四川省资阳市高考英语二轮复习书面表达训练(3)

四川资阳市2016高考英语二轮书面表达训练（3）
议论文型基础写作1---1
专题导读
议论文是作者对某个问题或某件事进行分析、评论，表明自己的观点、立场、态度、看法和主张的一种文体。

议论文有三要素，即论点、论据和论证。

论点的基本要求是：观点正确，认真概括，有实际意义；论据的基本要求是：真实可靠，充分典型；论证的基本要求是：推理必须符合逻辑。

议论文的写作要注意以下几点：
1．准确找出论点、论据及其之间的相互关系，即找出要点。

2．合理安排材料的顺序，即论点、论据和结论之间的表述方式。

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3．注意文章的时态、语态等。

议论文常用一般现在时，但叙说过去的事实时，可用过去时态；预测将来时，要用将来时态；也经常使用被动语态；有时假设一种虚拟情况时，还需要用虚拟语气。

典例导练
【2011·湖南卷改编】【写作内容】
假设你参加所在年级的英文写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇短文：
1．简要描述下图内容，并点明主题；
2．联系实际，表达该图带给你的启示。

【写作要求】
1．只能使用5个句子表达所有内容，
开头已给出，但不计入总句数。

2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章
结构连贯。

One possible version：
As can be seen from the picture，when drops of water accumulate，they can form the sea；trees added together can make the forest，and the human society is formed by every individual or family.
The picture conveys an important message that human society is made up of every individual.It is our responsibility to make as much effort as possible to make our society a good place to live in.As a matter of fact，every individual has his uniqueness and every individual has something in common with others as well.Learning from each other，we can bring richness to our quality and we can live a harmonious life.That is what all the people expect，I am sure.
新题预测
(一)
中国民工学校状况越来越受到人们的关注，假设你是李华，你和你的同学共同对你所在城市的民工学校进行了调查。

了解情况之后你写信给英语周报，呼吁全社会关注民工学校，帮助民工子弟。

参考词汇：民工学校migrant school
【写作要求】
1．只能使用5个句子表达所有内容，信的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总句数。

2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

One possible version：
Dear Editor，
Recently，my classmates and I made a survey about the migrant schools in our city.Problems do exist.
Owing to the lack of money, most migrant schools have no modern equipment, no playground, no libraries, and even not enough teachers. However, we find that the migrant kids are just as keen on study as us. In order to improve the situation, we think our government should take measures to pour more money into migrant schools. As for us, the local students,
can help to collect money or donate books to them. We do hope that the whole society can care more about migrant kids, because if everyone contributes a bit, migrant kids can surely enjoy an equal education opportunity.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
(二)
【写作内容】
近年来，不少中学生注册了博客，对此人们观点各异。

有人认为写博客可以帮助学生展示自我，减缓压力。

也有人认为它浪费时间，耽误学习。

请根据以上提示并结合自己的想法谈谈不同的人(包括你自己)对中学生写博客的看法。

【写作要求】
1．文章的题目和开头已给出(不计入总句数)；
2．文中不得出现考生的具体信息。

【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

One possible version：
Middle School Students Are Writing Blogs
In recent years, it’s a common phenomenon that a growing number of middle school students start their own blogs on the Internet.
Some believe it can provide a colorful stage for students to show their talents and it’s a nice way to help them relieve pressure.However, others agree that managing a blog will take a lot of time and energy, which should be used for study.
Personally, I do approve of students having their own blogs because the Internet is playing a vital part in our life. As a matter of fact, whether blogging is of harm or not depends on how we employ it. If we can take full advantage of blogging and meanwhile avoid its negative effects, we can surely benefit a lot from it.
【北京市东城区2014高考英语调研检测题】
书面表达（共两节，35分）
第一节（15分）
你的美国朋友William下个月即将来北京。

请根据以下提示给他写信，告知他到达当日的安排。

1.你去机场接机。

2.送他去酒店。

3.晚上欢迎他来你家共进晚餐。

注意：1. 词数不少于50。

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 邮件的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。

Dear William,
______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
Yours Joe
【参考答案】第一节（15分）
一、评分原则：
1．本题总分为15分，按4个档次给分。

2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3．评分时应考虑：内容是否充实，交际是否得体，语言是否准确。

4．拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。

英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

5．词数少于50，从总分中减去1分。

二、各档次的给分范围和要求：
三、Possible version
Dear William,
I’m so happy that you’re coming to Beijing next month. I’ll go to the airport to meet you on the day you arrive. After that, I’ll send you to the hotel. You can have a rest there after the long flight. My parents and I will be very happy if you can come over to our house for dinner that evening.
It’s a long time since we last met. I can’t wait to see you!
Yours Li Hua
【北京市东城区2014高考英语调研检测题】
假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华。

下面四幅图描述了发生在你上学路上的一件事，请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。

词数不少于60。

___________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________
【参考答案】第二节（20分）
一、评分原则：
1．本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。

2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3．评分时应考虑：内容要点的完整性、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。

4．拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时，应视其影响程度予以考虑。

英、美拼写及词
汇用法均可接受。

5．词数少于60，从总分中减去1分。

二、内容要点：
1.看到一个外国人在打车
2.外国人和出租车司机交流有困难
3.上前帮助翻译
4. 外国人和出租车司机表示感谢
三、各档次的给分范围和要求：
四、One possible version
I was walking to school the other day when I saw a foreigner standing by the roadside. A taxi passed by. He stopped it and told the driver where he wanted to go in English. However, the driver didn’t understand English. Both of them had no idea what to do. Seeing that they had difficulty in communicating with each other, I went up to help. After the foreigner told me his destination, I interpreted for him and told the driver where the foreigner was going. Problem was solved and the foreigner got in the taxi. Both of them thanked me for my help.。