专题11读后续写之闪亮开头 -【高分技能】2024年高考英语写作常考题型全面突破

专题11读后续写之闪亮开头
一篇好的文章需要一个吸引眼球的开头。

同样，一个好的段落，也要有一个吸引人的开头。

它就像是一块敲门砖，敲开阅卷老师的高分之门。

As the saying goes,"well begun,half done!"良好的开始就是成功的一半！可见，写出一个引人入胜的开头是多么的重要。

那么在时间紧迫的考场上如何才能写出靓丽的开头呢？以下开头小技巧都是满满干货，经典例句，可以助您旗开得胜。

无灵主语，即无生命的事物做主语，该类句子自带拟人的修辞色彩，把没有生命的东西，赋予生命，从而增加了句子的多样性，使语言更加灵动多变。

①Anxiety tore him into pieces.
他焦虑万分，肝肠寸断。

②at the thought of his failure in the exam.
一想到考试的失败，他就万念俱灰。

of a saying that“Never judge a person by his appearance”.
这个故事使我想起来一句谚语“不能以貌取人”。

④His face burned with shame.
他羞愧的脸都红了。

⑤Night has fallen over the country.
夜幕已经笼罩着乡间。

⑥The thought of returning to her hometown soon filled her heart with great happiness.
想到不久就要回到故乡，她心中感到十分快乐。

⑦A surge of excitement bubbling up inside me,I looked up into my dad’s dark eyes.
一阵兴奋涌上心头，我看向父亲深邃的眼睛。

⑧Silence fell upon us for a moment.
我们之间沉默了片刻。

①Feeling refreshed,she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.
她感到神清气爽，继续沿着小溪散步，寻找出去的路。

这里用feeling refreshed的形式，很好体现了后一个动作"walk"的伴随状态。

②“No,it is not your lamb.It’s ours!”said Charlie,placing himself in front of it.
“不，这不是你的羊，这是我们的！”查理说着站到了羊的前面。

③Feeling desperate and scared,she hid herself in a tree.
感觉既绝望又害怕，她藏到了一棵树上。

④To keep herself safe from the darkness,she tried to hide herself in a tall tree.
为了自己在夜里的安全，她努力爬上一棵树藏了起来。

⑤I was speechless at this,feeling ashamed of my selfishness and guilty at my misunderstanding.
对于这件事我说不出话来，对自己的自私感到羞愧也对我的误解感到内疚。

⑥Failing to say a single word,he was rooted to the spot.
一句话也说不出来，他愣在那里一动不动。

⑦Not knowing what to do,I just stood there and frozen with terror.
不知所措，我站在那里被吓呆了。

①Carefully,he picked up all the sequins(亮片)with his eyes full of tears.
眼含泪水，他仔细地将亮片捡起。

②Finally/Eventually,she went herself with a heavy heart,dragging her leaden legs,and bargained with the butcher.
最终，她怀着沉重的心情，拖着灌了铅般的双腿，自己去了那里，并且跟屠夫讨价还价起来。

③Immediately,absolute darkness ruled the forest.
很快，黑暗笼罩了整个森林。

此处运用副词immediately开头，同时，该句另一亮点是运用无灵主语句，absolute darkness为无灵主语，rule“统治，掌权”作谓语，让人眼前一亮。

④Recently,I am so grateful for the support and friendship of a very dear friend of mine.
最近，我对一个朋友的支持和友情感到非常感激。

⑤Doubtfully,Bob unfolded the note.
鲍勃疑惑地展开字条。

⑥Apparently,she kept a more clear head facing this critical situation.
很显然，面对这危急时刻，她头脑更清醒。

①At that 在那个时刻，我唯有流下感激的泪水。

②And meanwhile ,an inner voice whispered to me ,“go all out to save the poor creature.”
同时，内心有个声音低声说道“竭尽全力救救这个可怜的小生灵吧。

”
③Sometimes I’m exhausted at the end of the day,but I still love the journey I’m on.
有时候，一天到头我会感到很累，但是我依然热爱我现在的旅程。

④After a few minutes,my parents with half angry and half worried faces walked in.
几分钟后，我父母走了进来，脸上的表情既生气又担心。

⑤After what must have been several hours,we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance.
大约过了几个小时后，我们突然听到了远处的羊叫声。

①Anxious to find out the truth ,she tiptoed to the living room ，aiming to hear what her parents were talking about.
迫切地想知道真相，她蹑手蹑脚地来到客厅，企图听一下父母在讨论什么。

②Unable to say a single word ,he was rooted to the spot.
一句话也说不出来，他愣在那里一动不动。

③Exhausted and anxious ,we wonder whether we could find our way successfully.
既疲惫又焦虑，我们想知道是否能成功找到路。

④Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature ,I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse .由于害怕我会伤到这可爱的小生灵，我不假思索地叫了一声，来阻止我的马。

⑤Sure enough,it was only moments later that the ball of fur lifted its head out of the box to peek its new home and new friends.
果然，仅仅片刻后，这个小毛球从箱子里探出头，窥探它的新家和新朋友。

①At the thought of parting with the little creature,she couldn’t help feeling sad because the children loved it so much.
一想到要与这个可怜的小动物分离，她就不禁悲伤不已，因为她的孩子们太爱它了。

②In a trembling voice ,Mrs.Grant explained to her children how badly off they were after their father died.格兰特夫人声音颤抖地向孩子们解释道，他们的爸爸去世后，他们的生活是多么的拮据。

③【段首句】When the girl was walking in the garden ,a snake appeared suddenly .
当女孩在花园散步时，突然出现了一条蛇。

【续写句】At the very first sight of the snake ,she screamed at the top of her voice .
一看到蛇，她就以最大的声音尖叫起来。

moment ,I can’t help but shed tears of gratitude.
④With 在他的帮助下，我可以实现我善行义举的梦想his help ,I can realize my dream of making a kind acts projects.。

⑤All of a sudden the horse began to run.
突然，马开始跑起来。

⑥“but I don’t want to be laughed at.”without pausing for thought,I replied.
我毫不思索的答道“我不想被嘲笑”。

①Even if she was kind of tired ,she was at the top of the world ,seeing us come back .
尽管有些累了，但是她看到我们回家，感到非常兴奋。

②While there’s nothing wrong with children who don’t have imaginary friends,children who have imaginary companions shouldn’t be worried either.尽管没有假想朋友那些孩子是没问题的，但是那些有假想朋友的孩子也不必担心。

①Father then reached out his hand ,stroked my head and smiled ,“I’m happy you are growing up and contributing to the family”
爸爸伸出手，摸着我的头微笑着说：“我很高兴你长大了，并且能为家里做贡献了”
②She grabbed a big piece of garlic bread from the plate and threw it across the fence,which immediately drew the bear’s attention.她从包里拿出一块大蒜面包，穿过篱笆扔出去，这立马吸引了熊的注意力。

③The bear stopped pounding the fence and walked towards the bread,but he went back again in a minute when he finished the bread.熊不再撞击篱笆，走向面包，但是当他吃完面包后又回来了。

④Hearing his bags unloaded on the driveway,Poppy’s ears picked up and suddenly she was on all fours .一听到他的包被放到车道上的声音，Poppy 的耳朵就竖了起来，立马四肢着地站起来。

①So angry was the bear that it roared and smacked the fence violently.
熊怒火中烧，开始咆哮，并猛烈地拍击护栏。

该句利用so...that...倒装句式，加上动作描写，将熊的愤怒刻画得很细致。

②“Absolutely !”John shouted,excitement shining in his eyes.
约翰喊道，“一定！”他两眼兴奋地闪闪发光。

③When he was told what John had done for him ,tears started welling up
in
his
eyes and rolling down his
cheeks.
当他被告知约翰对他的所做作为，泪水夺眶而出，顺着脸颊流下。

④“It’s a surprise for you on Mother’s Day,”he responded,his face blooming like a flower.
这是给你的母亲节惊喜，他回答道，脸像花儿绽放一般灿烂。

①I looked out of the car window,winding rivers,lofty mountains,sunny beaches,deep valleys,holding me entirely in their fascination.
我望着窗外，蜿蜒的河流，高耸的山脉，阳光明媚的沙滩，和深邃的山谷，完全吸引了我的注意力。

②We two sat in silence and there were only rays of light filtered through the forest.Suddenly,a loud whistle shattered the silence.
我们静静的坐着，只有几束光穿过丛林。

突然，一声巨大的哨声打破了沉寂。