高中英语真题-2014高考英语书面表达训练(9)及参考范文【四川省绵阳市2014高考英语一模试题】
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高中英语真题:2014高考英语书面表达训练（9）及参考范文【四川省绵阳市2014高考英
语一模试题】
【四川省绵阳市2014高考英语一模试题】
书面表达 (满分25分)
假设你是李华，今年夏天即将进入伦敦大学学习，但是不知怎样适应国外大学的生活。
所以写信给你的英国笔友John，结合下列其他大学新生经常遇到的情况，寻求建议。
1. 感到孤独、经常想家；
2. 文化、食物、气候不适应；
3. 在生活中不会照料自己；
4. 难以找到满意的房东；
5. 教师全英授课难以理解。
注意：1. 短信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.词数100左右。
Dear John,
This summer I will go to study at London University, but I don't k now how to adapt myself to the new life.
________________________________________________________ _________
Li Hua
【参考范文】书面表达：（25分）
One possible version: Dear John,
This summer I will go to study at London University, but I don't k now how to adapt myself to the new life.
I hear that many fresh
men are at a loss what to do when they are in a foreign country. Feeling lonely and homesick, they find it much
harder to get used to the new culture, diet and climate. Most of them can't tak
e good care o
f themselves in their everyday life. Besides, it is di fficult to find a satisfyin
g host and fully understand what the tea chers teac
h in class since they speak English all the time.
Could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that I will be able to suit the university life in the future?
Yours,
Li Hua
【四川省绵阳市2014高考英语一模试题】书面表达（满分25分）
假如你是一名高三学生，经常为看电视的事跟妈妈闹意见，今天你跟妈妈达成一致。
请根据以下表格的内容，
以 An Argument 为题为《英语广场》写一篇120字左右的英语短文。
母亲
高三学生学习任务重，看电视浪费时间;
儿子自制力差，看电视会影响视力;
儿子
学习一天很疲劳，看电视可以放松一下;
看电视也可以增长知识，了解国际国内大事，紧跟时代;
星期中不准我看电视，但在周末允许我看新闻、文艺、体育或科普类节目
注意：
1.短文的开头已给出，不记入总词数;
2.参考表格中的内容，但不要逐字翻译;
3.可以适当增添合乎情理的过渡性语言。
I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my mother over …【书面表达参考范文】
I am a Senior 3 student. I often q
uarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school . My mother holds the view that students in Senior 3, heavily bu rden
ed with their studies, are too busy to spare any time to watch T V. It seems
to her that once I am allowed to do that I will not be able to con trol myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it i s bad for my eyes to watch TV too often. But I really can't accep t her ideas. I think it is relaxing to watch TV after a day's hard w ork.. Not only can it set my mind at rest, but it can broaden my horizons. Now we have at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limite d to news and programs of entertainment, sports or science.
【湖南省怀化市2014高考英语3月一模试题】
Section C (25 marks)
Directions: Write an English composition according to the inst ructions given below in Chinese.
假设你的笔友Tony因上期高三期末数学考试未及格而倍受打击，情绪低落。
请你 (王华)写一封信给他，鼓励他重拾自信，实现梦想。
注意：
1、词数不少于120个；
2、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you failed in the last final math exam, but what worries me most is that you are in low spirits when facing f ailure.
As senior three students, we all have taken examinations of diff erent types and experienced failure as well as success. There i s no doubt that we should take positive attitudes towards our se tbacks. We should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failu re, which could help us escape repeating the similar mistakes. Only when we find out the cause of our failure can we make pro gress in our study. As for your anxiety, I think doing some sport s is good for you because it can give you some time to be refre
shed in both body and mind so that we can go on with our learn ing energetically and efficiently.
I hope all above can help you a lot. Let’s work hard together an d turn our dream into reality.
Yours，
Wang Hua
【2014高考英语安徽省六校联考】
书面表达 (满分25分)
手机和我们的生活越来越密切，让我们的联系变得更加方便，可有人认为手机并不利于真正的交流。
校报英文版正在开展征文活动，发起对这一话题的讨论，你认为手机对人与人之间沟通的影响是利大于弊还是弊大于利？请你以
“Mobile phones, good or bad for communication?”为题写篇短文向校报投稿，表达你的看法。
注意：1. 词数120左右；
2. 短文题目已拟好，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不可出现与本人相关的信息。
淮河两岸
Mobile phones, good or bad for communication?
________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________ ________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________
________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________
【参考范文】One possible version
Mobile phones, good or bad for communication?
The technology of mobile phones has made many things easier for people. Someone can reach us or we can call someone wh erever we are. However, people are unaware of the negative eff ects of mobile phones on communication.
Due to the convenience of mobile phones, many people have st arted to engage in social interaction in person less than before. In addition, mobile phone communication lacks facial expressio ns and body language, without which communication becomes l ess personal. Consequently, some people get confused and ne rvous while talking to a person face to face because they mostl y talk to people on mobile phones. They even do not know the manners of communication.
As far as I am concerned, we should use mobile phones in a wi se way and try to avoid depending too much on them.
【2014四川省资阳市第一次诊断性考试】
书面表达（满分35分）
假设你是李华，你的父母总是喜欢替你包办一切，你觉得很苦恼。
请你根据以下提示给某英语报社编辑写一封信。
1. 简述现象（两种）；
2. 分析弊端（两个方面）；
3. 你的观点或建议。
注意：
1. 词数120左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：独立性independence
Dear Editor,
I’d like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. My parents ten
d to mak
e almost all decisions for me. ______________________ ____________________________
________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ____________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【评分原则】
1. 本题总分为35分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于100的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
【语言错误的界定】
1. 考生必须以完整的主谓结构表达出要点，如有严重错误视为半个要点。
2. 考生如果以主从句表达要点，主句主谓结构正确，从句主谓结构有严重错误，视为全点。
3. 大小写和标点错误，酌情扣1-2分。
4. 重复语言错误只扣1分。
5. 书写、卷面较差，影响判卷，扣1-2分。
6. 词数少于100词扣2分；
7. 下列情况不给分：所写内容与试题要点无关；错误已经影响意义的表达；只写出零星的相关词汇而无主谓结构。
【内容要点】
1. 两种现象；
2. 两个弊端；
3. 你的观点或建议。
【各档次给分范围和要求】
第五档（29~35分）
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
覆盖所有内容要点。
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档（22~28分）
完成了试题规定的任务。
虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档（15~21分）
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档（8~14分）
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档（1~7分）
未完成试题规定的任务。
明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
信息未能传达给读者。
0分
未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
五、说明
1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达。
2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
【参考范文】One possible version:
Dear Editor,
I’d like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. My parents tend to make almost all decisions for me. They choose the school and subjects for me. Sometimes even clothin g and daily timetables have to be decided by them.
In my opinion, deciding everything for children does
not help them but harm them in many ways. Firstly, i
t will make children lack independence, which is unfavorable to their development in the long run. Secondly, in many cases par ents’ decisions go against children’s personal ideas and interest s, which will make children form resistance and naturally influen ce their growth.
I do believe to grow to be independent is a natural way for ever ybody. Parents should give us chances to make our own decisi ons. They may help us make choices instead of replacing us to make choices.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2014高考英语书面表达训练（9）及参考范文【四川省绵阳市2014高考英语一模试题】
【四川省绵阳市2014高考英语一模试题】
书面表达 (满分25分)
假设你是李华，今年夏天即将进入伦敦大学学习，但是不知怎样适应国外大学的生活。
所以写信给你的英国笔友John，结合下列其他大学新生经常遇到的情况，寻求建议。
1. 感到孤独、经常想家；
2. 文化、食物、气候不适应；
3. 在生活中不会照料自己；
4. 难以找到满意的房东；
5. 教师全英授课难以理解。
注意：1. 短信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.词数100左右。
Dear John,
This summer I will go to study at London University, but I don't know how to adapt myself to the new life.
_________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【参考范文】书面表达：（25分）One possible version: Dear John,
This summer I will go to study at London University, but I don't know how to adapt myself to the
new life.
I hear that many fresh
men are at a loss what to do when they are in a foreign country. Feeling lonely and homesick, t hey find it much harder to get used to the new culture, diet and climate. Most of them can't tak e good care of themselves in their everyday life. Besides, it is difficult to find a satisfying host an d fully understand what the teachers teach in class since they speak English all the time.
Could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that I will be able to suit the university life in the future?
Yours,
Li Hua
【四川省绵阳市2014高考英语一模试题】书面表达（满分25分）
假如你是一名高三学生，经常为看电视的事跟妈妈闹意见，今天你跟妈妈达成一致。
请根据以下表格的内容，以 An Argument 为题为《英语广场》写一篇120字左右的英语短文。
母亲
高三学生学习任务重，看电视浪费时间;
儿子自制力差，看电视会影响视力;
儿子
学习一天很疲劳，看电视可以放松一下;
看电视也可以增长知识，了解国际国内大事，紧跟时代;
星期中不准我看电视，但在周末允许我看新闻、文艺、体育或科普类节目
注意：
1.短文的开头已给出，不记入总词数;
2.参考表格中的内容，但不要逐字翻译;
3.可以适当增添合乎情理的过渡性语言。
I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my mother over …
【书面表达参考范文】
I am a Senior 3 student. I often q
uarrel with my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. My mother holds the view that students in Senior 3, heavily burden
ed with their studies, are too busy to spare any time to watch TV. It seems
to her that once I am allowed to do that I will not be able to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks that it is bad for my eyes to watch TV too often. But I really can't acce pt her ideas. I think it is relaxing to watch TV after a day's hard work.. Not only can it set my min d at rest, but it can broaden my horizons. Now we have at last reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends, and the programs should be limited
to news and programs of entertainment, sports or science.
【湖南省怀化市2014高考英语3月一模试题】
Section C (25 marks)
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese .
假设你的笔友Tony因上期高三期末数学考试未及格而倍受打击，情绪低落。
请你 (王华)写一封信给他，鼓励他重拾自信，实现梦想。
注意：
1、词数不少于120个；
2、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you failed in the last final math exam, but what worries me most is that you are in low spirits when facing failure.
As senior three students, we all have taken examinations of different types and experienced fail ure as well as success. There is no doubt that we should take positive attitudes towards our set backs. We should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure, which could help us escape r epeating the similar mistakes. Only when we find out the cause of our failure can we make prog ress in our study. As for your anxiety, I think doing some sports is good for you because it can g ive you some time to be refreshed in both body and mind so that we can go on with our learning energetically and efficiently.
I hope all above can help you a lot. Let’s work hard together and turn our dream into reality.
Yours，
Wang Hua
【2014高考英语安徽省六校联考】
书面表达 (满分25分)
手机和我们的生活越来越密切，让我们的联系变得更加方便，可有人认为手机并不利于真正的交流。
校报英文版正在开展征文活动，发起对这一话题的讨论，你认为手机对人与人之间沟通的影响是利大于弊还是弊大于利？请你以“Mobile phones, good or bad for communication?”为题写篇短文向校报投稿，表达你的看法。
注意：1. 词数120左右；
2. 短文题目已拟好，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不可出现与本人相关的信息。
淮河两岸
Mobile phones, good or bad for communication?
____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________
【参考范文】One possible version
Mobile phones, good or bad for communication?
The technology of mobile phones has made many things easier for people. Someone can reach us or we can call someone wherever we are. However, people are unaware of the negative eff ects of mobile phones on communication.
Due to the convenience of mobile phones, many people have started to engage in social interac tion in person less than before. In addition, mobile phone communication lacks facial expression s and body language, without which communication becomes less personal. Consequently, so me people get confused and nervous while talking to a person face to face because they mostly talk to people on mobile phones. They even do not know the manners of communication.
As far as I am concerned, we should use mobile phones in a wise way and try to avoid dependi ng too much on them.
【2014四川省资阳市第一次诊断性考试】
书面表达（满分35分）
假设你是李华，你的父母总是喜欢替你包办一切，你觉得很苦恼。
请你根据以下提示给某英语报社编辑写一封信。
1. 简述现象（两种）；
2. 分析弊端（两个方面）；
3. 你的观点或建议。
注意：
1. 词数120左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：独立性independence
Dear Editor,
I’d like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. My parents ten
d to mak
e almost all decisions for me. __________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【评分原则】
1. 本题总分为35分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于100的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
【语言错误的界定】
1. 考生必须以完整的主谓结构表达出要点，如有严重错误视为半个要点。
2. 考生如果以主从句表达要点，主句主谓结构正确，从句主谓结构有严重错误，视为全点。
3. 大小写和标点错误，酌情扣1-2分。
4. 重复语言错误只扣1分。
5. 书写、卷面较差，影响判卷，扣1-2分。
6. 词数少于100词扣2分；
7. 下列情况不给分：所写内容与试题要点无关；错误已经影响意义的表达；只写出零星的相关词汇而无主谓结构。
【内容要点】
1. 两种现象；
2. 两个弊端；
3. 你的观点或建议。
【各档次给分范围和要求】
第五档（29~35分）
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
覆盖所有内容要点。
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档（22~28分）
完成了试题规定的任务。
虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因为尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档（15~21分）
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档（8~14分）
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档（1~7分）
未完成试题规定的任务。
明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
信息未能传达给读者。
0分
未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
五、说明
1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达。
2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
【参考范文】One possible version:
Dear Editor,
I’d like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. My parents tend to make al most all decisions for me. They choose the school and subjects for me. Sometimes even clothin g and daily timetables have to be decided by them.
In my opinion, deciding everything for children does
not help them but harm them in many ways. Firstly, i
t will make children lack independence, which is unfavorable to their development in the long ru n. Secondly, in many cases parents’ decisions go against children’s personal ideas and interest s, which will make children form resistance and naturally influence their growth.
I do believe to grow to be independent is a natural way for everybody. Parents should give us c hances to make our own decisions. They may help us make choices instead of replacing us to make choices.
Y ours sincerely,
Li Hua。