高中英语申请信 必修一Welcome单元

尾段---豹子尾，简短有力 Hopefully, you could take my application into account. Looking forward to being accepted.
Dear Jonson, My name is Li Hua, a Class 6, Grade 1 student at
welcome unit 应用文写作----申请信 A letter of application
试题回顾
假如你是某校高一 6班学生李华，学校英语社 团现在要招聘新成员，你有意参加该社团，现 在请用英文给社长Johnson写一封信，简单介 绍一下自己。 内容提示如下： 1.写信目的（愿意参加） 2.个人情况介绍（兴趣，英语情况，技能，以 往的经验） 注意:字数80 ，可以适当增加细节，使得行文 连贯。
规范，地道 Hope you can take my application into consideration.
, you can take my application into consideration.
解决办法： 内容丰富 条理清晰 句式多样
Yours,Li Hua
错误改进 Hi，I am Lihua who is a student from class 6,grade 1. I am Li Hua ,who is a student from Class 6,Grade 1.
错误改进 looking forward to hear from you. Looking forward to hear from you/
(用无灵主语和enable来改写)
_E_x_p_e_r_ie_n__ce___of more than ten years English learning enables me to comunicate with others fluently.
__P_r_o_fi_c_ie_n_c_y__in English after more than ten years' learning enables me to comunicate with others fluently.
so that I have a good command /knowledge of English.
Tip3：注意句中的逻辑关系， 使句子表达紧凑连贯
I have been interested in English since I was very young and I have a good command /knowledge of English.
中段---申请理由
Tip2：确保信息的相关性
1.爱好方面:
对英语感兴趣，性格开朗
√
性格开朗，爱好运动，身材苗条
2. 学识方面:
获得过英语比赛一等奖; √
精通掌握英语;
√
能流利用英语与他人沟通
√
3. 经历:
有12年的英语学习经历 √
有做英语家教的经历
单句准备：
1. 我很高兴听说那件事。
_I_a_m___g_la_d__to__h_e_a_r_t_h_a_t_. __________________________ 2. 英语俱乐部需要新成员。 __N_e_w__m_e_m__b_e_r_s_a_r_e_w__a_n_t_e_d_i_n_t_h_e_E__n_g_li_s_h_c_l_u_b_._______ 3. 自小时候起，我就对英语学习很感兴趣。 _I__h_a_v_e_b_e_e_n__v_er_y__in__te_r_e_s_te_d__in__E_n_g_l_is_h__s_in_c_e__I_w_a_s__y_o_u_ng. 4. 我精通英语。 __I_h_a_v_e_a__g_o_o_d__co_m__m__a_n_d_/_k_n_o_w__le_d_g_e__o_f _E_n_g_l_is_h_.______ 5. 我学英语已经十多年了。 _I__h_a_v_e_l_e_a_r_n_t_E_n_g_l_is_h__fo_r__m_o_r_e__th_a_n__t_e_n_y_e_a_r_s_. _______ 6. 我能用流利的英语与他人交流。 _I__c_a_n_c_o_m__m_u_n__ic_a_t_e_w_i_t_h_o_t_h_e_r_s_i_n_E__n_g_li_s_h_f_l_u_e_n_tl_y_. ___ 7. 希望你能考虑我的申请。 __H_o_p_e_f_u_ll_y,_y_o_u__c_o_u_ld__t_a_ke__m__y_a_p_p_l_ic_a_t_io_n__in_t_o_a_c_c_o_u_n_t_ 8. 期待被接受。 __L_o_o_k_in_g__fo_r_w_a_r_d__to__b_e_in_g__a_c_c_e_p_te_d_._________________
I have a good command /knowledge of English.
....因..........so that ..........果 (从属连词：so that)
I have been interested in English since I wa达性格)
为人幽默，性格开朗，我能与他人融洽相处.
With humorous and easy-going characteristics, I can get along well with others.
中段---推荐理由
(主要点2.---表达学识)
I have been interested in English since I was very young.
(并列连词：and)
中段---推荐理由
(主要点3.---表达经验)
我学英语已经有十多年。 我能用流利的英语与他人沟通。(翻译)
Tip4：巧妙改变主语， 使句子多样化。
I have learnt English for more thatn ten years.
I can communicate with others fluently.
2.对......感兴趣
be interested in
3.获得一等奖
win the first prize in
4.精通，非常了解
have a good knowledge of
5.与.....流利沟通
communicate with others fluently
6.有特殊技能
have special skills
Yangming High School. Learning that new members are wanted in the English club, I'm writing to apply for it.
With humorous and easy-going characteristics, I can get along well with others. Besides, I have been interested in English since I was very young so that I have a good command /knowledge of English. Additionally, experience of more than ten years’ English learning enables me to communicate with others fluently. Therefore, I hold a firm belief that I will meet all your requirements.
Hopefully, my application can be taken into consideration. I will never fail to live up to your choice.
Yours,
欣赏: 1. 首段运用分词 结构，引出写信背景。
2. 中段从性格,学识和经
验三方面来讲诉李华的理 由，运用了with 短语结构,
10.最重要的是
above all
期待
look forward to
考虑
take .....into consideration /account
首段：(个人信息+)背景+目的
思考：What is your writing purpose?
I am glad to know that new members are wanted in the English club. I am writing to apply for it.
分词结构作原因状语和结
果状语。总结句用了同位 语从句。句式丰富,结构 清晰,内容覆盖所有主要 点。 3.尾段用了被动句。 闪光点：
框架结构清晰
句式多样
1分词结构做状语 2.with 结构做原因状语 3.so that 结果状语 4.experience无灵主语 5.同位语从句 6.衔接副词无缝对接，行 文流畅紧凑
7.比....有优势
have an advantage over others （in sth.）
8.在....方面有积极的作用
play an active part/role in
have a positive effect on
9.与....相处地好
get along well with others
7.被动结构 8. 双重否定
tip1：申请书写作的规范性自我评测表
称呼 分段 介绍 背景 目的 性格 特长 经验 期待
Dear Jonson, (是否逗号，是否顶格写）
是否是三段，比例如何（1-2;7;1-2）
定语从句？同位语？
并列句？分词做状语？
存在问题： 内容单薄 内容繁琐， 重复讲同一个方面 语言单调,句式单一（80个字，出现9-10个I)
应用文 申请信
Dear Jonson
背景＋目的（申请） 申请理由1
意义，呼应上文，希望考虑
一般现在时 英语社社长（是否需要自我介绍）
词汇准备：
英语社团
English club
成员
member
我写信为了.......
I am writing to
申请
apply for
1.愿意去做某事
be willing to do sth
Tip1：借助分词作状 语结构表背景,写信
Learning/Knowing that new membe原rs 因are wanted in the English club, I am writing to apply for it.
Delighted to hear that new members are wanted in the English club, I am writing to apply for it.