读后续写个人成长类朋友Hannah的宽容谅解讲义-高三英语二轮复习

原题呈现：
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

The summer I turned 16, my father gave me his ’69 Chevy Malibu convertible(敞篷车). Beautifully repainted cherry red with V8 engine—it was a gift wasted on me at that age. What did I know about classic cars? The important thing was that Hannah and I could drive around Tucson with the top down.
Hannah was my best friend, a year younger but much taller, almost five foot ten. “Hannah’s a beautiful girl,” my mother always said. And sure enough, that summer she signed with a modeling agency. She was already doing runway work.
A month after my birthday, Hannah and I went to the movies. On the way home, we stopped at the McDonald’s drivethrough, putting the fries on the seat between us to share. “Let’s ride around awhile,” I said. It was a clear night, ovenwarm, full moon casting low over the desert. Making a turn too fast, I hit a patch of dirt and the back of the car slid to the other side. I then drove through a neighbor’s landscape wall and knocked into a fullgrown palm. The front wheels came to rest halfway up the tree trunk.
There were French fries on the floor, the dash(仪表盘), and my lap. An impossible amount of blood was on Hannah’s face, flaps of skin hanging into her eyes. They took us in separate ambulances. In the ER, my parents spoke quietly: “Best plastic surgeon in the
We’d been wearing lap belts, but the car didn’t have shoulder bands. I’d broken my
When her mother, Sharon, came into my hospital room, I started to cry, preparing myself for her anger. She sat beside me and took my hand. “I rearended(追尾)my best friend when I was your age,” she said. “I destroyed her car and mine.” “I’m so sorry.” I said,
Para1: “The most important is that you’re both alive. I forgive you and Hannah will too.”
Para2: Sharon’s forgiveness allowed Hannah and me to return to our normal life._________________
一：Main idea of an article
The summer when I was 16 years old, my father gave me his 69 year Chevrolet Malibu convertible（雪佛兰迈锐宝敞篷车）. Although I don't know much about vintage cars, what's important is that my good friend Hanna and I can now drive in the convertible. Unfortunately, during a trip, due to my improper driving, Hannah was seriously injured, which could lead to the end of her modeling career. In the ward, I fell into deep guilt and self blame. At this moment, Hannah's mother came and tried her best to fort me
二Continuation of plot construction
第1段：仔细阅读第一段中的第一句话，“最重要的是你们都还活着。

我给你，汉娜也会的。

”她说。

Based on the author's current emotional state in the last paragraph, describe the actions, language, and other aspects of Hannah and her mother Sharon.This reflects their rational acceptance of the accident results mainly caused by the author's improper driving (Hannah's disfigurement and the possibility of ending her modeling career), as well as their tolerance and understanding towards the author. Therefore, the main plot of this paragraph should be that I met Hanna and, as her mother had expected, she forgave me (while also bining the first sentence provided in the second paragraph). The key is to describe how, with Hanna's mother's help, I met Hanna and what she said or did that made me feel relieved, while also describing my emotional changes.
续写第一段scene 1 : “I” Sharon；scene 2: “I” Hannah
(action response) (action response)
第2段：仔细阅读第二段提供的首句“莎伦的原谅让汉娜和我回到了正常的生活。

”Grasp the keywords' gratitude, Hannah and me, and normal life, and infer that the accident did not have an impact on our normal lives. This paragraph should mainly describe the beautiful scenes of Hanna and my life after discharge, as well as the positive impact of Hanna and her mother's tolerant attitude on my life. For example, describing scenes where we learn and play together, as well as how our friendships have bee increasingly profound over time; I
occasionally recall the situation of the accident, the positive impact of Hanna and her mother's tolerant attitude on my attitude towards life, and so on. Emphasis should be placed on the depiction of images and scenes, as well as the language, actions, and psychology of the characters.
续写第二段：1)What a normal life did they have?
2)What about their friendship?
3)What influence does the experience have on me?
Attention:
(1) Although the accident described in the original text is very serious, it can be inferred from the first sentence provided in the sequel that the accident did not affect us, especially Hanna's normal life. Therefore, the sequel should not elaborate too much on the accident and its injuries, but should focus on the positive and understanding attitude after the accident occurred and the normal and beautiful life after it;
(2) Use the simple past tense as a whole, and continue to write at the end of the second paragraph. If you describe your current life situation, use the simple present tense. Based on the synergistic effect of continued writing after reading, it is necessary to maintain a narrative style that is highly collaborative with the previous text in the continuation of this article, and it is not remended to use more dialogue forms;
(3) The theme of sublimation revolves around the theme of "tolerance and understanding".
三官方范文:
“The most important is that you’re both alive. I forgive you and Hannah will too.” She said. Yet I still couldn’t forgive myself for the mental and physical harm brought to Hannah , lost in deep guilt as well as regret. Sensing my desperation and frustration, Sharon held tightly
鼓起勇气去做某事) ask her to take me to Hannah’s ward. Seeing me approaching her bed on the wheelchair pushed by her mother, Hannah asked anxiously, “Are you OK?” Tears of happiness and relief welled up in her eyes.
Sharon’s forgiveness allowed Hannah and me to return to our normal life. We return to drive and ride the car together that summer, to remain best friends all our high school and college, to be present at each other’s weddings, and to watch her three younger children brought up. Whenever I recall her gift of forgiveness I can’t help but hate someone for a avoidable mistake. The scar has faded and no one else will notice, but in the sunlight, I can still see a faint glow below her hairline for me, it is an elegant mark.
四语言翻译积累：(答案在参考范文和优秀范文中）
1）我被巨大的内疚和自责所笼罩。

（“I”的心理描写) （信封envelope v.包住,笼罩) 2)在莎伦的帮助下，我来到了汉娜的病房，但不敢直视她的眼睛。

让我松了一口气的是，她微笑着说：“没什么大不了的。

”
3)令我惊讶的是，Hannah没有责怪我，甚至像以前一样试图和我开玩笑。

4）是汉娜和她的妈妈莎伦教会了我宽恕的力量。

今天，我仍然坚信，原谅别人可以让自己变得更好。

5）疤痕已经褪色，其他人都不会注意到，但在阳光下，我仍然可以看到她发际线下微弱的微光——对我来说，这是一种优雅的印记。