2024年高考英语小作文真题全解全析专题08 2022年乙卷

三年（2021-2024）年高考英语小作文真题全解
全析
专题08 2022年乙卷
真题原文
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。

请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿。

内容包括：1.学习活动状况描述 2.简单评论 3.你的建议
注意：1.词数100左右 2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。

Learning English Beyond the Classroom
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Yours,
Li Hua 真题解析
本篇书面表达为应用文写作中的命题作文，主题为Learning English Beyond the Classroom，要求根据调查结果写一篇短文投稿。

就内容而言，这也是一篇小议论文。

中心内容恰好是新课标要求的体现，设置的是更加贴近真实
生活的英语交际任务情境，增强试题的开放性和灵活性。

考生可根据内容要点提示，并且结合自身经历进行写作，这样写出的文章更具说服力。

就考查形式而言，2022年全国乙卷的高考英语书面表达进一步优化了应用文写作的考查形式，更新了试题的呈现形式。

所以，本篇书面表达不再是传统的信件写作，而是综合性的文体，融合了图表作文、议论文和建议，看似简单，实则不易。

在写作过程中，为了紧扣题目要求，考生在写作之前，首先要圈出题目要求中的关键词，根据题目要求的关键词构思作文的大致思路，列出提纲。

然后，根据提纲组织语言，完成写作。

在段落上，为了更好地体现内容的承接、递进或转折关系，不妨在段首加上表示相应关系的关联词。

建议采用列提纲的写作方法:
第一段：写作背景(引出话题);
第二段：图片要点+拓展句(占比);
第三段：总结句。

写作小贴士：
●审时态：以一般现在时为主。

●审人称：以第一人称、第三人称为主。

●审要点：题目要求的内容要点齐全；准确运用语法结构和词汇；保持上下文的连贯性。

范文赏析1
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well. Our school's English newspaper discussed and investigated how students learn English beyond the classroom. The results of the survey are shown in the bar chart. The students who depend on browsing English learning websites and reading English books to learn English are the least, accounting for just12% and 18%, respectively, while as high as 65% of the students prefer listening to English songs. Besides, 50% of the students are fond of watching English movies when learning English.
In my view, this is a worrying phenomenon.There is no doubt that what benefits students most is reading English books, for only by reading English books can students gain a deeper
在课堂之外学习英语
我们可以做很多事情来学好英语。

我们学校的英文报对学生在课堂之外学习英语的情况进行了讨论与调查。

调查结果如柱形图所示。

依靠浏览英语学习网站和阅读英语书籍来学习英语的学生最少，分别只占12%和18%；而多达65%的学生更乐意去听英语歌曲。

此外，50%的学生喜欢在学习语的时候看英语电影。

在我看来，这是一个令人担忧的现象。

毫无疑问，对学生最有利的是阅读英语书籍，只有这样，学生才能对英语这门语言
understanding of English as a language.
Therefore, students are supposed to spare more time for listening to music too much. 有更深刻的理解。

因此，学生应该抽出更多时间进行英语阅读，而不是过度地看电影或听音乐。

亮点词汇
browse 翻阅，浏览(信息) respectively 分别地
be fond of 喜爱
benefit 使受益be supposed to do sth.应该做某事rather than 而不是
范文赏析2
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well. According to a recent survey carried out by our school's English newspaper about English learning status beyond the classroom, we know that approaches to learning English vary from person to person. The majority of students learn English by listening to English songs, accounting for 65%, followed by 50% of the students who learn English by watching English movies. Compared with the above two approaches, reading English books or browsing English learning websites make up no more than 18% and 12%, respectively.
What can be seen clearly is that in comparison with reading in which mental effort is needed, students prefer visual and auditory activities, such as listening to music and watching movies, which seem to be more enjoyable and relaxing.
As a high school student, I'm in favor of watching movies as the best way to learn English beyond the classroom. By watching movies, not only can we be exposed to the native English environment, which is especially beneficial to our spoken English, but we can also have a good opportunity to learn about foreign cultures without going
在课堂之外学习英语
我们可以做很多事情来学好英语。

根据我们学校的英文报最近进行一项关于课堂之外英语学习状况的调查，我们了解到学习英语的方法因人而异。

大多数学生通过听英语歌曲学习英语，占比65%；其次，50%的学通过看英语电影学习英语。

与上述两种途径相比，阅读英语书籍和浏览英学习网站的比例分别只占18%和12%。

我们可以清楚地看到，与需要花费脑力的阅读相比，学生们更喜欢视和听觉活动，比如听音乐和看电影，这似乎更令人愉快和放松。

作为一个高中生，我赞成把看电影作为课堂之外学习英语的最佳方式。

通过看电影，我们不仅可以置身于以英语为母语的环境--这对英语
abroad. We should make good use of these ways to learn English.
口语是格外有益的，而且可以在不出国的情况下，有一个了解外国文化的好机我们应该好好利用这些方式来学习英语。

亮点词汇
carry out 执行;进行
in comparison with 与……形成对比approach to doing sth. 做某事的方法enjoyable 有乐趣的;令人愉快的vary from person to person因人而异in favor of赞成
the majority of大多数compared with与…相比较make up 占;组成
be exposed to 面临，接触到no more than 只不过，仅仅be beneficial to 有益于
范文赏析3
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well. According to a recent survey conducted by our school's English newspaper about English learning status outside the classroom, we know that the percentage of students who choose to learn English by listening to English songs and watching English movies reaches 65% and 50%,respectively. However, those who choose to read English books and browse English learning websites account for only18% and 12%
Based on this phenomenon, it is easily found that listening to English songs and watching English movies are more attractive to students than reading English books and browsing English learning websites. This may be because students can get more pleasure and relaxation from listening to English songs and watching English
movies.
As far as I'm concerned, whatever method suits us best is a
在课堂之外学习英语
我们可以做很多事情来学好英语。

根据我们学校的英文报最近进行的一项关于课堂之外英语学习状况的调查，我们知道了选择通过听英语歌曲和看英语电影学习英语的学生占比分别达到了65%和50%。

然而，选择阅读英语书籍和浏览英语学习网站的学生只占18%和12%。

基于这一现象，我们不难发现，相比阅读英语书籍、浏览英语学习网站，听英语歌曲和看英语电影对学生更具吸引力。

这可能是因为学生能够从听英语歌曲和看英语电影中获得更多的乐趣、感到更加放松
在我看来，无论选择什么方法，
good choice. However, l recommend that more importance should be attached to students self-discipline when having entertaining English activities beyond the classroom. Only in this way can students cultivate a positive attitude to learning English.最适合我们的就是好的。

但是，我建议学生在进行娱乐性的课堂之外的英语活动时，更加重视自律性。

只有这样学生才能培养出学习英语的积极态度。

亮点词汇
percentage 百分比
based on 基于
be attractive to对…有吸引力suit 适合a good choice 一个好的选择recommend 建议
attach importance to 重视
范文赏析4
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well. Different people have different opinions on this topic. Recently we have had a heated discussion on how to learn English successfully beyond the classroom . The details are as follows.
As is clearly shown in the chart, the majority of students, as many as 65% acquire English by listening to English songs, which enables them to have a good command of English . As many as 50% of the students attain English knowledge via watching English films, compared with 12% of the students who obtain English knowledge by searching for useful English learning websites. However, 18% of them often read original English books to expand their vocabulary and improve their reading skills.
With the purpose of enhancing our English learning effectively, frequently reading foreign materials is required a lot; making every effort to talk with native speakers is absolutely a
在课堂之外学习英语
我们可以做很多事情来学好英语。

对此，不同的人有不同的观点。

最近，我们就如何在课堂之外学好英语进行了热烈的讨论。

详情如下。

如图表所示，大多数学生通过听英文歌曲来学习英语，占比高达65%.这使他们能够很好地掌握英语。

高达 50% 的学生通过观看英语电影获得英语知识，相比之下，12%的学生通过检索有用的英语学习网站获得英语知识。

然而，只有18%的学生经常阅读英文原著，以扩大词汇量，提高阅读能力。

为了有效地提高我们的英语学习水平，
经常阅读外国资料是非常有必要的;尽可能与以英语为母语的人交流无疑是个
好主意。

众所周知，无论选择什么方法，最适合我们
good idea. As is known to us all, any way that suits us best is a good choice. So the right choice is the wise choice. 的就是好的。

所以，合适的选择就是明智的选择。

亮点词汇
opinion 观点
heated 激烈的
the majority of 大多数
have a good command of很好地掌握attain 获得
original 原始的expand 扩大
enhance 提高
as is known to us all 众所周知suit 适合
范文赏析5
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well. Recently, we have carried out a questionnaire on ways o learning English beyond the classroom.
We can see from the bar chart that there are mainly four approaches, among which listening to English music and watching English movies take up the largest proportion, compared with reading English books which makes up 18% and browsing English learning websites making up 12%. The statistics show that students have a positive degree of attitude toward entertaining English activities carried out beyond the classroom. The chart also indicates that, compared to reading, students prefer visual and auditory activities, such as watching movies and listening to music.
In short, the approach beyond the classroom is one of the
ways to address the challenge of students’ becoming interested in fun ways. It is also proposed that teachers use more activities
在课堂之外学习英语
我们可以做很多事情来学好英语。

最近，我们进行了一项关于课外英语学习方式的问卷调查。

我们从柱状图可以看出，主要有四种方式，其中听英语歌曲和看英电影所占比例最大，相比之下，阅读英语书籍占18%，浏览英语学习网占12%。

统计数据表明，学生对课堂之外的娱乐性英语活动有着积极的度。

该图表还表明，与阅读相比，学生更喜
欢视觉和听觉活动，如看电和听音乐。

简而言之，课堂之外的方法是解决学生对有趣的方式产生兴趣这一批的方法之一。

同时，建议教师在课堂之外使用更多的活动来鼓励学生形习英语的积极态度。

beyond the classroom to encourage students to develop a positive attitude in learning English .
亮点词汇
questionnaire 问卷调查indicate 显示approach 方法
visual视觉的
take up 占据
auditory 听觉的statistics 统计数据
in short 总之;简而言之positive 积极的encourage 鼓励
范文赏析6
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well. Nowadays, with the growing popularity of smart phones and computers, an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can be easy to see from the chart that the percentage of students who choose to listen to English songs and watch English movies is 65% and 50% respectively. However, those choosing to read English books and browse English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I'm concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what will be most beneficial to their learning is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they're more easily addicted to chatting or playing games online. lt's urgent for students themselves to improve their self-discipline.
在课堂之外学习英语
我们可以做很多事情来学好英语。

如今，随着智能手机和电脑的日益普及，越来越多的学生选择以各种各样的方式进行课堂之外的英语学习。

从图表不难看出，选择听英文歌曲和看英文电影的学生比例分别为65%和50%。

然而，选择阅读英语书籍和浏览英语学习网站的学生仅占18%和12%。

就我而言，这是一个令人不安的趋势。

对学生来说，对他们的学习最有益的是阅读英语书籍。

由于他们缺乏自律性，他们更容易沉迷于网上聊天或玩游戏。

让学生们提高自律性，迫在眉睫。