高中英语：如何写建议信

______(问题).
First and for the most, ____on, _____(建议二). What’s more _____(建议三).
I hope you’ll find these proposals useful.
Yours sincerely,
称呼 ①提出写信的原因 ②过渡句引出建议 ③提出第一条建议 ④提出第二条建议 ⑤提出第三条建议 ⑥第四条建议 ⑦提出第四条建议 的理由 ⑧结尾 ⑨结尾。 ⑩表达本人的愿望
审题要点
1．人称：第一人称 2．时态：一般现在时 3. 段落布局：三段式 3．内容要点： ①简述了解到的情况并引出下文。 ②给出建议 ③希望建议有用
写作要点： 1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对 这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。 2. 对象： 1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己 的看法和观点； 2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。
基本框架：
开头（beginning）---- 开门见山，向对方陈 述自己的观点.(state your idea) 主体(body)---- 对所提出的问题进行分析并说 明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)
（连接词，高级词汇，高级句型）
假如你是李华，你与朋友Trancy 在微信（WeChat） 聊天中了解到她因室友到处扔东西而和室友争吵， 并为此感到烦恼。现在就这件事给她写一封建议信， 内容包括： 1.你所了解到的情况。 2.你的看法和建议。 注意：词数：100左右。
Dear _______, ①I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice with regard to ______./I’m glad to write the letter to you on ______/①I’m sorry to learn that ______, which is so common ____ that you don’t worry.②Here are a few suggestions for your reference. ③First,it is important to____,as you’ll _______.④Then,it also helps if you ______.⑤Besides,it should be a good idea to ______,because ______. ⑥You can also _______.⑦I’m sure that ________. ⑧I hope you will find these proposals useful. ⑨If you have any question,please write and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. ⑩Good luck with _______your____! Sincerely yours,
称呼 ①提出写信的原因 ②过渡句引出建议 ③提出第一条建议 ④第一条建议的理由 ⑤提出第二条建议 ⑥提出第三条建议 ⑦第三条建议的理由 ⑧提出第四条建议 ⑨第四条建议的理由 ⑩结尾。 11.表达本人的愿望
模板二：
Dear _____(对象)，
I am writing to express my views concerning
书面表达专题
---How to write a letter for advice
如何算是一篇好文章？ 要 －覆盖了所有的要点 点 －应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 全 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法 多样化（较复杂）语言地道
连 接 词
－有效地使用了语句间的连接成 分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯， 条理清楚。
结尾(ending)---- 呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)
书面表达如何写？
三 个 步 骤
Step 1 List the key points
（要点完整）
Step 2 Make sentences (人称，时态)
Step3. Form a passage and polish
适当运用模板
Dear _______, ①I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice with regard to ______./I’m glad to write the letter to you on ______/ ①I’m sorry to learn that ______. which is so common ____ that you don’t worry.② Here are a few suggestions for your reference. ③First,it is important to____,④as you’ll _______.⑤Then,it also helps if you ______.⑥Besides,it should be a good idea to ______,⑦because ______. ⑧You can also _______.⑨I’m sure that ________. ⑩I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. 11.Good luck with _______your____! Sincerely yours, Li Hua
1.I learn from the We Chat that you quarreled with your roommate for her littering everywhere ,which you are upset with . 2.It is common in life ,so you don’t have to worry. 3.The following are my advice to you. 4.Firstly, you should not quarrel with her ,because it’s useless and it is of no help to solve the problem. 5.You’d better have a face-to-face talk ,and let her know what she did will make the room messy ,and untidy ,leading to roommates’ dislike. 6.You should make her aware of the importance of forming a good habit that can be beneficial to her health. 7.If you do as I tell you to , I’m sure that your efforts will pay off. 8.The above are my proposals for you ,and I hope they are of great use to you. 9.If you have any further questions ,please write to me. 10.Looking forward to your reply and I’m ready to help you.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading 整 体 三 部 分
点题；一两个句子；概括性； 暗示性
2. Body
中心记述部分；层次分明
3. Ending
小结；呼应主题
常用套语
A．建议信开头常用句式
to know that … 2. I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3. I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter 4. I am writing to you for the purpose of …
Dear Bob, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to , I suggest (有时根据需要 具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). I'm sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以 行动的信心和决心). I'm looking forward to (表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua
B. 表达建议（body）
1 .I think it would be more beneficial if you could … 2. I would like to suggest/recommend that… 3. If I were you, I would… 4. Why not …?/ How (What) about doing … First,/Firstly,/ Secondly,/ Then,/ After 5. …is a In good/great idea. Finally, /Meanwhile, that,/ the end,/ 6. You may more,/ consider doing … /What’s 7. It would seem/seems to me Furthermore, that you could …… In addition,/ Besides,/ 8. In my opinion, it would be wise to take the following action. 9. When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should…
(照应材料,表明写作意图)
1. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry
5. I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you.
6. You have asked me for some advice with regard to … and I will try to make some conductive suggestions. 7. You have asked me for my advice about/on …
Li Ming
Dear____, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _____, and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _____. I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you / your ______(祝愿). Yours sincerely Li Ming
十句作文法： 1.我从微信上了解到你和室友因为她乱扔东西而吵架，并且你很 烦恼. 2.这样的事情是生活中常有的，所以你不用担心。 3.下面是我给你的建议。 4.首先你不应该和她吵架，因为这样是没用，解决不了问题。 5.你最好和她当面谈谈，让她知道她的所作所为为大家带来不好 的影响，例如：会让房间看起来乱七八糟，环境不好，会引起大 家的反感。 6.你应该告诉她养成好习惯的重要性，可以帮助她去做一个良好 的开端。 7.如果按照我说的去做，我相信一定有好的结果。 8.以上就是我给你的建议，希望对你有用. 9.如果你还有问题，可以写信给我。 10.期待着你的来信并帮你解决问题。