2023届高考英语写作专项之申请信-谋篇布局课件

思考探究
成文
I am Li Hua, a student studying in London. Learning that you
are wanting volunteers for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in your gallery, I can’t wait to apply for the position.
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I have a good command of both English and Chinese.
I can communicate smoothly with the painting lovers present.
With a good command of both English and Chinese, I can communicate smoothly with the painting lovers present.
期待
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片段写作
Were I chosen, I would devote myself to being a qualified volunteer. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
成文
I am Li Hua, a student studying in London. Learning that you are
wanting volunteers for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in your gallery, I can’t wait to apply for the position.
English and Chinese, I can communicate smoothly with the painting
lovers present. More importantly, experienced in organizing
school activities, I can help keep the exhibition in order. I am confident that I can be a helpful assistant to the event organizers.
To begin with, I have acquired a good knowledge of traditional paintings, which enables me to offer visitors detailed explanations on Chinese paintings. Besides,
片段写作
I have experience in organizing school activities.
I can keep the exhibition in order.
Experienced in organizing school activities, I can help keep the exhibition in order.
with a good command of both English and Chinese, I can communicate smoothly
with the painting lovers present. More importantly, experienced in organizing
片段写作
• I have acquired a good knowledge of traditional paintings. • I can offer visitors detailed explanations on Chinese paintings. • I have a good command of English. • I can communicate smoothly with the painting lovers present. • I have experience in organizing school activities. • I can keep the exhibition in order. • So I am confident that I can be a helpful assistant to the event
organizers.
片段写作
I have acquired a good knowledge of traditional paintings.
I can offer visitors detailed explanations on Chinese paintings.
I have acquired a good knowledge of traditional paintings, which enables me to offer visitors detailed explanations on Chinese paintings.
片段构架
写信目的
个人优势 能做的事情 决心与期待
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决心
如 We果re被I选ch中os，en我, I全w力ou以ld赴 成 de为vo一te名m合ys格elf的to志b愿ein者g。a qualified volunteer.
显性要点 • 写信目的 • 个人优势 • 能做的事情
隐性要点 • 决心与期待
片段构架
写信目的
个人优势 能做的事情 决心与期待
伦敦当地美术馆举办 中国画展。 The Chinese painting exhibition will be held in the local art gallery.
招募志愿者 The gallery need some volunteers.
school activities, I can help keep the exhibition in order. I am confident that I can be a helpful assistant to the event organizers.
Were I chosen, I would devote myself to being a qualified volunteer. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
I can offer visitors 我可以为参观者提供详 细de的tai讲led解e。xplanations on Chinese paintings.
I can communicate 我可以跟绘画爱好者流 畅sm地oo交th流ly。with the painting lovers present.
成文
To begin with, I have acquired a good knowledge of traditional
paintings, which enables me to offer visitors detailed explanations
on Chinese paintings. Besides, with a good command of both
我I c可an以ke帮e忙p t维he护好展览 会ex秩hib序ition in order.
I have acquired a good knowledge of traditional paintings.
I have a good command of English.
I have experience in organizing school activities.
对自身好处
This volunteer work can enrich my knowledge.
对自身好处
This volunteer work can enrich my working experience in foreign countries.
对孤儿好处
I can help those orphans who are in need to live better.
能力
会I h说av英e 文a good command of English.
证 经 明 验
有 I h组av织e 学ex校pe活rie动nc经e 验 in organizing activities.
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写信目的
个人优势 能做的事情 决心与期待
So I am confiden所t t以ha我t I有ca信n 心be成a为he项lp目fu负l a责ss人ist的an好t t帮o t手he。event organizers.
我想要申请这个职位。 I want to apply for the position.
Learning that you are wanting volunteers for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery, I can’t wait to apply for the position.
高中英语写作系列之 申请信——谋篇布局
情景导入
情景导入
Do you want to be a volunteer ?
真题再现
(2019全国I) 假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当 地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者， 内容包括： 1．写信目的 2．个人优势 3．能做的事情
审题
(2019全国I) 假定你是李华，暑 假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术 馆要举办中国画展。请写一封 信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1．写信目的 2．个人优势 3．能做的事情
片段写作
I have acquired a good knowledge of traditional paintings, which enables me to offer visitors detailed explanations on Chinese paintings. With a good command of both English and Chinese, I can communicate smoothly with the painting lovers present. Experienced in organizing school activities, I can help keep the exhibition in order. I am confident that I can be a helpful assistant to the event organizers.
头脑风暴
What should a volunteer do at a Chinese painting exhibition?来自片段构架写信目的
个人优势 能做的事情 决心与期待
所 So以I 我thi能nk胜I 任am这q个ua职lif位ied。for this position.
能力
非 I h常av了e 解ac中qu国ire画d a good knowledge of traditional paintings.
审题
(2019南昌一模) 假定你是李华，你看到某国际志愿者 组织通过网络正在全球招募暑期志愿者，赶赴印度为当 地孤儿提供志愿者服务，请写一封信申请参加，内容包 括： 1. 申请原因 2. 自我优势 3. 希望获准
片段构架
申请原因
自我优势
希望获准
I am writing to apply for the position.