03 读后续写高分技能一(读透原文)-备战2023年新高考英语读后续写高分必备攻略(全国通用)

英语讲师：
（一）读后续写读什么
思
维导学 写作思路与步骤Predicting （预测发展）
Writing （续写故事）
Polishing （润色定稿）
Reading （读取信息）
重难新解 读后续写读什么
Writing
（写故事）Polishing （润色定稿）Basic information
(基本信息):
who; when; where; what; why; how Details
(细节描写):
Transitional words
(过渡词):
Sentence structures (句子语法结构): 模仿语言，创造内容:把从原文中获取的词汇、语法信息应用于续写中.动作，情感（感受），对话， 表情，独白，外貌，环境…with 复合结构, 非谓语动词“V-ing/-ed/to do”
做状语，never, so 等引导的倒装句,三大从句，It 形式主语句，虚拟语气…
then, but, therefore, however, unfortunately, obviously, in fact, to his joy, next day, …模仿原文语言风格，充分利用原文提示，回扣原文。

考题速斩
第二节(满分25 分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构
成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

考题速斩
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
______________________________________________________________________________________________ The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________
On Mother’s day, Jenna and
Jeff planned to make breakfast
for their mother as a surprise.
But during the process several
accidents happened and the kitchen became a mess.
1 Reading for basic information(读取基本信息)
Paragraph1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
Paragraph2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
1 Reading for basic information(读取基本信息) 预测：他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐
预测：母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。

考题速斩
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
______________________________________________________________________________________________ The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________
2 Reading for details (读取细节)
see the mess clean up the porridge fry the bread 细节描写： 动作，情感（感受），对话， 表情，独白，外貌，环境…
actions :
feelings: dialogues ：excitedly
happy mother’s day
3 Reading for transitional words (过渡词) 评分档次描 述
第七档（22-25分） 优秀①创造了新颖、丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，
续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高。

②使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解。

③自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段，句子结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。

考题速斩
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
______________________________________________________________________________________________ The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________
考
题速斩 4 Reading for sentence structures (句子结构)
评分档次描 述
第七档（22-25分） 优秀①创造了新颖、丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，
续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高。

②使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解。

③自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段，句
子结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。

考题速斩
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
______________________________________________________________________________________________ The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
______________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________
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题速斩 Sample writing （范文）The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. “Happy Mother’s Day!” They said together loudly. The mother just couldn’t believe her eyes when the breakfast was served along with a card. Deeply moved, she held them tightly and kissed them again and again. “Mum, have a taste of it” , the twins asked. The mother bit into the toast and said “ It is definitely the most delicious breakfast I have ever had. I am so proud to be your mother”.
Paragraph1-2:
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
Seeing the mess in the kitchen, the father was so astonished. But he smiled and comforted them after the twins told him what they planned, “Don’t worry, I’ll help you.” What a relief to hear that! They took action immediately. The twins cleaned up the spilled porridge on the stove while their father was frying the bread. Soon the breakfast was ready. The twins hugged their father excitedly for his timely help.。