英语写作话题十一 劳动实践

1. Paper cutting
2. Cooking
3. Flower growing
*scissors Materials and
*red paper tools
…
*a pot *bowls *a knife *ingredients（调料 ）
*flower seeds（花种子 ） *earth（泥土） *flowerpots（花盆）…
2 Cooking Club（Materials and tools， Activities， Goals of joining）
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3 Favorite club and reasons（可根据实际情况选择，可参考以下举例： Cooking Club， like cooking， cook for parents） _C_o_o_k_i_n_g_C__lu_b__i_s_m__y_f_a_v_o_r_it_e_._I_l_ik_e__c_o_o_k_in_g__a_n_d__I_w_a_n__t _to__c_o_o_k_f_o_r _m_y__p_a_r_e_n_ts_.___
We can make a healthy menu about a healthy dishes for parents and friends，
diet. In the Cooking Club， we can learn but also make a healthy menu
cooking skills and become confident about about a healthy diet.
第四步：检查＋第五步：誊写 Our Labor Clubs
Are you ready for an interesting and colorful labor club？ Now I’d like to introduce some of our labor clubs.
We have a Paper Cutting Club. We need scissors， red paper and knives. We can cut red paper with scissors and knives into different shapes. We can put our works on the display board. We can understand the beauty of Chinese culture and decorate classrooms with them. We have a Cooking Club.
第三步：润色
衔接成篇
Our Labor Clubs Are you ready for an interesting and colorful labor club？ Now I’d
like to introduce some of our labor clubs. We have a Paper Cutting Club. We need scissors， red paper and
第二步：列点＋扩写成段 （一）罗列要点，连词成句（以Paper Cutting Club和Cooking Club为例） （可添加句子成分）
1 Paper Cutting Club（Materials and tools， Activities， Goals of joining）
① We have a Paper Cutting Club. ②We need scissors， red paper and knives.
第一步：审题 1.定主题：介绍劳动社团； 2.定人称：介绍学校的劳动社团和自己喜欢的社团，以第一人称为主； 3.定文体：介绍学校的劳动社团，为说明文； 4.定时态：时态以一般现在时为主； 5.定要点：根据题目要求可知共分三大要点（介绍其中两个社团＋自己喜 欢的社团及原因），注意介绍每个社团的时候对应的省略号需要考生自己 补充内容。
*become confident *relax from
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Reasons
要求：1.词数80～100； 2.介绍表格中的两个社团，结合实际情况，可适当发挥； 3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
Our Labor Clubs Are you ready for an interesting and colorful labor club？ Now I’d like to introduce some of our labor clubs.
衔接成篇
句子升格
Cooking Club. We need a pot， some bowls ①用not only… but also…升格句
， a knife and some ingredients. ①We can 子
cook delicious dishes for parents and friends. We can not only cook delicious
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We need a pot， some bowls， a knife and some ingredients. We can not only cook delicious dishes for parents and friends， but also make a healthy menu about a healthy diet. In the Cooking Club， we can learn cooking skills and become confident about ourselves.
团活 动）
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1. Paper cutting *understand the Goals of beauty of… joining *decorate（装饰） …… ★★★★★ Your favorite club
2. Cooking
3. Flower growing
*learn cooking skills *get close to….
1. Paper cutting
2. Cooking
3. Flower growing
*cut… with… *cook delicious dishes for… *grow flowers…
Activities *put… on… *make a healthy menu about *do a research about
（二）连句成段，扩写要点 Our Labor Clubs
Are you ready for an interesting and colorful labor club？ Now I’d like to introduce some of our labor clubs.
We have a Paper Cutting Club. We need scissors， red paper and knives. We can cut red paper with scissors and knives into different shapes. We can put our works on the display board. We can understand the beauty of Chinese culture and decorate classrooms with them. We have a Cooking Club. We need a pot，
（引出社团） （需要的工具）
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Hale Waihona Puke _.____________________________________________
话题十一 劳动实践
结合2022年版新课标，此话题属于人与自我做人范畴中的“劳动实践， 劳动品质与工匠精神”子主题，为近2年的热点话题，主要有以下命题角 度：1.劳动教育； 2.户外劳动； 3.家务劳动以及对家务劳动的看法； 4.劳 动的意义等。
[2023湖南岳阳]为了培养学生的劳动意识，增强他们的动手能力，学 校打破年级限制，成立了多个劳动社团。请根据以下表格提示，以“Our Labor Clubs”（我们的劳动社团）为题，写一篇英语短文，任选以下的两个 劳动社团介绍，并在其中选一个你最喜欢的社团，详细说明喜欢的理由。
ourselves.
衔接成篇
句子升格
Among them， ②Cooking ②用because连接两个句子升格
Club is my favorite. I want to cook Cooking Club is my favorite because I want
for my parents to make them happy. to cook for my parents to make them happy.
some bowls， a knife and some ingredients. We can cook delicious dishes for parents and friends. We can make a healthy menu about a healthy diet. In the Cooking Club， we can learn cooking skills and become confident about ourselves.
Among them， Cooking Club is my favorite. _I_w__a_n_t_t_o_c_o_o_k__fo__r_m__y_____ _p_a_r_e_n_t_s_t_o_m__a_k_e_t_h_e_m__h_a_p_p_y_.（加入这个社团更深层次的原因——表达对父 母的爱）
knives. We can cut red paper with scissors and knives into different shapes.
We can put our works on the display board. We can understand the beauty
of Chinese culture and decorate classrooms with them. We have a