中考英语_押常州卷第57题 书面表达(解析版)

押常州卷第57题书面表达
命题原则及特点
1.着重考查学生运用所学语言知识与技能来表达思想、进行交际的能力。

以书面的形式进行信息沟通、再现生活经历、描述周围事物、发表意见和观点。

2.最近几年来书面表达在体裁和题材方面突出的特点是稳中有变。

话题更贴近学生生活，让人人有话可说，有感可发，且发挥空间大。

试题突出交际性和实用性。

3.中考书面表达还是控制性加半开放性写作。

通过提供要点，降低了考生的写作焦虑，同时也给考生足够的写作空间。

4.中考写作体裁是外在的、附属的东西，是提供的。

如何连贯、清楚、得体地表达内涵才是学生真正需要关注的。

从某种意义上说，初中写作只是停留在翻译的层面，它是语言的组织和观点的表达，不是创作。

1．（2023·江苏常州·中考真题）当前，有些学生忽视倾听的作用，针对该情况，请你根据要点提示，用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，阐述倾听的重要性。

要点：
1.在学校生活中要倾听及理由；
2.在日常生活中要倾听及理由。

注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Listening carefully plays an important role in our life.
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【答案】例文
Listening carefully plays an important role in our life.
In class, we should listen to teachers carefully. It can not only help us have a better understanding of what the teachers say, but also it can improve learning efficiency. What’s more, we should listen to our classmates carefully. It can show that we are listening to our classmates and we care about them so that it can strengthen our relationship.
We should be good listeners at home. We should listen to our parents carefully in order to know about our pare nts’ ideas and avoid arguing with each other.
In a word, listening to others carefully is important in our daily life, so we should learn to become good listeners.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍倾听的重要性。

[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍在学校生活中要倾听及理由；
第三步，介绍在日常生活中要倾听及理由。

第四步，书写结语。

[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also 不但……而且
②care about 关心
③in order to 为了
[高分句型]
①It can show that we are listening to our classmates and we care about them so that it can strengthen our relationship. (that引导的宾语从句，以及so that引导的目的状语从句)
②We should listen to our parents carefully in order to know about our parents’ ideas and avoid arguing with each other. (动词不定式作目的状语)
2．（2022·江苏常州·中考真题）某中学生英文报Your Voice栏目中有如下征文通知，请你写篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的想法。

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

I want to share my ideas about the topic.
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【答案】例文
I want to share my ideas about the topic.
In my opinion, making friends by following suit is not wise. Because everyone is an individual, with his own interests and personality. So don’t follow the crowd and just do what other people like to do.
We should make friends with those who can give us help and share our happiness and sadness. To make true friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you will get a smile in return. You can make friends with those who share the same interest with you or those who are totally different from you. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。

要求以“交友”为话题，结合提示内容进行写作。

注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、第二人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。

作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己认为为了交朋友而跟风是否是明智的；第三段介绍青少年怎样才能交到真正的朋友。

要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

3．（2021·江苏常州·中考真题）假如你是Sam，你的英国网友Tom今年九月份将作为交换生来常州学习。

他给你写了一封信。

请你给Tom写一封英文回信, 帮他解答疑惑。

Dear Sam,
I’m very glad to have a chance to study in Changzhou this September. I hear there is a spec ial day for teachers in China. I do think it’s a good idea, but still have the following questions:
1. When is Teachers’ Day? What’s the purpose and meaning of it?
2. What do students usually do on that day? As an example, what did you once do to celebrate it?
I really want to do something to join in this interesting festival. Looking forward to your guide and help.
Yours,
Tom 注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数不少于100，文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Sam,
I’m very glad to share with you this special festival.
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Wish you good luck in Changzhou.
Yours,
Sam 【答案】例文
Dear Sam,
I’m very glad to share with you this special festival.
Teachers’ Day is on September 10th every year. It is a day for students to give their special thanks to lovely teachers and show people’s respect for teachers. Students usually give flowers, cards or other small gifts to their teachers. I drew a picture and wrote an article to my favorite teacher last year. She was very happy and moved.
We will have a big party for our teachers this year and you can join us. I am sure you will have a good time on that day.
Wish you good luck in Changzhou.
Yours,
Sam 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。

要求根据提示内容，向Tom介绍教师节的相关内容，并给出一些建议。

注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和一
般将来时。

作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍教师节的相关信息以及自己曾经在教师节做过什么；第三段介绍今年教师节的打算，邀请Tom一起参加；第四段收尾。

要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

一、英语写作四步法：
第一步：看清题目，确定时态和人称；
第二步：明确要点，抓住重点，拟定提纲；
第三步：连句成篇，多用简单句，少用无把握的复合句，若遇到不会写的词，有表达障碍，可以换种表达；
第四步：检查句子是否通顺，是否有逻辑错误，是否漏掉题中要点
二、用英语思维写英语作文的技巧
①直接了当，开门见山
②英语写作高分就在于开头（首句直接给出观点）结尾和每段的首尾句
③冷眼旁观，话别说太绝，英语是一门逻辑性的语言
④学会举例，越具体越好，一篇英文需要有内涵，而内涵的支撑靠举例子
⑤英语例子一定要越细越好
⑥得连接词着得天下，连接词用的自然，贴切，自然能够给文章添彩
⑦写英语作文的过程就是在自问自答
三、英语作文的思路点拨和范例
思路点拨：第一段:两到三句话,重要性+必要性
第二段:注意连词的使用+具体的建议
第三段:两到三句话,总结+美好的愿景
4．（2024·江苏常州·一模）在丰富多彩的初中学习生活中，你一定积累了很多学习方法和经验吧！现校刊英文专栏以“Learning to learn”为题征稿。

请你根据要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。

1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.表达清楚，语言通顺，书写规范；
3.词数不少于100。

文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Hello everyone! It’s my great honor to share my learning methods with you all. _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ ______
【答案】例文
Learning to learn
Hello everyone! It’s my great honor to share my learning methods with you all. My name is Lily. Here are my methods of English learning. First, I usually watch English movies and listen to English songs. I think it’s a relaxing way to learn the correct pronunciation and proper expressions. Second, reading passages on the same
topic helps a lot in learning new words. In this way, the new words can be repeated and I can understand their meanings better. What’s more, it’s a good habit to keep a diary in English. That helps me think in English and improve my writing skills as well.
Hope my methods can be helpful. But please remember, find the ways that are best for you.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。

【写作步骤】
第一步，介绍自己想谈的科目；
第二步，具体介绍你学习这门学科的方法；
第三步，表达你的感受以及你从中学到什么。

①listen to听
②in this way以这种方式
③what’s more而且
【高分句型】①I think it’s a relaxing way to learn the correct pronunciation and proper expressions.（宾语从句）
②Secon d, reading passages on the same topic helps a lot in learning new words.（动名词短语作主语）
5．（2024·江苏常州·一模）假定你是李华，最近你的朋友Tony在与父母相处的过程中出现了沟通不畅的问题。

他心情不佳，来信寻求你的帮助和建议。

请根据以下要点给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1、安慰你的朋友；
2、提出改善关系的建议；
注意：
1、词数100左右；
2、结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tony,
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I hope you can find these suggestions helpful. I wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 【答案】例文：
Dear Tony,
I’m sorry to hear abo ut your communication problems with your parents, but I know how you feel since I’ve had similar problems before. Here are my suggestions and I hope things can get better soon.
First, let’s put ourselves into their shoes. Parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes, so understanding each other matters a lot in improving a family relationship. Besides, when we share our problems with them, we often look for a listening ear and an open heart instead of a method to solve problems. Therefore, what you need to do is telling them about this honestly and trust them.
I hope you can find these suggestions helpful. I wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作内容已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容”中的要点，务必写全，可适当添加细节，突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]
第一步，安慰朋友以及表明写信目的；
第二步，提出改善关系的建议；
第三步，总结全文，祝福对方。

[亮点词汇]
①put oneself into one’s shoes设身处地
②look for寻找
③instead of代替
[高分句型]
①Therefore, what you need to do is telling them about this honestly and trust them. （what引导主语从句）
②Besides, when we share our problems with them, we often look for a listening ear and an open heart instead of a method to solve problems.（when引导时间状语从句）6．（2024·江苏常州·一模）热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德，劳动建设美丽校园，劳动营造和谐家庭，劳动创建文明社区。

作为一名中学生，要积极参加劳动实践。

你校英语报发起了“Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life”主题征文活动。

请根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文，谈谈你在不同的场合可以做哪些劳动，在劳动中你收获了什么，并发起倡议，呼吁更多的青少年热爱劳动，热爱生活。

要点如下：
1. What kind of labor can you do at school, at home or in the community?
2. What can you learn from labor?
3. What advice will you give to the teenagers?
注意：
1.词数100左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。

Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
It is well known that labor is the traditional Chinese virtue of love.
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【答案】例文
Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
It is well known that labor is the traditional Chinese virtue of love. However, some students are rarely given the opportunity to enjoy labor, while others are too busy with their studies to labor. There are also some students who are unwilling to labor because they are lazy.
As a middle school student, I often do some labor activities in everyday life. For example, I clean the classroom and playground with my classmates at school. I do some cooking, cook dishes, wash clothes and tidy rooms at home. And in the community, I do volunteer work to help the old or disabled.
By doing these, I’ve learnt some basic life skills to take care of myself. Besides, I have not only got the strong feeling of satisfaction but also become more and more independent and responsible.
All in all, I believe that labor education is important for our development and I encourage all the teenager s to actively engage in labor activities. Let’s take an active part in doing the daily labor.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示要点进行写作，适当增加细节。

[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据介绍一些自己在学校、家中和社区的劳动实践；
第三步，介绍从劳动中的收获；
第四步，书写结语，给青少年一些建议。

[亮点词汇]
①help the old or disabled帮助老人或残疾人
②all in all总的来说
③take an active part in积极参加
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①And in the community, I do volunteer work to help the old or disabled. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②All in all, I believe that labor education is important for our development and I encourage all the teenagers to actively engage in labor activities. (and引导的并列句)
7．（2024·江苏常州·一模）假如你叫李华，作为九年级毕业生学业很忙，你发现有时在某门学科上花的功夫与考试成绩不成正比，所以你想给你的某学科老师写一封信表达你的想法。

要点：
（1）你对该学科学习的认识（重要性以及作用……）；
（2）你目前在该学科上的现状以及主要问题；
（3）你希望老师在哪些方面给予你帮助。

注意：
（1）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名字；
（2）词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam,
As a Grade 9 student, I am so busy with my schoolwork that I would like to share my worries with you.
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Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
As a Grade 9 student, I am so busy with my schoolwork that I would like to share my worries with you.
The importance of English cannot be overstated. As a global language, it bridges cultural gaps and facilitates communication. In today’s interconnected world, English is the key to accessing international opportunities, expanding knowledge, and building professional careers. So we should learn it well.
But currently my English grades are not very good, especially in terms of vocabulary.
I have memorized them many times, but I just can’t remember them. Also, my spoken English is not very good. I hope you can give me some suggestions from these two aspects to help me learn English well. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；写作过程注意书信格式。

[写作步骤]
第一步，点题说明写作意图；
第二步，介绍自己对英语学科的认识；
第三步，详细阐述自己学习中遇到的问题以及需要得到的帮助。

[亮点词汇]
①the importance of……的重要性
②in terms of在……方面
③look forward to盼望
[高分句型]
①I have memorized them many times, but I just can’t remember them. （转折并列句）
②I hope you can give me some suggestions from these two aspects to hel p me learn English well. （宾语从句）
8．（2024·江苏常州·一模）在春节热播电影《热辣滚烫》中，贾玲通过坚持不懈的努力，实现了自己的人生价值，过上了“热辣滚烫”的人生。

作为九年级的学生，我们正需要不屈不挠的毅力，不断拼搏的勇气。

全力坚持做好每一件小事，成就更好的自己。

请以“We Only Live Once”为题，根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加学校的英语主题演讲活动。

要点：
1. 最近或多年来你坚持并全力以赴去做的一件事及理由；
2. 它给你的学习和生活带来了怎样的影响。

注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数100左右。

文章的开头已为你写好、不计入总词数。

We Only Live Once
Dear classmates,
It’s my honor to make a speech here. _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _______
Thank you!
【答案】例文
Dear classmates,
It’s my honor to make a speech here. Have you ever tried your best to do one thing? Have you ever lived your life to the fullest? Today I want to share the thing I keep doing these years it you.
When I was in Grade 7, I couldn’t speak English well bec ause of my poor pronunciation, so I was always laughed at by others. I made up my mind to improve my spoken English no matter how hard it was for me at that time. These years I get up at 5 o’clock every morning so that I can spend at least half an hour pra ctising speaking English. To correct my pronunciation, I also read English aloud after the tape every day. Now my English has greatly improved.
This leaning experience has made a great difference to my life. I am not as shy as I used to be. Besides, when facing difficulties in study. I will never give up. I'm ready to take on any challenge in the future.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]
第一步，点明演讲主题，说明最近或多年来你坚持并全力以赴去做的一件事；
第二步，详细说明为这件事做出的努力；
第三步，点出这件事对自己产生的影响。

[亮点词汇]
①make up my mind to do sth.下定决心去做某事
②make a great difference to对……产生巨大影响
③as…as和……一样
[高分句型]
①I made up my mind to improve my spoken English no matter how hard it was for me at that time.（no matter how引导让步状语从句）
②These years I get up at 5 o’clock every morning so that I can spend at least half an hour practising speaking English.（so that引导目的状语从句）
9．（23-24九年级上·江苏常州·期末）掌握日常生活技能（如烹饪、种植、修理、救护方法……）能增强青少年的自信心，形成独立自主能力，提高生活质量和健康水平。

请结合下列提示，以“Little life skills are a big help”为题，用英语写一篇短文在课堂上分享。

提示：
1. What life skills do you have?
2. Which life skill do you think is the most useful, and why?
注意：
1. 内容须涵盖所有要点，并适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Little life skills are a big help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. They help us live more healthily and happily.
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【答案】例文
Little life skills are a big help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. They help us live more healthily and happily.
I have many life skills such as cooking, washing clothes, making traveling plans and so on. As for me, cooking is the most useful one. Now, more and more young people like fast food, but I don’t think it’s a healthy lifestyle. I learned how to cook food by myself when I was in Grade Three at primary school. Our teacher taught us how
to make tomatoes with eggs. I also learned cooking some other dishes from my mom. So when my parents are not at home, I often cook for myself. It is not only delicious but also meaningful. It always makes me feel proud of myself.
Life skills are a big help, and I will try to learn more to make my life more colourful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：方向已给出，写作时注意表述清晰、逻辑连贯，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。

[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，点明主题；
第二步，列出生活技能并挑一个细说；
第三步，总结从中获得的感受。

[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等
②not only...but also...不仅而且
③be proud of为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
①I learned how to cook food by myself when I was in Grade Three at primary school.（句型：状语从句，when引导时间状语从句）
②So when my parents are not at home, I often cook for myself.（句型：状语从句，when 引导时间状语从句）
10．（23-24九年级上·江苏常州·期末）学校广播站举行英语征文比赛，请你根据下面的内容用英语写一篇100词左右的文章投稿。

内容包括：
1. What type of TV programme do you like best? Why?
2. What’s your TV viewing habit?
要求：
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.必须包括所有的相关信息，并适当发挥。

My favourite TV programme
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【答案】One possible version:
My favourite TV programme
My favorite TV programme is documentaries. They cover a lot of useful and meaningful knowledge, especially about nature and history.
The documentaries about nature show beautiful scenes and tell many unknown secrets about plants and the animals in the wild. After watching them, I love animals and plants better than before. The documentaries about history help me compare the old days with the present life. They make me realize it’s not easy for us to live a peaceful life.
I should value every moment at present.
Watching TV is a good way to relax myself, but I don’t watch it every day. I always spend two hours watching TV at the weekend because I want to achieve a balance between watching TV and my schoolwork.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文要点以问题形式呈现，注意要点衔接自然顺畅。

[写作步骤]
第一步，总述最爱的是纪录片；
第二步，详细说明原因；
第三步，介绍看电视的时间。

[亮点词汇]
①especially尤其是
②compare with与……作比较
③achieve a balance取得平衡
[高分句型]
①They make me realize it’s not easy for us to live a peaceful life（宾语从句）
②Watching TV is a good way to relax myself, but I don’t watch it every day（动名词作主语）。