河北省高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+书面表达(12)

河北省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：
短文改错+书面表达（12）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。

并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday，and it has been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school． Early on the morning，we set out．Li Ming was carrying a compass and a tent in his backpack，but in my there was a flashlight，a map，a knife，a first-aid kit，some match，candles，food，and clothing． On the way to the campsite，we climbed a hill，and then we swim across a river，pushed the backpacks on a large piece of wood we had found by the river．
As we got into a forest，we missed our way．Lucky，we found the right direction with the compass．By the time we reached to the campsite，it was already dark．Li Ming then put up the tent，and I made a fire and started cooking．Then two of us spent the night in the forest. We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems．
It was quite an experience for me, which I'll never forget for the rest of my life.
书面表达
假如你叫李华，是某市—所中学的学生，要给市长写一封信，反映学校门前交通拥挤现象，信须包括以下要点。

要求：
1．信要包括以上要点，但不要逐句翻译。

2．可适当发挥，词数100左右。

3．信的格式和开头已给出。

参考词汇：小学 primary school；穿行thread one’s way；天桥 overpass Dear Mayor,
I am a student of No. 7 Middle School, …
短文改错：
Li Ming and I took part in a wilderness survival program yesterday，and it has
been one of the most unforgettable experiences since high school． Early on the in
morning，we set out．Li Ming was carrying a compass and a tent in his backpack，
but in my there was a flashlight，a map，a knife，a first-aid kit，some match，candles，
and mine matches
food，and clothing． On the way to the campsite，we climbed a hill，and then we
swim across a river，pushed the backpacks on a large piece of wood we had found by swam pushing
the river．
As we got into a forest，we missed our way．Lucky，we found the right lost Luckily
direction with the compass．By the time we reached t＼o the campsite，it was already to 去掉
dark．Li Ming then put up the tent，and I made a fire and started cooking．Then ︿two
the
of us spent the night in the forest. We learned to use knowledge gained in classroom training to solve problems．
It was quite an experience for me, which I'll never forget for the rest of my life.
作文：One possible version:
Dear Mayor,
I am a student of No. 7 Middle School. Here I have something to tell you.
Beside my school is a primary school. The gates of the two schools both face the main road. In rush hours, there are many cars, buses and bikes. The students have to cross the road to school. Crowds of people often thread their way through the moving cars and buses. What’s worse, some pupils are too young to go to school by themselves, so many parents have to go along with them to make sure that their children are safe, which makes the street more crowded.
I think the government should do something about this. Maybe an overpass can be built over the road. At the same time, we’d better teach students more about road safety. Otherwise accidents are sure to happen. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,。