高中英语高考读后续写讲解,写作步骤

读后续写的步骤：
1. 通读文本，懂大意（总结每段意思，注意动词）、主旨（文章的开头，或自己总结）。

前情回顾：父亲带儿子去“西部荒野”，喂鸡牧羊，体验农场生活；见父亲和叔叔骑马很是潇洒，儿子心生向往，于是亲身上马体验。

2. 研读给出两段：理清思路，与前文联系，构思结尾大概走向。

（思维导图）
根据故事六要素找关键词。

（总结主要人物，情节，动作，心理，环境等词汇）
dad，Uncle Paul，farm house，river，feed，sheep，late，track，get lost，sight 4. 提问问题。

结合文本、给出的两句设置问题链（who, what, when, where, why, how），并给出自己的答案。

5. 构思情节，写作文框架：
①二段的关系：二首定一段→ 前文末尾定一段。

（衔接，连贯，有逻辑！）;
②写什么：主要人物（动作，心理/情绪），环境描写，事情的结果(设想多种可能，选最合理最好写的一个)，考虑主旨。

平时注意：熟读范文，背诵好词佳句（句型，心理描写的词汇），储备语料库。

考前复习好词佳句，灵活使用。

范文一：抄写，背诵。

Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse. However, it became scared and started to run like crazy. All this coming without warning, I was seized by fear. “Don't let go of the rope! Keep calm!” yelled Dad. I followed what he told me to. To my relief, it stopped slowly. But before we jumped off the horses, we found that we had been off the beaten track and got lost.
突然，一只小兔子跳出来挡在我的马前面。

因为害怕会伤害到这个可爱的小动物，我不由自主地叫了一声，让我的马停下来。

然而，它变得很害怕，开始疯狂地奔跑。

这一切毫无预兆地到来，使我感到恐惧。

“别松开绳子!”保持冷静!”爸爸嚷道。

我按他说的做了。

令我宽慰的是，它慢慢地停了下来。

但是在我们跳马之前，我们发现我们偏离了常轨，迷路了。

We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back. I kept shouting for help, hoping my shouts could be heard by someone, but there was no reply. Dad sounded a little worried as he reminded me to calm down. It was then that my mind raced. “Listen, dad, the rushing river water,” I shouted excitedly, “we can return to the farm house down the r iver.”Before long, we caught sight of the lights in the distance. We knew we were safe. What a thrilling vacation, like never before, we had!
我们不知道自己身在何处，天也越来越黑了。

又累又饿，我怀疑我们是否能找到回去的路。

我不停地喊救命，希望有人能听到我的呼喊，但没有人回答。

爸爸提醒我冷静下来，听起来有点担心。

就在那时，我的思绪开始狂奔。

“听着，爸爸，河水哗哗地流，”我兴奋地喊着，“我们可以顺河回到农家去。

”不久，我们看到了远处的灯光。

我们知道我们是安全的。

多么令人兴奋的假期啊，从来没有过!
范文二：(参考即可)
Paragraph 1:
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase(追逐) it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. There was nothing left in our sight but the trees. “We may not be able to make it（成功做成）back to the farm house in time for supper.” I thought to myself. After a series of fruitless attempts(徒劳的努力) to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired.
Paragraph 2:
We got stuck(陷入...) in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Do n’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to
say, we ate a late dinner. (续写词数162)
话题激活词汇：
情感：panic，relief，nervous，worried
动作：run，cry，think to oneself
环境：scenery，mountain，valley，river，lake，forest，sun，set，wind，blow。