如何推荐旅游城市写作学案- 高考英语一轮复习

如何推荐旅游城市
写作任务
假定你是李华，你的英国网友Eric暑假想来中国旅行，但不知道该去哪里，所以发来邮件询问你的建议。

请你给他回一封邮件，介绍一座你最喜欢的旅游城市。

注意：词数120左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。

Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua 写作指导
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求回一封邮件，向网友推荐一座自己最喜欢的旅游城市，正文部分属于说明文。

介绍旅游城市时通常按照以下步骤展开：首先，介绍旅游城市的概况（如地理位置、占地面积等）；其次，说明其特别之处（如代表性景点、历史价值或突出的人文特色等）。

二、谋篇布局
针对本写作任务，正文部分可分为三部分：
第一部分：表示愿意提供建议；
第二部分：介绍所推荐城市的基本情况和推荐该城市的原因（说明该城市的特别之处）；
第三部分：希望对方参考自己的建议。

三、组织语言
第一部分：表示愿意提供建议。

普通表达★I am glad to hear that you are coming to China during this summer vacation and I
am happy to give you some suggestions.
★I think...is a good choice.
高级表达★With great delight,I’ve learned that you would like to pay a visit to China during
this summer vacation and it is my great pleasure to give you some suggestions.
★I think you should take...into consideration.
第二部分：介绍所推荐城市的基本情况和推荐该城市的原因。

★...is located in...It covers an area of...
★It is also a historical city.You can find a lot of cultural heritages there,
such as...
普通★There are also plenty of well-known museums and you can gain some knowledge 表达of...by visiting them.
★The city center is full of global brands and fashionable malls,and you can enjoy
great shopping experiences.
高级表达★Located in...,...covers an area of...
★Known as a historical city,it boasts a lot of cultural heritages,such as...
★There are also plenty of well-known museums where you can broaden your
knowledge of...
★The city center,which is full of global brands and fashionable malls,can give you
marvelous(非凡的)shopping pleasure.
第三部分：希望对方参考自己的建议。

普通表达I hope you will love the city and have a wonderful journey this summer.
高级表达The city will surely be beyond all your expectations and I hope you’ll have a
wonderful journey this summer.
范文展示
普通范文
Dear Eric,
I am glad to hear that you are coming to China during this summer vacation and I am
happy
to give you some suggestions.I think Beijing is a good choice.
Beijing is located in northern China.It covers an area of more than16,410square kilometers.
It is also a historical city.You can find a lot of cultural heritages there,such as the Great Wall,the
Forbidden City,the Summer Palace,and so on.There are also plenty of well-known museums and
you can gain some knowledge of Chinese history and culture by visiting them.Besides, the city
center is full of global brands and fashionable malls,and you can enjoy great shopping
experiences.
I hope you will love the city and have a wonderful journey this summer.
Yours,
Li Hua
高级范文
Dear Eric,
With great delight,I’ve learned that you would like to pay a visit to China during this
summer vacation and it is my great pleasure to give you some suggestions.I think you should take
Beijing into consideration.
Located in northern China,Beijing covers an area of more than16,410square
kilometers.
Known as a historical city,it boasts a lot of cultural heritages,such as the Great Wall,the
Forbidden City,the Summer Palace,and so on.There are also plenty of well-known museums
where you can broaden your knowledge of Chinese history and culture.Besides,the city center,
which is full of global brands and fashionable malls,can give you marvelous shopping pleasure.
The city will surely be beyond all your expectations and I hope you’ll have a wonderful
journey this summer.
Yours,
Li Hua
实战演练
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办主题为“My favorite tourist city”的征文活动，
你有
意参加。

请你写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的旅游城市并投稿。

注意：词数100左右。

___________________________________________________________________________________ 答案
One possible version:
Hangzhou,the capital and most populous city of Zhejiang Province,is famous
for its
amazing scenery.Known as“Paradise on Earth”,Hangzhou attracts a huge number of
domestic
and foreign tourists every year.
There are many places of interest in Hangzhou,among which the West Lake is the
best
known.Hangzhou is also rich in culture.Visitors can experience traditional silk
culture and tea
culture there.While enjoying the love story of Xu Xian and Bai Suzhen which is said
to have
happened there,you can have a taste of the local foods,which will surely satisfy your
appetite.
Welcome to Hangzhou!。