2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能 热点话题表达微技能6(脱险经历+心理综合刻画)(含PPT)
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• When his mother kissed him on the cheek, it seemed as if the baby were on the top of the world. (小婴儿开心极了。)
• A ripple of excitement ran through them. (一阵阵激动声穿过他 们。)
• I said nervously, my voice __tr_e_m__b_l_in_g__ (tremble) a bit.
• With _a___ p_o__u_n_d_i_n_g _h_e_a_r_t_ (砰砰跳的心脏) and __c_o_ld___, _m__o_is_t__ __p_a_l_m_s__ (
No.2 悲伤
普通版：He was sad. 进阶版： 动作描写： • She _s_o_b_b_e_d__, hiding her face in her hands. (她掩面啜泣。) • He _si_g_h_e_d__ w__it_h___di_s_a_p_p_o_i_n_tm__e_n_t_. (失望地叹了口气。) • He struggled to _fi_g_h_t_b_a_c_k_/_s_w_a_l_lo_w__a_g_a_i_n_st_/_h_o_ld__b_a_c_k_/_c_h_o_k_e_b_a_c_k____ his
环境+心理活动描写
The rain began again that night. It beat against the window, [waking Mary up]. She listened as the wind howled around the house and down the chimney. She tried but could not get back to sleep. “Stupid wind!” she thought.
• Taking a deep breath, Mary pushed open the door and stepped inside. 玛丽深吸了一口气，推开门走了进去。
• She swallowed hard and stepped into a huge room. 她使劲咽了一下口水，走进一个大房间。
坐针毡。) • Fear slowly crept upon her. 恐惧慢慢地爬上她的心头。 • A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over (淹没) him. • I felt that the blood in my body froze rapidly because of the terrible sight. • I was seized by a sudden impulse (冲动) to run. • Standing in the classroom, I became increasingly nervous and could feel
6. He glared at me with burning eyes.
7. My voice sounds like a growling, angry bear.
8. She threw the invitation on the table with
annoyance, murmuring...
2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能
人物心理状态综合描写微技能
心理活动描写
• Mary felt her spirits sink even lower. 玛丽觉得她的情绪更低落了。
• Mary felt a wave of anger sweep over her.
玛丽感到一阵愤怒。
神态描写
那天晚上又开始下雨了。雨拍打着窗户，把玛丽吵醒了。她听着风在 房子周围呼啸，从烟囱里呼啸而下。她想睡，但还是睡不着。“愚蠢 的风！”她想。
主观心理感受描写
普通版：He was happy.
No.1 开心
进阶版:
动作描写：
• Tears of happiness __p_o_u_r_e_d_ _d__o_w_n__ Susan’s _c_h_e_e_k_s__. (沿着脸颊奔流而下)
No.3 紧张／害怕
普通版：He was nervous.
进阶版：
动作+神态描写：
• At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt so scared that _m_y__ __t_h_r_o_a_t_ __ti_g_h_t_e_n_e_d
and _m__y__ _k__n_e_e_s__ _f_e_l_t___ __w_e_a_k___. (喉咙发紧，膝盖发软)
• The smile on her face __s_h_o_n_e__ ___li_k_e__ __a___ __d_ia_m__o_n_d_. (像钻石一样闪耀)
• He cast us a glance, with his face wearing a broad/wide/radiant/warm smile.
心理描写： • My heart seemed to __b_e__to_r_n_____ (tear). (心都要撕碎了) • Upon hearing the bad news, she _fe_l_t_s_e_iz_e_d_/_e_n_g_u_l_fe_d_/_o_v_e_r_w_h_e_l_m__e_d_/o_v_e_r_c_o_m__e
tears. (抑制泪水)
• He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. • Her hands were trembling. She was on the verge of tears. (快要哭了)
• When he embraced me with his arms open wide, I felt my throat choke with sob/tightened. (当他张开双臂拥抱我时，我觉得自己喉头哽咽。)
停止了。
动作描写
• He scowled (怒视), slamming the door behind him. 他怒气冲冲，摔门而去。
• She fumbled (摸索) for the key, [her heart beating faster than a galloping horse]. 她摸索着找钥匙，心跳得比一匹疾驰的马还快。
• Joy _w__e_ll_e_d_ __u_p___ inside her. (她心中涌起喜悦。) • Hearing this, everybody _w__a_s__ __w_i_ld____ _w__it_h___ _j_o_y____. (欣
喜若狂) • Her heart was pounding/beating with excitement. （砰砰直跳）
• She __s_h_e_d___ __t_e_a_r_s_ ___o_f__ ___jo_y____. (落下开心的泪水)
• I beamed at (笑容满面) him, “Welcome back, ...”
• He grinned with delight (咧嘴开心地笑) when he saw us.
冰冷潮湿的手掌), I felt faint.
• I ___fr_o_z_e_ _w__it_h__ _t_e_r_r_o_r_ (因害怕而僵住), too scared to move an inch.
• Her face turned ___p_a_l_e__ (苍白的) and stood there _【__t_o_n_g_u_e_-__(舌头打结的).
No.2 悲伤
神态描写： • The news __c_a_s_t___ a cloud of gloom over his face. (蒙上了一层忧郁的阴影) • They sat there with gloomy looks on their faces. (带着一脸忧郁。) • His eyes brimmed with tears of sorrow. (他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。)
神态描写：
• Her eyes s_h_o_n_e_/_g_l_it_t_er_e_d_/_s_p_a_r_k_l_e_d_/_tw__i_n_k_le_d__w_i_t_h_j_o_y__. (闪烁着快乐的光芒)
• Her face __li_t____ __u_p____ with pleasure.（容光焕发） • Her smile __l_it____ ___u_p___ the whole room. （她的笑容照亮了整个房间。）
2. He was breathing fire and fury.
3. His voice trembled with anger/rage.
4. Filled with anger/fury, Tom was unable to utter
a single word.
5. He clenched his fists.
• Mary felt her cheeks flush.
玛丽感到面颊发红。
• When he saw the light from Mary’s candle, his eyes widened even
further, but the crying stopped.
当他看到玛丽的蜡烛发出的光时，他的眼睛睁得更大了，但是哭声
my heart beating wildly. (感到心跳加速)
普通版：He was angry.
No.4 愤怒
进阶版：
动作描写：
1. He stamped his foot in anger (气得直跺脚oom in a burst of anger.
b__y_a__b_u_r_s_t_o_f_s_a_d_n_e_s_s(感到被一股悲伤控制／淹没／压倒) and couldn’t help crying bitterly. • Grief comes in waves. (悲伤如潮水一般涌来。) • A ripple/wave of sadness welled up inside him. (涌起阵阵悲伤)
（她看向我们，面带灿烂/温暖的笑容。）
• Her eyes brimmed over (溢满) with warm excited tears. （热泪盈眶）
No.1 开心
心理描写：
• A wild joy ___t_o_o_k__ __h_o_ld___ __o_f ___ him. (极度的开心控制／占 据了他)
• She was choked by fear. 她因恐惧而窒息。
tied】
• Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated (窒息). 她的心跳得厉
害，几乎窒息而死。
No.3 紧张／害怕
心理+神态描写： • Her face turned pale, feeling like sittingo_n___p_i_n_s____an_d____ne_e_d_l_e_s___. (如
A. 气得说不出话 B. 我的声音听起来像一
只怒吼的熊。
C. 怒气冲冲地跑出房间 D. 声音因生气而颤抖 E. 满腔怒火 F. 恼怒地把…扔开 G. 握紧拳头 H. 怒气冲冲地瞪着我
No.4 愤怒
神态描写： His face clouded with anger. 他气得脸色阴沉。
心理描写： He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage. 他几乎控制不住怒火。 Anger engulfed/swallowed (吞噬) him like a wild beast.
• A ripple of excitement ran through them. (一阵阵激动声穿过他 们。)
• I said nervously, my voice __tr_e_m__b_l_in_g__ (tremble) a bit.
• With _a___ p_o__u_n_d_i_n_g _h_e_a_r_t_ (砰砰跳的心脏) and __c_o_ld___, _m__o_is_t__ __p_a_l_m_s__ (
No.2 悲伤
普通版：He was sad. 进阶版： 动作描写： • She _s_o_b_b_e_d__, hiding her face in her hands. (她掩面啜泣。) • He _si_g_h_e_d__ w__it_h___di_s_a_p_p_o_i_n_tm__e_n_t_. (失望地叹了口气。) • He struggled to _fi_g_h_t_b_a_c_k_/_s_w_a_l_lo_w__a_g_a_i_n_st_/_h_o_ld__b_a_c_k_/_c_h_o_k_e_b_a_c_k____ his
环境+心理活动描写
The rain began again that night. It beat against the window, [waking Mary up]. She listened as the wind howled around the house and down the chimney. She tried but could not get back to sleep. “Stupid wind!” she thought.
• Taking a deep breath, Mary pushed open the door and stepped inside. 玛丽深吸了一口气，推开门走了进去。
• She swallowed hard and stepped into a huge room. 她使劲咽了一下口水，走进一个大房间。
坐针毡。) • Fear slowly crept upon her. 恐惧慢慢地爬上她的心头。 • A flood of fear welled up in him. / Fear flooded over (淹没) him. • I felt that the blood in my body froze rapidly because of the terrible sight. • I was seized by a sudden impulse (冲动) to run. • Standing in the classroom, I became increasingly nervous and could feel
6. He glared at me with burning eyes.
7. My voice sounds like a growling, angry bear.
8. She threw the invitation on the table with
annoyance, murmuring...
2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能
人物心理状态综合描写微技能
心理活动描写
• Mary felt her spirits sink even lower. 玛丽觉得她的情绪更低落了。
• Mary felt a wave of anger sweep over her.
玛丽感到一阵愤怒。
神态描写
那天晚上又开始下雨了。雨拍打着窗户，把玛丽吵醒了。她听着风在 房子周围呼啸，从烟囱里呼啸而下。她想睡，但还是睡不着。“愚蠢 的风！”她想。
主观心理感受描写
普通版：He was happy.
No.1 开心
进阶版:
动作描写：
• Tears of happiness __p_o_u_r_e_d_ _d__o_w_n__ Susan’s _c_h_e_e_k_s__. (沿着脸颊奔流而下)
No.3 紧张／害怕
普通版：He was nervous.
进阶版：
动作+神态描写：
• At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt so scared that _m_y__ __t_h_r_o_a_t_ __ti_g_h_t_e_n_e_d
and _m__y__ _k__n_e_e_s__ _f_e_l_t___ __w_e_a_k___. (喉咙发紧，膝盖发软)
• The smile on her face __s_h_o_n_e__ ___li_k_e__ __a___ __d_ia_m__o_n_d_. (像钻石一样闪耀)
• He cast us a glance, with his face wearing a broad/wide/radiant/warm smile.
心理描写： • My heart seemed to __b_e__to_r_n_____ (tear). (心都要撕碎了) • Upon hearing the bad news, she _fe_l_t_s_e_iz_e_d_/_e_n_g_u_l_fe_d_/_o_v_e_r_w_h_e_l_m__e_d_/o_v_e_r_c_o_m__e
tears. (抑制泪水)
• He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. • Her hands were trembling. She was on the verge of tears. (快要哭了)
• When he embraced me with his arms open wide, I felt my throat choke with sob/tightened. (当他张开双臂拥抱我时，我觉得自己喉头哽咽。)
停止了。
动作描写
• He scowled (怒视), slamming the door behind him. 他怒气冲冲，摔门而去。
• She fumbled (摸索) for the key, [her heart beating faster than a galloping horse]. 她摸索着找钥匙，心跳得比一匹疾驰的马还快。
• Joy _w__e_ll_e_d_ __u_p___ inside her. (她心中涌起喜悦。) • Hearing this, everybody _w__a_s__ __w_i_ld____ _w__it_h___ _j_o_y____. (欣
喜若狂) • Her heart was pounding/beating with excitement. （砰砰直跳）
• She __s_h_e_d___ __t_e_a_r_s_ ___o_f__ ___jo_y____. (落下开心的泪水)
• I beamed at (笑容满面) him, “Welcome back, ...”
• He grinned with delight (咧嘴开心地笑) when he saw us.
冰冷潮湿的手掌), I felt faint.
• I ___fr_o_z_e_ _w__it_h__ _t_e_r_r_o_r_ (因害怕而僵住), too scared to move an inch.
• Her face turned ___p_a_l_e__ (苍白的) and stood there _【__t_o_n_g_u_e_-__(舌头打结的).
No.2 悲伤
神态描写： • The news __c_a_s_t___ a cloud of gloom over his face. (蒙上了一层忧郁的阴影) • They sat there with gloomy looks on their faces. (带着一脸忧郁。) • His eyes brimmed with tears of sorrow. (他的眼里噙满了悲伤的泪水。)
神态描写：
• Her eyes s_h_o_n_e_/_g_l_it_t_er_e_d_/_s_p_a_r_k_l_e_d_/_tw__i_n_k_le_d__w_i_t_h_j_o_y__. (闪烁着快乐的光芒)
• Her face __li_t____ __u_p____ with pleasure.（容光焕发） • Her smile __l_it____ ___u_p___ the whole room. （她的笑容照亮了整个房间。）
2. He was breathing fire and fury.
3. His voice trembled with anger/rage.
4. Filled with anger/fury, Tom was unable to utter
a single word.
5. He clenched his fists.
• Mary felt her cheeks flush.
玛丽感到面颊发红。
• When he saw the light from Mary’s candle, his eyes widened even
further, but the crying stopped.
当他看到玛丽的蜡烛发出的光时，他的眼睛睁得更大了，但是哭声
my heart beating wildly. (感到心跳加速)
普通版：He was angry.
No.4 愤怒
进阶版：
动作描写：
1. He stamped his foot in anger (气得直跺脚oom in a burst of anger.
b__y_a__b_u_r_s_t_o_f_s_a_d_n_e_s_s(感到被一股悲伤控制／淹没／压倒) and couldn’t help crying bitterly. • Grief comes in waves. (悲伤如潮水一般涌来。) • A ripple/wave of sadness welled up inside him. (涌起阵阵悲伤)
（她看向我们，面带灿烂/温暖的笑容。）
• Her eyes brimmed over (溢满) with warm excited tears. （热泪盈眶）
No.1 开心
心理描写：
• A wild joy ___t_o_o_k__ __h_o_ld___ __o_f ___ him. (极度的开心控制／占 据了他)
• She was choked by fear. 她因恐惧而窒息。
tied】
• Her heart beat so violently that she felt nearly suffocated (窒息). 她的心跳得厉
害，几乎窒息而死。
No.3 紧张／害怕
心理+神态描写： • Her face turned pale, feeling like sittingo_n___p_i_n_s____an_d____ne_e_d_l_e_s___. (如
A. 气得说不出话 B. 我的声音听起来像一
只怒吼的熊。
C. 怒气冲冲地跑出房间 D. 声音因生气而颤抖 E. 满腔怒火 F. 恼怒地把…扔开 G. 握紧拳头 H. 怒气冲冲地瞪着我
No.4 愤怒
神态描写： His face clouded with anger. 他气得脸色阴沉。
心理描写： He could hardly/scarcely contain his rage. 他几乎控制不住怒火。 Anger engulfed/swallowed (吞噬) him like a wild beast.