中考人教英语重点单词回扣+阅读及答案：八上5--6 (3)

中考人教英语重点单词回扣+阅读及答案：八上5--6
人教英语重点单词回扣+阅读及答案：八上5--6
一、阅读理解。

Hello, my name is Zhao Benshan. Others call me Uncle Benshan. I was born in Lianhua Valley in 1957. I’m a Chinese skit （滑稽短剧） and sitcom （情景短剧） actor, and these years I began to be a TV director. I have lots of works such as Liu Lao Gen. I also have lots of disciple, Xiao Shenyang is one of my disciple. Most of my disciples are very good at singing and acting. They bring happiness to people, too. I believe Buddhism (佛教), it’s a really good faith (信仰). I have two children, they are Zhao Yinan and Zhao Yihan. They’re both lovely. I like them very much. I have appeared on the CCTV New Year’s Gala for fifteen years, and because of this I got an award. I hope, in the future, I can still bring lots of fun to everybody.
( ) 1. Uncle Benshan is ______ years old now.
A. 50
B. 60
C. 57
D. 48
( ) 2. Uncle Benshan started to be a _______ these years.
A. teacher
B. singer
C. actor
D. director
( ) 3. Uncle Benshan appeared on the _________ for 15 times.
A. Super Boy
B. CCTV New Year’s Gala
C.I Am a Singer
D. Happy Camp
( ) 4. What does the underline word “disciple” mean?
A. 徒弟
B. 师傅
C. 朋友
D. 同事
( ) 5. Which one is WRONG?
A. Uncle Benshan has lots of works.
B. Buddhism is Uncle Benshan’s faith.
C. Uncle Benshan has three children.
D. Uncle Benshan was born in LianhuaValley.
【参考答案】1-5 CDBAC
二、完形填空。

阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从各题所给的A、B、C或者D四个选项中选出最佳选项。

Have you ever seen the advertisement: Learn a foreign language in six weeks, __1__ give your money back? Of course, it __2__ happens quite like that. The only language __3__ to learn is the mother language. And think __4__ practice is needed for that. Before the Second World War people usually learned a foreign language __5__ the literature(文学) of the country. Now most people want to __6__ a foreign language. Every year millions of people start learning __7__. How do they do it? Some people try at home __8__ books and tapes, others go to evening classes or watch TV programs. __9__ they use the language only 2 or 3 times a week, learning it will
__10__ a long time, like language learning at school. A few people try to learn a language fast by studying for 6 or __11__ hours a day. It’s much easier to learn the language in the country where it __12__. But most people are __13__ to do this, and many people don’t have to do so. Machines and good books will be very __14__，but they can not do the students’ work. __15__ the language is learned quickly or slowly, it is hard work.
( )1. A. so B. or C. and D. but
( )2. A. can’t B. impossible C. never D. often
( )3. A. easily B. difficult C. able D. easy
( )4. A. how much B. how long C. how fast D. how many
( )5. A. studied B. to study C. studying D. study
( )6. A. talk B. tell C. speak D. say
( )7. A. them B. this C. that D. it
( )8. A. without B. with C. in D. by
( )9. A. If B. When C. Since D. Until
( )10. A. spend B. use C. take D. cost
( )11. A. some B. more C. other D. less
( )12. A. speaks B. is speaking C. spoke D. is spoken
( )13. A. able B. possible C. unable D. not possible
( )14. A. careful B. forgetful C. wonderful D. helpful
( )15. A. either B. whether C. what D. how
语篇解读：本文主要想告诉读者，学英语是一个长期而艰苦的劳动，没有任何捷径可走。

无论你用什么方法学习——用书、机器或在学校，不多实践就无法达到预期的目的。

1. B。

这里的or是“否则”的意思。

2. C。

根据作者的观点，这种事绝对不可能发生。

impossible是一个形容词，不符语法，can’t后不可能跟happens，often意思与作者的意图相反。

3. D。

唯一容易学的语言是母语。

这里需要一个形容词充当后置定语。

4. A。

用来修饰不可数名词，只有用how much，全句意为“母语好学，还需要那么多的练习。

何况外语呢？”
5. B。

动词不定式充当目的状语。

意为“学习外语来研究文学”。

6. C。

说某种语言用speak，speak English，speak Chinese。

7. D。

用it代指上文所说的a foreign language。

8. B。

这里的with是“用”的意思。

9. A。

作者在这里提出一种假设。

如果他们一星期只有一两次使用外语。

10. C。

固定短语，意为“做某事花费某人多长时间”。

11. B。

后面省略了than 6 hours。

意为6个小时或更多的时间。

12. D。

it 代指上文所指的foreign language，故用被动语态。

13. C。

许多人不可能做到这一点。

这里不可以用not possible，因为它的主语不可以用人。

14. D。

机器和书对于学习英语来说是很有帮助的。

15. B。

whether...or...固定短语。

三、首字母填空。

根据短文内容和首字母提示，在下文空格处填入适当的词使短文完整。

(每空一词)
In the middle of Jiangsu province, Yangzhou is an important city in the economic circle of the Yangtze River delta(三角洲). It is m 1 up of three cities of Baoying, Gaoyou, and Yizheng, three districts of Hanjiang, Guangling and Jiangdu. It has an area of 6,638 square kilometers and a population of 4.6 million, i 2 the central area of 1,100 square kilometers with a population of 1.31 million.
Yangzhou is a cultural city with a long history and rich c 3 . It has a long history of about 2,500 years since King Fu Chai of Wu dug Hangou and built Hancheng. There were three g 4 times in the history of Yangzhou. It took shape in the Han Dynasty, developed in the Tang Dynasty and reached its top in the Qing Dynasty. A number of politicians, writers and a 5 such as Li Bai, Du Fu of the Tang Dynasty and Ouyang Xiu and Su Dongpo of the Song Dynasty all served as officials or went sightseeing there and l 6 many poems describing the beauty of Yangzhou. "Eight eccentrics of Yangzhou", Yangzhou school and Yangzhou opera all enjoy special qualities. In h 7 , Yangzhou was a famous and open city. In the Tang dynasty, it is the biggest city in Southeast China and one of the four ports(港口) that conducted economic and cultural exchanges with other c 8 . Over 10 thousand foreign businessmen lived in Yangzhou then. Master Jianzhen went eastward to Japan to s 9 China’s culture.
Yangzhou is a friendly and beautiful city suitable for people to live in. Such famous well-known sayings as “In this flowery March journeyed south to Yangzhou”, “The green city is Yangzhou”, “Only Yangzhou is suitable for people to l 10 in” give true expression to Yangzhou. In 2006, it was awarded the United Nations Habitat Award, the highest prize in the area of global habitat. 【参考答案】
1. made
2. including
3. culture
4. golden
5. artists
6. left
7. history
8. countries
9. spread 10. live
四、重点单词回扣
重点单词
1．____________ n．新闻节目；新闻 2. ____________ n．& v．希望
3. ____________ v．发生；出现★
4. ____________ n．笑话；玩笑
5. ____________ adj.著名的；出名的
6. ____________ adj.富有的
7．____________ modal v．可能；可以8. ____________ adj.主要的；最重要的9. ____________ n．原因；理由★10. ____________ adj.普通的；常见的11. ____________ n．电影12. ____________ adj.愿意的；准备好的13. ____________ adj.简单的；易做的14. ____________ n．陆军；陆军部队15. ____________ v．介意，对(某事)烦恼16. ____________ n．医生★
17. ____________ n．工程师18. ____________ n．驾驶员；司机
19. ____________ n．飞行员
20. ____________ n．学院；大学；高等专科学校
21. ____________ n．(综合性)大学；高等学府 22. ____________ n．文章；论文
23. ____________ n．队；组 24. ____________ adj.外国的
25. ____________ pron.他(她、它)们自己
26. ____________ n. 厨师； v．烹饪，煮★
27. ____________ n．承诺，诺言； v．许诺，承诺★
参考答案：
1．news 2. hope 3. happen 4. joke 5. famous 6. rich
7. might8. main9. reason10. common11. film/movie
12. ready13. simple14. army15. mind16. doctor
17. engineer18. driver19. pilot 20. college21. university
22. article 23. team 24. foreign 25. themselves26. cook
27. promise
二、英语书面表达专项训练
2．同学们，初中生活即将结束，本次考试后，盼望已久的假期就要到来！请你根据以下提示，制定出度假计
划，可以结合自己的实际发挥。

写作内容：
1.和家长/同学一起旅游，享受大自然的美景，放松心情。

2.参加志愿活动，帮家长做家务。

3.读自己喜欢的书。

4.远离危险的地方。

写作要求：
1.80 词左右，开头部分已给出，但不计入规定字数。

2.内容合理；要点齐全；句子及篇章结构正确、连贯；书写规范。

3.不得出现自己的校名和自己的姓名等个人信息。

My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
【答案】My junior high school years are coming to an end. The summer holiday is on the way. Here are my plans for the long exciting holidays.
Because I have a busy life in school days,I will get close to nature and relax myself with my parents. I will volunteer to do something for others .I will stay with my parents and help my parents to do some housework in my free. I will also read every morning. From the books, I can get more knowledge to fulfill myself. I also decide to have a good sleep during the vacation. I decide to take part in some social activities in order to know about the real society. I will stay
away from dangerous places.Besides, I will keep a diary and then take it to school for sharing with my classmates.
I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
【解析】
试题分析：短文要制定出度假计划，文章需要用第一人称“I”进行书写，不可使用“we/ you”等其他人称。

文章主要内容为计划的书写，主要使用一般将来时态。

所写的句子要符合英语语法，不能遗漏要点。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：come to an end结束；on the way在途中；get close to nature亲近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事；take part in sth参加活动。

用了一些衔接词besides等，句子过度自然。

用了because引导的原因状语从句，增加了文章的亮点。

考点：考查提纲作文。

3．书面表达
亲子关系是目前广受关注的话题。

假设你是张华，你正在以“如何与父母更好地相处” 为题进行英语自主课程研究。

通过搜集资料，你查找到中国青少年研究中心(CYCRC)近日就中美两国亲子关系进行了问卷调查，结果如下表。

请你根据下表选取并整合你认为有用的信息，结合你的实际经历以How to get along well with parents为题写一篇感想。

注意事项：
1.内容须根据表格数据和实际经历合理展开；
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；
3.词数在90个左右，首尾已经在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置。

【答案】How to get along well with parents
More and more people begin to focus on the parent-child relationship. Here’s my underst anding of how to get along well with our parents.
CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parent-child relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the
reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children.
As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以How to get along well with parents为题，就中国青少年研究中心(CYCRC)近日对中美两国亲子关系问卷调查的结果进行介绍，并结合自己的实际经历，发表自己的感谢。

写作前，应仔细审题，观察所给表格，弄清楚表格中每一项的内容以及它的意义。

然后结合自己的实际情况，对如何与父母良好相处，发表自己的看法。

短文应主要以一般现在时为主，第一人称和第三人称来叙述。

写作时应注意：内容应密切结合表格中所给的数据以及自己的实际经历，有叙述，有议论。

合理安排各部分内容之间的关系，注意分清结构，表达要有条理。

其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语式思维逐词翻译，应从句式的整体结构出发，使用适当的单词、短语和句型表达。

句式结构要完整，可以简单句为基础，穿插使用并列句和复合句以及其他复杂句式。

同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了中美两国亲子关系的对比，并结合自己的实际对如何与父母相处，发表了个人看法。

短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，符合题目要求。

短文分三段：第一段引出文章的话题parent-child relationship，点明文章主旨Here’s my understan ding of how to get along well with our parents；第二段对调查结果的第一项内容进行了介绍，并结合自己的经历，讲述了如何与父母相处。

这是文章的主体部分，叙述非常详细，内容也很充实，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主题，点明了良好亲子关系的重要性。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语句通顺。

句式结构完整，以简单句为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式和结构。

行文连贯、自然，表达流畅。

短文中较好的句型有：The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.等等。

4．临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，
写一份素质报告．
要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等
Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.
【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.
I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。

在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。

表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。

这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。

在最后要给Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。

同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。

这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。

表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。

写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。

短文注意到了长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。

如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。

5．书面表达
生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？请根据以下提示点谈谈你的想法。

1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物；
2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过；
3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍；
4. 接下来你打算……参考词汇：cherish珍惜open up one’s eyes开阔眼界
要求：
1. 字数80-100个；
2. 开头已经给出不计入总词数；
3. 要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥。

When I have trouble with my best friend
There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday.
_______________________________________________________________________________ ______
__________________________________________________________________
【答案】When I have trouble with my best friend
There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday my best friend Lisa lost my favourite book that was a birthday present from my mother. The book is very meaningful for me. What’s more, she didn’t apologize to me about this, I felt quite sad. I love reading, because it can open up our eyes and increase our knowledge. I cherish every book of mine and they are my treasure.
So I am going to have a serious talk with Lisa in order to tell her my true feelings. I think we can buy a new one and read it together. In fact, understanding is the most important thing between friends.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇材料作文。

【详解】
根据题干“生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：开篇点题——我将介绍和好友闹矛盾的一件事情。

第二部分：文章主体——具体介绍这件事情的始末。

根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么会和好友有矛盾。

这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。

1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物；
2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过；
3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍；
4. 接下来你打算……
第三部分：总结全文——好友之间应该互相理解。

6．书面表达
我们在生活中总是面对着各种各样的压力，这会严重妨碍我们的学习和生活。

某中学生英文报正开辟专栏讨论中学生如何减压。

假设你叫李华，请从以下几个方面，用英语写出你的具体做法，向该栏目投稿。

1.与他人交流；
2.参加体育运动；
3.参加娱乐活动；
4.其它减压方式。

参考词汇：stressed adj.有压力的
注意：
1.词数80-120左右；
2.文中不得出现真实人名及学校名；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,
There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear editor,
There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves.As for me.when I feel stressed,I usually communicate with my friends,parents or teachers.Sometimes I will do sports with my classmates,such as riding bikes,going swimming and so on.I go to the movies or listen to light music in my spare time,too.What's more, going on a trip in holiday is another way to make me relaxed. I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we live.We will be healthy and learn better .
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇要求介绍自己面对着各种各样的压力是如何做的。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

7．英语中有一句谚语：Failure is the mother of success.生活中我们常常会遭遇失败，但只要能正确对待，往往会获得最后的成功。

请就此用英语写一篇短文，主要内容包括：
1．描述亲身经历的一次失败；
2．叙说失败后如何获得成功；
3．谈谈你的感想。

注意：1．词数90左右。

短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success. As the English saying goes,
"Failure is the mother of success."
_____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________【答案】Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success. As the English saying goes, "Failure is the mother of success."
I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term. Before the match, I was cinfident that I would win. However, I failed . How sad I was! luckily, my PE.teacher helped me out. He told me not to lose heart. He also helped me with my skills. With his help , my confidence returned and I came up with several new ideas. The next day, though I had to play against anther more skilled boy , I beat him!
So don’t be afraid of failure. If we can deal with it well. failure can be the mother of success!
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文。

要求介绍介绍失败的经历，及从中的收获和感想。

描述经历用过去时态。

2. 例文点评：这篇短文条理通畅，能将要点表达完整。

句式丰富，能运用连词使文章更有逻辑同时运用了大量的短语。

3. 高分亮点：
短语和连词的使用：be full of ，ups and downs，too…to…，help out，before，if，lay against，deal with等。

句型：(1) Life is full of ups and downs and it is never too easy to achieve success（2）Failure is the mother of success.（3）I was asked to play in a table tennis match last term.（4）The next day, though I had to play against anther more skilled boy , I beat him! (5) If we can deal with it well. failure can be the mother of success!
8．从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。

文中已给出内容不计人总词数。

所给提示词语仅供选用。

请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

题目①
假如你是李华，明天下午2:00你要去参加“传统文化才艺展示”活动，因此不能上英语课。

请用英文给你们的外教John写一张请假条，告诉他你要去干什么，为什么要参加这个活动以及你保证按时完成作业。

提示词语:traditional talent show, Chinese culture, ask, help
提示问题:.What will you do tomorrow afternoon?
Why will you take this activity?
How will you finish your homework?
Dear John,
I'm sorry to ask for absence from your English lesson.__________________
______________________________________________________________
Your loring student
Li lHua
题目②
一位好老师，胜过万卷书。

在你的初中生活中，一定会有一位老师给你留下了深刻印象。

某英文网站正在开展以“Thank you, my teacher”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，让更多的人认识你的老师，同时表达你对他/她的感激之情。

主要内容包括: 哪位老师给你留下了深刻印象，发生了什么事使你印象深刻以及你想对他/她说些什么。

提示词语：kind, helpful，talk with，make progress
提示问题：Which teacher impressed you most?
What happened to make you impressed?
What do you want to say to him/her?
Thank you,my teacher
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________
【答案】题目一：
Dear John,
I'm sorry to ask for absence fom your English lesson. I'm going to aend a traditional talent show at 2:00 tomorrow aftermoon.
In order to let the foreign students in our school know more about Chinese culture, our school holds this talent show. I will introduce Chinese painting in English.
I will ask my classmates to help me with my English. And I promise to finish my homework on time.
Your loring student
Li Hua
题目二：
Among all my teachers, my English teacher impressed me most. She is always kind and helpful. last year, I did badly in a big test and I found English too hard. As soon as she found out this, she
talked with me and gave me some helpful advice. With her encouragement, I have made great progress.
I really want to say"Thank you for helping me. I love you!" to my English teacher.
【解析】
【详解】
、
题目①
本文是一篇应用文，作文要求写一张请假条，因此格式要遵循假条的格式。

假条的内容——时间和事由均给出，结合提示问题可知假条主要从三个方面写，这三个方面需要作者自由发挥一部分内容。

本例文是一篇应用文，人称为第一人称，时态是以一般将来时为主。

例文分成三段，根据提示问题，每段成一行，这种写法条理清晰，分段明确。

高分亮点：ask for；absence from；一般将来时；in order to；help sb with sth；promise to do；on time。

题目②
题目二是一篇话题作文，根据话题可知这是一篇感谢老师的文章。

人称应该为第一人称。

注意给出的提示问题，文章要包含这三部分的内容。

本例文以第一人称书写，时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。

文章第一段介绍“我”要感谢的老师，第二段用一般过去时介绍为什么“我”要感谢老师，第三段表达“我”的感谢。

分段明确，语句简洁不啰嗦，时态运用合理。

高分亮点：Among all my teachers；did badly in；As soon as；found out；talked with；现在完成时；want to do sth。

9．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Johnson打算暑假来合肥玩，而合肥的夏天经常持续高温，请你根据以下提示，用英文给他写一封邮件，告诉他防暑降温的方法。

● 清淡饮食；● 合理休息；● 适当运动；● ……
注意: 1.词数80-100；2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校名和地名；4.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Johnson
Welcome to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat.____________________________________________
I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday!
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jack,
Welcome to Hefei. It’s a very beautiful city. But it’s often very hot in summer. Here is some advice on how to beat the summer heat.
First of all, you should drink more water and eat light meals, such as salads, fruit and vegetables. Next, you’d better get some sleep after lunch. Don’t stay up and make sure you get enough sleep. It’s not a good idea to stay out when it’s very hot. What's more, take some exercise
properly. Why not take a warm shower before going to bed. Finally, if you have to go out, please remember to wear sunglasses and a hat.
I hope the advice is useful to you. Wish you a good holiday!
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇关于防暑的建议，所以写作时，比较多地用到表示建议的句型，比如You’d better… ,You should…. , It’s a good idea to do…., Why not do….? Why don’t you do….? 提出建议时要条理清晰，可以使用First,…. Second, ….. At last….等表示次序的词。

在文章最后可以提出自己的期望和祝福。

写完后记得对文章检查复合，避免单词拼写及语法错误。

本篇文章首先第一段对别人的到来表示欢迎，接着对合肥的天气进行总的描述，并引出下文自己的建议。

第二段也是文章的主体部分。

用first of all, Next, What's more, Finally,提出了四点建议，其中用到建议的句型，例如you should，you’d better, Don’t…, It’s not a good idea to….., Why not…., please…...等。

结构清晰，层次分明，词语及句型使用正确，很不错的一篇文章。