英语写作 空巢老人 Life of Emptynesters

英语写作空巢老人 Life of Emptynesters 空巢老人 Life of Empty-nesters
With the deepening of the aging of society, there are a growing number of empty-nesters, which has bee a social problem can not be ignored. When the children leave home due to reasons such as work, study, marriage, leaving their middle-aged parents at home, empty-nesters will produce the symptoms of mental disorders, known as the family “empty-nest”syndrome.
随着社会老年化的加深，空巢老人的数量也越来越多，这已经成为了不容无视的社会问题。

当孩子们由于工作，学习，婚姻等原因离开家，留下中年父母在家的时候，空巢老人产生精神障碍病症，也称为家庭“空巢”综合征。

Some empty-nesters can live a good life after retire, especially those in city. Most of them live in the same
city with their children so that they can visit each other often. Besides, they can participate in various group activities. For example, some middle-aged people attend to universities for the elderly for further study, while others join the choir or some other public service activities. By these activities, empty-nesters can eliminate of loneliness and realize their own values.
有的空巢老人退休后可以过上很好的生活，尤其是那些城市里的。

他们大局部都和孩子住在同一个城市，这样就可以经常看望彼此。

此外，他们还可以参加各种各样的集体活动。

比方，有的中年
人参加老年大学进一步进展学习，而其他人那么参加合唱团喝着一些其他公共效劳活动。

通过参加这些活动，空巢老人可以消除孤独，意识到自己的价值。

While in rural area, situations get worse. Most young people work in city, leaving their elderly parents at home to take care of themselves. In rural area, there are much less activities for elderly so that they are busy with the farm work all the day. And some elderly look after their grand-children, which is the main task for elderly in the country.
From the description above, we can know that some elderly people can live a good life although they’re empty-nesters. However, it’s our responsibility to care for our parents and our care is what they really need in life. So, no matter how busy you are, remember to care about them, talk to them frequently.
而在农村地区，情况越来越糟。

大局部年轻人在城市工作，把他们年长的父母留在家让他们自己照顾自己。

在农村地区，老年活动更少，因而他们一整天都忙于农活。

而且有的老人要照看孙子，这成为了农村老人的一项主要任务。

从以上的描述我们可以知道，有的老人可以过得很好，尽管他们是空巢老人。

然而，照顾老人是我们的责任，他们生活上真正需要的是我们的照顾。

因此，不管你有多忙，记得要照顾他们，经常和他们聊天。

向农民朋友致敬 Pay tribute to the farmers.
向农民致敬
提纲：
1. 建议我们应该有农民节。

2. 设立农民节的原因。

[范文]
There are a lot of annual public holidays in China, such as Labor's Day, Children's Day and National Day. But I think we should celebrate another holiday -- Farmer's Day.
在中国有很多年的公共假日，比方劳动节，儿童节和国庆节。

但是我想我们应该庆祝另一个节日--农民节。

Why should there be Farmer's Day?
为什么要有农民节？
First of all, China is a large agfieukural country. The majority of the population is farmers. Farmers play a vital role in China. They provide food, without which we cannot live. Also, farmers support industry with various kinds of raw materials.
首先，一个大的agfieukural国。

人口多数是农民。

农民在中国扮演着重要的角色。

他们提供食物，没有我们就不能活。

同时，农民支持工业的各种原料。

Most farmers work hard from dawn to dusk, with little time to rest or entertain themselves.
大多数农民从黎明到黄昏很辛苦地工作，几乎没有时间休息或娱乐。

Some people look down upon farmers because they think they do not do "mental labor."
有些人看不起农民，因为他们认为他们不做“脑力劳动”。

I suggest there should be a Farmer's Day to show respect for the 800 million farmers in China. This would help people realize the contri butions farmers make to society and would raise their social status.
我建议应该有一个农民节来表示尊重中国的800000000个农民。

这将帮助人们实现与农民为社会做出奉献，提高他们的社会地位
The lack of responsibility 缺乏责任
When the issue of poisonous milk powder gains an overwhelming focus from the public, what are these malefactors doing? As we can see from the depiction, enterprise, milk station, milch cow and even grass are trying to find someone scapegoating for this credit crisis, in my view po int, that’s nothing to do with the credit but the problem of responsibility.
Responsibility is a keyword that we should never disregard, defined not only as the courage to face every foreseeable risk, but as the braveness to entail every malpractice when it really takes place as well. The causes of the shortage of responsibility or even conscience may be as follows. Firstly, inner cause ascribing probably to the destructive influence emanating from the decay of morality may result in the over-materialism .Furthermore, outerly , deficient supervisal gives rise to the fearless adventurer
who is at the risk of anything ,not to say to deviate from his own liability ,to pursue as many as profits. A case in point is the Melamine-laced Milk Incident which almost destroyed the whole of China’s milk industry.
It is imperative that drastic measures should be taken to end this thorny situation, such as enacting related law to reinforce our supervisal mechanism to avoid the behavior of kicking the ball when something bad happen and promoting social entities to regain one of Chinese traditional virtues, which is called “who would enter the hell if I wouldn’t”,that means, undoubtedly, to learn to be responsible for the blunder means sensible unflinchingness.
当有毒奶粉的问题从公众那获得压倒性的重点,这些犯人正在做什么?我们可以从描述中看出,我们可以看出企业、奶站、奶牛甚至草正试图找一个替罪羊信贷危机,在我看来,这是与信用无关但责任的问题。

责任是一个关键字,我们不应该无视,不仅定义为勇气面对每一个可预见的风险,但随着勇敢时需要每个事故真的发生。

缺乏责任甚至是良心的原因可能如下。

首先,内部造成破坏性的影响将可能道德的可能导致原材料的过失。

此外,外部监视缺乏引起的无畏的探险家的风险,不是说偏离自己的责任,追求利润。

一个典型的例子是掺入三聚氰胺牛奶事件几乎摧毁了整个中国牛奶行业。

当务之急是应采取严厉措施完毕这种棘手的情况,如制定相关法律,加强我们的监视机制来防止踢球当坏事发生的行为和促进社会实
体恢复中国传统美德之一,被称为“如果我不会，谁会进入地狱”,
这意味着,毫无疑问,学会负责错误意味着明智的选择。

一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么 the most important
quality of a suessful person
Honesty, intelligence, and a sense of humor are all valuable characteristics that contribute to suess in life. However, they are dwarfed by sensitivity, the most
important characteristic that one can have to sueed in life.
A sensitive person is aware of the way his or her actions affect others. In particular, a sensitive person understands the place of honesty, intelligence, and a sense of humor. Sensitive people know when they have to tell the truth and when they had better tell a white lie. Generally speaking, “Honesty is the best policy.” However, this
does not preclude important exceptions. Can a doctor be so cruel as to tell a hopeful middle-aged patient that he is terminally ill? Can a person be son insensitive as to tell his friend that his new house is very shabby? Can a man be so absent-minded as to tell his girl-friend that her expensive new dress looks horrible on her? In such situations, a sensitive person may tell a white lie instead of giving the cruel truth. Sensitive people also know when
it is good to show their intelligence and when it is better to give others a chance. Many people are very intelligent, but how many of us use our intelligence in a sensitive way?
We are always trying to show off our intelligence and make other people look silly. Such vaunting of our intelligence earns for us not admiration, but disgust. Sometimes we might have to say, “I might be wrong. Please tell me if I am wrong” This acknowledgement, even though humble, will most likely earn for us respect. Finally, sensitive people know when they can use humor and when they had better stay quiet. A sense of humor is a wonderful thing to have, but different people make jokes about different things. Something that is funny to one person may be very offensive to another person. For example, an employee may laugh at the mistakes of his or her boss, but an outsider, however humorous, may be resented for doing so. To sum up,
sensitive people can make others feel fortable by taking into aount the way their actions affect others. They understand that people differ from each other and characteristics such as honesty, intelligence, and a sense of humor need to be put to use sensitively aording to each situation.
老实、智慧和幽默感是有价值的特性，有助于人生的成功。

然而，他们与灵敏度，一个能在生活中取得成功的最重要的特征。

一个敏感的人会意识到他或她的行为对他人的影响。

特别是一个敏感的人，懂得老实、聪明和幽默感的地方。

敏感的人知道什么时候他们必须说出真相，当他们有更好的说一个善意的谎话。

一般而言，“老实是最好的政策”，然而，这并不排除重要的例外。

医生会如
此残忍地告诉一个有希望的中年病人，他是绝症吗？一个人能不能对他的朋友说他的新房子很破旧？一个人可以这么心不在焉地告诉他的女朋友，她昂贵的新衣服看起来很可怕吗？在这种情况下，一个敏感的人可能会说一个善意的谎话，而不是给残酷的真相。

敏感的人也知道什么时候能展示他们的智慧，什么时候最好给别人一个时机。

很多人都很聪明，但我们有多少人用我们的智力在一个敏感的方式？我们总是试图炫耀自己的智慧，让别人看起来很傻。

这样的吹嘘我们的智力为我们不赞赏，但厌恶。

有时我们可能不得不说，“我可能是错误的。

请告诉我，如果我错了，“这成认，即使卑微，将最有可能赢得我们尊重。

最后，敏感的人知道，当他们可以使用幽默，当他们有更好的保持安静。

幽默感是一件很好的事情，但不同的人会对不同的事情开玩笑。

一个人对另一个人的攻击很有趣。

例如，一个员工可能嘲笑他或她的老板的错误，但是一个局外人，但是幽默，可能会憎恨这样做。

总之，敏感的人可以让别人感觉舒适，考虑到他们的行为影响他人的方式。

他们了解到，人们不同于其他的和特点，如老实，智慧和幽默感，需要使用敏感地根据每一种情况。

Strengthening the Sense of Social Responsibility 社会责任感
题预测：社会责任感
题目要求:
1. 什么是社会责任感
2. 如何加强社会责任感
3. 呼吁：让我们肩负起自己的社会责任
精编范文:
Strengthening the Sense of Social Responsibility
Each inpidual is closely related to and bears obligations to others - that is what we call social responsibility. The sense of social responsibility is very important to us. If everyone has a good sense of social responsibility, we can build a better social and a more prosperous country.
How can sense of social responsibilty be strengthened? To start with, children should be taught about good moral outlook, so that when they grow up, they bee law-abiding and responsible citizens. Furthermore, the humanistic education is vital, especially for university students because they are the future pillars of our country. Last but no least, it is necessary to encourage people to care for others, help others through all kinds of propaganda.
If all the citizens have a sound sense of social responsibility, it is hopeful that the world will enjoy a better future. Therefore, let's take our social responsibility and contribute to our society.
加强社会责任感
每一个人都是密切相关的，负有义务的人，就是我们所说的社会责任。

社会责任感对我们很重要。

如果每个人都有一个良好的社会责任感，我们可以建立一个更美好的社会和更繁荣的国家。

社会责任感如何增强？首先，应该教孩子良好的道德观，所以当他们长大后，他们成为遵纪守法的公民。

此外，人文教育是非常
重要的，尤其是大学的学生，因为他们是我们国家未来的栋梁。

最后但并非最不重要，必须鼓励人们关心他人，帮助他人，通过各种宣传。

如果所有的公民都有良好的社会责任感，希望世界能享受一个更好的未来。

因此，让我们的社会责任和对社会的奉献。

考研英语看图作文范例点评：考学生or烤家长
看图作文在英语作文中是大家普遍缺乏练习的一种类型，一个提高的方式就是看范例和点评，针对其中的错误进展自我修正。

In the given picture, there are many parents standing at the gate of (outside)the examination room. As we see, they are so worried that the sweat began (begin)to pour down their face. In china, it is mon knowledge that the exam decides (may determine)the future of children. Hence, it reflects the problem that the (加上current Chinese表意更完整)educational system is unreasonable. In fact, the problem has existed for several years. Especially in china, the examination score decides the children’s development in the future.(语法正确，但句意不合理。

改为the examination score may influence children’s future development.)In a sense, the examination seems to be the only standard that chooses the talents(can be used to select talents). Furthermore, it is so terrible educational system (the educational system is so terrible). I think we must take some effective measures to solve this problem. In my opinion, we should adopt the following measures. On the one
hand, we should reform the educational institution and establish a more flexible approach to choose the talent (select talents). On the other hand, parents should give up the idea that the exam is the only key to judge (measure)children’s ability.
在给定的图片，有很多父母站在门口检查室。

正如我们所看到的，他们很担忧汗水开始倒下来他们的脸。

在中国，这是常识，考试决定孩子的未来。

因此，它所反映的问题，。

事实上，这个问题已经存在好几年了。

特别是在中国，考试成绩决定孩子们的未来的开展。

在某种意义上，考试似乎是选择人才的唯一标准。

此外，它是如此可怕的教育系统。

我认为我们必须采取一些有效的措施来解决这个问题。

在我看来，我们应该采取以下措施。

一方面，我们应该改革教育制度、建立选择人才更灵活的方法。

另一方面，父母应该放弃这种想法，考试是唯一判断的关键儿童的能力。

本文立意正确，内容切题，构造完整，需注意以下问题：1、文章的立意虽然正确，且深入切题，但文章的内容不够丰富充实，原因分析不够深刻。

第二段在分析造成现象的时候提出了三点“考试决定孩子的未来”“考试是选拔人才的唯一标准”“教育制度很差”——“考试为什么会决定孩子的未来，它怎样决定了孩子的未来?”“为什么是选拔人才的唯一标准?(在现有的实情方面，因为其他方法难以实施和操作)”“教育制度很差，表达在什么方面?”2、文章内容的衔接逻辑不是很清楚，如第二段先说“考试决定未来”后说“考试是选拔人才的唯一标准”，而实际上“正因为在目前考试是选拔人才的唯一标准，所以考试在某种意义上决定了孩子的未来”。

3、文章依然存有少许汉式思维的句子，有的词组搭配不合
理，应在此方面加强。

多模仿一些经典佳句。

因此，建议作者以后在写作之中不要提笔就写，先列出一个大纲，把自己的思路理顺，使自己的文章逻辑清晰，通顺流畅。

英语写作水平的提升需要不断地练习，在改正错误中不断取得进步，不怕犯错误，怕明知道犯错误却不面对。

看了范文和点评，希望大家有思考，有提高。