金老师教育培训人教版英语九年级全册Starter Unit 6 第4课时Writing

如何写好物品描写类文章
【写作技巧】＂两步一注意法＂写介绍某发明的情况
第一步：总述发明
第二步：具体介绍发明的相关情况
注意：应该用一般过去时
【典例】根据要求完成大作文，词数：80词左右。

现在的科技日新月异，各种发明以及高科技产品成为了我们生活中不可缺少的东西，如电脑、笔记本电脑(laptop)、手机(mobile phone)、MP4、数码相机(digital camera)、数码摄影机(DV)等。

请以My Favorite Invention 为题描述你最喜欢的一种发明，并说明理由(理由至少有两个方面)。

【佳作展示】
My Favorite Invention
Among all the modern inventions, the laptop is my favorite one. I think it is the most amazing invention in the 21st century. Laptops are light and small. They are easy to carry. With a laptop, we can work, study and entertain
写好物品描写类文章的三点建议：
1. 抓住特点，注重顺序。

2. 一般用第三人称写，时态一般用一般现在时。

3. 要抓住所描写物品的典型特征（外观、用处、产地等）和与众不同之处。

everywhere. A laptop can get to the Internet outside, which enables us to get the latest information whenever we want. Using a laptop, I can keep in touch with my friends and family through e-mails and QQ at any time and in any place. I think in the future, everybody will have his or her own laptop.
（一）
请根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，简要说明电视在日常生活中的作用。

要求90词左右。

1. 许多家庭有电视，许多人喜欢看电视。

2. 电视的作用：它使人们了解许多地方的情况；能帮助人们开阔眼界和思维；有助于人们学习更新更好的
方法；使人们感到世界太小了。

3. 电视的坏处：长时间地看电视会伤害人的身体，影响人们的健康，影响人们正常的工作和学习。

因此，
要有节制地看电视。

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（二）
在英语课上，老师组织了以＂介绍身边熟悉的发明＂为主题的小组交流活动。

下面表格是小明所要介绍的物品的主要内容。

假如你是小明，请你根据内容写一篇70词的短文。

invention when who be used for
camera 1827 Joseph Nicephore taking photos
abacus 600 BC Chinese people counting
potato chips 1853 George Crum eating
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（一）
At the same time it also has some disadvantages. People waste too much time in watching TV and their normal life and work are affected. To those children who spend too much time in watching TV. It can do harm to their sight and health.
In a word, we should take advantage of TV and control our time of watching TV.
（二）
There are many great inventions in the world. Here①is a short introduction. For example, the camera was invented in 1827. It was invented by Joseph Nicephore, and②it is used for③taking photos. The abacus was invented in 600 BC, and was invented by Chinese people. It’s used for counting. Potato chips were invented in④1853. They were invented by George Crum and they are used for eating.
【名师点评】
本文用＂两步一注意法＂介绍发明的物品的情况。

先总体介绍，然后介绍物品的具体情况。

逻辑清晰，内容完整。

本文的添彩点：①Here在此是副词置于句首，其后主语为名词时，句子用完全倒装。

②and在此使上下文表达连贯，结构紧凑。

③be used for被用来。

④表示在年、月、季节、早上、下午、晚上时，其前用介词in；表示在几点用at；表示在具体某一天用on。

学科&网。