【小初高学习】陕西省西安市高考英语二轮复习 书面表达观摩(1)

书面表达观摩（1）
【2014高考英语吉林省实验中学一模试题】
书面表达（满分 25分）
作文：最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论.讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况.
注意: 1. 信的开头已为你写好.
2. 词数: 100 左右.
3. 参考词汇: 门票--- entrance fees
【参考范文】
Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
Opinions are divided on the question. 60％ of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40％ think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.
Yours truly
Li Hua
【广东省惠州市三模】
读写任务（共1小题，满分25分y
阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文
1. The ministry of Education is considering new measures to test the physical quality of students across the country each year, Beijing News reported. According to the measures, every student in a school is required to participate in the annual test and the results should be reported to the Ministry, which will select a specified number of students from each province each year to test their suppleness and endurance. The Ministry will select 4 pilot provinces this year and the measures are expected to expand across the whole country next year.
2. In Guangdong province it is reported that the students in Junior 3 are required to take 100-meter swimming test and the results will be part in the total grade in 2014. Also there is a growing voice in society that NCEE (National College Entrance Examination) should include PE tests.
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括两篇报道的内容：
2. 然后以约120.个词,.就以上新闻话题发表你的看法，包括如下要点
(1) 体育成绩纳入总分的重要性；
(2) 简述你所在学校加强学生体育锻炼的做法；
(3) 你所喜欢的体育项目对如的影响。

【写作要求.】
1. 在作文中可以使用自已亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 作文中,不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】.
概括准确，、语言规范，内容合适，.篇章连贯。

【参考范文】读写任务：
According to the two reports,new measures about physical assessment among students are being congsidered in Beijing and Guangdong.Besides,the society calls for
more attention to students’ physical quality.
With more attention being paid to students’ academic achievements,people gradually ignore the positive influence of physical exercise on students.It brings about an increasing number of students who are weak in body.As the saying goes ,healrh is pre-condition of all work.In order to strengthen students’ h ealth and make them qualified to undertake the reponsibility to bulid up our country ,our government and schools should consider students’ taking PE tests when they graduate and the results should be part in the total grade.
In our school,we have two PE classes each week,in which our PE teachers often teach us to do proper exericise to relax ourselves.Besides,there is a “big break”for us,which lasts thirty minutes every day after the third period in the afternoon.When the music for “big break”starts,we will hurry to the playground to do exercise and then do some running.The greatest sports event in our school is the annual sports meeeting .It pushes everyone’s enthusiasm about physical exercise to the fullest.
As far as I’m concerned,I’m fond of jogging.On one hand,it’s not a rough sport and convenient to do every day,from which I relax myself a lot and refresh my mind.On the other hand,it strengthens my suppleness ,endurance and perseverance to deal with the difficulties in my study.
基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
你是英语俱乐部的成员，参加俱乐部组织的英语学习经验交流，介绍自己最喜欢的英语读物。

【写作内容】
请你根据以下表内内容介绍《21世纪学生英文报》“高中版”。

【写作要求】
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
Founded in October, 2001, 21st Century Teens Senior Edition is an English language weekly designed for senior high school students in China. To meet the needs of senior high school students to learn English and improve their ability in using the language, the Weekly provides up-to-date news at home and abroad, which is suitable for their reading level. It contains eight sections, such as Frontpage, Our World, Campus Trends, covering culture, social life, sports, entertainment, etc. Its website
/ is available now. 21st Century Teens Senior Edition is indeed an excellent English newspaper, from which I have benefited a lot.
亮点点击：本文是介绍一份报纸。

第一和第二句是含非谓语动词(Founded, To meet)做状语的简单句。

范文中用了不同的词(provide, contain, be available)表示“有”，使文章语言更丰富。

最后一句用了非限制性定语从句表达读这份报纸的收获。

读写任务 (共1小题，满分25分)
阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150字左右的英语短文。

Mayor Bloomberg has been the mayor of New York City for nearly nine years, but for ten years he has been wearing the same shoes. This is really rare to be seen on a billionaire.
“The mayor owns two pairs of work shoes,” said the spokesman. “One day he’ll wear one, the next the other. When they got worn down, he has them repaired. He could buy
any shoes he wanted, but he says since they are comfortable, and they work, there’s no need for a new pair.” According to the spokesman, the mayor saves in his footwear and he also keeps it up in his personal as well as governmental finance. “When he buys a cup of coffee, he chooses the smallest size. He buys only what he needs.”Such is the mayor of New York City, who cares little about his shoes, avoids wasting money and focuses his attention on his work and his people in the city.
But what about our fellow students nowadays? Some wear super expensive clothes and shoes; besides, they buy as many as possible, far more than two pairs. They always want the latest, the newest and throw the old ones away though they haven’t worn them for many times.
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括以上短文的内容。

2. 以约120个词就“勤俭节约”这一主题发表你的感想和看法，内容包括：
（1）给出你对这位市长的评价；
（2）举一个你尊敬的人勤俭节约的例子，说明他对你的影响；
（3）列举你生活中浪费的坏习惯并说说你勤俭节约的决心。

【写作要求】
1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范内容合适，语篇连贯。

参考词汇：节俭的 provident/thrifty
【参考范文】读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)参考范文
The author introduces to us the mayor of New York City, a man who is rich but provident. The author also points out nowadays some students have the habit of wasting things. When reading the passage, I am deeply moved by the mayor. Rich as he is, he has the virtue of saving. He spends money only on what he needs and never wastes money on what is of no use. I think this is really admirable.
The mayor reminds me of the great political leader of China, Chairman Mao. As the
chairman of China, Mao led a very thrifty life. He used to wear old clothes at home. When his clothes were worn out, he would have them repaired and continued to wear them. He always told others that saving was a good virtue of Chinese people.
Thinking about the two great leaders, I feel deeply ashamed. As a young student who still has to depend on my parents, I have been leading too comfortable a life. I buy whatever I li ke though I don’t really need them. Besides, I like new things; when things get “old”, I tend to begin to dislike them and stop using them. Now that I realize that this is wrong, I’m determined that I shall follow the examples of the two great leaders and start to get rid of the bad habits.。