高中英语高三一轮复习：读后续写范例讲解精品PPT

The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home. Paragraph 1: When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.
changed the subject to talk about my car. 指Af代ter the seemi动ng作ly
He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it.
Then he got a saw（锯子）from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
final given place possibly beside the truck
I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep but no one came to help.
A Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and came to help me.
I’d been waiting for a long time so I was hungry and tired. (3) I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could.
The possible lessons or conclusions
From this experience, we learned that...
• Who helps others can get the help of others. • The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine. • There is one thing alone that stands the brunt of life throughout
find more food in the bag find a $20 bill reexamine my cynical view before I
surprised thankful
Initiate the framework according to the final given plot and the two initial given sentences with the 4 connected sentences.
We finished repairing my Jeep and I tried to give $20 to the family.
upset and disappointed
delighted and hopeful
haative emotions with the development of the storyline
father
enthusiastic; helpful
mother and daughter
enthusiastic; considerate
appearances dirty and
sweaty
dirty and sweaty
no description
relationship help-receiver helper
(1) Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help.
I believed that people were indifferent and felt cynical. (2) One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep.
refuse the girl’s kindness
have lunch with the family
I
say goodbye to the family
awkward moved
Paragraph 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
01 The Given Text
During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK（千斤顶）, and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.
Paragraph 1: When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch. 1. What would I do next?
I refused the girl’s lunch. I accepted the girl’s kindness with pleasure.
its course: a kind heart. •…
04 Sample
Read one possible version and make sure you
know how the plot develops.
拟人
Paragraph 1: When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had
lunch. My gut feeling was to re动fu作se. But my stomach was growling since I 动h作adn’t eaten for more than four hours. Seeing my embarrassment, the girl just pressed some bread into my hands and
2. What happened before they left? The girl gave me a paper bag. We had an enjoyable meal.
Paragraph 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
Paragraph 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
02 Comprehension
Key Elements From the Given Text (1)
major characters I personalities cynical
The man didn’t want to accept the reward.
03 Conception
二条四点
1
23
4
Para 1
Para 2
Paragraph 1: When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
3. What might happen after I opened the paper bag? I found a note in the bag. I found a $20 bill in the bag.
4. What might be the ending of this story? I felt grateful to the family for their kindness. I decided to help others in the future. I would remember the family forever. I would pay more attention to foreigners.
Initiate the framework according to the final given plot and the two initial given sentences with the 4 connected sentences.
Paragraph 2: After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
helper
Key Elements From the Given Text (2)
time
During this past year... One of those times...
place
on the side of the road
final given time no description