山东东营市2016高考英语书面表达二轮品析(7)及参考范文

山东东营市2016高考英语书面表达二轮品析（7）及参考范文
面表达（满分25分)
假如你是李华。

你的好友John给你发来电子邮件说他最近刚去了美国一所中学学习，但对那里的生活很不习惯，为此他感到非常苦恼。

请你给他回一封电子邮件,提几点建议。

内容要点：
1. 尊重当地风俗习惯，积极融入当地人生活;
2. 主动和美国学生交流,和他们交朋友；
3. 和朋友们一起参加户外运动；
4. 注意自己的言行举止，和朋友坦诚相处。

注意：
1. 词数：100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，语意通顺;
3。

信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear John,
I’m really glad to hear from you and know how you are getting along。

_____________________
__________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ ____________
Keep in touch.
Yours
Li Hua
第二节书面表达
One possible version：
Dear John,
I’m really glad heart from you and know how you are getting along.
I think it is common for you not to get used to the life there. Here I have some advice for you。

First of all, you should respect local customs and try to involve yourself in the lives of the locals. Just as the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do。

” Secondly，don't forget to communicate with American students and make friends with them。

Friendship will bring you happiness。

What's more, it is better for you to take more outdoor activities with your friends, which may help you relax and have fun. Last but not the least，mind your own manners and remain modest and honest when getting along with your friends。

I hope you can adapt to your new life soon and enjoy your stay there。

Keep in touch.
Yours
Li Hua
第二节书面表达（满分25分）
假如你是李华，最近收到一封英国笔友Tom的来信。

他希望了解你校如何保证学生在校期间的安全。

请你根据下面的提示用英语写一封回信，介绍你校的做法并发表你的看法或建议。

学校已采取的措施你的看法或建议
1. 各方面安全教育，增强安全意识：如食品、交通…2。

安全监督：如与家长及时沟通，…
3. 保安人员管理:如增加保安人员数量，明确职责…
4. 对外来人员:来访出示证件、登记等
…………
注意：（1) 信的开头、结尾已给出、不计入总词数。

(2）词数：100左右，信的内容可适当发挥以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:安全意识awareness of safety 登记register（vi.) 保安security guard
Dear Tom，
I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.
__________________________________________________________ __________________
We believe a safer school will provide us students a better learning environment。

Yours,
Li Hua
第二节书面表达
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security。

So far many measures have been taken to ensure the students’ security in and out of our school。

The security issue has been emphasized on. We have organized sev eral school meetings to strengthen the students’ awareness of safety about food, traffic and so on。

By communicating with parents often and in time，our school can supervise and ensure our safety。

Besides, a proper number of security guards have been employed to guard the school under a clear duty。

Stricter security measures have been taken by our school, including a requirement that all visitors provide identification and register。

The students have been taught the ways to protect themselves from danger. For example，once we smell something unusual，we should report it to the school guard immediately. In my view，our school has been doing pretty well and we are looking forward to more effective measures。

We believe a safer school will provide us students a better learning environment.
Yours，
Li Hua
第二节书面表达（25分）
为配合我校开展“创建卫生文明城市（build a civilized and clean city）”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well"为主题的英语征文比赛.现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。

提示：1。

衣着整洁；2. 保持环境卫生,不随地吐痰和乱扔垃圾；3。

待人有礼，乐于助人;4. 遵守交通规则；5。

……
要求:1。

文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容，可展开思路,适当发挥；
2。

文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
3. 词数：80-100词左右.
How to Behave Well?
In order to build a civilized and clean city, we students
should____________________________
__________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ __________
书面表达
How to Behave Well?
In order to build a civilized city，we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.
It’s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day。

Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say ”Thank you" and ”Please” and so on。

We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic rules。

When the traffic lights are red，we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
If everyone behaves well，our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.
【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学一模试题】
基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)
你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。

以下是这次采访的情况：
［写作内容］
根据以上情况写一篇采访报道,并包括如下内容：
1．采访的时间、对象和主题；
2．中小学生近视的发生率及人数;
3．专家解读。

［写作要求］
只能使用5个句子表达全部内容.
［评分标准］
句子结构准确,信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

【参考范文】基础写作：
Last weekend，I had an interview with an eye-doctor, Professor Wang，about the pr imary and middle student’s short—sightedness in our country. It is said that slightly more than 50% students，which ranks No。

1 in the world, are short—sighted. Professor Wang said the reason of short—sightedness is complicated and there is still no cure for
short-sightedness. He suggested that we should avoid overusing our eyes and do more outdoor exercise。

What's more，since the holding of pen has something to do with the short-sightedness, we need to pay attention to using the pen.
【2014高考英语广东省中山市华侨中学一模试题】
读写任务(共1小题,满分25分）
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

The “Clean Your Plate” campaign was started by nongovernmental organizations and activists, which urged people to save food by not wasting anything on the dining table。

The campaign, launched on Weibo，was soon joined by millions of netizens across China to fight against food waste.
The estimated annual waste of grain in China reaches 50 million tons，enough to feed about 200 million people for a year。

People from across China support the campaign. The Central Government has promised to take measures to reduce food waste, take the lead in saving food and follow a simple working style.
More and more Chinese are saying “No” to food waste。

Staff members of a restaurant set off a campaign encouraging customers to stop food waste in Qingdao，Shandong province, Jan。

24. “Did you empty the dishes today?”has become the most popular question in China。

Showing an empty dish also turns a new fashion among Chinese netizens.
In some restaurants there are signs reminding the diners not to waste food。

Some even offer awards to the customers who eat all their food, as part of the campaign to reduce waste。

More and more restaurants kindly remind and encourage customers to take their leftovers away。

[写作内容]
1。

以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2. 以约120个词就“光盘行动”的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
（1) “光盘行动"产生的背景；
（2）“光盘行动”的作用;
（3) 你对“光盘行动”的看法和诉求。

［写作要求]
1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

[评分标准］
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适,语篇连贯。

【参考范文】读写任务：
When some people started the “Clean Your Plate” campaign in an effort to reduce food waste，millions of netizens joined in it and more
and more people are taking real action to stop food waste.
As many people are still living in poverty around us, I’m quite delighted by this campaign。

As far as I know, while people in advanced countries don’t have to worry about their meals, millions of people in some poor areas are suffering from hunger every day。

Though most Chinese have enough food to eat, there are still some others who are struggling hard for a little food to fill their stomach。

Unfortunately, I can always see people leave a large part of their food on their plate and throw it as waste。

It is reported that every year the Chinese altogether waste 50 million tons of food，which is enough to feed 200 million people for a whole year. What an alarming waste it is! We should feel guilty to waste so much food.
It is high time that we took action to stop such waste without delay。

There is every reason for us to clean our plates at our meals. If all people cut down food waste，a large quantity of food can be saved and more people will be fed.
The “Clean Your Plate" campaign is really good and useful。

Let's join in and eat up our meals instead of wasting any food.。