高中英语作文---道歉信

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Dear Mr. Jackson,
_________________________________________________
_________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Let's take actions! Write an a letter of apology in 15 minutes.
my fault. 3. I hope the settlement of this matter can meet your
wishes.
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第四步:再次表示歉意,愿意为此负责,希望 以后不再出现类似不愉快事件。 1. I promise that I will never make such a stupid
I know any word might sound a made up excuse. But I did not use the mobile phone for no reason. I was trying to find a part time job last week and that day,I got a job offer and they needed my further information immediately. Therefore,I had no other choice but to try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered.
Please accept my most sincere apology . I promise that such a thing will never happen again.
Yours sincerely ———
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假如你是李华, 上周在外教Mr. Jackson 的口语课上使用 手机被老师发现, 手机被收走。 请给外教写一封道歉信, 内容应包括以下要点: 1. 表示歉意; 2. 解释上课使用手机的原因; 3. 提出自己的请求并适当表态。 注意:1. 可适当添加细节使文章连贯;字数100左右; 2. 信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
bad manners.
4. I am writing to express my sincere apology
for my …
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第二步:详细说明当时情况,解释原因,语气 要诚恳。 1. Now let me explain what happened that day. 2. I am afraid what I have done has caused much
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6. 弥补;赔偿
_m__a_k_e__u_p__fo_r__________
7. 赔偿;偿还
p__a_y_f_o_r__/_c_o_m__p_e_n__sa__te__for
8. 给你带来不便 _c_a_u_s_e__y_o_u__in_c_o__n_v_e_n_i_e_nce
9. 给你带来许多麻烦 _c_a_u_s_e__y_o_u__m__u_c_h__t_r_o_u_ble
A Letter of Apology
道歉信文体概述(Letter of apology) 道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事,
给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后给对方赔 礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。通常包括以 下三部分内容: 1. 开门见山,表明写信目的,表示歉意。 2. 说明出现差错的原因,提出弥补措施。 3. 再次致歉,请求原谅,希望得到理解(语 言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实)。
写熟悉的,会写的! 2.: 中间段: 造句能力 +高分套话
3.提出补救办法
结尾段: 3.语言要精彩:
2.说明具体原因
4.注意内容之间的连接 1.表示歉意
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Basic structure and expressions
第一步:简明说明写信目的,为自己的过失表示歉意, 希望得到对方的谅解。
inconvenience to you. 3.I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know
what happened.
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第三步:提出补救方法,具体提出自己的想法, 希望能弥补过失,消除误会。 1. To make up for my fault, I will…… 2. I wish you could give me a chance to make up for
10. 更加小心
_b_e__m_o__r_e_c_a_r_e_f_u_l______
11. 犯这样愚蠢的错误
ma_k__e_s_u_c_h__a__s_tu__p_i_d_m__i_s_ta_ke 12. 应当受到责备 b__e_t_o__b_l_a_m__e___________
13. 承担责任 be responsible for/shoulder
/undert_a_k_e__t_h_e__re_s_p__o_n_s_ib__il_i_ty___
14. 难以接受的后果
an unaccep_t_a_b__le__r_e_s_u_lt_/_c_o_n_s_e_q_u__e_nce
15. 下不为例
ne_v_e_r__le_t_i_t_h__a_p_p_e_n__a_g_a_i_n_
Step 1:审题
养成重视审题的习惯。
思考的问题 人称 题材
信息点的顺序 时态
样题分析 第一人称 一封道歉信 说理的逻辑性 一般现在时
注意:道歉之事有可能是已发生过的, 也有可能是将来不能做的事情
写信的一般要求
总结提升
1.内容要简单
对于题中所给的内容: 全面
道歉信写作4步走
对于自己发挥的内容:
简单
Dear Mr.Jackson,
I am really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture last week. Please accept my heart-felt apology for being so rude a student.
道歉的表达:
1. I feel sorry for my failurepticok…you up at the airport
2. I am awfully sorry that I cannot …
3. I am very sorry for
attend your party.
my rudeness/thoughtlessness /
mistake again. 2.I sincerely hope you can understand my
situation/think in my position and accept my apologies. 3.Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained.
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Step 2:写作
Dear_____,
I am writing this letter to apologize to you for ______________.
I feel very sorry about it and let me explain what happened that day/ (the reason is that) ___________ , but is it possible that I make up the loss ? To make up for my fault, I will……
Anyway,using a mobile phone in the classroom is not acceptable to any teacher. I swear it will not happen again. But I do need my phone back to keep in touch with others.
常用语块
1.因某事向某人道歉apologize to sb. for sth. / make a_n_a_p__o_lo_g_y__to__s_b_. _fo_r__st_h_.
2. 向……说对不起 _s_a_y__s_o_r_r_y_t_o_________ 3. 接受我的道歉 _a_c_c_e_p__t_m__y_a__p_o_l_o_g_y__ 4. 为某事原谅某人 _f_o_r_g_iv__e_s_b_._f_o_r__s_th__. __ 5. 并非故意做某事 h_a_v_e__n_o__in__te_n__ti_o_n__t_o_d__o sth.
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