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读后续写在外语教学中可以提高学生的阅读速度和理解能力,帮助学生掌握目标 语言的语法和词汇知识;在语言考试中可以有效地考察学生的阅读和写作能力; 在文学批评中可以帮助学生深入理解文本的结构、语言和主题。
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读后续写技巧
文本分析技巧
找线索
理解原文中的语言特征,例如 重复关键词、明确的主题句和 上下文线索,以确定故事情节
同学们对我的续写故事也给予了较高评价,认为我能够运用所学知识进行创造性的写作,并且语言表达比较地道。
改进之处
同学们也提出了一些建议,如希望我在今后的写作中要注意保持故事的连贯性和逻辑性,尽量避免语法错误和拼写错误等 。
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连接与过渡
使用连接词和短语来帮助读者 理解续写部分与原文之间的联 系,以及故事情节的推进。
创新思维技巧
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创造性的想象力
运用想象力和创意,为故 事情节添加新的元素和细 节,使续写部分更加生动 有趣。
逻辑推理
基于原文提供的线索和人 物性格,推断故事情节的 可能发展和人物的行动。
尝试多种可能性
故事续写
总结词
在给定故事的基础上,进行合理的拓展和补充,使其成 为一个完整的故事。
详细描述
故事续写是读后续写中非常有趣的一种形式。首先,需 要仔细阅读给定的故事开头或者其他相关内容,理解其 中的主题、人物、情节等信息。然后,根据故事中的线 索和提示,以及自己的创意和构思,对故事进行合理的 拓展和补充。在续写时,需要注意情节的连贯性和逻辑 性,保证整体故事的完整性和一致性。
详细描述
读后续写中的故事续写需要我们全面了解原故事的主题、情节、人物性格以 及情感色彩,然后顺着原故事的思路进行合情合理的联想和创造。
读后续写之设计精彩结尾
(3) Her husband spoke to the director of Heightvale, Dolores Haworth. Soon she offered him a job working for the company. She said,“He just had a brilliant working attitude and is definitely the type of employee we are looking for. I was told, ‘If he does this for free, imagine his jobs if he was being paid. ’I met him and he was a lovely and polite young man and he has already started working for us.”
如: The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face,“No.” God felt a bit relieved and said,“Tomorrow you can become human again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly for the rest of my life...”Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.
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其他经典作品续写
《围城》
《红楼梦》
《哈姆雷特》
读后续写实践与挑战
写作实践:根据给定故事开头续写
理解故事背景和人物特点 确定故事发展方向 运用语言和描写技巧 反复修改和完善
写作挑战:自由选择一部经典作品进行续写
挑战原因:经典 作品具有深厚的 历史背景和文化 内涵,续写难度 较大
挑战分析:需要对 作品的主题、人物、 情节等方面有深入 的了解和把握,同 时还需要考虑与原 作风格、语言、结 构的协调与衔接
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了解故事情节和人物关系,梳理故 事发展脉络
注意细节描写,通过细节分析人物 心理和情感变化
确定故事走向和结局
仔细阅读文本,了解故事情节和人 物性格
考虑多种可能的结局,选择最符合 故事主题和人物性格的结局
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确定故事的核心冲突和发展方向
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制定详细的情节发展计划,确保故 事走向和结局的连贯性和可信度
续写过程中发现与原作不符怎么办?
重新阅读原文,确 保对故事情节和人 物性格有准确理解。
寻求帮助:请教老 师或同学,了解其 他人是如何处理这 个问题的。
重新构思续写内容: 在理解原文的基础上 ,重新构思续写内容 ,确保与原作保持一 致。
不断修改和完善:在 续写过程中不断修改 和完善,确保续写内 容与原作保持一致。
如何提高语言水平和文学素养?
阅读经典文学作品, 提高语言感知能力
学习语法和词汇, 增强语言基础
参加写作课程和培 训,提高写作技巧 和表达能力
增加阅读量,拓宽 知识面,丰富文学 知识储备
总结与展望
总结:回顾课程内容和收获
读后续写最新优质PPT课件
1. Feeling happy/sad/angry/guilty/depressed…,
2. Driven by curiosity/a sense of regret/sympathy…. 或者是
Deeply touched/ moved by…
3. …., full of regret/anger/fear/gratitude/sadness…
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chase
What did he see/do there?
Janey What's the turning point?
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4.上下文的连贯性。 ? Which one do you favor?
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读后续写公开课优质教育课件PPT目录如何构思续写的内容读后续写的高分攻略21读后续写的具体要求提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
1如何构思续写的内容Step1 Read for elements Step2 Read for plots Step3 Gather ideas Step 4 Make predictions 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Steve was the most amazing person in all of Minneapolis, and he was my cousin. By the age of 19, Steve was a star baseball player at the University of Minnesota. I wanted to beexactly like him. So when Steve asked me to go with him on a spring fishing trip in northern Minnesota, I was excited! After planning the trip, we gathered clothes and supplies, and began our great adventure. We reached the Superior National Forest in northern Minnesota by early evening. On our way to the campsite, Steve pointed to a small house faraway in one of the mountains, saying that it was the ranger station (护林站) where the forester worked. Finally, after a long walk, we reached the campsite and set up the camp as the sun was setting. Steve knew all the tricksof an experienced wilderness camper. After we gathered enough wood from the forest, he started the campfire using only stone and steel — no matches. For supper we feasted on freeze-dried beef, wild rice and pea soup. I ate greedily after all that work. Tired enough, we climbed into our sleeping bags early and talked about our plans for fishing the next day. We were still talking quietly when a sudden north wind picked up; the temperature droppedand it began to snow. Steve found a way to increase the temperature inside the tent. He dragged a log from the forest to the opposite side of the campfire. Then he wrapped aluminum foil (铝箔) around the log. The heat from the fire reflected off the foil and into the tent. Soon images of lake fish were filling my dreams.The snow had stopped, but sometime later a powerful wind musthave kicked up the flames of our dying fire. I was suddenly awakened by Steve. Our tent was on fire. Frightened, I ran out oftent immediately. The tent collapsed (倒塌) with Steve inside. Without any thought of endangering myself, I reached into the burningtent and pulled him to the icy lake. Fortunately, we were not seriously hurt.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
【课件】读后续写精彩结尾课件-2023届高三英语二轮复习
consideration
2020年6月浙江卷 与熊对抗脱险
calmness
学校生活、人间大爱、亲情……
conflict/problem
Solution
Topic
Danger 系列
Quarrel 系列
Conflict
和危险的动物 和危险的环境 和危险的人 误解 背叛 观念、性格或兴趣不一致
Emotion
bravery
2022年1月浙江卷 与不喜欢的人分在一组做研究 share and respect
2022年6月浙江卷 参与社区慈善服务
love / kindness
2021年全国卷 为母亲做早餐
love
2021年1月浙江卷 万圣节雕南瓜被卡住
harmonious family life
2020年1月浙江卷 主人上大学后,狗狗伤心
The pay day arrived at last. _____________________________________________________________________
I understood immediately what my parents were worried about. __________________________________________
How to make a good ending good?
策略二:名言警句 It is during our darkest moments that we must focus to see the light. Great works are performed not by strength, but perseverance. Don't judge each day by the harvest you reap but by the seeds that you plant.
读后续写ppt优质课件
Never ignore the basic tone of the article.
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Using linking words effectively.
Adding some details reasonably.
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Using different sentence structures. tip3
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day…. surprising
interesting
T i p Sometimes, the general key word can guide us to 3 imagine reasonably.
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原文信息
1. Why did the young man look worried?
2. What happened? But everyone had a different answer.
3. Why did he start to run?
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续写第一段
Why did Arthur run so fast?
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para1
设计
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考虑Arthur 在听 到年轻人喊叫时的 心理活动和可能做 出的动作。
设计的关键在于搭建本段 与前文、后文的桥梁,特 别注意动作描写、语言描 写、心理描写
考虑抵达警察局后 Arthur 和警察的语 言交流以及随后警 察的行动。
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self-evaluation
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பைடு நூலகம்
Focus on the given
专题六 读后续写.ppt
At this moment , Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska.They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road.A bit later,they spotted what they,too,assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike.As they got closer,they realized that the dog was a wolf.Mac heard a large vehicle behind him.He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
《读后续写》PPT课件
b“eGhivienmd,y suitcase back to me!” Hearing this, Arthur immediately realized
that the young man was the bank thief.
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The underlined key words:
Park Avenue
The young man
suitcase
in the back seat loud noise of an alarm
the bank robbery the shouts people the bank thief
Tip1: The key words that respectively stand for the most important information, the main character and the main object should be chosen in your writing.
on the contrary, on the other hand…..
Paragraph 1U: se transitional add some
Use different
As he waswrourndsning, Arthur hdeeataridlsthe younstgrumctuarnesshouting
information 3.Polish your writing
读后续写教学设计ppt
教学策略:总结有效的读后续写教学策略,包括如何选择合适的阅读材 料、如何设计合理的任务、如何给予有效的反馈等。
教学改进方向
调整教学策略, 注重培养学生的 思维能力和创造 力。
加强课堂互动, 提高学生的参与 度和积极性。
关注学生的个体 差异,因材施教, 满足不同层次学 生的需求。
不断更新教学资 源和技术,提高 教学效果和效率。
教学建议与展望
针对不同年级 和水平的学生, 制定不同的教 学计划和方案
结合学生的实 际需求和兴趣, 选择适合的读
后续写材料
注重培养学生 的阅读和写作 能力,提高他 们的思维能力
和表达能力
不断探索和创 新教学方法, 提高教学质量
课后作业
复习本课所学内 容
完成课后练习题 或相关练习册
预习下一课内容
收集与课文相关 的资料或文化背 景知识容:学生 的读后续写能力、 语言表达能力等
评估标准:学生 的读后续写是否 符合逻辑、是否 符合原文风格等
评估结果:根据 评估结果调整教 学策略,提高教 学质量
网络资源:介绍一 些与读后续写相关 的在线资源和工具 ,方便学生进行自 主学习和创作。
其他资源获取方式
网络搜索
图书馆和书店
向他人购买或交换
参加相关课程或培训
感谢观看
汇报人:WPS
关键技巧
教学步骤:介 绍读后续写的 方法,分析原 文背景和人物 性格,引导学 生进行合理想 象并完成续写
任务。
知识点框架图
教学内容2:读后续写与写 作教学的关系
教学内容1:读后续写的作 用和意义
教学内容3:读后续写的关 键要素和技巧
高考英语一轮复习——读后续写:三大出彩收尾设计课件
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方法一: 首尾呼应法
首尾呼应 2017年高考真题,讲述的是与健忘妈妈一块去旅游的故事。
开头
I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother--loving, sweet, yet absentminded and forgetful.
名言式结尾法
例子3:Tell me and I forget. Teach me and I remember. Involve me and I learn.
(告诉我,我会忘记。教给我,我会铭记。让我参与,我会掌握。) 这则名言通过排比和对比,揭示了学习的规律,阐明了实践出真知的道理,可以用于总结学习经 历,反思技能掌握的过程等。
2. From then on, I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others(传递爱给 其他人). Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand(赠人玫 瑰,手有余香). ”(2021年1月八省联考)
首尾呼应 2017年高考真题,讲述的是与健忘妈妈一块去旅游的故事。
开头
I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother--loving, sweet, yet absentminded and forgetful.
名言式结尾法
例4:In the end, it's not the years in your life that count. It's the life in your years. (最后,重要的不是你生命中的岁月,而是你如何度过这些岁月的。) 这则名言通过巧妙的词汇调换,改变句意,揭示了生活的真谛:只有认真对待 生活,人生才不会留下遗憾,由于本句涉及的时间跨度较大,写作中最is during our darkest moments that we must focus to see the light.
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11、用道德的示范来造就一个人,显然比用法律来约束他更有价值。—— 希腊
12、法律是无私的,对谁都一视同仁。在每件事上,她都不徇私情。—— 托马斯
13、公正的法律限制不了好的自由,因为好人不会去做法律不允许的事 情。——弗劳德
14、法律是为了保护无辜而制定的。——爱略特 15、像房子一样,法律和法律都是相互依存的。——伯克
40、学而不思则罔,思而不学则殆。——孔子
谢谢!
36、自己的鞋子,自己知道紧在哪里。——西班牙
37、我们唯一不会改正的缺点是软弱。——拉罗什福科
xiexie! 38、我这个人走得很慢,但勿问成功的秘诀为何,且尽全力做你应该做的事吧。——美华纳