中考英语专题讲座(四) 数词导学案(有答案)

中考英语专题讲座（四）数词导学案（有答案）
二、英语书面表达专项训练
2．目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。

请根据下面内容写一篇短文。

注意：1. 表达清楚，语法通顺，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示的所有信息，并适当发挥，至少两点；
3. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.
Some people think that
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【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.
Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing computer games in this way.
But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they mi ght feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health.
As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。

是一篇议论文，第一段要写目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。

第二段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班赞同者的观点。

第三段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班反对者的观点。

第四段要表述作者自己的观点。

【详解】
写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。

4.写下关键词、短语、句型。

5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。

6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。

写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。

运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。

用短语、句型：all kinds of ，Some ···others，As for me ，Some people think that ···。

They also believe that···。

If they take too many classes。

It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.来增加了文章的亮点。

【点睛】
这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分四段写：总体简单描述话题；赞成；反对；你的看法。

注意过渡性语言的使用。

做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

3．临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小
组的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，
写一份素质报告．
要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等
Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.
【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.
I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。

在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。

表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。

这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。

在最后要给Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。

同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。

这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。

表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。

写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。

短文注意到了长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。

如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。

4．书面表达
安全对于每个人都很重要。

中学生年龄较小，学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。

请根据以下提示，写一篇关于学生安全的英语作文。

内容提示：
1.交通安全：遵守交通规则，不闯红绿灯等；
2.食品安全：吃健康食物，不吃垃圾食品等；
3.活动安全：进行体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己，不私自下河游泳等。

提示词语：
study hard, read, healthy food, exercise, help, chores, at home,
Travel Safety is very important to everyone.
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【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers –so their safety is becoming a focus for us all.
First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when t he light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。

本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。

根据材料内容可知本文主要使用一般现在时，主语是第一人称。

写作时注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题。

同时适当使用连接词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。

在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。

同时，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语，如：祈使句的使用、we must、we should、in a word、It’s +形容词+ to动词不定式结构以及序数词的使用等，这为文章增色不少。

在学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

5．书面表达
难忘的初中生活即将结束。

你们班计划举行“告别初中生活”的主题班会。

假如你是班长，根据以下提示，用英语写一则通知。

要点如下：
1. 时间：6月26日下午3:00.
2. 地点:六楼会议室
3. 活动内容：
1）对老师用话语表达谢意；2）与同学交流自己的将来的梦想；3)师生合影，互赠留言等等。

参考词汇：look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..
备注：词数100左右，通知开头已拟好，不计入总数。

Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________
【答案】Boys and girls,
The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.
We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.
Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。

而复杂单句结构In order to keep the happy times in our hearts forever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week./ To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers.和Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

6．书面表达
生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？请根据以下提示点谈谈你的想法。

1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物；
2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过；
3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍；
4. 接下来你打算……参考词汇：cherish珍惜open up one’s eyes开阔眼界
要求：
1. 字数80-100个；
2. 开头已经给出不计入总词数；
3. 要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥。

When I have trouble with my best friend
There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday.
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【答案】When I have trouble with my best friend
There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday my best friend Lisa lost my favourite book that was a birthday present from my mother. The book is very meaningful for me. What’s more, she didn’t apologize to me about this, I felt quite sad. I love reading, because it can open up our eyes and increase our knowledge. I cherish every book of mine and they are my treasure.
So I am going to have a serious talk with Lisa in order to tell her my true feelings. I think we can buy a new one and read it together. In fact, understanding is the most important thing between friends.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇材料作文。

【详解】
根据题干“生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。

英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：开篇点题——我将介绍和好友闹矛盾的一件事情。

第二部分：文章主体——具体介绍这件事情的始末。

根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么会和好友有矛盾。

这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。

1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物；
2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过；
3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍；
4. 接下来你打算……
第三部分：总结全文——好友之间应该互相理解。

7．Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇100词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。

学会对自己微笑1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别人误解等）。

2、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。

3、有益于身心健康。

学会对他人微笑1、便于与他人之间的交流。

2、给别人带来快乐,自己也快乐。

微笑是一种语言人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。

1、参考词汇：对某人微笑 smile at sb. 误解 misunderstand
2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。

Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westl ife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”
Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yo urself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.
Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.
In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.
【解析】
这是一篇表格式的作文，要点是一表格的形式出现，首先要研究表格，找出需要表达的要
点，然后加以整合，也可以适当增加使意思更连贯，但要点一定要全，不能漏掉。

写作时要注意遣词造句，不能受汉语的影响，要用地道的英语表达，注意时态，语态，单词拼写，语法等问题，用好简单句，适当用复杂句。

可以用一些高级词汇。

还要注意句子的关联。

8．书面表达
以下是你校校刊YOUTH中YOUR VOICE栏目的征稿内容，请根据提示，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。

Hi,
I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the e xchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:
➢ recommend two traditional Chinese things
➢ show your reasons why you recommend them
Looking forward to hearing from you.
David
注意事项：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；
3. 词数在90个左右，感谢信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to share my opinion with you.____________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I am glad to share my opinion with you. I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintin gs have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the US. Foreign friends can learn more about Chinese art from them.
The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves. Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable. Why not buy them some silk scarves?
I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us.【解析】
【详解】
本文主要是向别人分享想法，推荐礼物。

第一句话点题，随后引出文章的两个主题，一· recommend two traditional Chinese things。

例如：I would like to recommend Chinese paintings as a gift because Chinese paintings have a long history. 以及The second gift I want to recommend is silk scarves.二· show your reasons why you recommend them。

理由一：because Chinese paintings have a long history. What’s more, they are quite different from the ones in the
US. 理由二：Silk is a symbol of our great culture and popular among Chinese people. It feels very soft and comfortable.最后用I believe the exchange students will like the two gifts and always remember the moments with us总结全篇。

文章干净利落，层次分明。

9．人类只有一个地球。

根据提示，以“Saving the Earth”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示: 1.如何保护环境已成为世界最大难题之一；
2.各种污染破坏环境，损害健康；
3.不要乱倒垃圾，乱排废水；
4.我们应该保护环境，使我们的家园更加美丽。

【答案】Saving the Earth
The earth is our home. We should take care of it. But some things we have done are bad for the earth. We have polluted the earth and made it sick. We cut down too many trees and change rich land into desert. Many factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Pollution has caused some serious problems. For example, much of the land is poor, some rivers and lakes are dirty. Even the temperature of the earth is rising. The earth is crying for help.
What shall we do to save it? My suggestions are that we should plant more trees, put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories from pouring waste water directly into rivers. After all, we have only one earth. We should do everything we can to protect it, or we’ll be punished and lose our home.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文,动笔前首先要认真审题,弄清题意。

然后根据主题组织材料，确定写作内容。

写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。

语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文包含了所有要点，能围绕内容要点适当发挥，内容具体、丰富。

应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。

层次清晰，语言地道，主题鲜明，内容翔实，格式正确，结构紧凑。

使用了一些比较好的字句。

比如：one of the biggest problems in the world；such as比如；not only……but also……；We must try our best to……等。

学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

考点：考查提纲类作文。