CET-6写作

1模板一引语评论作文 （2011年12月新题型）（2012年4月2日新东方集团总部大厦第五版修订）第一段：引语引用+简单评论（小虹语录：文章的第1、2句；引用题目中给予的原话，并对这句话的表层意思进行评论）文章第一句话：1）第一句的第一种写法：直接引用某位名人曾经说过的话" ." Sb. once said."Give me six hours to chop down a tree ,and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe."Abraham Lincoln once said. [2011-12月CET6]2）第一句的第二种写法：直接引用某句平常人说的话" ." Y ou must have heard these words hundreds of times from sb…"Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world, I’ve done it hundreds of times." You must have heard these words hundreds of times probably from your father , friends or even yourself. [2011-12月CET4]文章第二句话：对引语的表面含义进行评论(用自己的语言，解释和补充题目的引语)自由发挥，见真功夫Although four-hour seems to be quite a long time, it can help people chop down the tree more smoothly and less laborious in the rest two hours. [2011-12月CET6]Quitting smoking is so easy as long as keep away from cigarettes. However, many people can hardly resist the temptation of smoking and then give up their attempt to quit smoking. It is obvious that without strong will and determination no one can quit smoking with ease. [2011-12月CET4]第二段：意义阐述段（小虹语录：文章的第3,4,5,6四句话，都写在第二段；这是字数最多，内容最丰满的一段，称为“猪肚”）文章第三句话：（点明引语的深层含义，从表面到深入，从局限到扩展;提炼出引语包含的中心词、主题词A）The saying/sentence aims at informing us of the significance of A in our pursuit of success.The saying aims at informing us of the significance of adequate preparation in our pursuit of success.[2011-12月CET6]The sentence aims at informing us of the significance of a strong will in ourpursuit of success.[2011-12月CET4]文章第四句话：( 上句提出了引语的深层含义，那么从第四句开始就要论述这个含义了，一般是用论述某个事物的“利好重要” )There is no denying that we can’t emphasize the importance of A too much.~full preparation. [2011-12月CET6]~a strong will. [2011-12月CET4]文章第五句话：( 利好重要论述之一，为了理清思路，建议用“短句+长句”（或者“主题句”+扩展句）的方式展开！)Sth. can help people do…Full preparation can help people reduce the risk of failure, as we can adopt counterplans (预备方案) when something unexpected occurs . [2011-12月CET6]A strong will can help people achieve their goals more smoothly, as it can inspire people to approach challenges and overcome difficulties with bravery. [2011-12月CET4]文章第六句话：( 上句是利好重要性的论述，那么本句就要采用论据了！论据可以是身边的事情，可以是国家社会热点，也可以是名人名事，运用固定的写作公式和考前背诵相关例子，这个很好写)模板句：Quite a few examples can be given to prove the importance of A, and I can think of no better illustration than the following one:举例公式：How could sb. +插入语（解释sb.）+ do sth. + 状语+ without sth . How could Beethoven，a great German music composer who became deaf at his forties，compose so many enduring symphonies and win respect and affection from the whole world without a strong will.[2011-12月CET4] How could you get a job offer without adequate preparation before an interview ? [2011-12月CET6]第三段：结合实际（小虹语录：文章的第7,8,9句；这一段可以写一下，针对第二段议论出某事物的价值和重要性后，在日常实践生活中，我们应该怎么做，理论联系实际，理论指导实际，写文章也就有了意义了吗！）文章第七句话：( 再次强调某事物的重要性)We should always bear in mind that[举例A will exert a far-reachinginfluence on our life]~no one can achieve their goals easily without preparation. [2011-12月CET6]~in such a competitive world of today, a man without a strong will can hardly survive let alone succeed.[2011-12月CET4]文章第八句话：( 我们具体应该怎么做？ )Hence， what we must do is to …Hence, what we must do is to to carry out a full investigation, set up a proper goal and draw up a detailed plan before we take actions. [2011-12月CET6]Hence, when confronted with difficulties and setbacks, we need to grit our teeth and stick to the belief/faith that where there is a will, there is a way. [2011-12月CET4]文章第九句话：( 再次重申某事物的意义价值重要性，不过建议使用名人名言 —— 名人有没有说过某个名言并不重要，重要的是，1) 自己编的名言是可以的，但是不要写错了！ 2）名人的名字不要拼错，更高不要写拼音！)" ."sb. once said."Preparation breeds success." Benjamin Franklin once said. [2011-12月CET6]“A strong will can conquer all things.” Churchill once said. [2011-12月CET4]六级写作引语评论作文人生哲理类，积极价值观话题论据论证素材（2012年4月2日新东方集团总部大厦第五版修订）1. 合作（团结）的重要性The importance of unity/cooperationSignificance：主题句：Cooperation can help people achieve their goals more smoothly.拓展句：If everyone in a group can cooperate with each other and play their own strength, those seemingly unachievable tasks for one single person can be successfully accomplished/perfectly done through combined efforts. 举例： After the financial crisis swept the whole world in 2008, how could the world economy recover at such a high speed without cooperation among countries all around the world ?How:We should Always bear in mind that in such a competitive world of today, no individuals or organizations can achieve success without cooperation. Hence, we need to foster a sense of cooperation by attending various group activities.“Coming together is a beginning. Keeping together is a progress. Working together is a success.” Henry Ford once said.2 .坚持和毅力的重要性Significance：主题句：Persistence can help us carve out a way to success.拓展句：Although the way to success is bumpy (崎岖的) and full of inevitable setbacks, it is persistence that lead us to the destination we are eager to reach .举例：How could Thomas Edison，one of the greatest inventors throughout the history of mankind who experienced numerous unsuccessful attempts , invent the first electric lamp without persistence？How :We should always bear in mind that persistence plays an indispensible role in our pursuit of success.When coming across setbacks and hardships , we need to grit our teeth and stick to the faith that our efforts and persistence will be rewarding. “Great works are performed not by strength, but by perseverance.” Samuel Johnson once said.Significance:主题句Optimism can help people achieve their objectives more smoothly. 拓展句As it can inspire people to approach challenges and overcome difficulties with confidence and courage. 举例：How could Beethoven，a great German music composer who became deaf at his forties，compose so many enduring (经久不衰的) symphonies (works) and win respect and affection from the whole world without optimism？How: We should always bear in mind that optimism will exert a far-reaching influence on our life. Hence，what we must do is to cultivate an optimistic mindset and try our utmost to influence those who are pessimistic. “An optimist sees the rose; a pessimist the thorn.” A philosopher once said.3. 乐观和悲观心态 (人生哲理)4.谦虚的好处Significance:主题句Modesty can inspire people to achieve greater success. 拓展句Those who are modest will never be content with their current achievements, instead, they will work constantly to achieve a higher target. 举例：How could Benjamin Franklin, who was once a printer of humble origins, attain tremendous achievements in so many fields such as science, politics, literature and navigation if he was simply content with small achievements？How:We should always bear in mind that modesty will prompt us to go farther.Accordingly, at no time should we be satisfied with our small accomplishments, instead , we need to keep an open mind to accept new things, absorb new information, acquire new knowledge and seize new opportunities. “Success consists in industry and modesty.” A philosopher once said.5.梦想目标和理想的意义Significance:主题句Our dreams/goals/ideals /objectives will keep up from giving up easily especially when we are in great trouble.拓展句They will lead us to the destination we are eager to reach, bring out the best in us and stimulate us to remain firm in our faith.举例： How could Helen Keller, a disabled woman who was born blind and deaf, finally be a world-renowned writer who wrote If I Had Three Days to See without an aim to overcome her physical limitation？How：We should always bear in mind that objectives are of great importance in our pursuit of success.Hence, we must set up proper goals before we start to do anything and stick to it whatever difficulties we meet.“One of the most dangerous forms of human error is forgetting what one is trying to achieve. ” Paul Nitze once said.6. 创新精神creative spiritSignificance:主题句Creative spirit can promote the advancement of both individuals and society as a whole.拓展句only those who are innovative can make continuous progress and maintain a competitive edge.举例：How could Steve Jobs, a genius who changed the way of modern communication, recreation and even our life, launch so many powerful electronic products constantly without creative spirit？How:We should always bear in mind that creative spirit is of great significance to us all.Hence, we need to develop a habit of discovering new things，using new methods and applying new thoughts in our work, study or simply everyday life.“Innovation is the spirit of human being’s progress.” A philosopher once said.7. 互助/爱心的重要性Significance:主题句Offering help will benefit others as well as ourselves.拓展句It could not only be able to bring convenience and benefit to others, but realize our own values and obtain happiness and satisfaction.举例：How could Wenchuan, after being severely damaged by the earthquake in 2008, rebuild their homeland at such a high speed without help from people all around the world ?How:We should always bear in mind that helping others is a essential virtue that every Chinese citizen should have.Hence, we should not hesitate to help those who are in need. "Present rose to others with remaining fragrance at hand . " Bacon once said.考前练习：8. 自信的重要性 confidence9. 行动的重要性10.沟通的重要性·名人举例论证·名人名言警句引用论证·社会重大时事论证考研、四六级写作名人举例论证人生哲理/价值观/个人素质一、名人举例论证小虹语录：像坚强、毅力、乐观、目标、梦想等这样的人生哲理、个人素质是很多历史名人伟人大家所共有的，所以，为了减轻大家的背诵负担，特别精简了同学们最熟悉，也是阅卷者最亲切的一些名人史实作为举例。