2018年6月30日托福写作官方真题作文完整答案范文解析

2018年6月30日托福写作官方真题作文完整答案范文解析6月30日托福独立写作考题预测
1.As a student of university that has a long break between university semesters, the university requires all students to do one of the following for one month during the break:
● students must take a course on the subject that has no direct connection to their majors of study.
● students must volunteer to work in the city where the university is located or their hometowns to improve some aspects of life of the city or their own town.
which one do you think is more beneficial for students in their university. Why?
6月30日托福独立写作考题预测
1.As a student of university that has a long break between university semesters, the university requires all students to do one of the following for one month during the break:
●students must take a course on the subject that has no direct connection to their majors of study.
●students must volunteer to work in the city where the university is located or their hometowns to improve some aspects of life of the city or their own town.
which one do you think is more beneficial for students in their university. Why?
第一步：
解析题目属于典型的二选一；经典高分写法是A>B.
第二步：分析难点：
1、容易遗漏要点：
long break =one month ;
volunteer work to improve some aspects of life of the city or their own town.
More beneficial for students in their university (限定左右很强！)
2、比较的写法是要求每一段都需进行A B的某一项优缺点比较！
第三步：构思全文的结构：
核心意思就是 A 具备（或者理解为具有更多的） B所没有的，并且是有利于他们大学生活的“优势”。

A>B在于a1 ;
A>B在于a2 ;
A>B在于a3 ;
第四步：写出具体理由：
A=● students must volunteer to work in the city where the university is located or their hometowns to improve some aspects of life of the city or their own town.
B=● students must take a course on the subject that has no direct connection to their majors of study.
a1:A培育更多的实际交流技能（B很难培育）
a2:A培育当事人更多的社会责任心；（ B很难培育）
a3:A培育当事人真正的职业兴趣；（ B很难培育）
第五步：主体段中心句具体满分范例
主体段一：First，within one month ,by participating in volunteer work to help improve life of the local residents in their own city , one can master some practical interpersonal skills more faster ; still , learning courses in the school settings can hardly offer this merit.
好了后续的段落请大家围绕这个逻辑去自我构造！。