三段十句作文法

三段十句作文法
银川一中魏凤玲
英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大提高作文成绩。

需要指出的是：所谓十句作文并非一定是10句，很多考生的高分作文（200字以下）的句子数量都在8至12句之间（以句子长短和结构不同而变化）。

如按每个句子平均10~15个单词计算，用8~12个句子便能完成一篇要求在120~150词的作文。

其基本模式为：
第一段（开头）主题句+扩展句
第二段（正文）
主题句+扩展句+扩展句+扩展句+扩展句（根据内容确定扩展句的多少）
第三段（结尾）——结尾句
第一段为开头，包括两句。

第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文主体；第二句为扩展句，进一步说明和支持主题句。

另外，也可将两句顺序倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。

第二段为正文，共七句。

第一句为主题句，提出本段的主体，它应与第一段的主体相一致。

第二句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主体。

句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。

第三段为结尾，简化为一句，使对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。

三段之间的衔接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的过渡手段。

范例：
高三学生学习紧张，考试压力大，因此，做一些户外运动时很有必要的。

请你以“Health and Sports”为题完成一篇短文。

可以围绕主题适当展开，词数100~120。

Health and Sports
Some students say that taking sports is just a waste of time. At school, there are so many subjects to learn and so much homework to do that time is precious to them. To us senior three students, every minute counts. As a consequence, there is no time available, especially for students to take outside sports.
However, I should utter a sonorous voice that sports are essential to us. As an old saying goes, “All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.”Concentrating on study for all day long without any relaxation is not effective and do harm to our health. Taking some exercises after class can relive the pressure of taking examinations. Of course, it is improper for students to overdo sports.
As a whole, we should make a balance between sports and study
专家点评：
本文是仿照十句作文法而写的一篇优秀考场作文。

文章围绕“Health and Sports”这一主题展开，两种观点陈述清楚。

文中运用大量的词组和短语，语句变化多样，过渡自然，结尾表明自己的观点，也显得落落大方
★英语写作常用句型模板
（一）段首句
1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。

一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some
people suggest that ____.
2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even
today.
3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。

首先，……；其次，……。

更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily
life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is
that______.
4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。

Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.
5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。

它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it
has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，……
People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.
Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming
more and more serious.
8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people，especially
among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in
our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of
benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可
以看出……。

很显然……，但是为什么呢？
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in
the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______
while. Obviously，______，but why?
（二）中间段落句
1. 相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。

On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At
the same time，they say____.
2. 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。

最糟糕的
是……。

But I dont think it is a very good way to solve ____.For
example，____.Worst of all，___.
3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。

首先，……。

而且……，最重要的是……
______is necessary and important to our countrys
development and construction. First，______.Whats
more, _____.Most important of all,______.
4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。

首先，我们可以……。

There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we
can______
5. 面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。

一方
面……，另一方面，
Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective
measures to______. For one thing，______For another，______
6. 早就应该拿出行动了。

比如说……，另外……。

所有这些方法肯定
会……。

It is high time that something was done about it. For
example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures
will certainly______.
7. 为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因
是……。

总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……
Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second
reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the
main cause of ______due to ______.
8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一
面，象……。

However, just like everything has both its good and bad
sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as
______.
9. 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。

Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.
结束段落
1.Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…把所有这些因素加以考虑，我们自然会得出结论……
2.Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…考虑所有这些因素，我们可能会得出合理的结论……
3. Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…因此，我们最好得出这样的结论……
4.All in all (In a word / In summary / To sum up), we cannot live without…But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise. 总之，我们没有……是无法生活的。

但同时，我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的问题。

5.It is high time that we put an end to the trend. 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。

6.It is time to take the advice of …and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …该是采纳……的建议，并对……的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。

7.There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够的重视。

8.Obviously, if we want to do something…, it is essential that…显然，如果我们想做某事，很重要的是……
9.Only in this way can we…只有这样，我们才能……
10.It must be realized that…我们必须意识到……
11.Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that…, which will lead us into danger. 很明显，如果我们不能控制这一问题，很有可能……，从而使我们陷入危险之中。

12.It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation. 很紧迫的是，应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展。

句式供略
•要抓住英语高考作文得高分的”关键点”,就需要把好增加句子复杂性和使用高级词汇这两道关。

以下是增加句子复杂性的常见方法：
•（1）句式要有变化。

改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地以主语开头，接着是谓语，宾语，最后再加一个状语。

可以把状语放在句首，或用分词作状语等。

•[原文] We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.
•[修正] Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.
•[原文] The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.
•[修正] Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.
•(2) 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如到装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语从句等。

•①强调句
•[原文] My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely.
•[修正] My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely.
•②由what等引导的从句，此处的what相当于中文中的“所……”，有很强的概括，如：
•[原文] We had to stand here to catch offender.
•[修正] What we had to do was ( to ) stand there, trying to catch the offender.
③由with或without引导的短语。

如：
He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.
④分词短语．如：
Satisfied with the result, he dicided to go on with a new experiment.
•⑤倒装句
•Only in this way can we achieve our goal.
•Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.
•⑥省略句
•If so, victory will be ours.
•You can make some changes wherever necessary.
•⑦对比，这在中文中也是常使用的方法．如
•Failure is not a crime, but failure to learn from failure is.
•When I play, I feel excited, and after it I feel relaxed.
•(3) 通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

•[原文] He stopped us an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.
•[修正] He stopped us an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
•[原文] We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.
•[修正] After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.
即时练习：
IV. 书面表达（25分）
对当前正红红火火的“网上购物”是有人欢喜有人忧，请你用英语写一篇120词左右的短文，谈谈自己的看法。

文章须包括以下要点：
1. 网上购物已很普遍；
2. 网上购物的好处；
3. 网上购物的缺点。

Shopping on line
★附：
作文中常用句型32个(供参考训练和背诵)
1.The most effective means to solve this problem is that_____________. In that case, __________.
2.Everything has two sides, no exception with_______________. For one thing,______________. For another,____________.
3.Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that____________________.
4.In a word, close attention should be paid to the problem of______________. Only in this way can ____________ in the future.
5.In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of_______________.
6.But______________ and ___________ have their own advantages. For example,__________, while__________. Comparing those two, however, I prefer to______________.
7.In my opinion,______________ is just as common as___________. If______________, it may be very useful. Whatever____________, the key point lies in______________.
8.In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision.
9.Personally, I believer that_____________. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is waiting us because___________.
10.People are coming to realize the importance of___________. They have begun to try their best to______________. We believe that______________.
11.All in all, we cannot live without_____________. But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to deal with problems that would arise.
12.Whatever you do, please remember the saying--_____________. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll definitely benefit a lot from it.
13.It is essential that effective actions should be taken to end the situation.
14.There is no doubt that special attention must be paid to the problem of__________.
15.It is high time that______________. Here are some of the measures that might be taken immediately.
16.Although it is affected by many factors, still there are certain ways that can make the situation better. The most important is _________. Another way is ____________. Still another one is ____________.
17.We may have a long way to go before we reach the final goal. But once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.
18.But for me, I would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way. Because I believe_________________.
19.We all know the story of____________. This lesson tells us that_____________, we should____________.
20.My own point of view is that_____________ is a normal behavior in our society. There is no doubt that___________. As an old saying goes,＂____________.＂
21.From all the reasons above, we know that great changes had taken place in_____________. And I believe that______________.
22.Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that______________.
23.For the reasons given above, I strongly recommend that________________.
24.Given the factors I have just outlined, I believe that__________________.
25.Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that________________.
26.Recognizing the fact that______________ should lead us to conclude that________________.
27.In short, I support the statement that it is better to_______________ because________________.
28.My point of view in_____________ largely results from the fact that______________.
29.Now after close examination, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that___________________.
30.In my opinion, to solve this problem there might be two ways. One way to solve this question is ___________. Another way that is worth adopting is________________.
31.As far as I am concerned, I trust the advantages mentioned above rather than the disadvantages.
32.For me,________________ is a glory and it is the most important thing I have to take into practical consideration.。