最新初中英语书面表达解题技巧和训练方法及练习题(含答案)

最新初中英语书面表达解题技巧和训练方法及练习题(含答案)
一、英语书面表达
1．假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。

要点提示如下:（1）几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞（do square dancing）。

（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。

（3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。

（4）有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。

（5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但……
要求：（1）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】Boys and girls,
I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like t o talk about my grandma.
A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.
In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings o f others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文，根据要点提示写一篇学校英语兴趣小组的活动中的发言稿。

要注意随着文章推进时态的变化，一开始应该选择一般过去时，而后面应该选用一般现在时，最后表达自己观点的时候也应该使用一般现在时。

人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致关系，构思文章框架，列举出可能会用到的好词好句，记住千万不能漏写信息要点。

参考词汇就是必用词汇，一定要运用到文章当中。

在写作中注意运用恰当的连词，使文章更加顺畅，自然。

2．书面表达
社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。

对善行、对爱心的感动，存在于每个人的心中。

但很多人缺乏的不是感动，而是一种显示感动的勇气。

请为你身边的人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正能量的一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞的事情。

你从他/她身上可以学
到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据以下提示要点，写一篇文章。

注意：1．词数：80左右；2．不要出现真实的人名及校名。

Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” button
Tell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” button
What could you learn from him/her?
【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can live a safe life.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，讲述一件我点赞的事情，我从他/她身上可以学到什么。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I should……，He is……，He always helps……，I want to……，so they can……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我要点赞的人，接下来介绍他的情况，最后指出我从他身上学到的东西。

此处give sb sth, work hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a …life 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

3．假如你是李华, 你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件, 想了解你的梦想职业。

请认真阅读下面的邮件, 根据信中的内容和你的实际情况给他写封回信。

要求:1. 参考提示语, 可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数: 不少于70词（开头已给出, 但不计入总词数）。

Dear Bill,
Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. ____________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school's environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?
Tell me about your ideal job!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本题通过描写梦想中的职业，让学生对未来有憧憬，给一部分提示词，让学生有话可说。

【详解】
首先回答职业是教师。

然后解释为什么喜欢该工作，因为可以把自己的知识分享给孩子们，并且喜欢学校的环境。

为了实现自己的梦想，正在为此作出努力。

最后向Bill提出问题，结束全文。

【点睛】
本文首先开篇功能句Thank you for your letter.然后开始主要内容，运用多种连接词，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章连贯性强，长短句结合，读起来朗朗上口，不失为一篇佳作。

4．“inspire” 一词的汉语解释是“激励；鼓舞；赋予灵感；或启发思考”等。

请以“The person who inspired me”为题写一篇不少于 80 词的短文，向校报的英语园地投稿。

要点： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？
2. How did he/ she inspire you？
要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

2. 语言流畅，字迹清楚。

【答案】The person who inspired me
Many people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired
me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.
Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in last year's ping-pang competition.
You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以The person who inspired me为题，介绍一个曾经激励过你的人。

题目中用问题的形式给予了提示，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分的内容：首先介绍这个激励过你的人是谁，他是怎样的一个人；然后介绍他是如何激励你的。

学生们可以这两个问题为提纲，发挥想象力，充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。

短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式的变化。

写作时应注意：首先要符合题目要求，包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，注意上下文的衔接。

其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译。

应该从句子的整体结构入手，写完整的句子。

可以简单句结构为主，辅以并列句、复合句。

为提升文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂结构。

同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了一个曾经激励过自己的人。

短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介绍了这个人是谁，第二段描写了这个人身上的品质以及对自己的应选；最后一段结尾。

各部分内容安排合理，主次分明。

其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述，主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，注意了第三人称单数形式以及过去式形式的变化，语法规范。

用词准确，语言得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。

短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.等等。

5．书面表达
某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。

请根据下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻译。

要求：1. 短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Changes my hometown
My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, _______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________
【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.
In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.I hope my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以The Changes in My Hometown为题，介绍一下自己的家乡这些年来发生的变化。

题目中用表格的形式，给我们对比的家乡的过去和现在，我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，并对将来提出两点希望。

审题可知，作文的基本框架和大概内容都有了，需要注意的是在描写过去的时候，需要适当发挥一到两点；还有对将来的希望也需要学生自己发挥。

这两个地方需要学生们展开想象，合理发挥，注意要与文章的其他部分能够很好的结合起来，内容也要统一，符合题目要求，合情合理。

表达时，需要注意英语
表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译表格中的语句，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型来表达。

注意句式的多变，长短句结合、简单句、并列句或复合句穿插使用，提升文章的档次。

语句之间注意使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者按照题目要求，介绍了自己的家乡这些年来的变化。

文章是按照时间的顺序，先介绍了家乡过去的面貌，这一部分使用了过去时态，谓语动词都变成了过去式，形式准确。

然后是家乡现在的样子，这里主要以一般现在时态为主。

最后对家乡的未来表达了自己的愿望。

整篇文章内容充实、完整，叙述清晰、条理，结构合理。

文章中语言得体，语句通顺，句式表达符合英语的习惯，语法规范、准确。

短文里还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.等等。

6．假设你是Beth,前段时间曾向英语校刊投送一篇题为My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短诗。

近日，又至毕业季，师生们忙着互致临别赠言。

为此，编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。

短诗如下：
My English Teacher Miss Zhang
There is a teacher, Miss Zhang,
Who is friendly, patient and helpful.
Always encouraging us to try,
She leads us to a world of "why".
We all respect and admire her.
注意事项：
1.稿件内容须根据短诗展开合理想象，不得抄写短诗原文：
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境。

3.词数在70个左右，稿件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数：
4.稿件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________
【答案】Dear Editorial Office,
I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.
She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．
I hope that you agree with me．
Yours sincerely，
Beth,【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。

根据编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。

文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。

本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。

在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

7．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。

最近他对母亲节你在博客里发的《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）很感兴趣，给你写信想了解该诗，请你根据以下提示给他回信：
1.作者：孟郊
2.时间：唐朝
3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服
4.主题：母爱的伟大
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数: 80-100词左右，信件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________
Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are inter ested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.
Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a common matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts.
If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇材料作文。

【详解】
根据内容可知，这是一篇书信类文章。

时态是一般现在时。

人称是第一人称和第三人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：交代写信目的——朋友Jack热爱中国的唐诗宋词。

我将给你介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

第二部分：文章主体部分——具体介绍《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）这首诗。

1.作者：孟郊
2.时间：唐朝
3.内容：母亲为儿子做衣服
4.主题：母爱的伟大
第三部分：信的结语——如果对方有任何问题，可以继续问自己，并期待收到对方的来信。

8．书面表达
我校决定让学生轮流打扫厕所，以此作为教育学生的一种方式。

这件事在学生中引起了强烈的反响，请你把下列不同意见整理成一篇书面材料，报告给学校。

同意：1．多数学生是独生子女，不会做事。

2．学生应该学会做艰苦的工作。

3．学会理解和尊重清洁工人的劳动。

不同意：1．很脏，容易使学生生病。

2．不是学生应该做的事情。

3．打扫教室就足够了。

注意：1．短文应包括表中所有内容，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译； 2．不少于80词。

生词提示：respect尊重
【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.
Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.
But others have different points. They think it is easy for them to get sick. They don’t think it is students＇jobs. Cleaning the classroom every day is enough.
【解析】
【详解】
阅读题干要求，这是一篇看法类的作文，那么首先得点明讨论的话题，然后分别写出不同人群对此事的看法，时态以一般现在时为主。

重点词汇及短语：argument争论；take place发生；among（三者或三者以上）之间；a good chance for sb对某人来说是个好机会；help sb do sth帮助某人做某事；get sick生病。

亮点句型：
（1）A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor. 自从我们学校让学生做自愿劳动以来，在学生中发生了一场激烈的争论。

现在完成时（have/has+done）。

（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做义务劳动是他们学习如何做困难工作的好机会。

动词不定式作主语，谓语动词用单数，疑问词+to do。

9．书面表达
“Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.”
----Forrest Gump 中文译名：《阿甘正传》
“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”
----The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：《肖申克的救赎》
“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追梦人）.”
----President Xi Jingping
以上材料告诉我们：生活是丰富多彩的，有快乐幸福也有伤心失落。

但既然选择了远方，便只顾风雨兼程。

所以在学习和生活中，我们要满怀希望、努力奔跑、追逐梦想。

请以Dream Chaser为题，谈谈你自己的观点。

要点提示：
1.有自己的目标，并努力让它成为现实；
2.勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；
3.正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动；
4.补充自己的观点。

写作要求：
1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；
2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。

Dream Chaser
As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset.__________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream come true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。

主要说明要有自己的目标，努力实现目标应做到勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动。

2.例文点评：例文用第一人称来叙述主要内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，主要讲述如何实现自己的目标（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。

承接文章开头，句意完整，避免汉语式英语，叙述条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：
高分短语：feel satisfied；feel upset；come true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。

高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。

10．近期某英文报纸就“Snowplow Parents（扫雪机式父母）”这一话题展开讨论。

“扫雪机式父母”的特征是不惜一切代价为孩子扫除他们生活中遇到的一切障碍，解决一切困难，以便他们可以轻松拥有成功的人生。

请从下表的两种观点中选择一种观点，并结合此观点阐述自己的看法，用英文写一篇短文投稿。

要求：
1、词数：60-80词。

2、短文应包括所选观点中的要点，可适当发挥。

3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

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____________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
I really can't understand the snowplow parents.For these parents,they control everything.They clean all the obstacles in children's lives.In this case,they think children have a successful life easily.However,Children have no freedom to do anything.It is the worst thing in their life.
In my opinion,parents shouldn't do all the things for children.Because they also need the experiences in their lives.And these experiences play an important role in a successful life.In this way,they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble.Meanwhile,they sometimes can gain friendship and more love in their lives.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求就“Snowplow Parents（扫雪机式父母）” 这一话题展开讨论，并根据表格中所给出的提示内容选择一种观点，结合此观点阐述自己的看法。

在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，然后再动笔写作。

2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称，辅以第一人称。

文章首先说明不理解扫雪机式父母的原因，接下来说明自己的观点，并阐述自己观点的原因。

3.高分亮点：
短语：in one's lives，in this case，in this way，in trouble。

句型：
高分句型一：In this case，they think children have a successful life easily．In this case在这样的情况下；这句话意为：在这样的情况下，他们认为孩子会更加轻松拥有成功的人生。

高分句型二：they know that they need to try their best to solve the problems by themselves when they are in trouble. be in trouble 陷入麻烦，这句话意为：当他们陷入麻烦时他们知道他们需要他们自己尽力去解决问题。