高考英语备考“经典写作”之分类突破讲座
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高考备考“经典写作”之分类突破讲座
第一辑:调查讨论观点纷呈(对比类写作要点)四川省成都市新都一中张世明
I.实战点睛
对比类写作已成为英语书面表达中一个非常重要的形式。
1999年高考题要求学生根据所给画介绍学校三年间的新变化;2001年高考题要求学生比较减负前后的学习情况;2002年高考题要求学生比较“公园要不要收门票”的两种不同观点;2004年北京春季高考要求学生根据所给图画比较过去和现在的生活变化情况。
不管在工作学习中还是在日常生活中,对比是人们分析问题和解决问题的重要方法和手段,这就不难理解为什么对比类写作是高考写作中的一个重要形式。
对比类写作一般有两种方式:一是集中比较或对比(集中说明一个对象的诸种特征);二是逐点比较或对比(一条一条地说明两者的异同)。
对比类写作可以大致分为以下几种:
★◐★一、今昔对比
在作今昔对比时,要注意时态的变化。
谈到过去的情况要用过去时态(主要是一般过去时),谈到现在的情况要用现在时态(主要是一般现在时)。
今昔对比的写作格式是:开头(提出什么事情发生了变化)→对具体事例作对比→结论。
写作方式既可采用集中比较,也可采用逐点比较。
在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章:
1. 开头常用句型
(1) Great changes have taken place. 发生了巨大变化。
Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five year.
Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China.
Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.
(2) Things have begun to improve since…自从……以来,事情有了好转/改善。
Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.
2. 对比常用句型
(1) …used to…, but now…过去常……,但是现在……
(2) …in the past, but now…在过去……,但是现在……
(3) once…, but now…曾经…….,但是现在……
(4) Things are different now. 情况已大不同了。
(5) But now, everything has changed. 但是现在全变了。
Where the playground used to be now stands another new building---our library.
I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time.
My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home.
Once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV.
When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment.
在作对比时,为避免句型重复,可适当变换一些句式,比如:
(1) Another change is…再有一个变化是……
Another big change is in the housing conditions.
(2) What’s more, …还有……
What's more, I can go to bed earlier than in the past.
3. 结尾常用句型
In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.
2004年北京春季高考题范文
Changes In Our Life
Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life(主题句). Take my family for example(过渡句). My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home(对比一). And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV(对比二). Another big change is in the housing conditions(过渡句). When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment(对比三). In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience(总结句).
★◐★二、正反观点对比
对同一件事情,人们常有不同的看法,即正反两种观点。
在写作时,常使用一般现在时。
写作格式一般是:提出问题→两种不同观点→对两种不同观点的论据(理由)逐项作对比。
有时题目会要求说出自己的观点,可在结尾段加上自己的观点并简要说明理由,最好不要重复前面的已谈到的理由。
写作方式一般采用集中比较。
在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章:正反观点对比常用句型
(1) We have a discussion about…我们对……进行了一次讨论。
We’ve had a discussion about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
(2) We have had a survey on…我们对……开展了一次调查。
We’ve had a survey on whether students should be allowed to carry mobile phones to schools.
(3) Opinions are divided on the question. 在这个问题上意见有分歧。
(4) Opinions are mainly divided into two groups. 有两种不同意见。
(5) Others have different opinions. 其他人有不同看法。
(5) Sixty percent of the students are for the idea, while forty percent of the students think otherwise. 有60%的学生支持这个观点,然而有40%的学生则不这样认为。
(6) Sixty percent of the students think it necessary to…, but forty percent of the students don’t think so. 60%的学生认为……是必须的,而40%的学生则不这样认为。
(7) On the one hand, … On the other hand, …一方面……,另一方面……
在对某一观点作进一步论证时,可用下列句型:
(1) What’s more, …还有就是……
What’s more, we can get a good knowledge of the culture and social customs of the country where we study, as well as improve our English.
(2) Besides, …除此之外……
Some students cannot discipline themselves. Besides, it’s far too expensive to study abroad, which is a load to the family.
当然在提出多个论据时,也可用First, …Second, … Third, …来列举论据。
2002年高考题范文
Dear Editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks(提出问题).
Opinions are divided on the question(过渡句). 60%of the students are against the
idea of entrance fee. They believe a public park should be free of charge(观点一). People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Changing entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away(论据一). What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city(论据二).
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged(观点二) because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers(论据一), and to buy plants and young trees(论据二). They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.
Yours truly
Li Hua 可以看出,这类文章的写作,首先要提出问题,即双方讨论的问题。
接下来提出观点一,并用一系列论据进行阐明。
说明完观点一之后,再提出观点二,继续用论据进行说明。
如果需要说明自己的观点,可接下来说明自己的观点。
★◐★三、数据分析比较
此类题目要求考生通过对数据的分析比较得出某一结论或说明某一现象。
在写作时不要对数据进行简单的列举,而是要通过对数据进行分析,得出某一结论。
即应该通过对数据比较得出某物增长了多少或减少了多少,而不是简单的写成今年是多少去年是多少。
时态常用一般现在时和一般过去时。
写作方式最好采用逐个比较而不宜采用集中比较。
写作格式一般是:说明现象→数据比较→得出结论。
在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章:
常用句型:
1. We can see from the chart that…. 我们可以从图表中看出……
2. We can see from the table that…我们可以从表格中看出……
We can see from the chart above that the environment in the Yellow River Valley is getting worse and worse.
3. A has increased by X%. A增长了X%。
4. A has doubled in the past five years. A在过去五年里增长了两倍。
北京近年来交通工具发生了很大变化。
请根据下表和所给提示,用英语写一篇短文,以便刊登在某家对外发行的英语杂志上。
Along with the city development, the transport system is also changing(主题句). We did a survey on the different transportations.
According to the result, people more and more prefer convenient transportations, like taxi, which doubled in the past year(比较一). Besides, private cars have been increasing rapidly with the high living standard(比较二). While public bus, which was considered the main transport in the city, now is thought by most people dirty and crowded(比较三). But on the other hand, bicycle, as another traditional transportation, is still widely accepted for its convenience and benefit to people’s health(比较四).
In a word, people are enjoying an easier and more conventional life(总结句).
数据比较类文章通常也要求先提出主题句,即通过数据比较要说明的问题。
接下来对数据进行比较。
在边进行比较时边说明问题,在进行多项比较时,要注意句与句之间的过渡与衔接。
最后要写好总结句,即你对这一现象作出自己的理解。
高考英语对比类写作实战模版
★★★对比观点题型
(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1.有一些人认为。
2.另一些人认为。
3.我的看法。
The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
(2)给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一). For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③---------------(为他们带来的好处).
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤---------(反对的理由之二).Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).
★★★议论文的框架
(1)不同观点列举型(选择型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that__作文题目.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from perso n to person.A majority of people think that_观点一________.In their views there are2factors contributing to this attitude as follows :in the first place,___原因一_______.Furthermore,in the second place,___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that___观点一_____.
People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some peoplehold the idea that_观二_____.In their point of view,on the one hand,___原因一_______.On the other hand,____原因二_____.Therefore,there is no doubt that___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二_. Itis not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
II.高考真题体验
假设你是李华,在一所中学读书。
最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的来信。
他三年前参观过你校,听说现在变化很大,希望了解有关情况。
参照下图,给他写一封信,介绍你校的变化。
注意:1.回信须包括图画的主要内容,可以适当增减细节,使内容连贯;
Dear Mr Smith,
I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. You are right. Quite a few changes have taken place. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. On the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another building --- our library. In it there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. The playground is now in front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. I hope you come and see for yourself some day, Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华。
你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担,来信询问有关情况。
请你根据下表提供的信息,写一封回信,谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。
Dear Dick,
How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I don't know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What's more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。
讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。
注意:
1、信的开头已为你写好。
2、词数:100左右。
3、参考词汇:门票:entrance fee
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
注意:1.文章的起始句已给出;
2.词数:100左右(不包括已给的起始句);
3.参考词汇:基础—foundation 汉语拼音—Chinese pinyin
The students of Class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood .
Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood . As little boys and girls have a very good memory ,they can learn a lot of English words by heart . This will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning . But others do
not agree . Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school . If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time , it will be very easy for them to mix them up . This will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning .
In short , the students have not arrived at any agreement yet .
以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。
请你给该报写一封信,反映讨论结果。
注意:1 2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇: 郊区—suburb
June 3 ,2005
Dear Editor ,
Recently ,our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What ’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
参考词汇:
网络朋友on-line friend(s),上当受骗to be cheated
Should students make friends on line ?Some people say yes .The internet helps make many friends .Chatting on line ,students can more freely express their feelings and opinions ,and even get help with their foreign language studies .
Others ,however, think students should not .They say making friends on line is a waste of time ,which should be spent more meaningfully on study .Besides ,some students get cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study ,health and safety before other things .As for friendship ,we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
征文,标题是“My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations ”。
请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。
内容要点如下:
注意:1.短文必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥;
2.短文标题与开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
3.词数:100左右。
4.参考词汇:作弊 cheat (v.)
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.
As students, we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and don ’t work hard at their lessons. So when taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers.
In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead
of cheating in examinations. What ’s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations.
假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论。
请根据下
列提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。
内容要点应包括:
注意:1.2.发言稿开头与结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数; 3.词数:100左右.
4.参考词汇:偏食be bartieular about food 零食 snack Dear friends,
As we all know, we are what we eat . Therefore, it ’s a very important for us to from healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us atudents. Some of us often
go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food;and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.
To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we ’d better have meals regularly.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.
That ’s all. Thank you!
写一篇有关讨论的英语短文,并谈谈你的看法。
注意: 2.短文必须包括表中所列要点,可根据内容分段表达。
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
4.参考词汇:眼界——horizon (或view )
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during
the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it ’s both convenient and comfortable. What ’s more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world.
However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge
and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like,
such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.
III .全国各地高考模拟试题书面表达分类精选
◆
No. 1 你校同学进行了一场有关高考英语听力测试的讨论。
讨论的主题是:高考英语测试
中的听力部分该不该取消?请你根据王表中的提示写一篇短文,介绍讨论的情况。
参考词汇:取消cancel 国际合作international cooperation
◆No. 2假定你是李平,一家英文报社邀请你调查一下中学生对网络使用的情况,并依据调
查写一篇报道。
请根据下表提供的信息,对你的调查作简要介绍,发给报社。
◆No. 3假设今天你上网,点击进入“今日话题”网站。
看到一则有关禁止学生在校园内使
用手机的报道。
网友们对此各抒己见。
作为一名高中生,你对此颇感兴趣,就在该栏目下发帖,客观反映周围同学们对此的不同看法。
并简单谈谈你的看法。
(100字左右)以下为同学们的看法:
◆No. 4一位中学生在自己班级就校服问题进行了调查(survey ),下面是对部分学生调查的
统计表,请参照该表写一篇题为“Report on the Survey about Our School Uniform”的报告。
Report on the survey about Our School Uniform
◆No. 5近来你们学校英语课堂教学采用现代化教学手段,带来了很多变化。
请你根据下表提供的信息,给你的美国朋友David写一封信,客观地介绍这些变化。
(开头已给出)
◆No. 6最近,你校组织高三学生开展了一场讨论。
讨论的主题是:周末双休日要不要上课。
请根据下表提供的信息,写一篇短文,客观地介绍一下评论的情况。
◆No. 7现在正是春暖花开春游时节。
你校学生会以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”为题,向高三学生作调查。
请你根据下表所示的调查结果,以“Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?”为题,写一篇短文,上交学生会。
注意:
◆No. 8假如你是某中学学生李华。
最近,你班同学正在参加21世纪英文报“大家谈”栏目的一个讨论。
本次话题为:“父母有没有必要陪读?”请你根据下表所列情况给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论的情况。
注意:
◆No. 9 目前,对于我国的英语学习热潮有着两种不同的观点。
为此,我国某中学生英文报正在主持一场讨论。
请根据下表所示的主要内容,给报社编辑写一封信,明确表明你的观点(观点1或观点2),并陈述你的理由。
◆No. 10目前,温州的街头出现了越来越多的猫与狗,对此“中学生英语报”组织了一场讨论:城市内是否可以饲养宠物。
请你根据下表所提供的信息,介绍讨论情况,并说明自己的观点和建议。
3.开头语已为你写好。
Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities.
◆No. 11目前,许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理,学生对此看法不一。
请根据下表所提供的信息,写一篇短文,谈谈自己的看法。
(字数120左右)
注意:
Nowadays a lot o1[ schools keep their students in school all day long.
◆ No. 12假如你是一名高三学生,经常为看电视的事跟妈妈闹意见,今天你和妈妈达成一致。
请根据以下表格的内容,以An Agreement为题写一篇120字左右的英语短文。
1.字数100—120,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.不要漏掉表格中的内容,但不能逐字翻译;
3.可适当增添合乎情理的过渡性语言。
◆No. 13下面是你班班会上以“中学生是否能佩带手机”为题进行讨论的情况。
请你写一封信给21st Century报的编辑说明该情况,并附带表明你自己的观点。
注意:1.
◆No. 14
去年,上海复旦大学开始通过面试自主招收学生,今年又有一些学校加入到这一行列。
这一新的招生方式在学生中引发了一场讨论。
假如你是李华,请根据下表提供的内容给二十一世纪报编辑写一封信反映讨论情况。
注意:1.开头已为你写好,不计人总词数。
2.词数:100左右
3.参考词汇:comprehensive综合的,subjective主观的,one-sided片面的,evaluate 评价
Dear Editor,
Recently, a discussion has been held in our school on whether it is reasonable for
the universities to admit students through interviews. The results are as follows:
◆No. 15人类已进入了一个崭新的世纪,不同的人有不同的幸福观。
某英语杂志正在中学
生中进行幸福观讨论,请你根据下表的提示,用英语写一篇短文,叙述一些人的观点及理由,发
表对其中某一观点的看法,并表明自己的观点和理由,然后向该刊投稿。
注意:
1.不要照抄表中的原句,否则酌情扣分。
2.词数:120左右。
开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
What is happiness in my mind?
◆No. 16
某英文网站正在开展关于填报志愿时首先考虑专业还是学校的讨论。
请你根据下面所给的要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,描述学生中存在的两种看法,并谈谈你自己的看法,将此文在该网站的BBS上发表。
2. 内容可适当发挥,注意行文连贯。
Every student will be faced with the question after he passes the college entrance examinations: Should we choose a good major or a good university first?
◆No. 17
假设你是李明,你的美国朋友杰克听说你校正在开展研究性学习,来信询问有关情况,请你写一封信,谈一谈开展研究性学习前后,你的学习情况的变化。
注意:1用书信格式。
2词数:100左右
surf the internet。
3 生词:研究性学习exploring study ,上网
◆No. 18
假定你是李华,看到班上有部分同学在完成作业时,不自己独立完成而是抄袭他人的作业,针对这种现象,请你以My opinion on copying others’ homework为题谈谈你自己的看法。
◆No. 19
一中学班级就生活在城市或乡村问题进行了辩论。
下面是部分辩论记录要点,请确定你的观点,参照该记录要点并发挥想像,写一篇题为I Prefer to Live in the City/the Countryside 的短文。
字数:100字左右。
◆No. 20这几年,“考生该不该复读”这个话题一直为社会各界所关注。
下表是你班同学讨论的结果,请你给英文报社写一封信,客观介绍讲座情况,并简要阐述自己的观点。
Dear Editor:
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether students retake classes after failing the college entrance examinati on.
NMET书面表达评分原则
1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次给分。
3.词数少于80或多于120的,从总分中减去2分。
4.评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和正确性及上下文的连贯性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6.如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(21—25分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。
—覆盖所有内容要点。
—应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
—语法结构和词汇方面有些许错误,但为尽力使用复杂的语法结构或较高级词汇所致;
具备较强的语言运用能力。
一有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(16—20分)完成了试题规定的任务。
—虽漏掉1、2个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容。
—应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
—语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂的语法结构或词汇所致。
—应用简单的语词间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑。
达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(11—15分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。
—虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容。
—应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
—有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解。
—应用简单的语句间的连接成分,使全文内容连贯。
整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(6—10分)未恰当完成试题规定任务。
—漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容。
—语法结构单调、词汇知识有限。
—有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解。
—较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(1—5分)
未完成试题规定的任务。
—明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未理解试题要求。
—语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
—较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响对写作内容的理解。
缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
信息未能传达给读者。
高考备考“经典写作”之分类突破讲座
第一辑:调查讨论观点纷呈(对比类写作要点)III.全国各地高考模拟试题书面表达分类精选
参考范文
◆No. 1你校同学进行了一场有关高考英语听力测试的讨论。
讨论的主题是:高考英语测试中的听力部分该不该取消?请你根据王表中的提示写一篇短文,介绍讨论的情况。
参考词汇:取消cancel国际合作international cooperation
The students of our school had a discussion about whether listening test in the National Matriculation English Test should be kept or canceled. Some students think that listening test should not be canceled. They insist listening is among the four basic skills. We therefore can not ignore it. Besides, listening is one of the important channels for us to get information from the outside world. So it should be strengthened today when international cooperation is becoming more and more frequent. But others don' t agree. They think not everyone has to communicate with foreigners in the future. Moreover, listening test is unfair to the students in the areas where radio signals cannot be picked
up effectively. And for certain reasons, there is a big difference in teachers and equipment between the countryside and the city.
◆No. 2假定你是李平,一家英文报社邀请你调查一下中学生对网络使用的情况,并依据调查写一篇报道。
请根据下表提供的信息,对你的调查作简要介绍,发给报社。
read new at home and abroad and learn forcing languages by ourselves on the Internet. Sometimes we send e-mails to our families as well as our friends, Besides, we listen to music. cnjoy films and play computer games on it. We can even do shopping without leaving our homes.
However, it has its disadvantages. Many students waste too much time playing the electronic games, which has a bad effect on their studies. What’s worse, the bad information on the Internet does great harm to them. I hope every student can make use of the Internet properly for their studies.
◆No. 3假设今天你上网,点击进入“今日话题”网站。
看到一则有关禁止学生在校园内使用手机的报道。
网友们对此各抒己见。
作为一名高中生,你对此颇感兴趣,就在该栏目下发帖,客观反映周围同学们对此的不同看法。
并简单谈谈你的看法。
(100字左右)以下为同学们的看法:
Just the report on banning the use of cell-phones on campus in middle school.In fact, more students now come to school with cell-phones. My schoolmates have different opinions. Some think it is convenient to get in touch with others with the cell-phone, which also makes you feel。