【英语】初中英语英语书面表达汇编常见题型及答题技巧及练习题(含答案)

【英语】初中英语英语书面表达汇编常见题型及答题技巧及练习题
(含答案)
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·山西中考模拟）书面表达请将作文写在答题卡相应的位置上。

在家庭生活中，我们会做很多关于我们青少年的决定，比如该买什么新年衣服，该怎样庆祝生日，该上哪所学校等。

你认为在我们自己的事情上应该自己做决定，还是听从家长的意见？针对这一话题，九年级七班的同学们展开了辩论。

假设你是正方或反方的一员，请围绕你的观点，结合自身的亲身经历
．．．．．．．，说出2至3条理由来支持你的观点。

（只能选择一方观点表达。

）
要求：1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

【答案】One possible version：
At home, I think teenagers should make their own choices. Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.
After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study. Unlike other students, I didn’t need my parents to be with me when I was studying. With the development of this learning habit, I soon realized that I could do better in study than other classmates who often depended on teachers and parents. Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.
There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it comes to our personal things. Everyone needs to learn to grow up to get prepared for future life.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们写一篇议论文，论点是：在我们自己的事情上，我们应该自己做决定，还是由家长来做决定。

关于这个话题每个人都会有自己的看法，题目要求我们任选一个观点来讲述，并结合自己的亲身经历，给出2到3个理由。

写作之前，我们应先从正方和反方中选择一个，作为自己的观点，然后围绕这一观点阐述自己的理由。

这是一篇话题作文，题目中并没有给我们规定具体的写作内容，我们应发挥自己的想象力，结合自己的日常生活来组织语言，丰富文章的内容。

写作时还应注意的是语言的表达，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，我们不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译，而是从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型，多用简单句，如主谓宾、主系表的结构，点缀几个复合句或并列句，调整文章节奏，让文章的句子富于变化，有新鲜感。

高级句型或词汇的使用也可以提升文章的档次，在语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意表达连贯、流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文内容完整，观点明确，结构合理。

短文作者选择了正方的观点，第一句话先点明自己的观点是什么，接下来围绕这一观点进行阐述，并从自己的经历出发，阐述了自己持有这一观点的理由，充分、合理，有说服力。

最后一段作者重申自己的观点，并进行了总结。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态、人称，文章以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范。

句式表达符合英语的表达习惯，简单句为主，也使用了较多的复合句和高级句型，如状语从句、宾语从句、定语从句、非谓语动词等。

有些句子较长，是由于使用高级句型所致，一味使用较长的句子也会导致文章的冗长，让读者感觉比较累，因此要注意调整文章的节奏。

短文中较好的句型和短语有Learning to make our own choices can help us to be more independent.、After I entered junior high school, I made every choice on my study, from which reference books to buy to how to plan time for study.、Before making every choice, I carefully considered the advantages and disadvantages of my actions and in that way, I grew up independently.、There is no wonder that we will grow up some day and live on our own. 、Although parents undoubtedly care about us, we still need to make our own decisions when it comes to our personal things.等。

2．（·浙江中考模拟）假如你是李华，是某英文电台“ Say it”栏目的兼职编辑。

最近你收到一名叫王平的中学生发来的电子邮件，向你们栏目组求助。

请你根据电子邮件内容给她回复一封电子邮件，帮助她解答困惑。

Dear Li Hua,
I' m a middle school student. Recently I argued with my parents over using Wechat. You know Wechat has become a part of our everyday life, but my parents don’t allow me to use it. What 's worse, they have changed my password（密码）so that I can’t use it. There has been a "cold war" between us for over a week. What should I do?
Yours,
Wang Ping
要求：1．语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
2．词数80-100左右，电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

参考词汇：欺骗tick；许可permission
Dear Wang Ping,
I'm sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using
Wechat.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________
I believe things will get better,
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Wang Ping
I‘m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using Wechat. In fact, your problem is very common . Cheer up and let’s find a good way to solve it.
You may be tricked or get into trouble when you use Wechat. Also, using it for a long time is bad for your health, especially for your eyes. Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, communication is very important. Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly? Try t elling them you won’t use it for too long and won’t use it when you are studying. What more. tell them you’ll never add strangers without their permission.
I believe things will get better.
Yours
Li Hu 【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信。

本题给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，确定写作内容，并适当发挥。

根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

【点睛】
这是一篇比较不错的作文。

作者根据题目要求,层次非常的清晰。

短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。

文章中还用了一些比较好的句型Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, communication is very important.；Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly?
3．（·云南中考模拟）假如你叫李华, 三年的初中生活即将结束, 你将迎来漫长的暑假, 你的笔友Peter写信来询问你的暑假计划。

请根据表格中所给的基本信息给你的笔友回信, 告诉他你的暑假计划。

要求：
1. 回信必须包含表格中的所有信息, 并可适当发挥, 字数在80字左右, 开头和结尾不计入总字数。

2. 回信中不得出现真实的人名和校名, 否则将以零分计。

3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上, 如在本卷上作答, 一律不得分。

Dear peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文Dear peter ,
Thank you for your letter, in the letter, you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it.
Firstly I will visit my grandparents as soon as I leave school, I haven’t see them for a long time, I miss them so much. Then , I am going to take trip to Beijing and Shanghai to open up my eyes, as we all know, both cities are so beautiful and important, I believe I can learn a lot by travelling. After coming back, I will learn senior subjects by myself to get ready for the coming senior school, because I dream to go to a famous university.
That’s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours.
Yours
Lihua
【解析】
【详解】
本文分三个自然段。

第一段点出文章主题you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it。

第二自然段用Firstly，Then ，After coming back有序列出三个计划。

文章结尾用That’s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours总结。

另外，文中为第一人称，时态主要为一般将来时will visit my grandparents，I am going to take trip，I will learn senior subjects等。

4．（·宁夏中考模拟）书面表达
难忘的初中生活即将结束。

你们班计划举行“告别初中生活”的主题班会。

假如你是班长，根据以下提示，用英语写一则通知。

要点如下：
1. 时间：6月26日下午3:00.
2. 地点:六楼会议室
3. 活动内容：
1）对老师用话语表达谢意；2）与同学交流自己的将来的梦想；3）师生合影，互赠留言
等等。

参考词汇：look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..
备注：词数100左右，通知开头已拟好，不计入总数。

Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________
【答案】Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.
We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。

而复杂单句结构In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

5．（·江苏中考模拟）假设你是Beth,前段时间曾向英语校刊投送一篇题为My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短诗。

近日，又至毕业季，师生们忙着互致临别赠言。

为此，编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。

短诗如下：
My English Teacher Miss Zhang
There is a teacher, Miss Zhang,
Who is friendly, patient and helpful.
Always encouraging us to try,
She leads us to a world of "why".
We all respect and admire her.
注意事项：
1.稿件内容须根据短诗展开合理想象，不得抄写短诗原文：
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境。

3.词数在70个左右，稿件的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数：
4.稿件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________
【答案】Dear Editorial Office,
I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.
She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．
I hope that you agree with me．
Yours sincerely，
Beth,【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。

根据编辑部策划开“A Letter to My Teacher”专栏，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。

文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。

本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。

在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

6．（·如皋市实验初中中考模拟）亚洲文明对话大会近期在北京召开，你的印度朋友Danny收看了大会相关报道，对华夏文明产生了浓厚的兴趣，来信向你了解中国文化。

假设你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一封回信给Danny。

注意：1. 词数90词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

2. 回复必须包括所以要点，可是当发挥，是短文连贯，通顺。

3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

参考词汇: civilized 文明的
Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hear from you soon.
All the best,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Danny,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Since you are interested in civilization（文明） of China, I would like to share something with you.
Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. China is a country of 56 nationalities. Different nations have difficult cultures. In my country, we have many traditional festivals, such as, the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and the Dragon Boat Festival . They are also called “three major Chinese holidays” in China. Here ar e the customs of eating Zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the Dragon Boat Festival.
China is a nation of etiquette （礼仪）. Chinese people can respect, trust and help each other.
We all learn and grow together. Everyone in my school should protect the whole public environment. Climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.
I hope you can come to China someday to experience the ancient culture of China. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
All the best.
Li Hua 【解析】
【分析】
本文要求给你的印度朋友Danny写一篇关于华夏文明的回信。

【详解】
文章需要介绍下中国的文化。

表格中列举了三个要点，写作时注意不要漏写。

平时注意多多积累句型、短语。

细心检查避免疏漏。

以图表展示的作文要以“读”为主，首先要认真读懂图表中的要求，对所给信息加以分析、推断、筛选、概括，去粗取精；在写作时目的要明确，要注意内容的准确性和严肃性。

【点睛】
写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。

如but, so, then 等。

可以适当使用高分句子。

本篇文章写的好的句子有：Chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world．中华文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。

China is a nation of etiquette（礼仪），中国是一个礼仪之邦。

7．（·浙江中考模拟）
如今，很多父母很关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况如下图中 Tony 的母亲。

请简要描述图片内容，分析图中现象，谈谈你的看法和建议，并写一篇 110 词左右的短文向Parents 杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章有所启发。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tony's mother wanted to keep watch on Tony's study. She was wrong to do so. First of
all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony's study and makes him respond strongly. From a child's point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don't think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children's learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图画作文，根据图片中的相关信息介绍一下父母为了关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况，就这样对吗？仔细分析所提供的图片内容，主要从你的看法和建议这个方面去介绍。

时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。

注意作文中必须包含图片中的所有信息，并适当发挥。

写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 当孩子们发现自己受到监视时，他们将来怎么能向我们吐露心声呢？
句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引导的时间状语从句。

【高分句型二】
It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. 这也会影响未来的自信心建设，也会导致更多的担忧儿童，形成影响亲子关系的恶性循环。

which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship.是由which引导的定语从句。

8．（·湖南省岳阳开发区长岭中学中考模拟）时光荏苒，转眼间你已经成长为一名即将步入高中的青少年。

在你十几年的人生旅途中，一定充满了各种各样的欢乐。

请你以
“_______ makes me happy”为题并根据所给要点提示, 写一篇英语短文给校英语广播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使你快乐的事情及理由。

要点提示:
1. 使你快乐的事情是什么；
2. 它使你快乐的理由。

要求:
1. 请补全标题, 如reading，traveling或helping others等；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80左右，短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。

_______ makes me happy
【答案】One possible version:
Reading makes me happy
During my spare time, I like reading best. It can always make me happy.
Reading can bring many things to me, such as knowledge, ways of doing things, chances to know about different cultures and so on. Reading a good book is like talking with a wise person. When I feel lonely and when I meet troubles, I always find a book to read. When I am lost in the interesting stories, I won’t feel unhappy anymore.
Reading brings me so much happiness that I’ll keep the habit of reading along my life journey.【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇话题作文，以“_______ makes me happy”为题，写一篇英语短文给校英语广播站投稿，跟大家分享一下使我快乐的事情及理由。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I like……，Reading can……，When I feel……，When I am lost in……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了读书让我感到快乐，接下来介绍读书的好处，最后指出我会一生保持读书的习惯。

此处like doing sth, such as, know about, talk with, be lost in, bring sb sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

9．（·河南中考模拟）“苔花如米小,也学牡丹开。

”我们大多数人虽然微不足道,但也能有所作为。

请以One thing I felt very proud of 为题用英语写以写一篇短文,描述你曾经做过得引以自豪一件事情。

要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;2.词数80左右。

【答案】One thing I felt very proud of
I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother. To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday. I tried many times but failed before she came back. Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned. However, I didn’t give up, and finally I succeeded. Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears.
I felt proud of cooking on my own.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以One thing I felt very proud of为题，介绍自己曾经做过的一件令自己感到自豪的事情。

作文是开放式的，题目中只给了主题，具体的写作内容，需要学生们自己发挥想象力去补充。

审题可知，体裁是记叙文，记叙一件自己做过的事情，且是能让自己
感到自豪的，故文章应使用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。

短文应由开头、主体和结尾三部分组成，开头引出话题；第二部分为中心，具体描述事情的过程；最后一部分简要描写一下自己的感受。

写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见、易于把握的简单句结构，如主谓宾或主系表结构。

为提升作文档次，穿插使用并列句或复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等。

或使用祈使句、非谓语动词、感叹句等特殊句式结构。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，以使文意连贯。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求描述了自己做过的一件引以为豪的事情。

短文有如下几个特点：首先短文内容完整、充实，叙述具体，详细，作者描写了自己做饭给妈妈庆祝生日这件事，符合题目要求。

文章分三段，第一段用一句话引出话题；第二段详细描写了事情的过程；最后一段写了自己的感受。

结构清晰，安排合理。

其次短文里使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时、第一人称叙述，注意了谓语动词过去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式。

语言得体，语法规范，句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了时间状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式结构。

短文中较好的句型和短语有：I will never forget how proud I felt when I succeeded in making delicious dishes for my mother.、To show my love for my mother, I decided to cook some dishes for her on her birthday、Especially when making fried eggs, I couldn’t control the temperature of oil and got several eggs burned、Watching the delicious food on the table, my mother was moved to tears等。

10．（·安徽中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是华,你的英国笔友对中国文化很感兴趣,想到中国旅行感受中国文化。

你想请他来你的家乡一安徴一游,请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。

1位置:中国东部,安做省南部:
2.气候:春暖花开,秋季凉爽
3.景点:山和古村落:
4.文化:茶、黄梅戏
5.建议
提示词:黄梅戏 Huangmei Opera
注意:1.词数80-100
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。

3.文中不得出现自己真实的校名和人名
4.开头和结展己给出,不计入总词数
Dear Dave
I know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?
【答案】Dear Dave，
I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not come to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.
Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to come here is in autumn, because it’s
really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!
Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Dave写信，邀请他来你的家乡—安徽一游，题目中列出了文章的提纲，审题可知，短文应从以下几个内容叙述：首先介绍家乡的位置；然后介绍来这里最好的时候；接下来是介绍家乡的景点和文化，并给出建议。

短文应使用一般现在时，注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作时应合理安排几个内容，分清主次，并注意上下文的连贯。

另外，英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，因此写作时不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。

如可以使用简单句结构，易于掌握，不容易出错。

但为提升文章档次，也应穿插一些并列句结构或复合句，以及使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求邀请Dave来自己的家乡旅游，并介绍了家乡的景点和文化。

短文有如下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有内容，并对细节进行补充和修饰，使内容更加充实、丰富。

短文先对Dave发出邀请，然后具体介绍了家乡的位置、景点、文化等，并提出了建议。

全文叙述清晰，层次清楚，主次分明。

第二，短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。

短文以一般现在时来叙述，注意了谓语动词第三人称单数形式的变化。

句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句、宾语从句、状语从句等复合句，还有一些好的句型，如The b est time to come here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, come and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。

11．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达。

随着连云港经济的发展，私家车的数量不断攀升，而同时我们的空气污染越发严重，去年我们经历了柳絮漫天飞舞以及数个雾霾天气（hazy days），生活环境日趋恶化。

就此，你班展开讨论美丽连云港应该从何做起，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，并谈谈自己的观点。