高中英语应用文之建议信

建议信
总体阐述：
1.历年考情分析
建议信是生活中常用的一种应用文文体。

建议信主要是向收信人就某一问题提出看法、建议或忠告。

建议信可以写给个人，就对方遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点；也可以写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等提出意见或建议。

写建议信时，时态以一般现在时为主，人称多用第二人称。

另外，提出的建议要合理，有说服力，语气要礼貌委婉。

案例分析：
假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚的朋友Jim所居住的地区最近出现了新冠病毒患者，他感到很害怕，向你征求建议。

请你给他提出建议，要点如下：
1.你的建议和理由；
2.表达祝愿。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。

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范文：
Dear Jim,
As for your letter asking about how to avoid being infected at this particular time, I'd like to offer you some practical suggestions.
First of all, my suggestion is that you stay at home and avoid going out unless necessary, which is beneficial to yourself and others. Furthermore, do wear a protective mask outdoors and wash hands frequently and properly. What's more, strengthen your immune system and exercise regularly, thus enabling you to stay away from any infections.
I hope my advice will be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
仿写：
假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Jack 来信说他的课余生活十分单调，他每天花大量的课余时间在电子设备上，请你给他回信，就如何安排课余时间提出建议。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。

Dear Jack,
As for how to use your free time more effectively, ①____________________________________________(我想给你一些实用的建议).
②__________________________, reduce your screen time and stop using any before school and at mealtimes. ③__________________________, increase real- time communication with your friends and family and be“ present” and connected.
④__________________________, it makes sense to lead an active life, so ⑤(充分利用业余时间积极参加一些课外活动).
⑥___________________________________________________________________ (我希望我的建议能对你有所帮助).
Yours,
Li Hua
建议信素材：
一、夺人眼球开头句
1. You have asked me for advice with regard to/ regarding how to learn Chinese well, and I' ll try to offer some practical suggestions here.
你向我征求关于如何学好汉语的建议，我会尽量提出一些实用的建议。

2. Learning yo u can not make up your mind about what kind of book to choose, I’d like to offer my suggestions to you.
知道你无法决定选择哪一本书，我想向你提出我的建议。

3.I'm delighted to receive your letter, in which you asked me for advice on how to focus on online courses.
我很高兴收到你的来信，你在信中向我征求如何专心上网课的建议。

4. As for how to improve calligraphy, I'd like to offer you some advice.
关于如何提高书法，我想给你一些建议。

5. I'm willing to give you a hand and offer some practical suggestions at your request. 我愿意帮助你并按你的要求提一些实用的建议。

二、亮点出彩篇中句
1. Personally/ As far as I'm concerned, it would be a wise choice if you stay at home and avoid going outdoors unless necessary.
在我看来，除非必要，待在家里避免出门是明智的。

4.Why not join a volunteer club? If you do this, you can not only help others but make friends.为什么不参加志愿者俱乐部? 如果你这样做的话，你不仅能帮助他人也会交到朋友。

3. In addition, I strongly suggest/ advise you arrive on time or a little earlier.
此外，我强烈建议你准时或早一点到。

4. There's no need for you to be so worried and nervous, and it's necessary for you to consult some books concerning the traditional Chinese culture.
你没有必要如此担心和紧张，你有必要查阅一些关于中国传统文化的书籍。

5. Another suggestion is that you should wear protective mask to prevent yourself from getting infected if you go outdoors.
另一个建议是，戴上防护口罩，以防外出时被感染。

6. If I were you/ Were I you, I would work out regularly in order to keep healthy.
如果我是你，我会经常锻炼以保持健康。

7. You’d better exercise regularly, which is the most important way to help you stay away from any infections.你最好经常锻炼，这是帮你远离感染的最重要的方法。

三、韵味无穷结尾句
1. Hope my suggestions will be of some help/ benefit to you.
希望我的建议对你有所帮助/有益。

2. Personally, it would be beneficial if you follow my advice and have faith in yourself.我认为，如果你采纳我的建议并相信自己的话会有益处的。

满分模板：
Dear Tom,
Learning your grades have been slipping down because of your pride and laziness, I feel sorry. As for how to get higher grades, I'd like to give you some advice.
First of all, you’d better keep working hard rather than be proud. Never forget why you started, and your mission can be accomplished. Besides, it's a good idea to review the content that you have missed studying ecently. What's more, I suggest you make a proper study plan which you can keep
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【2023年高考英语全国卷1】假定你是李华，你校外教Ryan要举办口语培训班，将练习口语的所有学生，随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，向外教写一封邮件，内容如下:注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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【北京卷】你的英国朋友Jim 所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。

Jim 来信希望你能给些建议。

请你给他回信，内容包括:1.你建议的线路;
2.你的理由;
3.你的祝愿。

注意:1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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答案：
仿写：
①I'd like to offer you some practical suggestions
②First of all
③Furthermore
④What's more
⑤make the most of your free time to get actively involved in some after-school activities
⑥I hope my advice will be of some help to you
实战演练1
Dear Ryan,
I hope this email finds you well. I heard about the upcoming oral training class and I am excited to participate. However, I have a concern regarding the grouping method you mentioned.As you mentioned, you plan to randomly select two students to form a group. While I understand the intention is to encourage students to speak with different people, it might not be the most effective way of practice. Some students might feel uncomfortable speaking with strangers, and the conversation might not flow smoothly.Therefore,I would like to suggest grouping students who share similar interests or language goals. This way, students can have more meaningful conversations and learn from each other's strengths.
Thank you for considering my suggestion. I am looking forward to the training class.
Best regards,
Li Hua
Dear Ryan,
I am Li Hua, a student in your English class. I am writing to you about the grouping problem for oral practice.
I appreciate your intention to help us improve our speaking skills by randomly assigning us into groups of two. However, I think this method has some drawbacks.
For example, some students may not be compatible with their partners, some may not participate actively, and some may not have enough time to meet with their partners.Therefore, I suggest that you allow us to choose our own partners based on our preferences and availability. This way, we can work with someone we are comfortable with, motivate each other, and arrange our own schedules. I believe this will make the oral practice more effective and enjoyable. Thank you for your understanding and consideration.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
Li Hua 实战演练2
Dear Jim,
I'm happy to receive your letter and know you're coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended.Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother riversof Chinese civilization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots.That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope you'll have a good time in China.
Sincerely,
Li Hua。