2023年杭州一模应用文分析讲义-高考英语作文复习专项

杭州一模应用文分析
46. 假定你是李华。

为迎接爱尔兰姐妹学校来访，你校英语俱乐部将举行学生活动图片展，现正向全校学生征集照片。

你打算参与，请你写一封邮件，说明相关信息，内容包括：
1. 描述照片内容；
2. 选择该照片的理由；
3. 表达入选期望。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear English Club,
I’m Li Hua from Class I, Senior 3.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________ Attached is the photo. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua 审题：
1.体裁：推荐信推荐活动照片
2.时态：一般现在时为主
3.段落分布：
第一段：背景+目的
第二段：描述照片内容+选择该照片的理由（就是推荐该照片的理由）
第三段：表达入选期望
具体内容：
第一段：背景+目的
为迎接爱尔兰姐妹学校来访，你校英语俱乐部将举行学生活动图片展，现正向全校学生征集照片
本段落所需短语及词汇：
1.为了：in order to do; indented to do; aiming to do ...
2.来访：visit/ pay a visit to the school 访问学校conduct a school visit 进行学校访问
make a school tour 进行学校参观
3.举行图片展：hold a photo exhibition; organize a photography show
4.征集照片：collect photos；gather pictures
5.姐妹学校：sister school
6.提交照片submit a photo (for the exihibiton)
本段落所需句型：
得知.....我写信推荐
Learning/ Knowing that..., I am writing to remend...
As a photography lover, I'm excited to participate in...
第二段：描述照片内容+选择该照片的理由（就是推荐该照片的理由）
照片内容既可以是展现学校风貌的、也可以是展现中爱文化交流的
展现学校风貌：展现中爱文化交流
象征(v.):represent, symbolize
以...为主题: is themed on / is centred on
以...为主要内容/特色: A features B= A is characterized by B
高级句式：
The photo (I selected) was photographed by ... which captures ________.
Featuring ________ , the photo I selected presents _______________.
Themed on _______, the photo was photographed in ______ where______.
It captures a _____ scene/moment in ______, where _________________.
推荐理由：
展示充满活力的校园生活present vibrant campus life
为...之间的文化交流奠定基础lay a foundation for the cultural exchange between the two schools
表现出了我们的决心, 团队精神和纯粹的快乐demonstrate our determination, teamwork, and the sheer joy
象征着我们两所学校之间牢固友谊represent the strong friendship between our two schools
使某人感到宾至如归make sb. feel at home
让某人窥见offer sb.a glimpse into...
让某人了解allow sb. to get acquainted with
写理由时可以使用的高级句式：
1. The reason why I chose this photo is that it not only......but also.......
2. This particular photo is a great choice because it not only......but also ......
第三段：表达入选期望
I’m confident/convinced that it will meet your requirements.
I hope my photo will be selected to be a part of the exhibition. Thank you for your consideration.
I do hope that you would take my remendation into account.
I hope my photo can say “hello” to our Irish friends for me in the exhibition. Thank you for considering my participation.范文1：
Dear English Club,
I'm Li Hua from Class1, Senior3.
I would like to submit for the Exhibition an amazing photograph I took last week. It captures a heartwarming (暖心的) scene in a nursing home（养老院）, where some of my classmates are seen dishing out（分发）hot meals and others are engaged in lively conversations with the seniors. All their faces are bright with smiles and glowing with happiness （洋溢着幸福）, creating a warm and loving ambiance（= atmosphere）. This photo can be shown to our international friends as an example of the integration（融合）of our school and munity. Also, it perfectly exemplifies（exemplify举例说明; 是…的典范）the beliefs our school values:passion（同情）, empathy, and unity（团结）.
I hope you will consider my contribution and thank you for your efforts in making the exchange program a memorable（值得纪念的；难忘的= unforgettable）one.
Attached is the photo. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua 范文2：
Dear English Club,
I'm Li Hua from Class 1,Senior 3. As a photography lover, I'm excited to participate in the photo exhibition that our English Club organized to wele the visiting Irish sister school.
The photo I have selected for the exhibition captures a heartwarming moment from our school's ChinaIreland Culture Festival last year, in which our students and the Irish friends were busy decorating the “culture tree” with the handwriting wishing cards. This particular photo is a great choice because it not only displays the vibrant aspects of our school life but also symbolizes the strong spiritual（精神的；心灵的）connection between our two schools.
I hope my photo can say “hello” to our Irish friends for me in the exhibition. Thank you for considering my participation.
Attached is the photo. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua。