语文句子改错(Chinese sentence correction)

语文句子改错（Chinese sentence correction）
1. the following is a factory attached to the product packaging bag "reply card" in a text, with accurate and appropriate requirements (a)
Dear customer, thank you for your patronage. Our products have just come on the market. In order to serve our customers better, please give us your valuable opinions and send them back to our factory so that we can improve them. We will return the gift, please forgive me.
A. thank you for your patronage.
B. has made some comments on our products
C. and return the factory
D. we will return this, please forgive me
2.. Here are some excerpts from the four practical texts. Please find out what is inappropriate and make a change according to the language features of the practical style. (4 points)
(1) the school Youth League Committee decided to hold the first sports festival in the school gymnasium on May 10th afternoon. All students are welcome to the scene and take an active part in it. (Youth League Committee notice)
(2) Hello, welcome to Zhaoxian County to visit the "Millennium rainbow" Zhaozhou bridge. I am a tour guide, I hope you will respectfully call me "Xiao Li", I will serve you wholeheartedly. (Commentary)
(3) distinguished guests, alumni, everybody. Today is the 50th anniversary anniversary of our school, the school library, history museum, office buildings are open. (broadcast script)
(4) there is a classmate on the morning of May 7th, picked up
a purse with 48 yuan, meal ticket, Mobile Recharge Card, hope to find the owner of school education department director Li claimed. (notice of discovery)
(1) change to
(2) change to
(3) change to
(4) change to
3. please point out the errors in the following manuscript and revise them. (5 points)
Discovery and Revelation
Today I in basketball at picking up a blue cotton jacket, money clip, with the entire one hundred and sixty yuan in cash, there is a gray dragon and Chongqing Road Construction Bank bookstore the membership card, please contact me as soon as the loser.
April 27, 2010 7
(1) wrong: modify: (2) wrong: modify:
(3) wrong: modify: (4) wrong: modify:
4. there is a minute of self introduction during the interview for the admission of university students. The following is the statement of a classmate, some of which are free centers, and some of them are inappropriate. Please revise them. (6 points)
Hello, teacher!
1. I called Wang, 18 years old this year, is the "" middle high school graduates. I am 1 meters tall, 8, healthy. I like reading very much, and I also like skating, playing piano and other recreational activities. I have great achievements in literature, sports, art and so on. I am strong and optimistic, never afraid of difficulties, there is a spirit that does not reach the goal. My biggest advantage is understanding, I will be in the most helpless, the most sad friends quietly sent to care. The University, the academic atmosphere is strong, is I have been longing for the elite. My hometown is in the city of Xi'an, where the world famous Terracotta Army, the beautiful Mount Li, history and modern blend of big wild goose pagoda, welcomed the teacher may have time to visit. I hope that you can spot gold, I will cherish. Thank you
Sentences that must be deleted:
Sentences to be modified: Change (fill in the serial number) to
Change (fill in serial number) to
5. there are five inappropriate expressions in this manuscript. Please point out and correct them. (5 points)
On the arrival of the new year, we are pleased to tell you that the new century China website was founded 5th anniversary. Let us celebrate. To commemorate this day is of great significance to your site, from now until June 7th to carry out the "new century Chinese" and I "as the theme of the essay, the requirements of five years and the website grow netizens wrote submission, urge hope to get your help. For your apology, we will employ well-known writer carefully selected.
(1) change to
(2) change to
(3) change to
(4) change to
(5) change to
6. the following manuscript is out of order. Please point out the error and modify it. (5 points)
Leaders and teachers,
Ladies and gentlemen:
Everybody has a nice holiday!
Through the leadership of several research and communication, the College of education in normal universities, we held the theory of education and training activities, on behalf of organizers cordially welcome from the schools in our area of excellent teachers to listen to the experts. We hope that through our great help, we should seize the opportunity, improve theoretical quality, accumulate more experience, and then make a big step on the road of professional development of teachers.
Here, on behalf of the organizer, I propose the disciplinary requirements for your study. I hope you will strictly observe the timetable, and try not to make any calls during class time.......
Error: change to:
Error: Revised as:
Error: Revised as:
Error: changed to:
7. the following text in punctuation and words are more errors, please point out the five and correct. (5 points)
January 2, 2010 is the Changchun permanent snow festival opening day, the World Wildlife Fund (WWF) of the "tiger home road" light snow sculpture competition has become a major highlight of this festival. A group of soldiers on the wall of the tiger head special cut interest, have in the tiger before
the group photo. "We are forest armed police, we protect the Amur tiger and we have a share."". A young soldier who just joined the army read the WWF propaganda material and said excitedly to volunteers.
With the arrival of the Chinese tiger year in 2010, tiger protection has gradually become the focus of global attention. In recent years, due to the government Chinese and some international organizations of environmental protection efforts, Jilin, Heilongjiang two provinces with tiger habitat forest gradually restored, leave the hometown asylum in Russia in Northeast tiger also began to slowly return home. WWF hopes that through such activities, more people will pay attention to the situation of the wild Siberian tiger, and support the protection of the Siberian tiger, so that more tigers can go home in the next tiger year.
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8., here is a good sign of the notice, there are five wrong words, please find it one by one. (5 points)
Speaking of Lu You, he must have been a stranger to his classmates. He left about more than 900 poems all his life. The Group intends to focus on the study of Lu You's poetry in order to achieve the purpose of learning poetry and shaping his temperament.
Sincerely invite those who love poetry and have some understanding of Lu You students to join in.
Please this month 15 days before the letter into the library hall "Lu You research".
Lu You research group
9., here is a notice of recruitment. There are many mistakes in the use of language. Please point out five of them and correct them. (5 points)
Recruitment notice
China News Agency, overseas, specialized institutions, China news agency's overseas Chinese newspapers provide news service, is the need for business development, want to accept the news editor in 6, dare to young people to sign up for the industry.
Application conditions:
1. male or female, not limited to the household registration, under 30 years of age and older do not disturb;
2. bachelor degree or above, major is not limited;
3., more than two years experience in journalism is preferred;
4. good command of english.
Starting from now on, the registration deadline is July 15, 2010. For those who meet the above requirements, please send your resume and contact information to my center (12, 100000 South Street, Beijing, overseas Chinese Center, 100037 mailbox, postcode, Xicheng District)
Overseas center of China News Agency
April 15, 2010
10., a student admitted to the University, to have been very helpful to his teacher sent a text message to express gratitude. There are a number of inappropriate places, please correct them. (find and correct three places.) (5 points)
Teacher: hello!
It's my great honor to have your help in high school. I know I can have today. It's the result of your great help. You have high attainments in teaching,
Let the students sit up and take notice. I will always remember your teaching, study hard after university, make good progress, and live up to your hope. I am determined to go back to my alma mater to teach as a teacher who is as knowledgeable as you.
Your student, Liu Yong
September 20, 2008
Answer: (1) changed to
(2) change to
(3) change to
Reference answer:
1. [answer] B. (A. patronage: more for stores to customers. "Thank you for your patronage." "thank you for using our product". C.: "then, emphasize the person or thing mentioned earlier.". "The factory" should be "factory"; D.: Excuse me, "Burke magnanimous, please forgive for someone special. "Please forgive" should be "thanks")
2. (1) change "come to the scene" to "sign up" or "change".
(2) modesty is not proper, but "honorific" can be changed to "appellation"".
(3) change "all" to "all", so long as the ambiguity of "all" and "all" is eliminated.
(4) change "48 yuan" into "several"". (each sentence has 1 points, 4 points.)
3. the "Revelation" concept of error notice cash one hundred and sixty yuan (not say the specific amount of money) - cash card. Some features not specifically explain -- remove "grey", "Chongqing road" or to "have a membership card and Construction Bank long bookstore", no contact or telephone - fill specific contact content
4, the answer must be removed and the sentences (1 sentences: 1 points, 2 points)
Need to modify the sentence: 1 will be changed to "my name is Wang, 18 years old this year, is the" "middle high school graduates."
It is marked by "outstanding performance in literature, sports, art and so on."."
I will be changed to "I hope you give me a chance, I will cherish."
5. (1) to "celebrate" to "mutual Congratulations" ("rejoicing" is a derogatory term)
(2) "your website to the website (" what is "expensive") (3) "requirements" to "invite" ("request" too tough tone)
(4) the "urge" to "sincere" ("urge" and "Hope" repeat) (5) will
"work" to "work" ("books" for modest)
(choose one and correct it by 1 points.)
6. (5 points, all round, give full marks.). Reference standard: 0.5 * 8 empty) 1. Leader, teacher, sir, madam
We repeat the titles. Modify: delete a group (clear "ladies and gentlemen" can also be); the misuse of "listening" (used to modify): listen to; the misuse of "help" (thank you for the trust or modify): elaborate (appropriateness can) the "try" (with discipline should strictly abide by the modify): remove the "try" (or the sentence the words "no phone")
7, mistakes: "lit the way to go home northeast tiger."
Revised: "lit Tiger Road home.""
Mistake: we are forest armed police, protect northeast tiger, we also have".
Revised as: "we are forest armed police, protect the northeast tiger, we also have."."
Mistakes: gradually revised as follows: gradually
Error: as amended as: in
Error: support for the protection of the Northeast Tiger revised as: support for the protection of the Siberian tiger (action)
The error: comply with the revised as: for
Answer: 8. (1) "speaking of Lu You, the students will not be unfamiliar with" delete "on" (2) "he had left about more than 900 poems" delete "about" (3) "edify temperament with learning, writing poetry, flying heart", in the "flying heart" plus "for the purpose (target)" (4) "join in" delete "in" or "join" is "sincere" and "invite" repeat, shall be deleted
9, mistakes: "want to accept" instead of "recruitment."
Error: "dare to please" instead of "welcome"
Error: the first in the "older one" is amended as: delete
Mistakes: the "pass" in the third clause is amended as: "delete"
Error: the first step is modified as "your" or "personal""
10, "lucky" instead of "thank you" and "attainments" to "level""
"Sit up and take notice" instead of "respect" and "transform" into "exercise""
Teach to teach or coach"。