上海高考英语写作技巧和方法

2.尽管被告知许多遍，他仍然重复这个错。 _H_a_v_i_n_g_b_e_e_n__to_l_d______________ many times, he still repeated mistake. 3.除非被邀请发言，你应该在会议上保持沉默。 Unless__i_n_v_it_e_d_______ to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.
Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences
1.他从不说关于他家庭的事。 Never did he speak about his own family. 2.只有我们每个人都意识到水的重要性，我们才能生活得更好。 Only when each of us realizes the importance of water, can we live a better life. 3.只有用这种方式，我们才能有足够的经历好好学习。
He had a high fever and went to see the doctor.
存在问题
（3）I am quite satisfied with the travel agency , the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists, he could concern old man in our group.
总结：如何处理或整理信息
一、按信息内容或逻辑关系分为五大信息块 （ w h o , w h a t , w h y, w h e n , w h e re ） ； 二、一个完整的信息用一个句子来表达； 三、信息之间若存在逻辑关系就合并，若无则不能随便合并。 四、总体信息和细节信息不能合并； 五、要正确使用标点符号避免影响信息的正确表达
In order to improve his English, he studies hard.
Complete the sentences with non-predicate
1.听到这个消息，他们变得很激动。 __H__e_a_ri_n_g______________ the news, they got excited.
Translate the sentences by using non-predicate
1.面对困难是他从不放弃。
Faced with /Facing difficulties, he never gives up. 2.引入市场后，该产品大获成功。 Introduced to the market, the product made a great success. 3.做完作业后，他回家了。
3.He is clever but he doesn't work hard. Clever_a_s_/t_h_o_u_g_h_____________ he is, he doesn't work hard.
4.The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. _O__n_t_h_e_o_t_h_e_r_s_i_d_e_o_f_t_h_e__st_r_e_e_t_s_ta_n_d__s_th__e_c_lo_c_k__t_o_w_e_r_. ________
Only in this way can we have enough energe to study better.
Translate the sentences by using Inverted Sentences
4.他是个孩子却知道很多。 Child as/though he is , he knows a lot. 5.墙上有个通知，上面写着“请节约用水”。 On the wall is a notice saying “Please Save Water”.
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如何处理和整理信息？
存在问题
（1）I am quite satisfied with the travel agency and the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists, especially to the older people...
错误诊断：总体信息和细节信息不能合并。
（1）改正：I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. First of all, the local tour guide John was very enthusiastic and considerate to all tourists, especially to the older people...
I am quite satisfied with the travel agency.
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连词成文能力
存在问题
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could buy good bargains but were not.
错误诊断：内容缺乏连贯
如何在写作中避免句式单一
1.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档 2.巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力 3.尝试多样化 表达方式
方法一
使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档
Rewrite the sentences
1.They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere . Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. 2.I will be given another chance. I will succeed. Given another chance，I will succeed. 3.He wants to improve his English. He studies hard.
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组词造句能力
02组词造句能力
1.旅行社 travel agency
2.食物不合口味 the food didn't agree with us
3.他讲解清晰生动。 He explained everything about the places in a clear
and lively way. His explanation about those places of interest was
存在问题
（2）How ever, the food provided in the restaura nt didn't agree w ith many of us. Quite a few of us had to buy extra food.
错误诊断：因果关系的信息合并。
（1）改正： How ever, the food provided in the restaura nt didn't agree w ith many of us and quite a few of us had to buy extra food.
Having finished his homework, he returned home.
方法二
巧用倒装结构增强句子的表现力
Complete the sentences
1.He didn't realize his foolishness until he returned home. N_o_t_u__n_ti_l______ he returned home did he realize his foolishness 2.We can save the earth by changing the way we live. _O__n_ly______ by changing the way we live can we save the earth.
Describe the characters by using Inverted Sentence
Poor though/as the couple were, they lived a happy life.
方法三
尝试多样化表达方式
Use different ways to describe the picture
very clear and vivid.
02组词造句能力
4.货真价实的购物场所 the shops where we could by good bargains the shops where we could by nice things with
reasonable prices 5. 我表示对旅行社提供的服务总体感到满意。
高中英语写作 技巧与方法
2021.03
写作基本要求
一、内容清楚、连贯 二、结构完整 三、逻辑性强 四、主题突出 五、用词及文体
基础写作考我们什么能力
1.信息处理或整理的能力
（信息之间能否合并为逻辑关系或处理先后确性和合适性）
3.连句成文能力
（信息能容的完整性和连贯性）
一……就爱上……（一见钟情）
As soon as Xiaojian met Princess Qing at Shufangzhai , he fell in love with her.
Upon/On meeting Princess Qing at Shufangzhai, Xiaojian fell in love with her. Xiaojian and Princess Qing fell in love the moment they met at Shufangzhai. No sooner had Xiaojian and Princess Qing met at Shufangzhai than they fell in love . Hardly had Xiaojian and Princess Qing met at Shufangzhai when they fell in love.
错误诊断:“一逗到底 ”的中式英语表达导致信息表达 出现问题，不能用多个简单句表达多个不同类型的信息。
（3）改正：I am quite satisfied with the travel agency. The local tour
guide John was very enthusiastic and he could concern old man in our group.