专题八短文改错(试题部分) 2021版高考英语(课标版)复习教案

专题八短文改错
探考情悟真题
【考情探究】
卷名体裁题材考点
动词名词、
数词
连词形容词副词代词冠词介词
2019
课标
全国Ⅰ记叙文学校生活12211210
2018记叙文家庭生活21122012 2017记叙文社会生活22112111 2016记叙文个人生活21202111 2015记叙文个人生活31120121合计107767565
2019
课标
全国Ⅱ记叙文个人生活12132001
2018记叙文家庭生活42100111 2017记叙文个人生活32012210 2016记叙文个人生活41100310 2015记叙文社会生活31102111合计158446743
2019
课标
全国Ⅲ记叙文个人生活41010211
2018记叙文学校生活41211110 2017记叙文个人生活40120310 2016记叙文个人生活21021211合计143362842
分析解读
高考英语短文改错涉及词汇、语法、句型结构等方面的知识和逻辑情理的推断和综合辨析,是一种在较高层
次上考查考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力的测试题型。

五年高考课标全国卷短文改错的体裁以
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．
记叙文为主
．．．．．,．题材以考生所熟悉的个人生活、学校生活为主。

．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．错误处均为考生平时写作中常出现的错误。

试题大多是加词1个,删词1个,改正8个。

1.五年高考课标全国卷短文改错对动词的考查占相当大比例,其中包括:①．时态、语态的错用
．．．．．．．．;②
．．过去分词
．．．．
与过去式的混用
．．．．．．．;③
．．一般现在时主语为第三人称单数
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．,．谓语动词需加
．．．．．．“．-．s．”．的用法
．．．;④
．．情态动词后需加动词原形
．．．．．．．．．．．
而非过去式
．．．．．;⑤
．．虚拟语气的考查主要集中在表示
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．“．命令、建议、请求、要求
．．．．．．．．．．．”．的动词后面宾语从句谓语动词要
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．
用．“．should+
．．．．．．．动词原形
．．．．”．,．且．should
．．．．．．可以省略
．．．．;⑥
．．非谓语动词作宾语、状语
．．．．．．．．．．．,．且在考查非谓语动词作宾语时主要考
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．
查介词后需用动名词作宾语
．．．．．．．．．．．．。

2.对名词、代词的考查也是五年高考课标全国卷短文改错的重点之一。

其中包括:①．名词单、复数的混
．．．．．．．．
用．;②
．．名词所有格的错用
．．．．．．．．;③
．．名词构词法
．．．．．;④
．．不按照上下文逻辑导致人称代词、物主代词的误用
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．;⑤
．．不按照语法
．．．．．
规则导致主格、宾格、所有格的误用
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．;⑥
．．反身代词的滥用
．．．．．．．;⑦
．．易混代词的误用
．．．．．．．,．如．both
．．．．与．all,another
．．．．．．．．．．．与．other
．．．．．等．。

3.对形容词、副词的考查是五年高考课标全国卷短文改错的重点之一。

其中包括:①．形容词、副词的混
．．．．．．．．
用．;②
．．形容词、副词比较等级用法的误用
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．;③
．．易混形容词、副词的误用
．．．．．．．．．．．,．如．many
．．．．与．much,ago
．．．．．．．．与．before,somewhere
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．
与．everywhere
．．．．．．．．．．等．;④
．．形容词、副词构词法
．．．．．．．．．。

4.冠词也是五年高考课标全国卷短文改错的必考内容,其中包括:①．冠词的基本用法
．．．．．．．;②
．．冠词的习惯用法
．．．．．．．。

5.连词、介词是五年高考课标全国卷短文改错的难点,其中包括:①for,
．．．．．in,
．．．with,
．．．．．by,
．．．on,
．．．of．．等常用介词的
．．．．．．
用法
．．;②
．．并列连词
．．．．and,
．．．．but,
．．．．or,．．．so．．的用法
．．．;③
．．名词性从句、定语从句中的引导词
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．;④
．．引导状语从句的从属连词与
．．．．．．．．．．．．
并列连词的混用
．．．．．．．。

6.未来高考课标全国卷短文改错仍会以实词为主、虚词为辅
．．．．．．．．．．,句子结构可能会由以简单句为主逐渐过渡到以复合句为主。

【真题探秘】
①考查形容词。

句意:由于一个小的事故,我对踢足球变得感兴趣了。

interested感兴趣的,interesting有趣的。

②考查定语从句。

此处表示时间,故用when引导。

③考查冠词。

football是可数名词,此处表示泛指,又因为football以辅音音素开头,故在football前加不定冠词a。

④考查连词。

句意:突然一个足球正好落在我的面前,并且差点打中我。

fell和hit两个动作是并列关系而非转折关系,所以要将but改为and。

⑤考查副词。

此处表达的意思是“用力地”,即用力地把球踢回到操场上,而非“几乎不”,故将副词hardly改为hard。

⑥考查名词。

句意:让所有人惊讶的是,球入网了。

to one’s surprise为固定短语,意为:使某人惊讶的是。

故将surprising改为surprise。

⑦考查名词复数。

操场上所有足球运动员都大声欢呼起来。

根据all可知player要用复数形式。

⑧考查非谓语动词。

此处应该是v.-ing形式作伴随状语,say与players在逻辑上是主动关系,所以要用saying。

⑨考查介词短语。

句意:从那时起,放学后我就开始和我们班的同学们踢足球了。

from then on从那时起;from now on从现在开始。

根据语境要将now改为then。

⑩考查固定短语。

play football为固定短语,意为:踢足球。

解题原则:1.规范性原则:按照规定的符号改错
2.四不改原则:词序不改;大小写不改;标点符号不改;单词拼写不改
3.五改动原则:忠实原文;一对一原则;改动最少原则;实词以改变形式为主;虚词以添加或删除为主
4.六个一致:语义一致;主谓一致;时态、语态一致;代词指代一致;名词单复数一致;平行结构中的一致
【五年高考】
A组统一命题·课标卷题组
Proofreading1(2019课标全国Ⅱ)
Since I was a kid,I’ve considered different job I would like to do.First,I wanted to be a fireman,whose uniform looked so coolly.Then,when I was in the five grade,I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much.When I studied chemistry high school,I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor.They were two reasons for the decision.One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor.And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
答案
Since I was a kid,I’ve considered different①job
jobs
I would like to do.First,I wanted to be a fireman,whose
uniform looked so②coolly
cool .Then,when I was in the③five
fifth
grade,I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my
English teacher④too
very/so much.When I studied chemistry⑤∧in/at high school,I reconsidered my goal⑥or
and
decided to be a doctor.⑦They
There were two reasons for the decision.One was that I was⑧amazing
amazed
at the fact that a
sick person could feel much⑨more better after seeing a doctor.And the other⑩is
was
that I wanted to help people in need.
Proofreading2(2019课标全国Ⅲ)
I’ve had many dreams since I was a child.Now my dream is to opens a cafe.Though it may appear simple,it required a lot of ideas and efforts.What I want is not just an ordinarily cafe but a very special one.I want my cafe have a special theme such as like“Tang Dynasty”.In the cafe,customers will enjoy yourselves in the historical environment what is created for them.If I succeed in manage one,I will open more.I wish to have a chain of cafes in many different city.Each of my cafes will have a different theme and an unique style.
答案
I’ve had many dreams since I was a child.Now my dream is to①opens
open
a cafe.Though it may appear simple,
it②required
requires a lot of ideas and efforts.What I want is not just an③ordinarily
ordinary
cafe but a very special one.I want my
cafe④∧to have a special theme such as⑤like “Tang Dynasty”.In the cafe,customers will enjoy⑥yourselves
themselves
in the historical environment⑦what
that/which is created for them.If I succeed in⑧manage
managing
one,I will open more.I
wish to have a chain of cafes in many different⑨city
cities .Each of my cafes will have a different theme and⑩an
a
unique style.
Proofreading3(2018课标全国Ⅰ)
During my last winter holiday,I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.I find a big change there.The first time I went there,they were living in a small house with dogs,ducks,and another animals. Last winter when I went here again,they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken.They also had a small pond which they raised fish.My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish.I felt happily that their life had improved.At the end of our trip,I told my father that I planned to return for every two years,but he agreed
答案
During my last winter holiday,I went①∧the countryside with my father to visit my grandparents.I②find
found
a
big change there.The first time I went there,they were living in a small house with dogs,ducks,and③another
other
st winter when I went④here
there again,they had a big separate house to raise dozens of⑤chicken
chickens
.They
also had a small pond⑥they raised fish.My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by⑦sell
selling
the fish.I felt⑧happily
happy
that their life had improved.At the end of our trip,I told my father that I planned to
return⑨for every two years,⑩but
and
he agreed.
Proofreading4(2018课标全国Ⅱ)
When I was little,Friday’s night was our family game night.After supper,we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room.As the kid,I loved to watch cartoons,but no matter how many times I asked to watching them,my parents would not to let me.They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain.Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes.I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school.The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.
答案
When I was little,①Friday’s
Friday
night was our family game night.After supper,we would play card games of all
②sort
sorts in the sitting room.As③the
a
kid,I loved to watch cartoons,but no matter how many times I asked to
④watching
watch them,my parents would not⑤to let me.They would say to⑥us
me
that playing card games would help
my brain.Still I⑦∧was unwilling to play the games⑧for
with
them sometimes.I didn’t realize how right my parents
⑨are
were until I entered high school.The games my parents taught me⑩where
when
I was a child turned out to be very
useful later in my life.
Proofreading5(2018课标全国Ⅲ)
It was Monday morning,and the writing class had just begin.Everyone was silent,wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud.Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious.I had done myself homework,but I was shy.I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people.At that moment,I remembered that my father once said,“The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks,and mistake as well.”Immediate,I raised my hand.
答案
It was Monday morning,and the writing class had just①begin
begun .Everyone was silent,②wait
waiting
to see who
would be called upon to read his③and
or
her paragraph aloud.Some of us were confident and eager④∧to take part
in the class activity;others were nervous and anxious.I had done⑤myself
my/the
homework,but I was shy.I was afraid
⑥that to speak in front of a⑦larger
large
group of people.At that moment,I remembered that my father once said,“The
classroom is a place for learning and that⑧include
includes learning from textbooks,and⑨mistake
mistakes
as well.”⑩Immediate
Immediately
,
I raised my hand.
Proofreading6(2017课标全国Ⅰ)
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday,I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard first day was.Before getting into the car,I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders,so once I started the car,my mind goes blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept repeating the word,“Speed
up!”“Slow down!”“Turning left!”I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left.A few minutes late,the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.
答案
In the summer holiday following my①eighteen
eighteenth
birthday,I took driving lessons.I still remember how hard
②∧the/my first day was.Before getting into the car,I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders,③so
but/yet
once
I started the car,my mind④goes
went
blank.I forgot what he had said to me altogether.The instructor kept repeating
the⑤word
words ,“Speed up!”“Slow down!”“⑥Turning
Turn
left!”I was so⑦much nervous that I could hardly tell which
direction was left.A few minutes⑧late
later
,the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a
⑨suddenly
sudden stop just in the middle⑩on
of
the road.
Proofreading7(2017课标全国Ⅱ)
Mr.and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school.They live far from the school,and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time,they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden,that is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together.They have also bought for some gardening tools.Beside,they often get some useful informations from the Internet.When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!
答案
Mr.and Mrs.Zhang①all
both
/all work in our school.They live far from the school,and it takes them about
②a
an/one hour and a half to go to work every day.In their spare time,they are③interesting
interested
in planting vegetables
in their garden,④that
which is on the rooftop of their house.They often get up⑤earlier
early
and water the vegetables
together.They have also bought⑥for some gardening tools.⑦Beside
Besides ,they often get some useful⑧informations
information
from the Internet.When summer⑨came
comes
,they will invite their students⑩∧to pick the fresh vegetables! Proofreading8(2017课标全国Ⅲ)
When I look at this picture of myself,I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically,and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took,I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time:car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
答案
When I look at this picture of myself,I realize①of how fast time flies.I②had
have
grown not only physically,
③and
but also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was④took
taken
,I entered my second year
of high school and⑤become
became
a new member of the school music club.Around me in⑥∧the/this picture are the
things⑦they
that/which
were very important in my life at that time:car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed
studying⑧difference
different kinds of cars and planes,playing pop music,and collecting the⑨late
latest
music albums.This
picture often brings back to me many happy memories of⑩your
my
high school days.
Proofreading9(2016课标全国Ⅰ)
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big,but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead,he hopes that our business will grow steady.
答案
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to①that
where
I live.Though not very big,②but the restaurant is
popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even③had
have
to wait outside.
My uncle tells me that the key to his success is④honest
honesty .Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables⑤or
and
high quality oil are⑥using
used for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams⑦∧of becoming rich in⑧the
a
short
period of time.Instead,he hopes that⑨our
his business will grow⑩steady
steadily
.
Proofreading10(2016课标全国Ⅱ)
The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday.We can chose between staying at home and take a trip.If we stay at home,it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money.But in that case,we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad,we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost many,yet we can still learn a lot.
答案
The summer holiday is coming.My classmates and I are talking about①how
what
to do during the holiday.We
can②chose
choose between staying at home and③take
taking
a trip.If we stay at home,it is comfortable④but
and
there is no
need to spend money.But in that case,we will learn little about⑤∧the world.If we go on a trip abroad,we can
broaden⑥your
our view and gain⑦knowledges
knowledge
we cannot get from books.Some classmates suggest we⑧can
should
/can
go to places of interest nearby.I⑨thought
think that it is a good idea.It does not cost⑩many
much
,yet we can still learn a lot.
Proofreading11(2016课标全国Ⅲ)
The teenage year from13to19were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first,I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However,my parents didn’t seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time,I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange
clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
答案
The teenage ①year years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and ②worse worst
years in my life. At ③the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by ④
yourself myself . However, my parents didn ’t seem to think ⑤such so . They always ⑥tell told
me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn ’t understand me so I hoped I could be ⑦
freely free from them. I showed them I was independent by ⑧wear wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home ⑨to for
college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever ⑩∧I need help.
Proofreading 12(2015课标全国Ⅰ)
When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,we ’ll live to regret it.
答案
When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I ① think thought
I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in ②∧the countryside.There the air is clean ③
or and the mountains are green.Unfortunately,④ on with
the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have ⑤ been shown that global warming has already become a very ⑥
seriously serious problem.The ⑦airs air we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. ⑧
Much Many rare animals are dying out.We must ⑨found find ways to protect ⑩your our/the
environment.If we fail to do so,we ’ll live to regret it. Proofreading 13(2015课标全国Ⅱ)
One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later,Tony saw parents.Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
答案
One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his ①parent parents .It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy ②on in
a shop window.He liked it so ③very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After ④
looks looking at the toy for some time,he turned around and found ⑤where that /where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and ⑥begun began
to cry.A
woman saw him crying and⑦telling
told him to wait outside⑧a
the
shop.Five minutes later,Tony saw⑨∧his
parents.Mom said,“How nice to see you again!Dad and I were⑩terrible
terribly
worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
Proofreading14(2016浙江)
When I was a very young children,my father created a regular practice I remember well years late.Every time he arrived home at end of the day,we’d greet her at the door.He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us.Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers.While they chat,my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge.It was both excited and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
答案
When I was a very young①children
child ,my father created a regular practice I remember well years②late
later
.Every
time he arrived home at③∧theend of the day,we’d greet④her
him at the door.He would ask who we⑤was
were
and
pretend not to⑥knowing
know
us.Then he and my mother would have⑦had a drink while she prepared dinner and they
would talk about his day and hers.While they⑧chat
chatted ,my father would lift my sister and me up to sit⑨in
on
the
top of the fridge.It was both⑩excited
exciting
and frightening to be up there!My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
Proofreading15(2016四川)
It is Mother’s Day today.Though it’s a western festival,it’s popular in China now.
Mom has a full-time job,so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house,and then went on shopping.When he came back,I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favoritest.At dinner,we said to her,“Happy Mother’s Day!” Mom was grateful and moving.
答案
It is Mother’s Day today.Though it’s a western festival,it’s popular in China now.
Mom has a full-time job,①so
but she has to do most of the②houseworks
housework
.She is a great mother.Both Dad③or
and
I planned to do something on Mother’s Day.We④get
got
up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house,and then
went⑤on shopping.When he came back,I found a bunch of flowers in⑥her
his
hand.I asked Mom to stay in the
sitting room and I cooked in⑦∧the kitchen.The dishes⑧what
that/which /what I cooked were Mom’s⑨favoritest
favorite
.At
dinner,we said to her,“Happy Mother’s Day!” Mom was grateful and⑩moving
moved
.
Proofreading16(2015陕西)
My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world,so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I
insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party,my coach,with a biscuit in his mouth,asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
答案
My soccer coach retired①in last week.I wanted to do②anything
something
special for him at his retirement party.My
mum makes the③better
best biscuits in the world,so I④decide
decided
to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic⑤step
steps
of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really⑥well
good
.My only mistake
was that I dropped some on the floor⑦after
when/while
I was packing them up.
At⑧a
the
party,my coach,with a biscuit in his mouth,asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just⑨∧to get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me⑩enjoy
enjoying
the biscuits with happy laughter! Proofreading17(2015四川)
Hi,Janice,
It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time,I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after
school.We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity!In fact,I don’t like to go anymore,so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do?If you are me,would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace 答案
Hi,Janice,
It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want①∧to share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I②tell
told you last time,I made three new③friend
friends
here.We hang out together during lunch and after
school.We’ve been spending a lot of time④sing
singing
in karaoke bars.It’s been three Saturdays now and it really
costs me⑤many
much .And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity!In fact,I don’t like to go anymore,⑥so
but
I’m
afraid I’ll lose their friendship.⑦How
What do you think I should do?If you⑧are
were
me,would you talk to⑨him
them
?
Please help⑩with me and give me some advice.
Grace Proofreading18(2015浙江)
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand side of the class,I could easy see the football field.In the mornings,it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to
the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance,I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom,I will never forget it.
答案
My old classroom was interesting because three①side
sides of the classroom were made②from
of
glass.I enjoyed
③sit
sitting close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left-hand side of the class,I could④easy
easily
see the
football field.In the mornings,it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom⑤is
was
also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around⑥them
it
.Farther in the distance,I could⑦not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested
to see the drivers in⑧∧a hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me⑨felt
feel
like I
was dreaming.⑩If
Although/Though
I was only a child when I studied in that classroom,I will never forget it.
【三年模拟】
A组2018—2020年模拟·基础题组
Proofreading1(2020届天一大联考皖豫联盟体一次考试)
Yesterday morning I was on my way to work.Suddenly I stopped by a woman on the sidewalk.She asked me if I knew how to get to CASS,that is a local shelter for the homeless.I could tell she was extreme upset,so I told her I’d look it up for her on my smartphones.While waiting,she told me she was losing and didn’t have money for the bus.I took out of a20-dollar bill from my purse but handed it to her.Then I accompany her to the nearest bus stop.See the happy smile on her face brightened up my day,either.
答案
Yesterday morning I was on my way to work.Suddenly I①∧was stopped by a woman on the sidewalk.She
asked me if I knew how to get to CASS,②that
which is a local shelter for the homeless.I could tell she was③extreme
extremely
upset,so I told her I’d look it up for her on my④smartphones
smartphone .While waiting,she told me she was⑤losing
lost
and
didn’t have money for the bus.I took out⑥of a20-dollar bill from my purse⑦but
and
handed it to her.Then I
⑧accompany
accompanied her to the nearest bus stop.⑨See
Seeing
the happy smile on her face brightened up my day,⑩either
too
.
Proofreading2(2020届河南八市重点中学9月领军考试)
Last week you visited my school,and on the last day of your tour a farewell party held at the Students’Centre. During the party I sat the next to you.When we left,we took each other’s notebook on mistake.I noticed this when I open it and found your name or your phone number in it.I am sending your notebooks by post to you.Will you please sending mine to me at the address where is given in my letter?Thank you very much.I extreme expect you can visit my school again if it is convenient for me.
答案
Last week you visited my school,and on the last day of your tour a farewell party①∧was held at the
Students’Centre.During the party I sat② the next to you.When we left,we took each other’s notebook③on
by
mistake.I noticed this when I④open
opened it and found your name⑤or
and
your phone number in it.I am sending your
⑥notebooks
notebook by post to you.Will you please⑦sending
send
mine to me at the address⑧where
which/that
is given in my letter?
Thank you very much.I⑨extreme
extremely expect you can visit my school again if it is convenient for⑩me
you
.
Proofreading3(2020届江西临川联考一)
Jack lives in a smaller town in England.He usually stayed in his own country during the st year, he decided to go to Russia and stayed there for a few day.One day,he went out for walk.In England,people drive on the left side of the road.And in Russia,they drive on the right,which Jack forgot.When crossed a busy street, she was almost knocked down by a car.Jack stood here for a moment,full of fear.Shortly after he recovered from himself,he said,“Where am I?”An old man which sold maps nearby ran to Jack at once and said,“Maps of the city, sir?”
答案
Jack lives in a①smaller
small town in England.He usually②stayed
stays
in his own country during the st
year,he decided to go to Russia and stayed there for a few③day
days
.One day,he went out for④∧a walk.In England,
people drive on the left side of the road.⑤And
But
in Russia,they drive on the right,which Jack forgot.When
⑥crossed
crossing a busy street,⑦she
he
was almost knocked down by a car.Jack stood⑧here
there
for a moment,full of fear.
Shortly after he recovered⑨from himself,he said,“Where am I?” An old man⑩which
who/that
sold maps nearby ran to Jack at once and said,“Maps of the city,sir?”
Proofreading4(2020届贵州铜仁一中二模)
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to tell you we had found a new apartment close our school for you.There is a bank on its right or a gym on its left.Across it is a supermarket.Besides,it will be convenient for you to get around the city because a bus stop is right in the front of the building.
The apartment measures40square meters and is full furnished,included a bedroom,a sitting room,a kitchen and a bathroom.They also make sure that it is equipped with basic thing needed in everyday life such as a refrigerator,a TV set and a coffee maker.Which is great news is that free Wi-Fi is provided.
Please write back and tell us if it is nicely enough.
Yours,
Li Hua 答案
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to tell you we①had
have
found a new apartment close②∧to our school for you.There is a bank on
its right③or
and
a gym on its left.Across it is a supermarket.Besides,it will be convenient for you to get around the city because a bus stop is right in④the front of the building.。