scientists in China.18. Because he had missed many lectures, he was aware that he would fail the exam.19. You must first work out an outline for your paper, and then collect all kinds of materialsto support your point of view.20. In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing.21. He is not only a good pianist but also a good singer.22. This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials.This pretty actress appears in TV serials repeatedly.23. As a rule, students are not allowed to take books out of this reading-room.24. According to the speaker, it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production.25. One reason why people are well informed in this country is that many newspapers can easily be bought or subscribed to.26. Statistics show that from 1980-1990 enrollments at this school doubled.27. There are so many inexperienced workers that production of the factory has been affected.28. About 50 patients in this ward are being given acupuncture treatment.29. His name is James Williams.30. Whatever he does, he works with great care.VI. Rewrite the following sentences, emphasizing the man idea in each. (p.78-79)Ways to achieve emphasis:1.Inversion2.Negative-positive statements3.Placing: beginning/ end4.Repetition5.Subordination6.Emphatic words / phrases / sentences7.Alliteration1. Huang is over two meters tall, and he is the tallest man of the team.2. After he went bankrupt, he lost interest in social position, reputation, life itself, and even friends.3. He decided to take the job, which was something unexpected.4. Under no circumstances will China be the first to use nuclear weapons.5. Yang alone can do the work, though there are twenty students in the class.6. As a result of reform and the open policy, China has changed a great deal during the past 14 years.7. According to newspaper reports, she was the first Chinese woman who had won a gold medal for figure skating in an international contest.8. Robert attempted to do all the things that the sailor member of the crew usually did while serving as a cabin boy on the ship.9. Among his neighbors was Mrs. Jones, the famous writer.10. With the teacher’s patient help, the students mad good progress.11. She often helps her class to improve their pronunciation.12. Though there are few mistakes in the language of the composition, it is not very good because the content is not interesting.VII. Rewrite the following passage, giving the sentences some variety in length and structure. (p.79-80)Ways to achieve variety1.To use short sentences between long ones2.To use simple sentences between compound and complex ones3.To use periodic sentences between loose ones4.To use occasional question, command, or exclamation among statements(Omitted.)。
英语写作手册中文版第三版
英语写作手册中文版第三版1、I have seldom seen my father（）pleased with my progress as he is now. [单选题] *A. so(正确答案)B. veryC. tooD. rather2、Ships can carry more goods than _____ means of transport. [单选题] *A. the otherB. anotherC. any other(正确答案)D. any3、( ) My mother told me _____ in bed. [单选题] *A. not readB. not readingC. don’t readD. not to read(正确答案)4、He was born in Canada, but he has made China his _______. [单选题] *A. familyB. addressC. houseD. home(正确答案)5、Our school is beautiful. How about _______? [单选题] *A. theirs(正确答案)B. theirC. theyD. them6、The black coal there shows a sharp（）white snow. [单选题] *A. contract withB. content withC. contact toD. contrast to(正确答案)7、—______ is the concert ticket?—It’s only 160 yuan.（）[单选题] *A. How manyB How much(正确答案)C. How oftenD. How long8、I gave John a present but he gave me nothing_____. [单选题] *A.in advanceB.in vainC.in return(正确答案)D.in turn9、I think ______ time with my friends is fun for me.（）[单选题] *A. spendB. spendC. spending(正确答案)D. spent10、Her （）for writing was that she wished women to get the right to higher education. [单选题] *A. motivation(正确答案)B. motivateC. effectD. concentration11、Since the war their country has taken many important steps to improve its economic situation. [单选题] *A. 制定B. 提出C. 讨论D. 采取(正确答案)12、--Don’t _______ too late, or you will feel tired in class.--I won’t, Mum. [单选题] *A. call upB. wake upC. stay up(正确答案)D. get up13、Many people believe that _________one has, _______ one is, but actually it is not true. [单选题] *A. the more money ; the happier(正确答案)B. the more money ; the more happyC. the less money ; the happierD. the less money ; the more happy14、The car _______ after forty minutes driving, so he didn’t have the interview on time. [单选题] *A. broke down(正确答案)B. broke inC. broke outD. broke up15、21．Design a travel guide for Shanghai! ________ the competition and be the winner! [单选题] *A．JoinB．AttendC．EnterD．Take part in (正确答案)16、_____ of the land in this area _____ covered with forest. [单选题] *A. Two-fifth; isB. Two fifth; areC. Two fifths; is(正确答案)D. Two fifths; are17、4．—Let's fly a kite when you are ________ at the weekend.—Good idea. [单选题] *A．warmB．kindC．smallD．free(正确答案)18、—______ is it from your home to the bookstore?—About 15 kilometers.（）[单选题] *A. How far(正确答案)B. How muchC. How longD. How many19、If you want to _______, you’d better eat more healthy food and do more exercise. [单选题] *A. keep fatB. keep calmC. keep healthy(正确答案)D. keep on20、_______ travelers come to visit our city every year. [单选题] *A. Hundred ofB. Hundreds of(正确答案)C. Five HundredsD. Five hundred?of21、8．—Will she have a picnic next week?—________. And she is ready. [单选题] * A．Yes, she doesB．No, she doesn'tC．Yes, she will(正确答案)D．No, she won't22、I _______ no idea of where the zoo is. [单选题] *A. thinkB. getC. have(正确答案)D. take23、I arrived _____ the city _____ 9:00 am _______ April [单选题] *A. at, in, atB. to, on, atC. in, or, atD. in, at, on(正确答案)24、—Where ______ you ______ for your last winter holiday?—Paris. We had a great time. （）[单选题] *A. did; go(正确答案)B. do; goC. are; goingD. can; go25、When you’ve finished with that book, don’t forget to put it back one the shelf, ____? [单选题] *A. do youB. don’t youC. will you(正确答案)D. won’t you26、In order to find the missing child, villagers _______ all they can over the past five hours. [单选题] *A. didB. doC. had doneD. have been doing(正确答案)27、My home is about _______ away from the school. [单选题] *A. three hundred metreB. three hundreds metresC. three hundred metres(正确答案)D. three hundreds metre28、Chinese people spend _____ money on travelling today as they did ten years ago. [单选题] *A. more than twiceB. as twice muchC. twice as much(正确答案)D. twice more than29、The people’s Republic of China _______ on October 1, 1 [单选题] *A. foundB. was founded(正确答案)C. is foundedD. was found30、The blue shirt looks _______ better on you than the red one. [单选题] *A. quiteB. moreC. much(正确答案)D. most。
英语写作手册课后练习答案 丁往道
英语写作手册丁往道课后练习答案P74III. Rewrite the following sentences into compound or complex sentences.1. Xu,, enrolled in college last fall， comes from a working-classfamily,2. The dean issued a bulletin saying that the library would remain open on weekends.3. Last night was wild, with the thunder roaring, gale blowing and torrents falling.4. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night, because there are icicles on the trees.5. He looked in vain for the familiar landmarks when he returned to his hometown where he had been away for twelve years.6. Although we have made some progress, we still have a long way to go.7. In the cloudless sky, the sun was shining brightly. 8. Among over two hundred passengers on board the plane, about one third were foreigners.9. The girl, whose mother was a famous pianist, began to learn to play the piano when she was a child.10. Napoleon was born in 1769, when Corsica had just been acquired by France.1英语写作手册丁往道课后练习答案11. When she appeared on the stage, a stormy applause broke forth.12. The gypsies, once thought to be Egyptians, are really a nomadic people who migrated into Europe from India.13. The new workers, young and inexperienced, are eager to learnfrom the veteran workers.14. At the poor quarter, a lot of small huts with mud walls andstraw roofs dotted the hillside.15. Hearing that his father was ill, he was so anxious to go home to see him that he went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket IV The following sentences are not unified or coherent. Try to improve them.1. She began to speak very fast at the ten o'clock meeting yesterday. Or At ten o'clock yesterday ，she began to speak very fast at the meeting.• 2. Bernard Shaw was one of the best-known British playwrights.• 3. The houses were mere shanties, with rags stuffed in the cracks and holes.• 4. The novel I read on the train did not interest me at all.• 5. We later learned that the well-dressed man who admitted us tothe house was a thief.2英语写作手册丁往道课后练习答案• 6. I lost some important documents, which were found three days later with the help of the police.• 7. A sales woman greeted us when we entered the shop. There all kinds of shoes on the shelves were quite reasonable in prices, and a lot of customers were buying them.I will go to see her. • 8. Tell Helen，if she is at home，• 9. Listening attentively, you will hear a faulty sound.• 10. On entering the room, I saw no one.• 11. Fred is energetic, capable and reliable.• 12. The children promised to be careful and return home early.• 13. Dickens offered no solution to the social injustices exposedin his novels.• 14. Either my watch is fast or yours is slow.• 15. Glancing out of the window, my attention was attracted by the beautiful view.• 16. He finished reading nearly ten books during the vacation.• 17. If interested in painting, you can take a course at the evening school.• 18. She said that she would come if she could, but we didn’t have to wait for her.• 19. To tell my friend the good news, I posted the letter at once.• 20. I will go to the lecture, for I like the speaker’s poems.3英语写作手册丁往道课后练习答案V. Revise the following sentences. Try to make them concise. 1 In1840 the Opium War broke out.2 There are more books in their library than in ours.3 He returned home after graduating from college.4 We planned to meet just before sunriseor We planned to meet very early in the morning. 5 The cause of the flood was the heavy rain in late spring. Or The flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring. 6 He was asked to repeat the sentence.7 I play badminton as well as my brother.8 It seemed to his friends that his attitude was puzzling. 9 These watermelons are large and sweet.10 He did not tell the truth.11 A number of students want to join the drama club. 12 He was kind enough to let me share his umbrella. 13 Zhao was elected the representative of the class by the whole class.14 At present, I am taking the course of World History and geography.15 The plane circled the airport for about ten minutes and then disappeared.4英语写作手册丁往道课后练习答案16 What I am trying to say is that he has not done his work verywell.17 I would like you to consider whether you will let our journal publish your recent article on women scientists in China. 18 Owing tothe fact that he had missed many lectures, it would be possible for himto fail the exam.19 You must first work out an outline for your paper, and then, you need to collect all kinds of material to support your point of view. 20In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing. 21 He isnot only a good pianist, but also a good singer. 22 This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials. 23 As a rule, students are not allowed to take books out of this reading-room.24 According to the speaker, it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production.25 One of the reasons why people are well informed in this countryis that many newspapers can be easily bought or subscribed to. 26 Statistics show that from 1980 to 1990 enrollment at this school doubled.27 There are so many inexperienced workers that production of the factory has been affected.28 There are about 50 patients in this ward, many of whom are being5英语写作手册丁往道课后练习答案given acupuncture treatment.29 His name is James Williams.30 Whatever he does, he works seriously and does his best.6。
写作教程2 课后答案
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P2 . PART1Advantages : It is very convenient . You can make a call whenever and wherever you want to.It is especially helpful in an emergency . It saves time .You don't have to search for or await the turn for the public phone.You can always be reached when you are needed by others.In an information age ,it can help you to get the information you want in the quickest way.It may help you to grasp any chance to succeed.You can play games and surf the net through the phone........Disadvantages : It is quite expensiveIts radiation is harmful to healthAnswering calls in public places such as on a bus is embarrassingMaking or answering calls while driving is dangerousYou can always be reached by your parents or your bossIt may ring at the moment when you least want it toYou may receive calls from strangers or advertising companies and have to pay for them ..........P3. PART2have become increasingly violentis more and more important for young peopleis the kindest neighbour I have ever knownhas a profound effect on our healthP4. specificBritish English is different from American English in spellingis not a sentence, but a fragmentDifferent countries have different customsgeneral,too emotionalThe local food is tasteless and greasyP7. Approach 1: For one thing, they should balance science and non-science courses so that they do not have too many time-consuming labs.Approach 2:They should also try to get a mixture between subjects they find fairly easy and those that are difficult for them.Example 1: For instance,the student who dose well in history but expects to have a terrible time with calculus might plan on taking both in the same semester to balance the work load.Example 2: The student who dose not plan carefully and takes five tough courses the first term may wind up on scholastic probation.P11. 4 . Paragraph 1:All invention are either basic inventions or improvement on earlier inventions.Paragraph 2:There was a serious accident in the chemistry lab yesterday.Paragraph 3: Nutritional deficiency is a major problem of the elderly.5. Paragraph 1 : Topic sentence: 第一句无关句：Many people .....to each other. 和And nowadays,....more convenience.Paragraph 2: T S : 第一句无关句：I didn't st night 和 I heard that .... own children.排序： 2（1）First of all . (2) secondly (3)By and by (4) In addition (5)In shortP18 Paragraph B : Jack should not have taken the gymnastics course.he fell off the uneven bars and got a concussion.he sprained his ankle,after a bad landing off the balance beam.he broken the support beam in the basement of his parent's home,showing them his skills. he broke his thumb when he caught it on the bar the pommel horse.he fails the final exam in his gymnastics course.he failed to graduate due to the lack of two hours of physical education creditP19 T S: Some historians mark the course of the American Revolutionary War in three major periods.1. During the first phase of the conflict ,New English was the battleground,1)The Minutemen and the Redcoats fired the opening shots of the war at Lexington at dawn of April 19,1775 2) Shortly afterwards ,the New England colonists laid siege to Boston .the location of the British headquarters.the second phase of the war ,which began after the signing of the Declaration ,both the British and the American made important military gains.1)The British soldiers captured New York in the fall of 1776,and a year later they occupied Philadelphia.2)Meanwhile the Americans were able to seize New Jersey and Saratoga.fighting moved to the west and south during the lastphase.1) In 1778 and 1779 several battles occurred in Kentucky and Tennessee.2)Then two years later ,the final battle of the war was fought at Yorktown ,Virginia.P22 . 4: 排序：4 10 5 12 3 7 15 9 14 2 11 8 13 6 1T S： My family spent two fun-filled days at Disney World last year.P23. 5.(1)Then (2) morning (3)afternoon (4)Then (5)After that (6)when (7)already (8)afterP33. 3. 排序： 3614752 Relationship : Primarily, the organization of the paragraph represents movement in geographical space.P34 5. (1)into (2) crosses (3) In the center of (4) Outside (5)inside (6) On the front (7)over (8)down (9)lined with (10) At the rearP46 4. (1)with (2)while (3)slowly (4)Gradually (5)with (6)By this time (7)Suddenly (8)final (9) ending (10) applause5. Prepare and lay out food;make the special lanternsKeep dancing and singing overnightThrow the food and lanterns into a river or sea Watch the lanterns drifting wayP52 . T S : Working as a cook at the Venture Inn is the best job i have ever had.Reasons: 1. I have a steady fort-hour workweek ,along with a chance for overtime if i want it.can eat whatever i like ,and i get a chance to take steak and sometimes lobster home to my wife. don't have any big hassle with my boss;if i have to report late or skip a day now and then,all she asks is that i call her in advance4. They pay is very good ,averaging close to $200 the weeks that i work overtime5. The job is seasonal.P57. 3. T S : Working in an apple plant was the worst job i ever had.Examples :1: First of all,the work was physically hardSpecific details:1)For ten hours a night ,i took cartons that rolled down a metal track and stacked them onto wooden skids in a tractor trailer.2)Each carton contained twelve 32-ounce cans or bottles of apple juice,and they were heavy2: The second bad feature of the job was the paySpecific details:I was getting the minimum wage at that time ,$ hour,plus a minimum of a nickel extra for working the night shift.3: The worst feature of the apple plant jobwas the working conditions.Specific details:1) During work we were limited to two 10-minute breaks and an unpaid half-hour for lunch2)The steel floors of the trucks were like ice ;the quickly penetrating cold made my feet feel like stone.Concluding S : I felt humiliated by the poverty that forced me to do such a bitter job.P58 4. 排序：Pattern : It follows Pattern 1 and uses many examples to illustrate the controlling idea.5. (1) For example (2)Furthermore (3)In still another instance (4)Even (5)his (6)these (7)contemporaryP59 7. 1) I've never seen a girl as lazy as Arena 2) English teachers are applying differentmeans to teach the English language3)Americans have been decreasing their working hours since early 1900s4)My father has been a generous man to his childrenP70 5. 排序： 213546explain a Spanish word which has no exact English equivalentcourageous behaviour earthy sexualityP76 Cause: 1. Over a million cars are abandoned on the streetscity governments or governmental agencies have financial headachesEffect: lack of parking in citiesP78 Cause: the terrorist strikesEffects: 1. The Americans feel very anxious andpanicky3. The public would wind up ignoring the one warning that really matters.P82 2) Cause : (1) got drunk at the party(2)had taken the drug of Accutane(3)adolescent depressionEffect : Bart Jr.'s suicide4. 排序：241365 Pattern of cause and effect: single effect and multiple causesP88 sample 1 subject: the time most students spend studying for a testTopic sentence: The time most students spend studying for a test can be divided into three distinct phases.Division；1）Phase One runs from the day the test is announced to approximately forty-eight hours before the exam is passed out.2)Phase two is entered two days prior to the test.3)Phase three ,the final phase ,is entered twelve hours before “Zero Hour.”Sample 2 : subject: students in our schoolTopic sentence: students in our school fall into three groups according to their different intentions of taking part in sports.Division :1) students who go to the playground when they feel tired after study.2) real sports lovers who even put aside their studies for a game.P93 3. 1) T S: University students' entertainment can be divided into three categories according to where it takes placeDivision: a) entertainment at homeb) entertainment on campusc) entertainment elsewhere2)T S: The average young married woman in today's society has her life divided into three different roles.Division: a)the role of wifeb)the role of motherc)the role of self3) T S : Neighbours fall into three categories according to their different attitudes towards you Division:a)those who are friendlyb)those who are indifferentc)those who hate youP94 5: 排序：7 3 10 9 1 5 8 4 2 11 6Subject: Christmas giftsT S : Christmas gifts can be divided into three groups ,according to their after-Christmas fateDivision: a)those that are welcomed and put into use very soonb)those that are halfway between being hated and lovedc)those that you banish as soon as possibleConcluding S : By New Year's Day, you have either used ,stored or disposed of each of your Christmas gifts6. (1)types (2)Though (3) Finally (4)however(5)Even though (6)Before (7)third (8)If(9)Then (10)theseP106 4.排序：Pattern of comparison and contrast: subject by subjectP107 5. (1)similar (2)although (3)difference (4)identical (5)again (6)while (7)But (8)difference (9)consistency (10)completelyP114 paragraph B: First statement :The invention of movable type made the mass media possible.Supporting details: Large numbers of people could have access to learning.Second statement :Television brought a second revolution by means of the media .Supporting details: Television made experiences available to massive numbers of people.Millions could watch a president being sworn in or buried ,a spaceship launched .An Olympic race run ,comedies or talk shows at the same time .Third statement :You ,through the medium of television ,will be a member of a “global villages”. Supporting details ；In the future , this revolution in both information and experiences will spread to the far reaches of the world and even to outer space. Ultimately, you will be able to see and talk instantly to anyone else in the world.General statement : Technology will take a leading role in the media future as it always has in the past.P118 3. The enormous importance of television news had started the process of change in the printed pressP119 5 .A : Programs on TV tend to have a high level of maturity(1) fostering maturity at early age or hindering maturity(2)misleading children to imitating scenes on TVB: TV serials or dramas may oversimplify complex social and psychological problems.(1)enjoying simple-minded soap operas and stereotyped characters(2)giving a false picture of reality C:Informative and cultural programs are frequently interrupted by vulgar advertising.(1)too many commercials(2)an insult even to the intelligence ofa moronP120 6.(1)Thus (2)When (3)also (4)however (5)Moreover (6)indeed (7)also (8)Yet (9) and (10)Thus P139 sample 2P145 3. Gambling is the root cause of many social problemsThe future of education lies in the innovation of educational technologyViolence on television has a negative impact on children's view of societyWomen should be given equal opportunities in education and career developmentEfforts should be made to preserve natural beauty in developing local tourismP147 6. (1)usually (2)often (3)Since (4)on the other hand (5)also (6)but (7)AlthoughP158 5.排序：8 3 7 1 5 9 13 2 6 12 4 11 106: the morning 3. in the evening six o'clock soon as 's more next morning 15. Luckily lastP172 5.排序：P173 6: (1)cozy (2)soft (3)On one side of the room (4)Next to (5)muted (6)On the other side of (7)nap (8)orange(9)lighted (10)sizzlingP183 3. T S: If blind people can sense color differences ,then perhaps we, too,are affected by colors unconsciouslyParagraph 1 : (Introduction/thesis statement)Paragraph 2: (Supporting paragraph) Topic:discoveries of manufacturers Examples: sugar,foods and cosmeticsParagraph 3:(Supporting paragraph) Topic: discoveries of experiments Examples: red,blue,yellowParagraph 4: (Conclusion:result of the discoveries)P184 5 . (1)confirmed (2)findings (3)than (4)whereas (5)as (6)if (7)together (8)lead to (9)where (10)adultsP185 :to inform drivers that they should keep the four-second rule instead of the two second rule on highways in order to avoid collision or pileupsTopic speeds over 55miles per hour 3) keep two seconds ahead when drivingTopic 2. On highways drivers should use the four-second rule ,not the two second rule 1) The distance needed to stop a car shouldTopic over the last half of the stopping distance 2)Some practical examples are given 3)For greater details the reader may refer to the attached table to determine the right time allowed to avoid accidentsP199 4.(1)However (2)open (3)too (4)because (5)asa result (6)Secondly (7)unless (8)even(9)prolong(10)delays (11)benefitsMain proposition: I am not completely satisfied with the family doctor systemMinor propositions: 1. Doctors' office hours are inconvenientare delays in seeing a doctorSolution: prolong doctors' surgery hoursdoctors to share patients。
建大-英语写作手册-课后题
Part 11. Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure, he had beena member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.Our host entertained us with many interesting stories of adventure, who had beena member of an exploration team working in the Arctic.2. When I woke up I saw him asleep in bed, I had not heard him when he came back. Because I had been sleeping soundly.When I woke up I saw him asleep in bed, I did not hear him when he came back. BecauseI had been sleeping soundly.3. Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, that was why he got higher pay than others.Liu always did his work a little better than his fellow workers, which was why he got higher pay than others.4. No student could answer that question, even Xiao Yao, who was usually quick in answering questions, was silent.No student could answer that question, even Xiao Yao who was usually quick in answering questions was silent.5. Lin looks like Li, however, they are not related.Lin looks like Li, but they are not related.6. The old man hunched forward. His head tilted at an angle. His eyes half closed, looking very sleepy.The old man hunched forward. His head tilted at an angle. His eyes half closed, looks very sleepy.7. The work was well planned, everybody worked with great enthusiasm, thus, they over fulfilled their quota.The work was well planned, everybody worked with great enthusiasm, so they over fulfilled their quota.8. Mark Twain, a well-known American writer, whose experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer. Mark Twain is a well-known American writer, whose experience as a pilot on a steamboat was no doubt an important factor that helped him to become a famous writer.Part21. Xu comes from a working-class family. He enrolled in college last fall.Xu who comes from a working-class family enrolled in college last fall.2. The dean issued a bulletin. It said the library would remain open on weekends. The dean issued a bulletinwhich said the library would remain open on weekends.3. Last night was a windy night. The thunder roared. The wind blew a gale. The rain fell in torrents.Last night was a windy night, the thunder roaring, the wind blowing a gale. the rain falling in torrents.4. There are icicles on the trees. The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night.The temperature must have fallen considerably during the night for there are icicleson the trees.5. He returned to his hometown. He had been away for twelve years. He looked in vain for the familiar landmarks.After he had been away for twelve years, he returned to his hometown, looking in vain for the familiar landmarks.6. We have made some progress. We still have a long way to go.Although we have made some progress, we still have a long way to go.7. The sky was cloudless. The sun was shining brightly.The sky was cloudless and the sun was shining brightly.8. There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane. About one third of them were foreigners.There were over two hundred passengers on board the plane, about one third of whom were foreigners.9. The girl began to learn to play the piano when she was a child. Her mother wasa famous pianist.The girl whose mother was a famous pianist began to learn to play the piano when she was a child.10. Napoleon was born in 1769. At that time Corsica had just been acquired by France. Napoleon was born in 1769 when Corsica had just been acquired by France.11. She appeared on the stage. A stormy applause broke forth.When she appeared on the stage, a stormy applause broke forth.12. The gypsies are really a nomadic people from India. They migrated into Europe. Once they were thought to be Egyptians.The gypsies once who were thought to be Egyptians are really a nomadic people from India. They migrated into Europe. .13. The new workers are young and inexperienced. They are eager to learn from the veteran workers.The new workers are young and inexperienced so they are eager to learn from the veteran workers.14. It was a poor quarter. There were a lot of small huts. They had mud walls and straw roofs. They dotted a hillside.It was a poor quarter. There were a lot of small huts which had mud walls and straw roofs, dotting a hillside.15. He heard that his father was ill. He was anxious to go home to see him. He went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.He heard that his father was ill. He was anxious to go home to see him so he went to the station early in the morning to buy a ticket.Part31. She began to speak very fast at the meeting at ten o’clock.She spoke very fast at the 10 o’clock meeting.2. Bernard Shaw was one of the best-known playwrights.… of Britain in the 19-20th centuries.3. The houses were mere shanties, and rags were stuffed in the cracks and holes.… were mere shanties, with rags stuffed in the cracks and holes.4. I read the novel on the train, which did not interest me at all.On the train I read the novel which did not interest me at all.5. A Well-dressed man admitted us to the house, and we later learned that he wasa thief.We were admitted to the house by a well-dressed man, who was a thief as we learned later.6. I lost some important documents and found them three days later. The police had helped me.… and/but found them three days later with the help of the police.7. We entered the shop, and a saleswoman greeted us, and all kinds of shoes were on the shelves, and the prices were quite reasonable, and a lot of customers were buying them.A saleswoman greeted us as we entered the shop. On the shelves were all kinds of shoes at quite reasonable prices, attracting a lot of customers/buyers.8. Tell Helen, if she is at home, I will come to see her.Tell Helen I will come to see her when she is in.9. Listening attentively, a faulty sound was heard.Listening attentively, I heard a faulty sound.10. On entering the room, no one was seen.On entering the room, I saw no one.11. Fred is energetic, capable, and a man you can rely on.Fred is energetic, capable, and reliable.12. The children promised to be careful and that they would return home early.…promised they would be careful and return home early.13. Dickens’s novels offer no solution to the social injustices he ex poses in them. Dickens offers no solution to the social injustices in his novels.14. My watch is either fast or yours is slow.Either my watch is fast or yours is slow.15. Glancing out of the window, a beautiful view attracted my attention.…, I was attr acted by a beautiful view.16. He nearly finished reading ten books during the vacation.He finished reading nearly 10 books in the vacation.17. If interested in painting, a course can be taken at the evening school.…, you can take…18. She said that she would come if she could, but not to wait for her.…, but we need not wait for her.19. To tell my friend the good news the letter was posted at once.… the good news I posted the letter at once.20. I will go to the lecture, for I like his poems.…, for I like the poems by the speaker.Part41. In the year 1840 the Opium War broke out.In 1840 the Opium War broke out.2. There are more books in their library than in our library.Their library has moor books than ours.3. He returned back home after he graduated from college.He returned home after graduation from college.4. We planned to meet just before sunrise very early in the morning.We planned to meet just before sunrise.5. The cause of the flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring.The cause of the flood was the heavy rain in later spring.6. He was asked to repeat the sentence again.He was asked to repeat the sentence.7. I play badminton equally as well as my brother.I play badminton as well as my brother.8. It seemed to his friends that his attitude was of a puzzling nature.… that his attitude was puzzling.9. These watermelons are large in size and sweet in taste.… are large and sweet.10. He did not tell the truth with an honest attitude.He did not tell the truth.11. There are a number of students who want to join the drama club.A number of students want to join the drama club.12. He was kind enough to let me share the same umbrella with him.He was so kind as to let me share his umbrella.13. Zhao was the person who was elected the representative of the class by the whole class.Zhao was elected the representative of the class.14. At the present time I am taking the course of World History and in addition a course in geography too.At present I am taking the course of World History and a course in geography. 15. The plane circled around the airport for about ten minutes or so and then disappeared and could no longer be seen.After circling the airport for about 10 minutes, the plane disappeared.16. What I am trying to say is that in my opinion he has not done his work very well and it needs improving.What I am trying to say is that he has not done his work well.17. I would like you to consider the question of whether or not you will let our journal publish your recent article on women scientists in China.I would like you to consider whether our journal could publish you article on women scientists in China.18. Owing to the fact that he had missed many lectures, he was aware that it would be possible for him to fail the exam.Sin ce he had …, he was ware of the possibility of his failing the exam.19. You must first work out an outline for your paper, and then after you have done that, you need to collect all kinds of material to support your point of view.You must work out an outline first, then collect enough materials to support your point.20. In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing, a thing that occurs every day.In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing.21. He is not only a good pianist, but also a good singer as well.He is not only a good pianist, but also a good singer.22. This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials repeatedly.This pretty actress keeps appearing in TV serials.23. As a rule, students are usually not allowed to take books out of this reading room.Students are usually not allowed to take the books out of this reading room. 24. According to the speaker, it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production and he has no doubt about it.According to the speaker, it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production.25. One reason why people are well informed in this country is because of the fact that there are many newspapers which can easily be bought or subscribed to.One of the reasons why people in this county are well informed is that there are many newspapers easily available.26. Statistics show that in the decade from 1980 to 1990 enrollments at this school doubled: in 1990 there were twice as many students as in 1980.Statistics show that from 1980 to 1990 enrollments at this school doubled.27. There are so many inexperienced unskilled workers without training in a particular job that production of the factory has been affected.So many workers are unskilled that the production has been affected.28. There are about 50 patients or so in this ward, among whom many are being given acupuncture treatment.Many of the 50 patients in this ward are treated by acupuncture / are taking acupuncture treatment.29. His name is called James Williams.His name is … / He is … / This is …30. Whatever he does, he works seriously with great care, and does his best so as to do it well.Whatever he does, he does his best.。
写作Book2Unit1-6课后练习答案参考资料
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英语写作手册第三版课后答案part two
英语写作手册第三版课后答案part two1、Since we have _____ money left,we can't afford the expensive computer. [单选题] *A. a littleB. a fewC. little(正确答案)D. few2、I have a _____ every day to keep fit. [单选题] *A. three thousand meter walkB. three-thousands-meters walkC.three-thousand-meters walkD. three-thousand-meter walk(正确答案)3、( )He killed the enemy guard and made away _________the villagers. [单选题] *A. with the helpB. with helpC. with help ofD. with the help of(正确答案)4、I walked too much yesterday and （）are still aching now. [单选题] *A. my leg's musclesB. my leg muscles(正确答案)C. my muscles' of legD. my legs' muscles5、_____, Martin can reach the branch of that tall tree at the gate. [单选题] *A. As a short manB. Being shortC. As he is shortD. Short as he is(正确答案)6、Obviously they didn’t see the significance of the plan. That is（）the problem lies. [单选题] *A. where(正确答案)B. whyC. /D. how7、——Can you come on Monday or Tuesday? ——Im afraid（）of them is possible. [单选题] *A.neither(正确答案)B. eitherC. noneD.both8、7．—________ is the Shanghai Wild Animal Park?—It’s 15km east of the Bund. [单选题] * A．WhoB．WhatC．WhenD．Where (正确答案)9、—Would you like some milk?—Yes, just _____, please. [单选题] *A. a little(正确答案)B. littleC. a fewD. few10、Many young people like to _______ at weekends. [单选题] *A. eat out(正确答案)B. eat upC. eat onD. eat with11、We should _______ a hotel before we travel. [单选题] *A. book(正确答案)B. liveC. stayD. have12、The traffic jams often happen in _______ hours. [单选题] *A. lunchB. workC. leisureD. rush(正确答案)13、Almost every one of us could see her anxiety from the（）on her face. [单选题] *A. appearanceB. feelingC. movementD. expression(正确答案)14、We can see ______ stars at night if it doesn’t rain. [单选题] *A. a thousand ofB. thousandsC. thousand ofD. thousands of(正确答案)15、If you get _______, you can have some bread on the table. [单选题] *A. happyB. hungry(正确答案)C. worriedD. sad16、Though my best friend Jack doesn’t get（）education, he is knowledgeable. [单选题] *A. ManyB. littleC. fewD. much(正确答案)17、—______some nice crayons. I think they are ______.（）[单选题] *A. Here is; Betty’sB. Here are; BettyC. Here is; BettyD. Here are; Betty’s(正确答案)18、Mike and his friend are going to the _______ to see the new action movie tonight. [单选题] *A. book shopB. restaurantC. concertD. cinema(正确答案)19、He doesn’t smoke and hates women _______. [单选题] *A. smokesB. smokeC. smokedD. smoking(正确答案)20、______ pocket money did you get when you were a child? （）[单选题] *A. WhatB. HowC. How manyD. How much(正确答案)21、____ father is a worker. [单选题] *A.Mike's and Mary'sB. Mike and Mary's(正确答案)C. Mike's and MaryD. Mike and Marys'22、You can't rely on Jane as she is _____ changing her mind and you will never know what she is going to do next. [单选题] *A. occasionallyB. rarelyC. scarcelyD. constantly(正确答案)23、23．Hurry up! The train ________ in two minutes. [单选题] *A．will go(正确答案)B．goC．goesD．went24、My brother often does ______ homework first after school.（）[单选题] *A. heB. his(正确答案)C. sheD. her25、It’s one of _______ means of transportation. [单选题] *A. cheapB. convenientC. second-handD. the most convenient(正确答案)26、There are trees on both sides of the broad street. [单选题] *A. 干净的B. 狭窄的C. 宽阔的(正确答案)D. 宁静的27、I_____you that I had made the right decision. [单选题] *A.ensuredB.insuredC.assured(正确答案)D.for sure28、—Why do you call him Mr. Know?—______ he knows almost everything that we want to know.（）[单选题] *A. SoB. OrC. ButD. Because(正确答案)29、I saw the boy _______?the classroom. [单选题] *A. enter intoB. enter(正确答案)C. to enter intoD. to enter30、We can _______ some information about this city on the Internet. [单选题] *A. look up(正确答案)B. look likeC. look afterD. look forward to。