英语写信模板
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假设你叫李华,欲与来自本校不同班级的另外4名同学组建一支乐队,但缺乏经验,
请就以下情况或问题给ຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu名音乐人卡曾斯(Cousins)先生发一封电子邮件,以寻
求帮助。 1. 成员中有三名男生和两名女生,均喜欢流行音乐与现代舞蹈;
2. 每周周末排练是否足够?初期演唱的音乐宜多元化还是一种风格?
3. 怎样获得较多的表演机会?
Yours sincerely,
试题分析:这是一封电子邮件。做题前一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的 含义。这篇作文的要点是以提纲列出的,而且很详细,考生要做的是将要点全面 的合理的解释清楚,应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因 果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同 的简单句而造成的单调感。多使用高级词汇和重点句型。
第二段:所要表达的内容并对别人的帮助或建议表示感谢。
可以用 first,second,last或firstly,secondly, finally 或 to begin
with, besides, what's more等所学连接词将内容串起来。最后
一句写感谢的话。
对别人的帮助或建议表示感谢常用句型。 I’d appreciate it if you could / would ...... I'd be grateful if you could / would ......
I, together with two boys and two girls in different classes in our
school, want to form a band. We are all fond of pop music and modern dance. I’d like to know whether we should play one kind of music or different styles to start with. And is it enough to practise only at weekends? How can we get more chances to perform? We’d appreciate it if you would come up with a name for our band. Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes!
4. 希望他能为乐队取个名字。
注意:1. 词数:100左右;2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;3. e-mail的开头和结尾 已经给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Cousins, I‘m Li Hua. Since you are a well-known musician, I’m writing this e-mail to ask you for some advice on how to form a band.
第三段:盼回复并祝福。 常用句式: Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes. Looking forward to hearing from you. Best wishes. I am eager to get your early answer. Best wishes.
【亮点说明】范文使用了各种多变的句式:Since you are a well-known musician, I’m writing this e-mail to ask you for some advice on how to form a band. 这句 话使用since引导的原因状语从句,I, together with two boys and two girls in different classes in our school, want to form a band. 这句话使用了插入语, I’d like to know whether we should play one kind of music or different styles to start with. 这句话使用了宾语从句,And is it enough to practise only at weekends? 这 句话使用it做形式主语。We’d appreciate it if you would come up with a name for our band.这句话使用了it做形式宾语。
英语书信写作
—— Celine
第一段:多以介绍自我为开头,其次点明写作目的。 如 I'm Li Hua./ My name is Li Hua./ I'm Li Hua from ×××. I'm writing (this letter/this E-mail) to ask you for some advice about ...... (意见) I'm writing (this letter/this E-mail) to tell you that ...... I'm writing (this letter/this E-mail) to inform you that ...... ( 现象) I'm writing (this letter/this E-mail) to express my sincere thanks to you. (感谢)